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I've finally decided which new chaptered story to start posting. It's one I haven't mentioned before, because I wasn't sure for a long time when it might be close to ready. A lot of decisions had to be made about what happens when, how many chapters, etc. In any case, the story is called Flesh, and it is super-dark. It's about an eleven-year-old psychopath who develops a form of telekinesis that enables him to control living tissue. He uses this ability to turn his mother and older sisters into his busty full-time sex slaves. In other news, chapter 4 of Delta Delta Delta is about 90% done. I hope to have it posted by the weekend.

From Fairy-Slayer on September 07, 2019 It's certainly a departure from everything that came before. Remember that in chapter 1, Lana came to Lincoln's room because Lisa was already in their parents' room, having also had a nightmare. Or else the events of night 1 made her as horny as they did some of her sisters. Well, who wouldn't be pleased? If it hadn't been for those meddling kids... Indeed. Thanks for your comments! Dem wascally wabbits!

From YamiNoKami on September 07, 2019 Hint: Good guess about Lynn, but I wouldn't go making too many assumptions about the numbers. Well, he very nearly was too ashamed, but he was also desperate for answers. As she said, Lincoln's nocturnal shenanigans have affected everyone in the house, herself included. You ask many questions that all have the same answer: No spoilers. *evil cackle*

Perhaps because I needed more distraction from RL than usual this week (money troubles, bad cold, wife very upset about a sick friend), chapter 5 of “Enter the Sandboy” is now posted. Yay, escapism!

From ConanEdogawa on September 04, 2019 Well, even if I could do that, I’d be making a whole lot of guys jealous.

Wow, that’s huge. Congrats!

Re: “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl” From JayDee on September 02, 2019 Good catch! I added the tag. I really tried to connect this chapter to the previous ones to give it that “culmination of everything” feel. I liked the idea of Mia finding herself turned on by something unexpected, given how well she normally understands herself in that sense. Thank you! I didn’t want to end in a “and then it just kept going on like that” kind of way; given that the penultimate chapter was about her worst day, which was pretty terrible, I wanted her best day to be correspondingly great.

And now, some straight-up bragging. Someone at Hentai Foundry left this comment about the final chapter of Mia: “This is the most touching, satisfying, heart-feel-good ending to a 'Chick with dick bangs her way through life' story I've ever read. I'm so happy.”

I actually wrote a Steven Universe fic (“Splinter”) in which something similar happens. A microscopic, silicon-based life form called the Splinter infects the characters and, among other things, enables them to experience what other infected people are experiencing. So when two or more infected people have sex, they can feel their own pleasure and one another’s. As for Lincoln’s older sisters sharing him with their friends: I’m not planning that for this story, but I am giving serious thought to doing a sequel in which Lincoln’s circle of sex partners expands beyond the family.

And I LOLed at the seeming randomness of “But for Me It Was Tuesday.” But some of these are definitely worth considering. Thanks, IVR!

I’m not sure, but in the episode “Really Loud Music,” Lisa mentions that she’s “been known to dabble in the soft sciences.” Interesting parallel. It would. Thanks for the comments!

Just a quick update: The sixth and final chapter of Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl is now posted. I’m very pleased with the ending, and JayDee, who has kindly betaed the whole story for me, seems to like it, too.

Once again, I am asking for a little of your collective title-formulating genius, because there’s a story I’ve been working on for over a year that still has no title. It’s a diary-format story told from the POV of a man who starts dating a woman who has a young daughter. He finds out that the woman has a secret fetish: She gets very turned on during sex if she knows that her daughter can hear her from the next room. The man, who likes little girls every bit as much as grown women, takes advantage of this situation and gradually increases the daughter’s exposure to his sexual activities with the mom, until the daughter is actually in the room watching them. Then, of course, he starts having her participate… I’ve had several ideas for a title, but I’m not wild about any of them: “Bad Mom,” “One Bad Mother,” “Exploits,” and “Serena and Maya” (that’s the mom and daughter’s names). I’m hoping y’all might have some better suggestions.

From Fairy-Slayer on August 31, 2019 Lori’s list is all the Loud girls who have hit puberty. But yes, it does seem a bit odd that every single one of them has a birth control implant, doesn’t it? You had to scrape that cloud pretty hard to find the silver lining. I enjoyed writing that bit. Can’t have a Loud House story without some laughs! Now I can't help but wonder if the cruelly-physical day camp thing has some role in Lincoln's sudden popularity, though my instincts tell me that something is affecting his sisters as well, and since only some of them are involved in the torture camp that's likely not it. (If it turns out to be the grass then you can be damned sure I'll be re-seeding my lawn!) Don’t forget so use some Weed and Feed and Seed and Breed. Could be. Thanks! I liked writing that part, too. The changes will keep coming. No, they love it, but you should hear some of the comments Perry the Platypus has made. You’re very welcome. Thanks for another lovely review.

Re: “Mommy’s Home” From Lady Freelove on August 30, 2019 Thanks! One of my fetishes is family members expressing their love for each other sexually, whatever their familial relationship may be. Be warned that “Auntie’s Home” has a somewhat different tenor, because there’s a whole dom/sub angle. BTW, I know you read “Some Girl” and “Fireworks”; there’s a third story in that trilogy, titled “Comfort and Joy,” if you’re interested. You might also like “May’s Family,” which has a retrospective angle, like parts of “Regina.”

It’s been a productive week. Chapter 4 of Enter the Sandboy is now up, and chapter 6 of Mia is in beta. In accordance with my self-imposed “finish two, start one” story, once chapter of Mia is up, I’ll post the first chapter of a new story fairly soon thereafter. Details to come.

Re: “Little Rose” From Lady Freelove on August 30, 2019 Thank you. Sometimes I really like writing slow-burn stories like this. I think the gradual rise in how far things go adds realism while whetting the reader’s appetite for more. Of course, not every reader has the patience for that. (Sometimes I don’t either, which is how I end up writing straight-into-the-action stories like “The Small Hours” and “May’s Family.”) Thank you. Obviously, it’s one of my favorites, too. Thanks! Adding Opal and Evie just seemed like the best route to a happy ending for Rose and Randy.

Re: “The Happiest Place” From Lady Freelove on August 30, 2019 Thank you! And those animatronic children would look a lot better naked than in those cheesy faux-Dutch costumes.

No worries. I’m always happy to wait for some cheerleading. Seriously, though, don’t sell yourself short. Your comments on chapter 5 were valuable.

SWP1, it’s funny you should ask about chapter 5 of The More, the Merrier, because I just posted it. I’ve also just sent chapter 4 of Enter the Sandboy off to beta. JayDee: What are you, psychic? In any case, you’ll find out for sure very soon; I should be sending you chapter 6 today or tomorrow. Back to SWP1: In fact, I haven’t seen either of those trailers yet. I’ve spent most of my off time lately writing smut. But I’m glad to see James Cameron back at the helm of a Terminator movie. Not that I think he’s infallible, but he’s got the best chance of producing a good Terminator movie after the string of bad ones that followed the original two (or three; the third one had its charms).

Much progress to report. I expect to have both chapter 4 of Enter the Sandboy and chapter 6 of Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl ready for beta this weekend. Also making steady headway on chapter 4 of Delta Delta Delta. In other news, I've just read the first two chapters of Regina by Lady Freelove. It's a fun saga of promiscuity and incest, told from the POV of the title character but with entertaining asides about her family's history and philosophy regarding sex.

From Fairy-Slayer on August 26, 2019 Yeah, but titling the chapter "They Came in the Night" seemed like too much of a spoiler. Not feigning, just fantasizing. Yep. Literally? Girl Jordan could have done it (this is the girl who goes rabid during dodgeball, after all), but I wanted to change up the dream-girls to keep Lincoln off balance. Thank you!

From Lucius-Walker on August 26, 2019 Thanks! This was a oneshot. But I've got another Loud House story ("Enter the Sandboy") in progress right now, if you want to check it out.

From Lucius-Walker on August 26, 2019 Thank you! Some readers expressed disappointment with the “happy” ending, and then it occurred to me that it would be really fun to write an alternate, dark ending. Maybe a little TOO fun. So I went for it. Steven had a lot of women to take care of in this story. And Priyanka had a fair amount of “off camera” work to do, being both the group’s only doctor and the owner of the home where they made their base. I didn’t think it would be any fun if the Splinter just turned people into mindless automatons that did its bidding. Instead, I wanted them to be sinister versions of themselves, driven by every impulse that the Splinter could dredge up from their psyches to make them do what it wanted. That ended up being a lot of (twisted) fun to write, particularly Connie’s buried anger toward her mother and desire to see her punished and controlled. Thanks! And thanks for the review!