JayDee

If by yaoi you mean M/M material then BronxWench is presumably too modest* to directly mention the many excellent Alistair/Wraith scenes she has written - they can be found through the link of course, but so can others. I say read BronxWench's first - I am recommending them . Go! Go through the profile link beneath the userpic and see BW's stories! Hot stuff, but you get the best effect starting at the bottom and working up through the growing relationship. *or not as tacky and self-promoting as some of us me.

The Embrocation prompt - Lady Cassandra's Erotic Embrocation - I was *this* close to writing another Harry/Minerva story. Erotic massage and so on. My aim is to write the five stories that would get them a pairing catagory. Then do the same for Dobby/Giant Squid. Ahem. Lady C appeared very early on in the Doctor Who revival and had a follow up episode, and she really was pretty damn snobbish and, basically, thoroughly evilly unpleasant. I think it was while I was skulling around TVtropes I saw something 'minded me that a) she's mostly just skin and b) needs moisturising. Seemed appropriate. Um. Only downside is doing two stories for the same fandom in a row on the prompts. Ahh well, 29 bloody weeks I was already getting repetitive. 29 flashfics, plus a few other things I have managed... except for the under-a-fortnight in which I wrote my great big assed movie crossover this has probably been my most productive period as a writer... Um. again. Review replies. Thank you for your review - Probably a shame that when you finally grit your teeth and tried something I wrote it was sheet-of-skin bukkake. Some of the stuff I put out is far more normal She's pretty manipulative, though that does seem to be a tendancy of many brain-in-a-jar types. My grateful thanks, as ever, for your review also. It is nice to have a character for an embrocation prompt for whom constant moisturising is a must. Another alternative was BtVS's Balthazar in a Faith/Buffy threesome. That would actually have been less appealing for many readers. She is manipulative, and snobby, and evil but also kinda sympathetic towards the end of the follow up episode. Also, the twist wouldn't be a surprise to anybody who can remember the episode dialogue, but for everyone else, thanks I am glad it works well

I probably ought too. Huh.

....hoofing? Despite my lack of knowlege of the fandom when I get a minute I am going to read that just to see how "hoofing" works...

FWIW - I also have my story page link in the "Contact Information" website url box to make it clickable. I figure if I ever have an actual homepage to link it can go in my sig

Pen Name: JD/JayDee Story link: Lady Cassandra's Erotic Embrocation Type of fic: Flashfic Rating: Adult++ Fandom: TV > Doctor Who Pairing: Lady Cassandra x 6 one-dimensional pwp cock users. Warnings: 3 , Bigotry, ChallengeFic, COMPLETE, Humil, OC, Oneshot, Oral, Other, PWP, Solo, Xeno

So many are now deleted accounts... heh, quitters!

http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095824 Seems, uh, trollish.

No worries. It is short, but it's fun. I liked it! Thanks for indirectly leading me to it

...I searched Closet, found this: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094202 This it?

Sounds like a fun story! If it's found I'll check it out too

To Fool a Frenchman - came about because I wanted a character likely to use Callipygian in day-to-day speech. The TF2 Engineer is very, very smart... and was shown in one of the official blog comics to know his art, with the term apparantly originating in relation to a fine-assed statue it seemed appropriate. Pygmalion would totally hit that statue, btw. Thanks for your review! I wonder if they named him Dell because that firm is also from Texas...[/random thought] Texans know their guns, in stereotype, so handling one for fighting and one for fun at the same time seemed to work Dell didn't even need salad cream

Carry Ace written for Embrangle, had an idea for a tentacle story as a fan work for Ghastly's comic, with the anti-human-sex monster being tricked into a sexual situation from being persuaded to agree to embrangle someone without realising the full implications. Problem was, just wasn't funny. So I went with something that didn't try to be funny. I figured with the content warnings it would not get a review (maybe a flame), but once again I reckoned without BronxWench's iron prompt-reading stomach. Thanks for your review - I'm sure the Master is once again underestimating the Doctor, who would presumably be able to fully reverse/have reversed the procedures and probably block it from Ace's memory too. The Seventh Doctor wouldn't shy from that, with his extra-manipulative streak The Master once had somebody eaten by an alien chair, so this is pretty mild for him I do think the writing seemed a little choppy and cliche, which is one of the reasons I've tended to avoid writing this sort of thing for a while to try and see if writing more varied things would help.

Pen Name: JD/JayDee Story link: Carry Ace Type of fic: Flashfic Rating: Adult++ Fandom: TV > Doctor Who (old series fwiw) Pairing: The Master (Ainley) x Ace Warnings: Abuse, Angst, Bigotry, B-Mod, ChallengeFic, COMPLETE, Contro, Humil, M/F, Oneshot, Other, PWP, RapeFic, Slave, Solo, TF, Violence, Xeno

...oh thank heavens. I misread that as Teddy Ruxpin. Carry on.

It, uh, it reads like constructive criticism to me.

It's not a host in the way you mean it, but if you don't find anything better - You could get a collectors account on asstr.org if you have authors permission to post their stories, or an authors account if they're all your own. There's lots of incomplete stuff on asstr with it starting as a store for the alt.sex.stories uploads (the .moderated ones tend to be in better condition), and as it's ftp/directory based you could make subfolders for incomplete/complete etc. Won't be flooding anybody with those uploads. The author section app info is here - asstr.org/accountinfo.html ...I kinda miss my old geocities page. It started out with a long assed url, then when yahoo took it over you could use your yahoo username instead, and text pages didn't overload the tiny hourly download limit either! eh.

In addition to the above, a third chapter has now been written: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600086178&chapter=3 It is much the same as described above, but with additional TF and F/D tags. It is also around three times as long as chapter 1.

Pen Name: JD/JayDee Story link: To Fool a Frenchman Type of fic: Flashfic Rating: Adult++ Fandom: Games > Team Fortress 2 Pairing: Engineer x Demoman Warnings: Anal, ChallengeFic, COMPLETE, Exhib, HJ, M/M, MCD, Oneshot, PWP, Rim, Violence

adduced... um... did a second chapter to The Slumber Party of Evil Doom which BronxWench kindly reviewed, Thanks kindly, as ever, for your review. I fear I must respectfully disagree though - I think the prompt won over me. I was thrashed. Smashed. Thoroughly smacked about. I even ended up bring back Eparlegna, a character with no redeeming characteristics, who isn't terribly interesting to write, but who has somehow now appeared in three of my stories. Frankly, I think he exploited my fear of the word! If the next one makes me whimper... eh, I did 26 of 26, all flashfic (admittedly because writing twitfics and drabbles intimidate me, though I did do a snuff haiku once) and that's not a bad run. Let these smarter folks than smutty PWPing old me step up to the bat and write the stories for Leiotrichous, Asseveration and Periphrasis or whatnot. I thought Lupa being an athiest made sense - just because you have vampires doesn't mean you got to believe in the Devil. Give her a little while and she'll have a non-supernatural explaination for Kizzy too, "So... some sort of religiously delusional alien, then?"

The Key's Shaft: Thanks! I hear they can also make their ears move without the rest of their heads. Top muscle control those girls

Pen Name: JD/JayDee Story link: The Slumber Party of Evil Doom - Chapter 2 Type of fic: Flashfic Rating: Adult Fandom: Original > Paranormal/Supernatural > General Pairing: None Warnings: AFFO, Bond, ChallengeFic, COMPLETE, Language, NoSex, OC, Oneshot, Violence

'nother review on The Key's Shaft: Thanks for your review! Yeah, Xander was probably off his lunch for that day, "What you got there Dawn, a ohmygod!" I don't always have dickgirls torturing folks My Josie and the Pussycats story had no torture! Heh, I getcha though and I am glad you found the story fun, and thanks a ton for pointing out the typo - fixed it! That was a left over from the original line about how I was going to compare her previous flushed embarressment with new flushed arousal but I needed the words for something else and deleted/re-wrote. Horny teenager not even jerking off? Yeah, she was pent up. One night away from spooging the sheets... There's a whole buncha faith/dawn stories on there, go nuts

Uh... I spent 25 minutes tossing out tips from the top of my head for a specific question from a first time writer on another site. Much of it is probably useless, but, eh, here is a slightly edited version. Tried to take out or explain stuff. I probably should have posted this in my journally stuff thread where I could have painted it as an incompetent person's rant. It may even be moved there yet as such by one of the mods Let's see... advice for a first time writer... 1) If you aren't used to writing long stuff, set yourself either a short story or short chapter length and aim for that. 2) World of Warcraft being a very popular fandom ought to ensure you get more readers and so more feedback which can help you improve/build you confidence/allow an interesting collection of flames to build, depending on what you write. Generally writing in a popular fandom as a new writer will get you more readers on the basis of the fandom alone when nobody knows who ya are. If that's what you're wanting. 2b) WoW being a fandom you enjoy will hopefully give you more motivation to finish it, and less chance of being bogged down explaining concepts that your readers will be familiar with (a benefit of a lot of fanfiction, that.) It's a good rule of thumb anyway to either write what you know, or what you've researched. And I say that as someone who did a couple requests after five minutes of googling. 3) Cliché is right for that plot [self-insert type walks through portal into WoW world]. Bamf fics they call 'em in some places as a homage to the sound effect of Marvel's Nightcrawler popping up in places. Wasn't so long ago the Lord of the Rings movies gave us a million "Tenth Walker" fics, usually involving a young American girl who got ol' Greanleaf's sap rising. As it were. Thing is, the vast majority of storylines are cliche. Very few actual plots in fiction, really. Look't tvtropes.org to see how many ideas turn up again and again and again. It's what you do with the idea that makes the story great, mediocre or indeed "lame". As a new writer starting out, take your best shot to do something cool with it. If it doesn't pan out, try again next time. 4) " a fanfic as it centres around a character of my own design" - google "Mary sue" and "fanfiction" and maybe "for fuck's sake, not another one" (kidding on the last bit!). Read the guides. Look at the do and don't lists. Learn from them. It'll save you trouble in the long run. If it's kind of a self insert as the plot might suggest, that can be okay, again, it's all in how you use them. A wider audience isn't necessarily going to appreciate your in-jokes. 5) Spelling, grammar, correct formatting of paragraphs.... These are all pretty useful for both first and many time writers. Folks who get away with it know the rules before they break 'em for the benefit of their story. There are free checkers on line, including built into many email providers. If you don't have a beta reader (which stands to reason) I recommend waiting a day or a couple days after finishing anything and re-reading it then, can usually spot mistakes more easiliy. I would do this more often but most of my readers are masuturbating too furiously to notice the mistakes that slip past the grammar/spell checks. And that's how I like 'em (but when folks do point out my mistakes in those areas I am always appreciative. Also, didn't spellcheck this post.) 6) Read your character's speech out loud to yourself. If it sounds clunky, weird or just fucking awful consider re-writing it. Unless that's a character point. I bet the guy writing Chewie's dialogue in the Star Wars movies had a ball. 7) Don't write scriptfics. Or if you do, re-write them into non scriptfics afterwards. Scriptfics bear no comparisons to actual scripts, and they are clunky as fuck. Just occasionally there's one that can be read easily, otherwise it's hard to get into 'em. Note to any scriptficcers reading: Love ya! AFF note - It's opinion only! You can of course, write what you want here or anywhere. 8 ) [the other site] is a great place for art, art criticism and a pool of the aforementioned masturbators. By all means post stories here, talk about writing here (they make provision for it, so it's rude not too!) But it's less great for forging a career in writing. You might want to consider joining a writing centric community to get more readers and feedback, or even a fandom specific one for WoW fics. If you can get what you mean sticking here than I'm happy for you, but my stories go up on 3-4 sites (more in certain specialised topics) and the writer specific feedback is generally post valuable. 9) Titles/Summaries - Oooh, yes. Hard. Hard, hard, hard. Well, sometimes. Thing is, asides from the fandom and later, maybe, your username, these are the things selling your story. I've pretty much never bothered reading something like "Summaries suck! Just read!" or "untitled fiction!" or whatever. It doesn't bode well for the quality of the story within, y'know? There's lots of complicated advice on titles and summaries, better'n I can put it, so go google 'it. Best I can say is, again, you're promoting your story with them. If you can't think of anything else for a title, put "A stranger in Gilneas" or something equally bland but at least descriptive. It's always better than nothing. Me, I kinda like puns... Summary is easier, just limit yourself to a brief description of what happens, in your case "A teenager from England walks through a portal into Gilneas, gets trapped there and gets afflicted with the worgen curse" Will do for a start. Unless you want more mystery in which case shorten it to "The adventures of an English Teenager in Gilneas" or something. As with the title, anything beats nothing every time. I reccommend you keep at least one backup on your computer as [other user] raistlinmajere says, and frankly backing it up elsewhere is also advisable. I have a couple stories lost forever due to insufficient backups after the site they were hosted on went offline (and wasnt on the wayback machine! bah). 25 minutes writing, here, and why? Because I have to write a 1000 word story using "adduced" for a weekly story prompt on another site [edit - love ya AFF ]. So I am procrastinating... Eh, hope some of it at least is helpful to you!

Holy fuck, I forgot I already had a Buffy review replies thread... Was just about to make a new one! As soon as I saw Dawn as the prompt I wanted to write about Dawn Summers, but initially I was trying to do something with her as a Giant from the Season 8 comic series. Couldn't make it work so I had a think of themes I haven't yet re-used from earlier prompts, and what with Hobgoblin's futa heavy profile/status wotsits I recalled I haven't used "girl with a cock" since the yule prompt. Then it was "shall I do DG/M(probably Spike) or DG/F"? I went with Faith, because I haven't done a consensual DG/F story in, uh... since my old pen name actually. Wow, long time. Funilly, that was a BtVS story too. I also thought of going for a title along the lines of "Dawnie's got a gun" and a summary like "using it for fun shooting", but the citations for the referenced puns seemed like too much work (an Aerosmith song and a wossname saying respectively. See??) Oh, and the child abuse subject of the song probably wasn't entirely appropriate for the pun. Um. I probably talk too much about the un-used ideas in these review reply threads, anyway, two reviews: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! Faith's not the sharing type, might lead to trouble if they did that Thanks for your review, but curse you! I wish I'd thought to use a shafted gag in the story. It would have worked very well, dangmabbit As for knocking Faith up, well, unprotected sex with one of those very healthy Slayer metabolisms... sounds likely doesn't it?