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Well, I’m certainly no expert in that sort of thing. I tend to follow the philosophy of a novel editor whose YouTube video I watched: Think of all the scenes you want to include in the story, then find a way to string them together. Joseph Campbell I ain’t. Oh, and BOOBS!

From Fairy-Slayer on March 19, 2020 Indeed. One of these days, I'll write something that actually justifies over-thought. It has occurred to me that I'm always finding ways to sideline Clyde instead of actually involving him in the story. But I do have an idea for a Clyde-centric story that may well join the List of 20 soon. I'm so glad those bits worked for you. It was Bobby's idea that the four of them go to this movie series, and Lori of course didn't want to tell him no. I love food and sex, but not at the same time. :\ 'kay. I love fusion cuisine, myself, so coming up with new combinations is fun for me. Yup, something like that. Hmmm, in what sense? Nope. Never saw that one before I clicked on your link. This I swear!

At long last, chapter 10 of “Make It All Better” is posted. I know I’m going to miss writing about Angie and Daddy at least a little, as I’ve been at it since 2013. But I’m glad to have given them the ending I think they deserve. And I’ve got so many more stories to tell.

From RandomReviewer on March 17, 2020 Don’t worry, Elvis has left the building. Like, thanks, and stuff. Totally.

From DoctorYnot on March 17, 2020 Thank you! I don’t mind. That’s often how I write reviews. Although I must say, mine aren’t usually nearly as detailed as this one. Thank you! To me, authenticity is paramount, because IMO, there’s no point in writing a fanfic if it doesn’t resemble and grow from the source material. A lot of people think that fanfic is easier to write than original stories because the characters and their world have been created for you; you’re just taking them out of the box and playing with them. But that’s also what makes it challenging, because you have to play with what you’re given. If you change the characters or their world (at least without some internally logical reason that you explain in the story), then you’re not really writing a fanfic anymore. Of course, writing smut adds a whole layer of challenge -- and therefore fun -- because you have to create circumstances in which the characters would plausibly do the things you want them to do. This is easy in fandoms where there’s magic or technology that can change people’s behavior; in half of my Phineas and Ferb stories (okay, probably more than half), sexy times ensue because of an Inator or one of the boys’ inventions. Lisa’s mad science can be used to the same effect, of course, but I’m trying not to over-rely on that as a plot device. No one has ever put it quite that way, but that is exactly what I’m going for. I don’t want readers to feel like they’re reading smut with some familiar names tacked onto it; I want them to feel like they’re reading about the characters they know. And because humor is integral to every Loud House episode, I feel like it’s not a Loud House story if it doesn’t contain a solid dose of comedy. Hell to the yes! Thank you. That’s a reference to “Heavy Meddle,” in which Ronnie Anne starts picking on Lincoln (off screen) and Lori opines that her shoving a sandwich down Lincoln’s pants is a classic show of romantic interest. Fair enough, but I feel that with Lincoln and Ronnie Anne being physically separated these days, they really have fallen into each other’s friend zones. But maybe they’re not that far outside the romance zone. Their romance, or at least romantic interest, seems like something easily rekindled. Noted. Keeping this in mind for the next chapter. One thing I like about The Loud House is that although the sisters started out as stereotypes, most of them have grown into three-dimensional characters. There’s a lot to Lori, and we’ll get into some of it later in the story. Yeah, you get the idea that this isn’t the first time Lincoln has had that thought. Food trucks are very popular where I live, and a lot of them are selling either fusion cuisine (kimchi enchiladas are surprisingly good, FYI) or upscale versions of street food. And because fusion restaurants seem to be popular in Royal Woods -- if Jean-Juan’s French-Mex Buffet and that Italian/Chinese place are anything to go by -- I figured I’d use that. Oh, and I liked cinnamon sugar on my popcorn when I was a kid. I’m kind of the anti-Dickens, because my default is to sacrifice descriptive detail in the name of moving the plot along. Sometimes that works in my favor, sometimes not so much. Lincoln only gets so much dialogue in this story, so monologue seems essential to showing what’s going on in his head. And pants. Yeah, allowing no one-on-one communication between them -- at least for now -- seemed essential to the story. Thank you! Thank you again. You know, for me, the setup has really become the most fun part to write. I’ve written so many sex scenes now that it has become a struggle to keep each new one from being a copy of the previous eight. So I’ve become more fond of getting the characters into the sexy situations than I am of writing those situations themselves. That said, I’m trying not to skimp on “the good stuff,” either. I added some more details to chapter 2 after the first draft seemed to end too quickly. Oh, yes indeed!

From ConanEdogawa on March 17, 2020 No spoilers!

Chapter 2 of “Twist My Arm” is posted!

Thanks, SWP1. I appreciate the support.

Thanks! I expect to be posting chapters every 1-2 weeks, so you won’t have too long to wait.

From RandomReviewer on March 12, 2020 No, no, I already ripped that off in “Multiversity.” Seriously, hope the rest of the story lives up to your expectations.

From Fairy-Slayer on March 11, 2020 I’m sorry, but Fairy Slayer and the Spoilers of Doom was simply an inferior film to Betas of the Lost Fic. Fortunately, the franchise got good again with Fairy Slayer and the Lolis Get Laid. His reasons are multifactorial, for sure. Lincoln didn’t have much opportunity to tell Ronnie Anne anything without risking Lori overhearing. Safer to just go with it. Who invited Luan on this date? Thanks for the review!

From ConanEdogawa on March 11, 2020 Thanks! I got the idea for this story some time after watching the episode in which Lori forces Lincoln to go on a double date with her, Bobby, and Ronnie Anne. I figured that Lori’s psychotic behavior in that episode had a lot of potential for storytelling exploitation.

So, change of plans: Rather than starting "Keene's College Weekend” just yet, I've just posted chapter 1 of a new Loud House story titled "Twist My Arm." Here's the summary: Bobby and Ronnie Anne are in town for just four weeks, and Lori is determined to make the most of her time with her Boo-Boo Bear. Even if she has to force Lincoln to do the same with Ronnie Anne. SWP1, I’m glad you so enjoyed chapter 3 of “For the Price of One.” Plenty more of that to come!

Here, I’ll post responses to any reviews that “Twist My Arm” may garner.

It took longer than I expected (it’s been a busy week), but chapter 3 of For the Price of One is posted at last.

Thanks! Hotness is what I strive for. You’ll be seeing that chapter very soon. And you have a good night, too.

From Fairy-Slayer on March 02, 2020 I like a bit of cultural mystery. “Darmok” is probably my favorite episode of ST:TNG. Or both. Could be both. I have four cats, so I don’t need much imagination for that sort of thing. That was Jomahawk’s request – that she be a total pillow princess until Jace shows her who’s boss. It’s not a good day to be a hamster… Well, she has dropped a hint or two – some of them literally (eg, her garter in the previous chapter) We shall see. Hard to say. Your computational abilities will be severely challenged before this story ends. You can bet on all of that. (Whether you’ll win the bet is a separate question.) Thanks for another uplifting review!

Re: “Wishful” From Sithlordshades on March 02, 2020 Thank you!

Re: “Wishful” From JayDee on March 01, 2020 Given that she's my favorite 80s singer, I have to wonder if I there's a subconscious connection there. If that's the worst thing, you're doing pretty well. Thanks! I wanted to do something different from an alternate spelling (as with Aliss and Angel) or a translation (as with Neva) or just straight-up the same name (as with Moonbeam and Eclipse). Something had to be sacrificed for pace. Thank you!

Re: “Wishful” From Jomahawk2694 on March 01, 2020 I believe in happy endings. I wanted a complication in Jace's interactions with her that Duann and Lady Aliss wouldn't have been able to predict, and that seemed like just the thing (although Aliss foreshadows it a little). That part is in response to something you wanted to include. You'll find out what in the next chapter. Somehow, the real-world sex scenes are especially compelling for me -- particularly in contrast with the fantasy ones. Then the next chapter will be worth the wait, too. Hmm, I have a pretty solid plan for the next two chapters (which I had intended to be the last ones), but I'll see. Glad so much of it is working for you.

Chapter 5 of Wishful is posted! Jace has an intimate meeting with the Benata emissary, and an even more intimate one at home.

So, it looks like chapter 5 of Wishful is on track to be posted this weekend. Other things I hope to post soon after that: Chapter 1 of Keene’s College Weekend. My beta had some notes, which is why isn’t posted yet. Chapter 3 of For the Price of One. The 10th and final chapter of “Make It All Better.” SWP1, welcome back. I checked out a couple of the Big Hero 6 stories you recommended. Hiro’s Puberty had more grammar issues than I could stomach, but Lab Partner was kind of fun.

The 5th and final chapter of Delta Delta Delta is posted! It's the final night of Pledge Week, and the nine remaining pledges are faced with one last big, sexy challenge. And how will Lindsey handle it when Pledge Mistress Gina makes good on her promise to put her and Nikki together for an intimate video? I can't tell you how happy I am to have finally brought this story to its conclusion. As I may have mentioned before, I posted the first chapter of Delta Delta Delta on Hentai Foundry back in 2013, and I actually started writing it well before then. In fact, when I started it, it was purely for my own entertainment, before it ever occurred to me to post it where other people could read it. In other news, the draft of chapter 1 of Keene's College Weekend is nearly complete and will probably head off to beta tomorrow. After that, I'm going to try to focus on finishing chapter 5 of Wishful.

I just meant punishing them for being punished. I prefer to leave that unclear. [Translation: I didn’t really think that part through.] Seriously. I am generally more ignorant of SNL than most people. Never been big on sketch comedy for some reason.