JayDee

Was how I summed this story up previously, and, well, it holds true today. Thank you for taking the time to read and review. It’s always nice to hear opinions on our work as writers! I kind of remembered this as being a really boring dull story – which was almost certainly the intent of the sex as a play on the vanilla theme! – but reading it back just now I see there really are some not terrible jokes in there. I didn’t want the reader looking at the non descript chair because then I would have had to describe it. I think some of the other entries in the hentai foundry contest actually did a pretty good job of sexy sex. Or one of them did. Maybe. It was ages ago and I am no longer a member. I think he’s got a fair reason to be narked off! He’s the third fuckin’ choice on the list, “Oh, sure, I’ll be the best men when the other two have fuckin’ left the dimension or died. Asshole.”. If this was a Naruto/Hinata wedding story he’d have been balls deep in her by the third paragraph. Now… who could have put a diabolical recipe for spaghetti on the internet? What fiendish fanfic writer might have been spreading her wings into other genres? Particularly given how a lot of the recipe blogs have around 10000 words of un-needed extra exposition about unrelated mattes that smack of narcissistic self interest... Also, why did a banshee end up fighting the plate? Weird choice. I think there were points there where I just threw supernatural stuff in. Thank you for the review! I do appreciate it, and I’m glad it didn’t feel a total waste of time to you. Hopefully. Thanks again!

Author: @InBrightestDay & @JayDee Title: Parlor Games Summary: Chad and Ricky have used Todd, their special needs brother, as their muscle for quite some time now. They move from town to town, finding new girls to, as they tell Todd, "play games" with. One night, however, they pick the wrong house to invade. Feedback: Appreciated but not expected. Fandom: Original / Supernatural. Pairing: None. NoSex. Warnings: AFFO COMPLETE Hum MiCD NoSex Oneshot Violence Solo story or chaptered story: Solo URL: Here.

Someone open a Chick-Fil-A?

Dude buys a house out of town from the family of the old Greek immigrant who had it since like World War 2. “Oh, one thing, she said the spring down the bottom of the yard running to the creek is sacred. Never let us play in it. Funny the stuff from the old country, right?” And he laughs and doesn’t think anything of it and then decides he can save on the water bill by plumbing it in to flush his toilet, and finds out that the old dear didn’t move continents alone… Hey, coulda been worse. She’s got another friend living out in the woods, makes hyper realistic stone sculptures in memory of local missing persons… It’s easy to see why I never went anywhere with this, but good luck if you ever do try it! Though got a few other fics to do first, right?

Anyone else think “Charmione? Is that a Pokemon?” ...just me then.

How is it 12 fucking months since last october? I demand something be done about the speeding up of time. Anyway, some ideas I’ll never get to use – A rookie Werewolf Hunter from a long line of ‘em advertises his services and is contacted by a young werewolf looking to get into porn who mistakingly thinks he’s doing a MILF Hunter rip off. ** A man’s toilet cistern becomes inhabited by a water spirit who refuses to flush unless he says nice things to it, and also reads his phone over his shoulder while he’s doing his business. ** A necrophile is just going to town on a corpse when the body’s ghost shows up to criticise his technique. ** Death loses a bet and has to do all the grim reaping wearing a Pink tutu ** A horny gay guy accepts an invite to a “total sausage fest” and finds out it’s actually a totally legitimate Bavarian Wurst Festival. But there’s a lot of guys in tight leather shorts so… ** A ragtag group of misfits team up to put an end to an Emerson Lake and Palmer show. ** And that’s it for this year. Been an idea free zone for me. Except for having a character do a “slutty weeping angel” cosplay that I then searched and discovered about 1000 people already had.

I’ve only got one more to read and review and I will absolutely be reading and reviewing it!

...I’m sorry but I draw the line at sifting through giant spider poop. Just long enough to outdrink everyone with the beer bong! Even if you’re not, that many legs is definitely a bit of a brain squirm! And those eyes! Seven years time. Yua’s birthday. There’s a knock on the door. It’s Shannon, from the party. She just says: “Nice.” And that’s another great thing you have with their rerlationship I figure. They have a real understanding. Similar to how she probably really didn’t need to confirm he remembered the safe word because It seems like with her experience and that close bond she’d stil be able to tell he wanted things to stop. Thanks so much for writing a story and taking part! Us non contributing readers are basically leeches. Leeches, I say! (Well, just me then. No offence to the busy/un-motiviated folks!)

You know it’s gory when a dwarf has so much blood on him he can play the greased up deaf guy road in a room of horny Serbians! Also them descriptions of the pained noses. Ay! And, yes, Rowan deserves a little action! Get someone to throw the little guy a good fuck.

Sounds like something said to April O'Neil in a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles fanfic! :p

Female character fails utterly and faces punishment! Shannon’s arc is a total JD story Mind, the actual punishment she gets isn’t as effective as her superior hoped. “...I like pain as much as the next demon, but I really didn’t want a splinter there.”

Don’t ya dare! There’s no requirement for bloodythirsty terror. Edit: Also I am looking forward to reading and reviewing!

Corrupt the Midwife – 1333 hits! Not terrible for a story in the depths of misc! One day it’ll be sat all on its own in a sub catagory! But with it being such a niche fandom for fanfic It’s not urgent Thank you for the review! Shannon also got InBrightestDay to look at it, from which I can only guess she’s an appealing character and that if I had the time her Doctor Who halloween party “Slutty Weeping Angel” costume would go down go great. I’m glad you found it a worthwhile read. I’d have felt bad for you if you’d finished it and thought “Well, fuck. That’s half hour I won’t get back again. Fuck this JayDee!” Which is the standard thought of most of my readers. I have a review that’s very similar to that on litereotica anyway. Thanks again! Absolutely agree on the repetitiveness – even having Chummy realise it is repetitive doesn’t excuse that the reader’s there already. Cynthia masturbating wih a wooden cross is definitely a bit out of character. Trixie getting drunk and horny, well… no, all very out of character. So, yeah, the dream/fantasy sequences allowed it. While I’ll not be expanding that scene, if I ever get back to proper writing a demon pleasuring herself with a cross might well show up again. It’s probably less blasphemous than the idol worship of praying to a cross, or so the old school iconoclasts might have argued. Thanks for the feedback! I can see where you’re coming from there. What I was trying to show as a follow on from Chummy’s little speech in the previous part – “I’d rather be Miss Havisham than join you. My God created pleasure, don’t you know, one doubts there was ever sin in taking it when no harm was done. Perhaps some got their morals wrong over the years, but I know what’s right and I’ll choose to look for love rather than surrender to lust. This is 1957 and I may love anyone I choose. I won't be corrupted” Chummy had the realisation that it was perfectly fine to have pleasure and love and sexy stuff as long as nobody is being harmed. She was resisting temptation of making a deal with a demon, but after what she’d been through she was perfectly happy to have sin free loving sex with a friend, with no danger to her soul – It’s been a year but I think Shannon had been partly trying to get her so frustrated she’d sell her soul for a good gushing orgasm. There’s also a driving point of a difference between harmful lust and non harmful. Just not explained very well, but that was sort of the point I was driving at! It’s definitely an interesting idea but Shannon pulling off a Trixie mask (magically speaking) feels a little out of character for her. She’s perfectly happy to pretend to be a cheerleader or a fan or friend-of-a-friend or something to get someone on top of her, but I think she’d be less happy at a full on bed trick. Thank you again for the thoughts and the feedback! It’s always really useful to hear where readers think something didn’t really work. I wasn’t very happy with how the story turned out as a whole, and I might still one day manage another Call the Midwife based story with Chummy and some chaps.

I guess some folks like variety and some don’t! Or maybe it was the specific “guy thinking he had control” kink of that story that proved popular? So is Frida both beautiful and beloved? :D Fuck it, you could just write Huldra. Or even Skogsrå, it says here. Those who know Hulder will understand you’ve used the Scandinavian word in a Scandinavian tale, and the rest will just go with what you’ve used (You could even have the narrator or author’s note say something like those ignorant English speakers listened to that Orkneys dialect...) Also says here “It was said that any human man who has intercourse with the Skogsrå becomes an introvert, as his soul has remained with her.” Jesus Christ, they’re fucking their way through the D&D community. Nice to see that the wikipedia vandals haven’t claimed there’s a John Bauer Interrogation Technique involving painting trolls at people until they crack. Poor guy, though, he wasn’t old at all when he died was he? No problem! It looked interestingly different. Sorry it took me a week or so to get to it!

It’s shaping up to be another great year! It only took me three months to start sleeping with the lights off again after reading BronxWench’s last one.

...misery loves company! No, but sincere apologies for reminding you No worries! And honestly, Shannon’s role is really quite small in it with most of the chapters focussing on the TV show’s characters so it’s not especially worth seeking out

I can kind of relate. I wanted to forget Scrappy Doo and his p-p-puppy power. Part one of this one! As a minor demon in Hell’s legions, she had seen a whole lot worse. In fact, she had done a whole lot worse. Bored after centuries with the torture of the ‘slightly too evil for purgatory’, she had asked to become a Succubus. She was told she would have to snare the souls of those overcome by sinful lust, the willing adulterers and those of a thousand other crimes of the passionate flesh. Shannon’s version of torture was a little different to everyone elses, and basically involved a lot of sex to distract souls from finding redemption and moving on from Hell. She also did the admin for all the suicides, with people who kill themselves after an evil life went to other areas of Hell, like old Adolph. Anyway, where first crack at snaring a soul by sinful lust as a Succubus was told in Corrupt the Midwife where she pretended to be Irish after tips from a friend and failed to get her target to be sinful at all, managing only to engender healthy lust. 50 years later she got sent up as a cheerleader type into a society that has elements which fetishise cheerleaders to make it easier. Jude’s Tale also had extra info that she had been working as a succubus for The Duchess who appears there, and that story’s events came about at least partly because she was upset Shannon had abandoned her mission to find redemption and work with Kizzy. Well. thanks! Some of the other prompt fics users have written over the years have been very inventive too. BronxWench and Pittwitch both consistently used them really well, amongst others. “Dear god! A horrific tentacle monster!” “That’s my ship’s cook, Layla. Don’t be so hurtful!” Layla, crying into her tentacles: “I’m I’m… not horrific. I’m a nice girl! Souffle is HARD!” The horror is real and crosses cultural barriers. I mean, I’ve had that urge to hug every soft thing in there too. SCP-3008 is terrifyingly plausable.

Heh, I’m a danger to computers everywhere! I had that line in mind when I wrote the reference -absolutely iconic line! – I had an idea of Kate and Lupa trying to get Kizzy to say “Gordon’s Alive!” a buncha times. Kizzy likes sci fi, she’d be down with it. Then they see Shannon’s wings and suddenly it’s “Now you say “I’m Batwoman!” in a deep raspy voice.” Abdul oughta do what he’s told :p - Calista can make weapons that hurt demon testicles. Kate: “The Future? Am I dead yet?” Luzurial: “Ye-” Kevin: “You’re on a farm upstate.” New review for The Slumber Party of Evil Doom Thanks for the review! I Appreciate the heck out of receiving it. I totally get what you mean – it fits in with why I combined the Blood on the Hay chapters with the main story, because it works better as one ongoing story but some of the individual chapters are vert fragmented on their own, and then the little character notes play in with the other stories a little better. Zoinks! Like, I didn’t think about people not knowing Scoob! I guess I’m not so into it these days but I liked the cartoons as a kid. Heh, yeah, that joke about the car might actually be the best in the story. Shannon has only been on Earth a relatively short time but she has been busy. No doubt reported it back to Hell as “Research” for possible souls to claim. Wattle is definitely archaic. There was a type of structure known as “Wattle and Daub” which used animal shit to bind it together. I’d imagine there was something similar in most languages at some point, but it’s probably not too common in most of them. The next three prompts I’ve never heard and will have a tough time using a couple of them. It’s really Demongoddess who needs the thanks – she posted the forum prompts! Thanks again! And yeah, I was chuckling myself at a mental image of a wolf haring along, ears back, head down, and an angel flying along with the sword still out shouting peaceful messages. I see you’ve got a new story up – it sounds a little different and interesting. The last Scandinavian tale I heard was “Finding my way out of Ikea before the meatballs drag me back,” which was a little cliche’d so I’m up for something original. I’m really busy this week but I’ll try and get it read and reviewed! Gotta put a little time aside to read 6000+ words, though less than it takes to write

The Slumber Party of Evil Doom now at 2175 hits! I did think I might end with the current chapter, before deciding it was more fitting to finish off with them having a slumber party. I don’t think I can do it with the next week’s prompts, but I might try. Otherwise, a final chapter at a slumber party to finish it all off. For now, a review! Thank you for this and for the review! Yes, I think this was the first time I’ve done one trying to write her perspective. If I manage to salvage that reststop story by making it about Kate as you suggested I guess we’ll get a little more of her POV! And if I ever write that first person story I! we’ll get more too Lupa's vampire humor remains on point. Absolutely had to reference the vampire vs werewolf trope there, and Lupa’s self-image problem seemed a touch point that was also in character. The wishbone bit entirely inspired by the prompt, so nice to actually get a prompting. I went back to see if I’d given much indication of her height and it’s never really very clear, so I figured if Kizzy and Lupa are fairly short and Shannon’s a bit taller then them, Kate could be the tallest. It’d look better with that half-changed bipedal wolf form too if she’s got a hulking monstrous air to her. For the outfit I totally wanted to call back to her leaving her slippers behind referenced in an earlier chapter, but couldn’t come up with a Cinderella gag in the end. Wolfwere status confirmed! I had the thought originally as a throwaway gag in You! and it just seemed to work. In another universe she and Katie went down to LA, but something happened to Katie and Kate ended up homeless but liking the city and human music too much to go back tothe wilderness. In this one when Katie goes down to LA, Kate ends up sticking around. There is nothing I can add to that. Heh, thanks! I like the implication that because the car has no hiding wards or anything that wasn’t Shannon doing the succubus soul sucking, that was just her having some gratutious sex. I guess Lupa gets over her reaction as she ends up living at Shannon’s house which has surely seen even more action than the car… Still good for a gag here though! “SHANNON’S ALIVE?” Yes. Kizzy is much less shouty. I guess at some point Lupa will accept the angels and creator, but keep it up as a gentle rib on Kizzy. “...Paradise? This looks like a barn to me. Filthy hay, rotten vegetables.” “We’ll have no The Last Battle references here. Now try and look noble before Temira gets suspicious, while i open the way for you and Kate to the next universe.” Thank you again for the review. I appreciate the heck out of it.

Pen Name: JayDee Story link: The Slumber Party of Evil Doom part 9 - Moonlight and Mist Review replies link: Review Replies -Original Type of fic: Flashfic Rating: Adult Fandom: Original Pairing: None Warnings: AFFO, Language, Challengefic, NoSex

Could be a chance to use costumes that they think will be sexy/slutty but then turn out not to be! Like, maids outfit – but instead of taking it in a sexual way Ghost and John are baffled as she instead cleans the house and is too busy for any kind of sex. Or a clown! Total obvious option, but instead of a halloween style slutty clown she just wants to make balloon animals or toss cream pies or fall over amusingly. “Clowns don’t have sex!” she says with a honk of her nose, or “you wouldn’t want clowns breeding. Soon… soon there would be more clowns than people!” until even the ghost is creeped out. Cat costume! Expecting some kind of cat in heat antics like the dog costume, she instead push’s John’s glass off the table, shreds the curtain and shits in his shoe before sleeping across the back of the couch for six hours. More sexual – A kind of emporer’s new clothes cosplay – say he was intending an actual cosplay but it accidentally got ruined, so she is hypnotised to believe she is fully dressed while naked. Or reverse – she thinks she is naked while fully dressed and is very embarressed. Look, if I was any good at ideas I’d be writing!

I thought I might have to go through in sections, but once I started it just flowed really quickly and I got through in one sitting! I’ll definitely try and think of some, but it is almost like you smacked it out the park with the first one! It’s definitely tough to think up costumes that would be destinctive costumes and lead to sexual situations. Maybe some kind of devil or angel girl costume? I just kinda like those themes. Seems like a good solution! It works. Fair enough! A new challenger appears!

The first link is to asstr.org which isn’t this site. I’m not sure the best email contact to raise with them – they’ve got copyright@asstr.org and story-admin@asstr.org but who knows if those mailboxes are still monitored? admin@Asstr.org may also be worth a shot. This site is http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org so if you got a link to it on the adult-fanfiction.org domain the mods can look at it.