JayDee

If it’s a snuff fic, then Deathstalker’s Hard to Breathe? DS took his remaining stories down from AFF a while ago.

Thanks!

Reds Under The Flower Bed is one of my oldest stories writing as JayDee – it was one of the first I loaded to AFF, back before I took my stories down and and then re-loaded a bunch on the same day in 2007. Near the start it says “Additional Credit: The idea for this came from an internet discussion with reikorikku and Deathstalker.” I no longer have any recollection of the discussion, and it even has the old story codes for using other than on AFF at the start. Ayy. It's short and unpleasant, like hungover toad. ...and now I remember the discussion a little. I’m 99% it included “Hey, I wonder what lines I could put in that would really get Godawful Fanfiction users spitting feathers?” Thanks for your review! I just had a quick scroll down it and I couldn’t face reading the fucking thing again, so good for you on managing it. ...hearing Toad say that would be just about the funniest thing ever written. In isolation, it's hilarious, complete with a mental image of Toad with a hammer and sickle flag appearing behind him and the Soviet national anthem blasting in the background. In context, though... As usual, you have a serious talent for giving the reader just the right sensory details to perfectly communicate pain, and there is actually something deeply unsettling about brutal murder taking place while happy music plays and the torturer features a happy, childlike smile. It was likely intended to be funny, and sometimes it can work for dark comedy, but there's also something kind of Orwellian about it. I think it was intended to be a trollfic originally, when it went on the grey archive. Then I think I posted it here because, fuck it, some folks like it. I have no such excuse for my later Piranha Plant snuff flashfic, Phytoerotic Asphyxiation. I mean, an actual communist revolution would be pretty bloody in Mushroom Kingdom – no wonder they took Koopa and co out as well! I haven’t played any lately. Most recent one I owned was Mario 64, which was a heck of a lot of fun but, what 20 years ago? The old NES ones were great fun in the late 80s/early 90s for little kids. Hard though. Yeah, absolutely have a lot less character establishment with fanfic, because you figure the fans know ‘em! But also with it being one of my earliest snuff fics I guess I just didn’t have a lot to work into it. Hell, I’d wonder why someone who did like snuff bothered. I couldn’t do more’n skim it. I bet about now you’re wishing you had continued not remembering it? I guess it all worked out in the end, as if you hadn’t gone for it we wouldn’t be getting The Woman In The Statue! The angel did come out of it not entirely broken thanks to you Thank you again for this unexpected review! I appreciate it.

“Hey sis! How’d it go with that new girl?” “I hoped her touch would be amazing because she’s a musician.” “And?” “She only plays the theremin.”

Thomas the Rimmer – a re-telling of the ballard of Thomas the Rhymer where the Queen of Elfland gets her asshole licked a lot.

Mike Rapes A Dyke is in a lot of ways the least defensible thing I’ve ever written in terms of themes and content. On the other hand, it gave us Declan who gets a nice minor role in Twinpregnation so maybe it’s not all bad. Thank you for this review! It’s always cool getting reviews for the old stuff/ Michael is one of the biggest pieces of shit I ever wrote. I always intended to do more stories with him, but never got around it. There isn’t really anybody related to him who isn’t a piece of shit either, except for his poor brother and sister in law. At least with decent parents the baby might grow up ok. If the girlfriend hadn’t cheated on her she might never have got in that situation. Bad business all round. Lily appeared in a part of a later story having made a deal with a demon to use her inventiveness to punish more minor demons so she’s definitely lacking in some innocence… She definitely didn’t deserve it tho really. I totally get where you’re coming from tho! Haha! Guy’s boasting about his junk there Nah, they’re just Declan’s Irish Mafia associates. Sure they’ll make you an offer ye can’t refuse. It’ll be grand. Thanks for the review! I appreciate it. I’ll re-read Mia’s new part later and post a review for that S’a quality story that one.

“Hi, we’re a coach full of horny models who don’t believe in birth control. Would you like to come and ride with us?” ~Mia: Cum and Cum ‘er edition...

That would be a fair reaction.

The Crushing of Cassie Cage ...Thanks for taking the time to leave a blank review. I think? Maybe? I’ll leave it up a couple weeks in case you check and it was unintentionally blank then I guess I’d best delete it as a non review.

Frying Pan Sure, there’s always room for a spammer. You’re the guy masturbating in the background. Wow, look at you go, you’re spurtin’ like a fuckin’ fount- oh. ow. Shit, dude, it’s not supposed to have blood in it. You need to get that checked. Sooner rather than later I’d say. Thoughts and prayers.

Whohoo! More Mia!

No Mercy in Novac Thank you for your comment! I appreciate you taking the time. I could absolutely see her needing a freakin’ drink in the Atomic Wrangler, although whether it was a bad end would probably depend how much booze she knocked back. I guess after Boone started shootin’ there weren’t a whole lot left of the bad guys though. Thanks again!

She could go with an establishing narration that the gender is unclear, followed by constructions like “The blond\e” or “s\he ran”, or just have the original fair haired thing and then after that go for non gendered descriptors like “stranger” or “helper” or “helpful stranger” similar.

An Actor Abducted Thank you for your review and kind words! I appreciate the feedback.

Shame they didn’t take down all the copied and pasted stories when the first few were raised with ‘em though! “Oh, yes, genuine misunderstanding. It wasn’t nailed down so we figured ‘public domain,’ could happen to anyone, look at Melania with that speech... By the way there’s another baker’s dozen we did the same with, so we’ll delete ourselves...” Would have saved the guest and yourself a ton of work and time identifying and deleting the rest. That’s time you could have spent writing a new work of literature, wandering lazily through beautiful scenery, interacting with family or friends, or even reading fanfic about cute elves wearing each other’s assholes out! Honestly, I do respect the time and effort the staff put in here (and that anonymous guest too, for this case!). I’d always been far, far too lazy.

Diablo 2 had those fucking lightning beetles in the desert. A way to harvest them as cruelly as possible would be fine by me.

I guess part of the problem that led to it is their profile request – If they’re just slapping up on AFF whatever story or edited paragraph people send them, then it’d be really easy for story thieves to harvest stories or paragraphs of stories and mail them over and then BAM! It’s on AFF with some changed names and incorrect attribution.

I’m going from being amazed at the guest’s detective skills to worried that their searches are going to get them on a watchlist somewhere. That’s like half of the user’s stories deleted for being copy/past/name change jobs now – feels like it has been a busy moderation week for you, BW!

That’s some more quality detective work!

Fair enough!

Thanks for the moderatin’ work. How many times do you need to be caught taking stories from other authors to get in the Hall of Shame now? There’s users who only did it once to get in there from years past! eg This'n I’m not planning to go copy/paste myself, just curious as much as anything.

I gotta admire the detective work.

Pregnant in Alabama Thanks for the review! I hope your writing is going well and you’re getting some kickass stuff down. Or fuckass if it’s porn I guess. Male pregnancies aren’t really my thing either (and since it’s a male pregnancy that didn’t involve two male characters, or lots of angst it isn’t most of the usual Mpreg fans’ thing either ) Sometimes I just have an idea and find it rights out pretty easily and maybe is funny or sick or whatever enough to be worth the while. Like this one! I’m still not gonna write an ABDL story though. ...crap, both muses just started laughing.

Pen Name: JayDee Story link: Terminal Promotion Review replies link: Review Replies -TV Type of fic: Flashfic Rating: Adult++ Fandom: Doctor Who Pairing: The Editor X Cathica Santini Khadeni Warnings: AFFO ChallengeFic COMPLETE Contro MF MCD Rape Violence

I was literally fuckin’ singing the “Holly and the Ivy “ Christmas Carol in my head when I named her. Well, the first verse anyway. Been a good 20 years or so since singing it in school. *Looks up the Japanese* Heh, exactly! I figured it also worked because most folks’d assume it was just a Polish version of Lucas. He’s definitely a power hungry controlling POS, but I think even he can change – heck he’s probably gonna make a great parent. “Son, your pappy used to be a real asshole.” Heh, I half wondered if it was a TV Tropes thing. My tiny reference pool showing there! Ahh I see, yeah, doing it from Lailah’s point of view would probably make for a pretty interesting/more nuanced take on both the wider politics, the ethics, AND Shannon’s mpreg malarky. After all, she’d know every one of the State Senators involved, too.