JayDee

*Goes to put head back in box. Sees law books leaning on shelf. Shrugs* Won’t be any minor1 tags for me! And yes, fair assumption on the MCD but there are some exceptions where the death is super quick/not a focus but I felt needed tagging anyway eg The Morpheus Potion where I think there’s only the starting swing of an axe and the death isn’t detailed, or even that Shokan Lust story where there’s one character stomped to death briefly and another dude got skinned/killed in a few lines, but it is by no means a snuff fic. Possibly less violence than the average round of Mortal Kombat really. I’m just not into writing much at all at the moment. Everytime In the past I’ve said I’m through with writing I went back and did something else, so no curious if not saying it will free me! Literally anything of mine could be revised to be so much better! Years ago me and the pervs on Deathstalker’s old forum used to have a “paragraphs of snuff” thread, telling some of that kind of fetish material in just a few sub-flashfic sentences. Some of it definitely hit the spot! I still remember some of their paragraphs now, while they almost certainly have totally forgotten my shit efforts. As bad as they are, the only reason I haven’t stuck a compendium of mine up on AFF is I’d need like one for misc games one for misc books etc and it felt like too much effort doing all the disclaimers. Never underestimate the ability of fetish folk to find just a few words revving their engine. There was that one time I was at the bus stop and a nerdy woman sat down next to me and said “I’m Kizzy. I prefer your funny stuff.” But apart from that, no. And when creating original characters these days I’ll sometimes have a bit of a google search to see if he name is either super common or not appearing for anybody alive! Darn it all! Can’t write fiction but I can jaw for hours on forums on my day off. It’s like 1999 all over again!

Pandemic Head remains the last thing I finished. Considering one of my earliest stories after I changed my penname to JD was Getting Head… it might almost end up as bookend. Almost. I mean, not really but close enough. First off, thanks for the review! You really didn’t have to – at this stage you’ve pretty much read and reviewed everything that isn’t horrific garbage, and at least some of the stuff that is. Was nice to see you’d had the time to look over InBrightestDay’s story tho! Mike’s a lawyer! He specialised in criminal law although once he had his own firm he’s got attorneys in several fields working for him so probably some could be in the biochemical patent side for the scientists! Thanks tho’ fitting is fine by me. Thanks! Funny and disturbing is what I sometimes go for. Then people say “You thinking that is funny is really disturbing.” The only thing I’d disagree with is the niche fetish crowd wouldn’t give a shit about characters or past stories and still enjoy the fucked head. There’s some folks out there with a big thing for still-living-but-unattached-heads getting fucked – I blame stupid sexy dullahans – and it would probably shoot up their quality table for them. Like the dragon-snuff-rape fans who think the Spyro request story I did was great while I can’t remotely see the erotic appeal. But thanks again! So. Up until about 2006 or 2007 I was happy to write real person stories. Amongst other things I realised how fucking easy it was for sickos (I mean, more so) to link the real people or their friends/family to them with social media starting to take off more than forums and the rest and took all mine offline. Plus there were some court cases. I’ve since re-written most of my RPFs to be about OCs or fandoms, and one such story was re-written to be about OCs, and I decided to rename the fictional psychotic girl character as Mike’s cousin, Cadence Van Dijk and her father as his uncle. Much richer branch of the family. There’s none of the fantasy elements in it, it’s just a nasty piece of work with maybe one funny line. Anyway, I’ve got another real person story I still need to re-write and it featured a lawyer character I realised I could turn into Mike and the lawyer’s boss I could turn into Cadence, and have the theme changed from the original idea to be about a mass sacrifice to Eparlegna by Cadence seeking power, and end up as Cadence as an animated angry head who may possibly end up in the possession of one of InBrightestDay’s characters. There may even be a happy ending at some point. Who knows? Anyway, thank you again for the review! At least the story was short so there wasn’t too much cack to wade through for ya. In fact this reply may be longer than the flashfic! heh.

Your grasp of the English language is better than some peoples. I mean, I went to Kentucky once. Ah, yeah, makes sense. Or they could go on an arctic cruise! No need, honestly! I don’t expect reciprocal reviews especially since I was going to read it anyway. That said, if you’re really keen on reviewing, InBrightestDay has a short nosex piece under books The Least I Can Do inspired by the original ending to my Whore of Heaven story! That’s not had a review from anybody but me and you’ve read WoH so you’d probably get something out of it Thanks either way and I look forward to whatever comes next!

Time for something completely knew or do you think you’ll start on a Carmen sequel or similar? Unless the actual year is necessary to the story it’s probably safe to keep on keeping the way you have been – helps stop it get too dated later on! :) I mean, except for the careful Swedish readers. Lot of that around, sadly. Ha! That’s pretty funny but also cool. Will it be super masturbation heavy? I do get why she didn’t with that whole soreness going on down below. Probably would have come out dirtier than they went in as the poet had it. No probs! It’s an entertaining story.

I’ve only read one from him, but I’ll probably read more when I get the chance – and I tend to like those oldstyle books with all the little social history details thrown in so if I come across Travels with Charley I’ll give it a crack!

You bring the serious I’ll bring the levity!

Back once again into @InBrightestDay’s thread with a review reply to that joint effort Parlor Games! Thanks for the review! I’m glad you’ve had a second crack at it as InBrightestDay has some super cool horror atmosphere in there. I finally read Of Mice and Men during the last few months. Can absolutely see some similar characteristics there, I suspect that story set the template that sheer pop culture exposure has led to similar characters feeling alike. At least Cody didn’t shoot Todd in the head. Would probably have been a little out of character. This is definitely more one for InBrightestDay to answer – but I guess I’d say After Party would be the best one to start folks with, with it being purely InBrightestDay’s take on ‘em and, yeah, the fact that the other one has a buncha sex definitely has some AFF appeal. Yua not turning out to be a yaoi fangirl and getting the guys to blowbang Cody probably a good thing really. Also out of character for a start. Thanks! That coulda worked! InBrightestDay’s current collaboration with another author has had some smoking hot bits so it would probably have been mostly his guidance on the sex stuff anyway – I mean, with it being his characters he’s got a better feel of what they do to each other. Thank you again for the view, very much appreciated

Really sorry for your loss. Losing a pet is super hard.

I was thinking what if it was like his real Dad, rather than the real world guy he thinks of as him! But I guess not, so will remain on edge of seat until next update You’re welcome!

Just lucky I happened to check in the forum and see your promoted final part and had the time free to read it Sunday morning I hope ya have had a better week this week and have a better one next week. There’s a spoiler tag right here on the forum! He could go to Hell, rescue anybody needs rescuing. And not look back at the last minute ‘cos that didn’t work out so well for Opheus. Heh, we’ll say I was jokin’ ‘bout afterwards. More of a turn of phrase really, but yeah 60k is thoroughly long! Anyway, happy to have reviewed and read alla the parts

It’s weird, I must have watched every episode of The Simpsons up until 2000 and I still like to think it’s a great show and I’ve seen loads, but that’s like… 20 years ago now and I’ve only seen an episode or two since. I hope it’s still good. As for your idea – I don’t see why not! I’m sure folks who enjoy the R34would love the story just as well, and those who didn’t know the R34 would maybe just need an author’s note for where the canon differs. I based my story Corinthian Knot off a piece of R34 fanart of Lara Croft and a dog by Turria years ago, when I could still risk going to places like HF, and that story went down very well – DG just advised I needed the permission of the person who created the work and to credit them properly – http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/26628-the-question-i-couldnt-see-where-else-to-put-it/ Edit -heh, the entire subforum was created so I could ask that question in it.

I’m all out of credits and continues! Game over man, game over! [/Hudson]

Well, thank you! I did my best. I kinda liked Stryker when MK3 came out. All the other characters had something to make them extra badass, and here’s a dude in a baseball cap who is just a cop but he’s gonna try anyway. I mean, it coulda been worse. Sindel would probably have choke fucked him. And you seem to be wholly suffering the effects of quarantine at the moment, finding time to get through a bunch of my old game stories! Look, I know things are bleak in the world but there’s still hope! You don’t need to subject yourself to this unremitting horror! I’m grateful to get the reviews but feeling bad for ya suffering some of this shit like, Centaur Mother one of at least a couple stories I wrote with ‘mother’ in the title and generally a lot more wholesome than Zombie Mother… Lara Croft’s got that knack for getting involved with wacky old shit. And I don’t just mean her butler from the old games. I bet she could still get that centaur into a top public school simply by virtue of her title… Thanks for the comments! and then The Scout's Dream one of my few pure M/M stories without some non M/M shenanigans going on as well They do. Sadly, the voice actor for the TF2 Soldier, Rick May, died recently. He was 79 and hadn’t been well since February, but they wrote some great lines for him to deliver and he always did ‘em well. Thanks again for the comments!

It was super strange. Lucius was so shocked he moved to London and became a market trader with his OC brother and their OC uncle lived there too.

The Countess of of Abingdon is far too well bred to stoop to such base abuse against beloved fellow Brits. Now, those ‘bloody colonials’* on the other hand… *Giles Voice Struck Down and Sodomised Thanks for your interest! No, probaby not. Instead I ended up writing Shokan Lust on the basis of feedback/request from an MK fan who’d read the Stryker story, and the last main part of that revists the “Sheeva with a cock boning the shit out of a dude” theme although the rest of the story is FF. I kind of misunderstood the request part from the MK Fan and it wasn’t ‘til the first parts were in the bag that they pointed out they’d thought I was gonna write Sheeva with a cock all the way through. Uh, oops.

And back to kinda funny titles, Lara Croft's Sheep God Trials Thanks for the review! Yeah, it does kind of just get worse as it goes on with a sudden death toll and some, uh, stereotypical behavior in the land down under don’t it? It’s a sad sick world when folks can publish shit like this I guess.

Sorry ta hear about the toxicity, absolutely a good reason to avoid social media though. I see so much obvious fake news/hoax stuff on facebook, I ended up unfriending a lot of past work colleagues and that, people I hadn’t seen in years and now is mostly family/close friends I don’t get to see often. And even then you got that one or two family members with, uh, robust political views at odds with your own. Also, sorry about the blog -I hope you are able to build it up again if you need it for personal enjoyment or marketing.

I heard blogspot went downhill a ways after google bought it in 2003 or 4 or so, I think blogging in general seems to have taken a bit of a backseat to podcasts and youtube and that – certainly don’t hear as much as used to around ‘em although I know some are still going. Heck, livejournal used to be big for fanfic at one point too…

“Death has wings and time it flies” as Candia Ridley sang.

“How George got his Groove Back”

Feel free to borrow one of mine! Caitlyn ain’t up to much apart from raising kids in the years after The Rupture. Oh… right… same issue of special…

No, the typo was in my post above*! I don’t spellcheck replies enough on here… *Edit:...ok, previous page now.

That’s ok, I added a new typo to make up for it! “is the ment to be to?”