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From JayDee on October 31, 2019 Day of the Deadly by George Glass You could have even waited until November 1st. I've been doing lessons on Duolingo. I tried not to overdo it with the Spanish, though; a little adds flavor, but too much seems pretentious. That's really what I was going for. I did a little research. Now that Dia de Muertos is a national holiday in Mexico, everybody there celebrates it to some extent, but it seems to be the southerners who originated it. Thanks! I've seen ofrendas that included cans or bottles of the departed's favorite beverage, and when I first began to conceive of this story, Graciela chugging one was the first image that came into my head. I figured Fish couldn't just be a total mustache-twirler; he had to have a little humanity to him. Enrique is used to doing things that way. Actual Mexican Marines who do anti-drug ops wear masks so the cartel types won't know who they are and have their families killed. Thank you! Cunnilingus isn't my strongest subject, so it's gratifying to hear that. I do believe we did. *takes the others’ hands and bows*

I learned a bit about yōkai from watching Rosario + Vampire. There was even a spider woman in one episode. I guess anime can be culturally enriching. IMO, looking at the obvious thing to do and then doing the opposite is often the key to great storytelling.

And look who just darkened the Halloween Party with one of his signature “reviews”: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600109450

From DebbieCync on October 27, 2019 Thanks! But there will be another ten chapters at some point, as I’ve started work on a sequel.

Re: “Everything She Needs” From Lady Freelove on October 26, 2019 Thank you! I think a lot of it is (a) practice and (b) experimenting with new ideas. When I thought about writing “Wild Side,” I tried to think of what would make it more than just another father-daughter story, and then I thought about their having two levels of communication – the things they say, and the meaning beneath them. It was an experiment, but I think it worked. Thanks for the review. And keep on writing!

Re: “Wild Side” From Lady Freelove on October 26, 2019 Thanks! I really enjoy writing these two characters.

Re: “Day of the Deadly” From InBrightestDay on October 25, 2019 LOL! That may be the funniest first line of a review I’ve ever read. Turns out the underworld is a real sausage party. That was a spur-of-the-moment dialogue choice. I know that an expert can reload a bolt-action rifle in less than 3 seconds, but I wasn’t sure whether Enrique, who has presumably been practicing with semiautomatics, would actually be able to do it that fast. So I decided not to try to put a time frame on it. The whole “man in a woman’s body” thing was something I’d never written before, so a lot of amusing thoughts like that came up. It was still pretty awkward to write sometimes, because I was like, “Marta grabbed him...grabbed her...grabbed them?” I didn’t either. Ultimately, I just chose sex over gender. This being a Halloween/Day of the Dead story, I felt like I had to include at least one horror element. Thanks for reviewing it!

Thank you! You are most welcome, and thank you. Lana is one of my favorite Loud sisters, so naturally I wanted to begin and end with her. And the rain just seemed necessary for a happy ending. Most of my stories draw at least a little bit from my own experiences. I suppose that’s true for a lot of writers – maybe even all of them. Indeed it is. Not sure when it will be ready to start posting; I have a lot of other stories in the works, too, including a couple of other Loud House fics. Hope you’re enjoying them. And thanks for the comments!

He’s got a work ethic, I’ll give him that.

I’ve just posted my story for the AFF Halloween Party, titled “Day of the Deadly.” When the narcos killed Graciela’s brother Enrique, all hope of getting their village out from under the cartel’s thumb died with him. But on the night when the veil between this world and the next grows thin, there may be one more chance.

Posted. Whew!

Oops, I meant supernatural action-romance. But now I’m thinking about comedy for next year...

From Someone on October 21, 2019 Thanks! I'm actually planning a full-length sequel, which will be set a couple of months later at the start of the school year. Chapter 1 will show what life in the Loud House has become since the events of "Enter the Sandboy." Thank you, and thanks for the comments!

From ConanEdogawa on October 21, 2019 Yup. I've already started outlining it.

From Fairy-Slayer on October 20, 2019 You are utterly devoid of shame. The rain seemed necessary for a fully happy ending. Gotta give 'em credit for knowing what they want. Yes, the Louds now have a way to show their love besides duck, dodge, push, and shove. I think it's going to be pretty educational for all the Loud kids. But of course. Thanks for all the nice reviews!

Hey, mine is going to be a supernatural action-comedy, so I say genre schmenre.

The 10th and final chapter of “Enter the Sandboy” is posted! I also put some author notes (warning: spoilers) in the review response thread.

Author notes (Warning: SPOILERS) Lynn Senior’s murmured comment to the central air conditioner—“You hear me, baby? Hold together”—is what Han Solo says to the Millennium Falcon in The Empire Strikes Back. The zebra in Lola’s nightmare is a nod to Phineas and Ferb, in which Candace sometimes sees a talking zebra in her dreams. Lynn’s nightmare about an evil baseball team wearing clown makeup was inspired by the 1970s street gang film The Warriors, in which one of the gangs wears baseball uniforms and face paint and carries bats. The bit about a badly ventilated pipe making a banging noise when the water is running is a real thing, which I experienced at my parents’ old house. (Warning: TMI) Lincoln’s sleep-sex is inspired by a few events from my own life. I once woke up to find myself making out with my wife, who’d had no idea that I was asleep when I initiated it. According to her, I’ve done a few other things like that, which I was not aware of at the time. Four square and pickleball are both real games. According to the internet, perennial ryegrass is a recommended lawn grass for the northern U.S. It is said to be hardy and able to endure a lot of foot traffic, which makes it ideal for the Loud family’s yard. During a typical night of sleep, we go through multiple REM cycles, and each one includes a larger proportion of REM sleep than the previous one. As a result, you spend more time dreaming later in the night than you do soon after you fall asleep. This is why only some of the girls were affected by the sound of the hose pipe each night, whereas many of them were affected by the sex sounds made by Lincoln and his bed companions, which always happened later in the night (at least until the hose pipe mystery was solved).

From GeoSoul on October 19, 2019 Oh yes indeed!

Just a little update about what's on tap. Chapter 10 of "Enter the Sandboy" will probably be ready for beta this weekend. I've also spent quality time this week on chapter 4 of "Wishful," chapter 3 of "Flesh," and the one-shot "Day of the Deadly," which I'm writing for this year's Halloween story jam. I'd really like to post that one at least a week before Halloween, which means I'd better get a move on.

From The World's Concubine on October 15, 2019 Thanks! It did work out rather well for all of them, didn’t it? Well, that’s the interesting thing about dom-sub relationships: It’s never entirely clear who is really in control. Which is a theme I enjoy playing with. Thanks for the comments!

From Pixel-King on October 13, 2019 Thanks. I had a little internal debate about whether to include that element. But since this is the second to last chapter, I figured it was time to turn the amp up to 11. I totally hear you; I debated about that, too. The main reason I did it was that it just didn't make sense to include everyone in the family but him, especially with 11 females in need of dick. Lynn Sr hasn't taken any of the girls' virginities. Because he's been at work until midnight almost every night since this began, he hasn't become involved in the action until now. Lori is the first of his daughters that he's had sex with. Ah, yes, I've seen those. Naturally. Mmm, I'll bet some proper smacks would make that big butt of hers jiggle nicely. Yeah, but that's not really my thing. I write m/m stuff occasionally, but mostly with furry characters. Thanks for the review!

Thank you! The use of the “first person plural” perspective was a big experiment for me, and I’m glad you liked it. Figuring out how everybody would pair (or triple) up was part of the challenge. And when it comes to writing, I love a challenge. Rotating from one portion to the action is something I had done before in stories, but never quite in as literal a sense as this. I love narration. I don’t get to do it a lot in fanfics, but because The Loud House has Lincoln regularly talking to the audience, I thought it would work here. And I loved using Lucy’s voice to do it. Thanks again! Well, that depends on what you’re interested in. If you want to read more cartoon fanfics, the other fandoms I’ve written in are Phineas and Ferb (a lot), ThunderCats, Gravity Falls, Star Vs the Forces of Evil, Inside Out, Frozen, Mighty Magiswords, and Miraculous. I’ve also written lots of original stories. If you’re looking for more in the way of incest fun, I could recommend several of these: May's Family The Holiday Trilogy (Some Girl, Fireworks, Comfort and Joy) Excuses Activation Day Learning a Daughter's Duty The Small Hours Keene's Really Good Week Satisfaction A Day at the Beach Other stories with fun underage sex: A Beach Like No Other Just Doin' What We Do (A Halloween Story) And if you want something with humor: A Little Goes a Long Way Company Policy

From Fairy-Slayer on October 03, 2019 Yup. Which makes their kids superfreaks. Not that much, actually. Except for one thing that some readers have been waiting for. Yes. Yes, you are. I hope it will. Thanks for the review!