JayDee

You’d mentioned being busy so I figured what the hey!

Not at all! I enjoy your sex scenes, I’ve pointed out the ones I especially liked in reviews! It’s mine – got that whole flatpack catalogue feel of “insert tab A into slot B” or “rub tab B against other tab B” as with that one bookcase. Vast majority of positive thoughts on my sex scenes were because the readers enjoyed the particular kink or fetish and were so happy to have it they put aside the mechanical writing. That’s what folks like to avoid tho – they want some emotional connection, some description and detail and a certain amount of mess. Generally. Some don’t like mess. I forget where I was going.

The best advice I ever got was “Keep track of the hands,” If someone’s got one hand up to the elbow in their buddy’s fudge factory, you can’t have them also gripping both hips at the same time. Unless they’re a shokan or something.

I’m no Thundercloud – anyway, most reviewers said my sex scenes “Were like whacking off over an ikea instruction booklet” while Steve the Ikea instruction booklet fetishist said “Needs more Å”

If you wait ‘til the holiday 2021 thread goes up you can be sure you haven’t missed any stragglers Technically, someone could join in June otherwise. Or 9th August for the Islamic/Arabic New Year (I hear 1443 is gonna be a good one!)

Apologies in advance for the inevitable disappointment.

Solution! You two could collaborate on a story. With half-ass plus whole-ass the story would have a massive one and a half-ass sex scene. That’s a lot of junk in the trunk.

Been a bit busy but just noticed you folks got part 6 up! I’ll re-read and review tomorrow :). Not like I’m going out partying after all.

The Succubus’ Gift A short story of Mike, his girlfriend Lupa, and a Christmas Eve visit. ChallengeFic MF Oneshot Oral Loaded! Please let me know any typos, grammar errrors, and the like!

“We tried to hide behind the mountains. The horse came over it.” Whoohoo! I hope to read it tomorrow! Managed a 3000 word first draft here of the flashfic idea I had the other day. Kinda went over the flashfic part. Choppy as hell, lacking tons of detail, but basically ok. Gives me time to try and get it turned into a non-confusing thing with enough detail to be worth reading by the 31st! Fingers crossed!

Original stories only But I’m playing it on PC not console so it’s been feeling not too bad. Sure, some glitches but so far nothing worse than Skyrim still has today.

Update: I came up with a flashfic I could do, planned it out and came up with some great lines in my head. Then I played Cyberpunk 2077 for eight hours. Um. Whoops.

I was gonna leave a review praising the stark minimalism of the blank chapter and explaining that while it wasn’t my easiest masturbation session I grit my teeth and managed it.

Don’t burn yourself out! Take it nice and slow, enjoy Christmas and I am sure MG will be as worth the wait as MS was. As for me, my flashfics both floundered so unless I can come up with something else and get it done I’m gonna have to miss, but with two great stories so far and several on the way it’ll still be a solid party!

“Where do you authors get your ideas from?” “The dishwasher” “Dear god!” Whoohooo! Ah s’alright, it was a good long story! I was just being greedy Totally understand, although I guess I do like scatalogical humour too! No probs! Thanks for review replying!

I ain’t much good at beta’ing. Sir! Sir! My werewolf ate my story sir. Then threw it up. Then ate it again.

They’re reading it through, they’re checking it twice, having mis-understood the title as an instruction :p

They don’t ask for much of us with these holiday stories, but they do ask for Oneshots. If I contribute a story without realising it makes no sense as a oneshot then I’ve failed miserably. A harder hearted story host would have deleted it and banned me from doing any more. I made a lot more effort getting the Halloween one to stand alone, and if I manage to get my current Christmas attempt finished it hopefully will too. I’m mostly just hoping to get enjoying everyone else’s out of this one!

Ah! “Holiday Non-Canon” begins!

Yay! Again Yay! If you wanted to delete the standalone copy and re-post it in the compliation thread I can repost my review no bother!

I know you’re working that Rudy sequel George, so if you’re happy to have it in a party compliation rather than a standalone then I’ll do a holiday flashfic 1000 worder of some kind to make it a party and give InBrightestDay a push to finish that’n! 1000 words. Actual sensible story unlike last year’s confusing garbage I shat out! I can do this within the week! Sorry to hear about your IT issues there InBrightestDay – presumably not the snow storm from further up the east coast behind it? I hope they sort it quickly!

I managed 500 words of a story before giving it up as a bad job and deciding to never speak of it again after this reply.

Holiday Cannon tho’ Diners, Drive-Ins and Dives crossover? :p

The last time someone did a giveaway on here I won a cursed doll. It kept roaming out and killing the neighbours; just sucking the souls right out of them. Took me six months to realise I was the last person in the street still alive. Couldn’t understand why it left me alone. Turned out I didn’t have a soul anymore. Not since I wrote Spyro fanfiction. G’luck with this’n though! The forum’s kinda quiet sometimes so don’t be too disheartened if you don’t get a huge reply.