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  1. I’ve only read one from him, but I’ll probably read more when I get the chance – and I tend to like those oldstyle books with all the little social history details thrown in so if I come across Travels with Charley I’ll give it a crack!
  2. You bring the serious I’ll bring the levity!
  3. Back once again into @InBrightestDay’s thread with a review reply to that joint effort Parlor Games! Thanks for the review! I’m glad you’ve had a second crack at it as InBrightestDay has some super cool horror atmosphere in there. I finally read Of Mice and Men during the last few months. Can absolutely see some similar characteristics there, I suspect that story set the template that sheer pop culture exposure has led to similar characters feeling alike. At least Cody didn’t shoot Todd in the head. Would probably have been a little out of character. This is definitely more one for InBrightestDay to answer – but I guess I’d say After Party would be the best one to start folks with, with it being purely InBrightestDay’s take on ‘em and, yeah, the fact that the other one has a buncha sex definitely has some AFF appeal. Yua not turning out to be a yaoi fangirl and getting the guys to blowbang Cody probably a good thing really. Also out of character for a start. Thanks! That coulda worked! InBrightestDay’s current collaboration with another author has had some smoking hot bits so it would probably have been mostly his guidance on the sex stuff anyway – I mean, with it being his characters he’s got a better feel of what they do to each other. Thank you again for the view, very much appreciated
  4. Really sorry for your loss. Losing a pet is super hard.
  5. I was thinking what if it was like his real Dad, rather than the real world guy he thinks of as him! But I guess not, so will remain on edge of seat until next update You’re welcome!
  6. Just lucky I happened to check in the forum and see your promoted final part and had the time free to read it Sunday morning I hope ya have had a better week this week and have a better one next week. There’s a spoiler tag right here on the forum! He could go to Hell, rescue anybody needs rescuing. And not look back at the last minute ‘cos that didn’t work out so well for Opheus. Heh, we’ll say I was jokin’ ‘bout afterwards. More of a turn of phrase really, but yeah 60k is thoroughly long! Anyway, happy to have reviewed and read alla the parts
  7. It’s weird, I must have watched every episode of The Simpsons up until 2000 and I still like to think it’s a great show and I’ve seen loads, but that’s like… 20 years ago now and I’ve only seen an episode or two since. I hope it’s still good. As for your idea – I don’t see why not! I’m sure folks who enjoy the R34would love the story just as well, and those who didn’t know the R34 would maybe just need an author’s note for where the canon differs. I based my story Corinthian Knot off a piece of R34 fanart of Lara Croft and a dog by Turria years ago, when I could still risk going to places like HF, and that story went down very well – DG just advised I needed the permission of the person who created the work and to credit them properly – http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/26628-the-question-i-couldnt-see-where-else-to-put-it/ Edit -heh, the entire subforum was created so I could ask that question in it.
  8. I’m all out of credits and continues! Game over man, game over! [/Hudson]
  9. Well, thank you! I did my best. I kinda liked Stryker when MK3 came out. All the other characters had something to make them extra badass, and here’s a dude in a baseball cap who is just a cop but he’s gonna try anyway. I mean, it coulda been worse. Sindel would probably have choke fucked him. And you seem to be wholly suffering the effects of quarantine at the moment, finding time to get through a bunch of my old game stories! Look, I know things are bleak in the world but there’s still hope! You don’t need to subject yourself to this unremitting horror! I’m grateful to get the reviews but feeling bad for ya suffering some of this shit like, Centaur Mother one of at least a couple stories I wrote with ‘mother’ in the title and generally a lot more wholesome than Zombie Mother… Lara Croft’s got that knack for getting involved with wacky old shit. And I don’t just mean her butler from the old games. I bet she could still get that centaur into a top public school simply by virtue of her title… Thanks for the comments! and then The Scout's Dream one of my few pure M/M stories without some non M/M shenanigans going on as well They do. Sadly, the voice actor for the TF2 Soldier, Rick May, died recently. He was 79 and hadn’t been well since February, but they wrote some great lines for him to deliver and he always did ‘em well. Thanks again for the comments!
  10. It was super strange. Lucius was so shocked he moved to London and became a market trader with his OC brother and their OC uncle lived there too.
  11. The Countess of of Abingdon is far too well bred to stoop to such base abuse against beloved fellow Brits. Now, those ‘bloody colonials’* on the other hand… *Giles Voice Struck Down and Sodomised Thanks for your interest! No, probaby not. Instead I ended up writing Shokan Lust on the basis of feedback/request from an MK fan who’d read the Stryker story, and the last main part of that revists the “Sheeva with a cock boning the shit out of a dude” theme although the rest of the story is FF. I kind of misunderstood the request part from the MK Fan and it wasn’t ‘til the first parts were in the bag that they pointed out they’d thought I was gonna write Sheeva with a cock all the way through. Uh, oops.
  12. And back to kinda funny titles, Lara Croft's Sheep God Trials Thanks for the review! Yeah, it does kind of just get worse as it goes on with a sudden death toll and some, uh, stereotypical behavior in the land down under don’t it? It’s a sad sick world when folks can publish shit like this I guess.
  13. I have progressed from starting stories and not finishing them to not starting stories. Well, ok, regressed then. Which is a shame as the next unfinished one would have been about a guy finding out his Mom had a twin after finally meeting the rest of the family (after his Mom’s falling out before he was born). It’d have been dead pervy as there’d be an attraction on both sides.

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    2. JayDee

      JayDee

      One thing there is, is time!

    3. GeorgeGlass

      GeorgeGlass

      I second Thundercloud’s suggestion of writing the middle of the story. That’s usually my process: I write the scene that I have best figured out first, regardless of where in the story it happens. The other stuff comes eventually.

    4. JayDee

      JayDee

      It sounds like an option! If I can get the motor ticking over again I’ll maybe give it a try. Thanks guys!

  14. Sorry ta hear about the toxicity, absolutely a good reason to avoid social media though. I see so much obvious fake news/hoax stuff on facebook, I ended up unfriending a lot of past work colleagues and that, people I hadn’t seen in years and now is mostly family/close friends I don’t get to see often. And even then you got that one or two family members with, uh, robust political views at odds with your own. Also, sorry about the blog -I hope you are able to build it up again if you need it for personal enjoyment or marketing.
  15. I heard blogspot went downhill a ways after google bought it in 2003 or 4 or so, I think blogging in general seems to have taken a bit of a backseat to podcasts and youtube and that – certainly don’t hear as much as used to around ‘em although I know some are still going. Heck, livejournal used to be big for fanfic at one point too…
  16. “Death has wings and time it flies” as Candia Ridley sang.
  17. “How George got his Groove Back”
  18. Feel free to borrow one of mine! Caitlyn ain’t up to much apart from raising kids in the years after The Rupture. Oh… right… same issue of special…
  19. No, the typo was in my post above*! I don’t spellcheck replies enough on here… *Edit:...ok, previous page now.
  20. *Thoughtfully chewing and swallowing*

    “Right, right… I meant to order Feta cheese not futa cheese.”

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    2. JayDee

      JayDee

      Heck if I know. I may be corrupted but I was never a champion.

    3. InBrightestDay

      InBrightestDay

      Is it weird for me to think “that’s a very JayDee thing to write”? :D

    4. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      Weird? Yes. Accurate? Also yes. 

  21. That’s ok, I added a new typo to make up for it! “is the ment to be to?”
  22. Harry briefly perused it be he handed it off the Hermione. I figured meant to be before, also is the ment to be to?
  23. I always like to hear when folks spot typos in my stuff – I’m completely oblivious sometimes!
  24. If it wasn’t for the fact I already read and reviewed it just under a decade ago I’d have looked at Claire’s Misfortune because of the Beast and Violence tags! Thanks again for takin’ part.
  25. So not just, “Do you have anything to light the BBQ with?” Shannon went to the basement too ‘cos they were really into her and she was quite happy to fuck ‘em both and they didn’t have anything that could hurt her anyway. I think Kate had promised to “eat both their asses” in case of literal words, so that left Lupa and Kizzy upstairs and Kizzy was gonna read Todd a nice story and Lupa was gonna try not to swear a lot, or roll her eyes at the nice story. I think. Anyway, this version with Yua going from woman to spider to spider-woman on them works waaaay better! I guess I did, at that. Thanks!
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