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    George Glass' Transparency Thread

    The next chapter of “My Wish” is posted! Chapter 6: Happy Birthday, Maggie
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    George Glass' Transparency Thread

    I thought it was high time that I started a thread for general news and discussion about my stories and such, so here it is. As I’ve mentioned in other threads, I tend to have 20 stories in progress at any given time. The stories I’ve made progress on most recently are “Country Summer” and “Make It All Better.” This does not mean, however, that these are the next stories for which I’ll be posting new chapters, because I’m a flighty bastard who works on whatever story he feels like working on when he has time to write. This is basically the only process that works for me; if I try to force myself to work on one particular thing, the result is often writer’s block. I re-learned this lesson recently when I tried to make myself finish the last chapter of “Splinter” (just to have the story finished), only to stall out on that story and every other one. But now I’m back in the groove.
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    I’ve been making good progress on chapter 6 of “My Wish.” This chapter is longer than most, but I expect to post it this weekend. What will be post-ready after that, I’m not sure. I have a few things that could be ready soonish if inspiration strikes. I’d also really like to finish up “Cartooniverse,” but the final chapter is only 5200 words right now; there are probably at least 1500 words left to write.
  4. Here, I’ll post responses to any reviews of “Just One Rule.” Summary: Sequel to “Enter the Sandboy.” All summer, Lincoln Loud has been having regular sex with all ten sisters and his mom, on just one condition: no sex outside the Loud house. But now that a new school year is beginning, will Lincoln be able to resist temptation? Spoiler alert: No.
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    Review responses for "Just One Rule" [The Loud House]

    From Fairy-Slayer on June 07, 2021 Wow, try saying THAT five times fast. With “Whoops,” I decided early on that it wasn’t going to be that kind of story. This story, on the other hand… That idea came to me kind of late, but then once I had it, I realized that I should have thought of it from the beginning. That’s quite possible. Not that I’m consciously aware of. From here, things in the Loud house can only get crazier. Especially if they have visitors...
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    HP/LM mpreg

    Dang. this thread has more spam than a Hawaiian 7-Eleven.
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    The next chapter of “My Wish” is up. Chapter 5: Terri-fied
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    George Glass' Review Responses -- Original Fiction

    Re: “Father’s Love” From Fakeacc on June 01, 2021 At least you can console yourself with the thought that you’re probably less sick than I am.
  9. Re: "There's a New Seraph in Town" Creating a review reply thread before the story has gotten any reviews: blind optimism or shameful arrogance? Yes. In any case, if any of you lovely folks reviews "There's a New Seraph in Town," I will joyfully reply here.
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    Review responses for "Just One Rule" [The Loud House]

    Glad you liked it! I’ll just tell you right now: There will not be any birth scenes in the third story. Not my cup of tea. Sisters getting pregnant, on the other hand...
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    The 10th and final chapter of “Just One Rule” is posted! I’ve also posted some author notes in the review response thread.
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    Review responses for "Just One Rule" [The Loud House]

    Author notes [SPOILERS] As in “Enter the Sandboy,” most of the chapter titles are meant to provide a small hint as to which character(s) Lincoln will have sex with in that chapter. Lincoln and his friends returning to the 5th grade when the new school year starts is a joke about -- and an exploitation of -- the inconsistent passage of time on the show. The Louds had at least two Halloweens, two Christmases, and three April Fools’ Days without any of the kids having a birthday or moving on to the next grade. Of course, now they’ve actually aged everyone up a year, probably just to screw with me because they know I don’t have cable anymore and can't watch the new episodes. Lola and Lucy each get a full sex scene with Lincoln in this story because they were the only sisters who didn’t have full intercourse with him in “Enter the Sandboy.” Lynn's line "If you don't squeeze that butt, nobody else will!" was said by a substitute instructor in my morning exercise class. She immediately followed with, "Oooh, that was inappropriate." The scissors trick that Stella uses to unlock the door of the empty classroom in chapter 4 was one that worked on the faculty elevator at my elementary school. Elizabeth’s Mystery -- a Loud-world analogue of Victoria’s Secret -- was mentioned before in my story “The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant.” Reusing it in this story was kind of a cheat, because the two stories are not canon with each other. The hardest chapters to write were chapters 7, 8, and 10. Chapters 7 and 10 were difficult because orgy scenes are always complicated; you have to keep track of what everyone’s doing and what state of dress (or undress) they’re in, making sure not to completely neglect any character. Chapter 8 was difficult because it had to follow the orgy scene in chapter 7, and because I had to find a way to make it different from all the previous one-on-one sex scenes with Lincoln and a same-age girl. For chapter 8 (“Crushing It”), my original idea was for Lincoln to get busy with Paige, the girl he crushes on in the episode “L is for Love.” But then I decided that it would be more fun if Lincoln did it with Cristina, a girl who was repulsed by him after seeing him flirt with a picture of her on video in “Making the Case.” Cristina’s slip of the tongue when she says “Can I talk to you for a sex- I mean, a sec?” is the result of a typo I made while writing that line (the x and the c being next to each other on the keyboard). I thought it was funny and decided to just go with it. Cristina’s older sister Casey is not canon. I made her up for the sake of this story. “Fritz Sabatino,” the disgraced founder of Royal Woods Community College, is an allusion to Chris Savino, who created The Loud House but is no longer associated with it because of multiple accusations of sexual harassment. Lily's outfit in chapter 10 was inspired by a piece of fanart I saw that shows Lily in fishnet stockings. There will be one more story in this series, making it a trilogy. The third story has no title as yet, but I have begun outlining it.
  13. Here, I’ll respond to reviews of short or obscure fanfics that may not warrant having their own response thread.
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    George Glass' fanfic review response thread

    Re: “Record” From DoctorYnot on May 28, 2021 Well, you DID inspire it... Thank you! IMO, Lynn's defining personality traits are her nonstop intensity and her competitiveness -- even with herself. She has to push everything to the limit. I felt that those characteristics made her ideal for a story like this. Accurate voice is very important to me -- especially when it comes to the Loud sisters, because it's important to make them sound different from one another. Part of how this story went from being an idea in my head to being word-flesh is that I could really hear Lynn's voice in my head, taunting Lincoln in that way. Yeah, "You know you want to" is pretty beaten to death, whereas "need to" sort of takes away even more of Lincoln's sense of control. I like that metaphor. Just as every comedian needs a straight man, every horror story needs a victim. This is where I had to "craft a new side to her," as you said earlier, because one wouldn't necessarily expect Lynn to be a keen observer of things. But I needed her to be aware of Lincoln's adolescent weaknesses in order to make her as scary as she needs to be in this story. I did a bit of outlining there to make sure that each blowjob was more intense than the previous one. Yeah, but Lynn was trying to turn him on, not off. Part of what makes Lynn an effective antagonist in this story is that everything she accuses Lincoln of is actually true. She knows him as well as he knows himself, but she's willing to speak of the things that Lincoln doesn't want to admit to. Just had to throw a bit of Lucy-color in there. Even if black isn't actually a color. When it comes to sex scenes, I often find that the dialogue is the most fun part to write. It certainly was for this story. Thanks! As you point out, Lincoln's fantasies were important to making each one different from the others. That, plus the gradual increase in intensity and Lynn showing Lincoln more of her body to get him turned on. Lynn forcing her way into Lincoln's fantasies seemed like an idea you would come up with, so I went for it. Thank you! And thanks so much for the detailed review.
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    I finally have news about something other than “My Wish”: I’ve been making a lot of progress on chapter 10 of “Just One Rule.” I expect to have it off to beta in the next few days.
  16. I don’t really get dystopian scifi. Isn’t the real world bad enough? Or is the idea to make the real world look better by comparison?

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    2. InvidiaRed

      InvidiaRed

      Some people find it cathartic to know worlds can be worse or else have characters strive to at least make it brighter if only by candlelight.

      You could also successfully argue any utopia by definition is also dystopian by its very nature. Collectivism is currently in vogue. While the individual is to be abhorred,  Its all so very strange.

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      I don’t really get dystopian scifi. Isn’t the real world bad enough? Or is the idea to make the real world look better by comparison?

      It can be useful for critically examining a particular aspect of today’s society too, by making it the predominant theme of the dystopia.  For instance, my original fiction stories put evangelical Christianity on steroids, made the society a tad more conservative, and examine the possible results.  (ie, do we want to live in a society that puts the Christian Cross onto the USA’s flag?)

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      That’s a really good point, @Desiderius Price.

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    The next chapter of “My Wish Is Your Command” is up. Here, we jump forward in time a little. Chapter 4: What Are Sisters For? Whatever Bart Wants
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    I made good progress on the final chapter of "Just One Rule" last night, but there's still more to do before it will be ready for beta. On the other hand, I expect to post the next chapter of "My Wish Is Your Command" on Sunday.
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    The next chapter of “My Wish Is Your Command” is up! Chapter 3: Aunt Misbehavin’
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    Yeah, I may have just overestimated the popularity of The Simpsons as a porn-fandom. (This story probably would have been more popular a decade or two ago.) And yes, Nani is hotter than any Simpsons character, at least in their canonical forms.
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    So far, “My Wish Is Your Command” has proven to be something of a dud. The only “reviews” it has received so far involved one reviewer telling me what they wish I’d done and the other telling me what to do next. I don’t exactly get this, because this story is much in the same vein as “Biological Imperative,” which was quite popular. More evidence that I still have zero idea what readers want. Anyhoo, I’m not sure what will be ready for posting next, but it might well be chapter 3 of “My Wish.” I’m making progress on a lot of other things, but nothing else is terribly close to being ready for prime time yet.
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    George Glass' Review Responses -- Original Fiction

    Re: “Wishful” From Fanfictionfan360 on May 10, 2021 Thanks! She’s got good taste.
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    George Glass' Review Responses -- Original Fiction

    Re: “Just Doin’ What We Do (A Halloween Story)” From Maxsteele1986 on May 08, 2021 No – Emily, Joe Bob, and Emily’s sister and brother-in-law were normal humans. That’s why they didn’t transform when the others did. It’s also why Joe Bob says, “Our families have helped keep the peace between humans and weres for more than two hundred years.”
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    As promised, the next chapter of “My Wish Is Your Command” is posted. Chapter 2: School, but Cool
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    I think I'm going to be posting new chapters of "My Wish Is Your Command" at a faster rate than I expected. The story is easy to write because it has no real plot arc; it's more like a series of slice-of-life stories presented in chronological order. Barring some major distraction, I’ll be posting chapter 2 tomorrow.