GeorgeGlass

Don't have a lot to report this week. I've made a little progress on a lot of stories, but not a great deal of progress on any one of them. Here are the things that I'm hoping will emerge from the pipeline in the next two weeks or so: Chapter 2 of For the Price of One Chapter 5 of Wishful Chapter 5 of Delta Delta Delta A rapey original oneshot story titled "Tribal Warfare"

“Imaginary Tokyo” From JayDee on January 26, 2020 First off, thank you so much for giving this story its first review! Honestly, I haven't watch all that much anime myself (at least compared to some folks around here), but I've definitely noticed recurring themes in what I have seen, hence this story. I included Yumi because it seems like every anime harem includes one underage member (or one who looks underage). Plus, I got to do that bit about the Swedish Bikini Team. Unlike most of my stories, this one wasn't centered around the sex scene. So I didn't get too detailed with it. Had to fit giant robots in somehow. A consistent theme of harem anime seems to be that the MC never actually gets any. Figured that was worth exploiting. Given how many women there are in anime whose breasts actually are freakish ball-like shapes, it just seemed fitting. Thanks!

Chapter 1 of “For the Price of One” is posted! Newly single Ramon starts dating a hot woman named Serena and discovers that she has a strange fetish that involves her cute young daughter. Thanks for reading that and commenting on it. I know She-Ra isn’t everyone’s thing. Thanks for the info, and thanks even more for the comment!

That’s a really good point, and a good way to address the apparent draconianness (draconity? draco- ah, I can’t even make a good guess) of the new laws. In any case, I’m looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it’s ready.

Thanks, LF! I appreciate your taking the time to leave a review AND comment here in the forums. (Not to mention calling me your favorite writer on AFF, which is high praise considering how many other good writers are here.) My original concept in writing this story was that Enid would force Evan and Penny to have sex to get it out of their systems. Then I decided that it would be more fun if she just forced them to strip naked and kiss, and things got out of hand from there. That seems to have been the right decision.

What Happens on Mystacor is posted! On the last night of their visit to the island of Mystacor, Glimmer and Bow find a new way to help Adora deal with her stress. SWP1, I’m hoping to get chapter 1 of “For the Price of One” posted by Saturday. And don’t you worry: The MC will be having fun with both his new girlfriend AND her daughter. As for Star Trek: Picard, I’m sure it will be good – Picard was always my favorite Star Trek captain – but I don’t have CBS All Access (or whatever it’s called). Maybe I’ll catch it later when it shows up in some other medium.

Re: “Kiss and Make Up” From Lady Freelove on January 23, 2020 If only every feud could be settled that way. Thank you!

The 11th and final chapter of “Country Summer” is now posted! Geraldine and her cousins spend their last night together sleeping under the stars—and making a few naughty memories for Geraldine to take home with her. I can scarcely believe that this story, which I started writing in 2015, is finished at last. Speaking of things that have been a long time in coming: Some time this week, I hope to post a oneshot She-Ra and the Princesses of Power fanfic titled "What Happens on Mystacor." I started writing this story not long after watching season 1 of the show, but it took me a good long time to figure out exactly what should happen in it, and then to write it. The third item on my ambitious agenda for this week is to post the first chapter of "For the Price of One." Let’s see if I can manage all that.

Thanks, SWP1. Hope you have a good week ahead.

Then you’re going to like the sequel to “Enter the Sandboy.”

Wow, these are some – some – solid suggestions. Thanks!

Okay, it's time to admit that I need help once again. It's been about three months since I started work on a sequel to my Loud House story "Enter the Sandboy," and I still don't have a clue about what the title should be. Not that it should be a big deal, because it will be months before any of it is ready to post; I just feel dumb having nothing to call it other than "Untitled Sandboy Sequel." The gist of the story is this: Lincoln has been getting it on like crazy with his sisters and mom all summer long (ie, ever since the events of "Enter the Sandboy"). However, he is expressly forbidden to have sex outside the family. But now the school year is starting, and Lincoln finds himself drawn to quite a few of his female classmates and even a couple of his teachers. To make matters worse, Lincoln's fit physique (thanks to his physically demanding summer camp, plus all that sex) and newfound confidence are making him a girl magnet. So, inevitably, the perpetually horny Lincoln starts boning girls and teachers at school (while also continuing to get plenty of action at home). I'd appreciate any title suggestions folks might have.

I’m insanely late in doing this, but I’d like to recommend “Moonlit Snow,” the story that @InBrightestDay wrote for the AFF Holiday Party. Lovely world-building (especially for a short story), action that’s not only great but historically accurate, and a really touching ending.

Re: “Kiss and Make Up” From beanburrito on January 15, 2020 Loved it! Great concept and length. Thank you!

Re: “Flesh” From Metamorphic on January 14, 2020 What can I say? I have very broad tastes. Thanks for the comment!

Just dropping in to say that chapter 6 of “Flesh” is posted. The title: “Birth Control: The Game.”

Re: “Kiss and Make Up” From Fairy-Slayer on January 11, 2020 Well, in the real world, that would be the most plausible explanation. Again, yes, in the real world... But of course. My original concept was that the mom actually would make them have sex to get it out of their systems. But that seemed like stretching plausibility 'til it snapped. That's when I had the idea for her to make them kiss, and then things get out of hand from there. Yes indeed. Thanks for another uplifting review.

Well, "Kiss and Make Up" seems to be popular so far. In the day-and-a-half since I posted it,iIt's garnered 600+ dragon prints here on AFF, plus a review from @JayDee! And over at Hentai Foundry, the story has earned 21 favorites so far. (Some of my other stories have been posted on HF for years and haven't yet gotten nearly that many favorites.) Okay, less boasting, more posting. Probably the next things I'll post will be chapter 6 of "Flesh," and the 11th and final chapter of "Country Summer." Shortly thereafter, I'll post chapter 1 of “For the Price of One.” Of course, all of this is subject to my usual whim-driven writing process.

Re: “Kiss and Make Up” From JayDee on January 10, 2020 Yup. My initial title for this story was "Tension." But then I liked Sinfulwolf's suggestion of "Kiss and Make Up" better. I was deliberately vague about the siblings' ages because (1) I wanted to portray their relationship as more or less equal and (2) I wanted to post this story on Hentai Foundry, where under-18 stuff isn't allowed. Thanks! Honestly, I'm not sure which way Enid would go, but I think she'd probably at least get Penny on the pill. Thank you very much.

“Kiss and Make Up” is posted! When her teenage son and daughter won’t stop fighting, a mother forces them to confront the true cause of the tension between them. But she might wish she hadn’t. SWP1, sorry, I’m not at all familiar with El Tigre. @FairySlayer, I’ll be very interested to find out what you’re working on.

Hey, all. I’m still not 100% recovered, but at least I felt well enough today to go back to work, where I make the world a better place by moving commas around. Being sick threw off my game in terms of writing, but now I’m back in the swing of things. Made lots of progress tonight on several stories, including one I don’t think I’ve mentioned yet. I keep a list of story ideas – some highly detailed, some not even a sentence long. One of these short items, which has been on the list for a very long time, is “Some kind of cartoon crossover.” Inspiring, I know. Anyway, for unrelated reasons, I recently made a list of all of my incest-themed stories and realized that while I’ve done tons of father/daughter, mother/son, and brother/sister stuff, I’ve neglected the mother/daughter category pretty badly. Then, still being in a list-making mood, I listed some cartoon mother/daughter pairings that I might like to write about. But I wasn’t sure whether I wanted to devote an entire story to any one pairing, and that’s when it occurred to me that I should put them all together in the same story – specifically, by having them compete in a mother/daughter sex contest with a large cash prize and lots of meta references. (“Don’t worry, nobody here knows us, and none of this is canon.”) So I’ve started work on the story, which involves these pairs: Rita and Lola Loud from The Loud House Helen and Violet Parr from The Incredibles Marge and Lisa Simpson from The Simpsons Vivian and Isabella Garcia-Shapiro from Phineas and Ferb Agent K and Riley Daring from The Replacements Lois and Meg Griffin from Family Guy May the best pair win. P.S. I swear by the power of rule 34 that I had this idea before I started reading @FairySlayer’s Spazzgirl Letters.

Hmm, I must think on this… BTW, I was home with a cold today, so on your recommendation, I’ve started watching Ruby Gloom. It’s very cute; I especially like Doom Kitty. And not just because she resembles the cat who is napping on my legs as I type this, although that’s a contributing factor.

Hey there. Had a lovely New Year’s; hope you did, too. As to your questions: It’s very nearly finished. I’m hoping to post it next week. It’s coming along, but only slowly; I ended up spending some time on the chapter after that one this week. I should be ready to start posting that one (titled “For the Price of One”) as soon as I finish one of my stories that is currently in progress. Three of those are now one chapter away from being finished, so that should be soonish.

Yeah, that’s about right.