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Re: “Tribal Warfare” From JayDee on February 17, 2020 I had to Google that reference to understand it. It's like they won some kind of reverse Darwin Award, where instead of taking themselves out of the gene pool, they got themselves forcibly thrown into it. I was trying to create some contrast between civilized and barbaric, and how easily the two can be confused. Thanks for the review!

“Tribal Warfare” is posted. Summary: When the Tall Grass tribe finds an enemy’s daughters spying on them, their chieftain orders her male warriors to punish the girls…all night long.

Chapter 7 of Flesh is posted. Grant finds a kindred spirit.

Re: “Kiss and Make Up” From thatguywiththeface on February 10, 2020 Aw, man, now I wish I’d started the story that way. Seriously, though, I don’t think I’ve ever used the “Start in the middle and then rewind to the beginning” device in a story. Maybe I should try it one of these days.

“For the Price of One” had no official reviews, and suddenly it has two! From thatguywiththeface on February 10, 2020 Thank you! Hope you’ll like the succeeding chapters just as much. From FlutteringWings on February 11, 2020 I’m so glad! “Edge of my seat” is high praise indeed. Maya’s going to be learning plenty , that’s for sure. Thanks for the review!

Chapter 2 of For the Price of One is posted! It appears, though, that my plan to post that and three other items by the end of this week was too ambitious. It's likely that I'll have chapter 7 of Flesh posted in that time frame, but I'm much less sure about the other stuff. I have got to quit underestimating the capriciousness of my muse, who decided earlier this evening that she only feels like working on fanfics today.

SWP1, I’m so sorry about your dog. I have cats myself, and I know I’m going to be heartbroken when I lose one. I’m afraid I’ve been so busy this weekend that I haven’t had a chance to finish and post chapter 2 of For the Price of One, but I’m hoping to get to it tomorrow night. I do like Big Hero 6: The Series; I watched all of the first 2 seasons. And I’ve had an idea for a fanfic incubating in the back of my mind for some time. It’s just waiting to hatch. Anyway, I hope your time away goes okay, and again, I’m sorry about the loss of your dog.

Hey there, SWP1, thanks for the comments. I will tell you that the sex scenes between Ramon and Serena will become more detailed as the story progresses. Also, I’m hoping to post chapter 2 tonight or tomorrow.

Don't have a lot to report this week. I've made a little progress on a lot of stories, but not a great deal of progress on any one of them. Here are the things that I'm hoping will emerge from the pipeline in the next two weeks or so: Chapter 2 of For the Price of One Chapter 5 of Wishful Chapter 5 of Delta Delta Delta A rapey original oneshot story titled "Tribal Warfare"

“Imaginary Tokyo” From JayDee on January 26, 2020 First off, thank you so much for giving this story its first review! Honestly, I haven't watch all that much anime myself (at least compared to some folks around here), but I've definitely noticed recurring themes in what I have seen, hence this story. I included Yumi because it seems like every anime harem includes one underage member (or one who looks underage). Plus, I got to do that bit about the Swedish Bikini Team. Unlike most of my stories, this one wasn't centered around the sex scene. So I didn't get too detailed with it. Had to fit giant robots in somehow. A consistent theme of harem anime seems to be that the MC never actually gets any. Figured that was worth exploiting. Given how many women there are in anime whose breasts actually are freakish ball-like shapes, it just seemed fitting. Thanks!

Chapter 1 of “For the Price of One” is posted! Newly single Ramon starts dating a hot woman named Serena and discovers that she has a strange fetish that involves her cute young daughter. Thanks for reading that and commenting on it. I know She-Ra isn’t everyone’s thing. Thanks for the info, and thanks even more for the comment!

That’s a really good point, and a good way to address the apparent draconianness (draconity? draco- ah, I can’t even make a good guess) of the new laws. In any case, I’m looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it’s ready.

Thanks, LF! I appreciate your taking the time to leave a review AND comment here in the forums. (Not to mention calling me your favorite writer on AFF, which is high praise considering how many other good writers are here.) My original concept in writing this story was that Enid would force Evan and Penny to have sex to get it out of their systems. Then I decided that it would be more fun if she just forced them to strip naked and kiss, and things got out of hand from there. That seems to have been the right decision.

What Happens on Mystacor is posted! On the last night of their visit to the island of Mystacor, Glimmer and Bow find a new way to help Adora deal with her stress. SWP1, I’m hoping to get chapter 1 of “For the Price of One” posted by Saturday. And don’t you worry: The MC will be having fun with both his new girlfriend AND her daughter. As for Star Trek: Picard, I’m sure it will be good – Picard was always my favorite Star Trek captain – but I don’t have CBS All Access (or whatever it’s called). Maybe I’ll catch it later when it shows up in some other medium.

Re: “Kiss and Make Up” From Lady Freelove on January 23, 2020 If only every feud could be settled that way. Thank you!

The 11th and final chapter of “Country Summer” is now posted! Geraldine and her cousins spend their last night together sleeping under the stars—and making a few naughty memories for Geraldine to take home with her. I can scarcely believe that this story, which I started writing in 2015, is finished at last. Speaking of things that have been a long time in coming: Some time this week, I hope to post a oneshot She-Ra and the Princesses of Power fanfic titled "What Happens on Mystacor." I started writing this story not long after watching season 1 of the show, but it took me a good long time to figure out exactly what should happen in it, and then to write it. The third item on my ambitious agenda for this week is to post the first chapter of "For the Price of One." Let’s see if I can manage all that.

Thanks, SWP1. Hope you have a good week ahead.

Then you’re going to like the sequel to “Enter the Sandboy.”

Wow, these are some – some – solid suggestions. Thanks!

Okay, it's time to admit that I need help once again. It's been about three months since I started work on a sequel to my Loud House story "Enter the Sandboy," and I still don't have a clue about what the title should be. Not that it should be a big deal, because it will be months before any of it is ready to post; I just feel dumb having nothing to call it other than "Untitled Sandboy Sequel." The gist of the story is this: Lincoln has been getting it on like crazy with his sisters and mom all summer long (ie, ever since the events of "Enter the Sandboy"). However, he is expressly forbidden to have sex outside the family. But now the school year is starting, and Lincoln finds himself drawn to quite a few of his female classmates and even a couple of his teachers. To make matters worse, Lincoln's fit physique (thanks to his physically demanding summer camp, plus all that sex) and newfound confidence are making him a girl magnet. So, inevitably, the perpetually horny Lincoln starts boning girls and teachers at school (while also continuing to get plenty of action at home). I'd appreciate any title suggestions folks might have.

I’m insanely late in doing this, but I’d like to recommend “Moonlit Snow,” the story that @InBrightestDay wrote for the AFF Holiday Party. Lovely world-building (especially for a short story), action that’s not only great but historically accurate, and a really touching ending.

Re: “Kiss and Make Up” From beanburrito on January 15, 2020 Loved it! Great concept and length. Thank you!

Re: “Flesh” From Metamorphic on January 14, 2020 What can I say? I have very broad tastes. Thanks for the comment!