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No worries. I’m always happy to wait for some cheerleading. Seriously, though, don’t sell yourself short. Your comments on chapter 5 were valuable.

SWP1, it’s funny you should ask about chapter 5 of The More, the Merrier, because I just posted it. I’ve also just sent chapter 4 of Enter the Sandboy off to beta. JayDee: What are you, psychic? In any case, you’ll find out for sure very soon; I should be sending you chapter 6 today or tomorrow. Back to SWP1: In fact, I haven’t seen either of those trailers yet. I’ve spent most of my off time lately writing smut. But I’m glad to see James Cameron back at the helm of a Terminator movie. Not that I think he’s infallible, but he’s got the best chance of producing a good Terminator movie after the string of bad ones that followed the original two (or three; the third one had its charms).

Much progress to report. I expect to have both chapter 4 of Enter the Sandboy and chapter 6 of Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl ready for beta this weekend. Also making steady headway on chapter 4 of Delta Delta Delta. In other news, I've just read the first two chapters of Regina by Lady Freelove. It's a fun saga of promiscuity and incest, told from the POV of the title character but with entertaining asides about her family's history and philosophy regarding sex.

From Fairy-Slayer on August 26, 2019 Yeah, but titling the chapter "They Came in the Night" seemed like too much of a spoiler. Not feigning, just fantasizing. Yep. Literally? Girl Jordan could have done it (this is the girl who goes rabid during dodgeball, after all), but I wanted to change up the dream-girls to keep Lincoln off balance. Thank you!

From Lucius-Walker on August 26, 2019 Thanks! This was a oneshot. But I've got another Loud House story ("Enter the Sandboy") in progress right now, if you want to check it out.

From Lucius-Walker on August 26, 2019 Thank you! Some readers expressed disappointment with the “happy” ending, and then it occurred to me that it would be really fun to write an alternate, dark ending. Maybe a little TOO fun. So I went for it. Steven had a lot of women to take care of in this story. And Priyanka had a fair amount of “off camera” work to do, being both the group’s only doctor and the owner of the home where they made their base. I didn’t think it would be any fun if the Splinter just turned people into mindless automatons that did its bidding. Instead, I wanted them to be sinister versions of themselves, driven by every impulse that the Splinter could dredge up from their psyches to make them do what it wanted. That ended up being a lot of (twisted) fun to write, particularly Connie’s buried anger toward her mother and desire to see her punished and controlled. Thanks! And thanks for the review!

From ConanEdogawa on August 25, 2019 Well, you’re entitled to your opinion.

I’m glad you found the humor in those bits. To me, humor is an essential part of any Loud House story because the show is chiefly a comedy. Being a good big brother seems to be important to Lincoln. Of course, in this case, it’s part of what gets him into trouble... I wanted to throw Lincoln a change-up pitch. He might have been able to resist if it had been Girl Jordan again, but Ronnie Anne showing up instead caught him off guard. Lincoln keeps finding himself thrust into situations in which his will to resist is sorely tested...and continues to fail. Couldn’t help but get in a little jibe about our favorite tiara-wearing tattletale. Thanks for the review!

From YamiNoKami on August 24, 2019 That’s her shtick. And yeah, things are only going to get more confusing and awkward for Lincoln. Hmm, someone’s paying attention to the chapter titles. See, the girl doesn’t actually take your V card – she just punches it. Then, if you get nine more punches, you get a free blowjob. Someone is. Stay tuned!

Well, chapter 3 of Enter the Sandboy has emerged from beta ahead of chapter 5 of The More, the Merrier, so I posted it this morning. And it already has a review!

So here’s the very complicated deal: Technically, if you would actually pronounce the possessive s as a separate syllable (as you would if you were talking about the Ross family’s house), you should use an ‘s even if the name ends in s. So you would write, “I am going to the Ross’s house.” However, in RL, very few people do it that way. They will instead write “I am going to the Ross’ house.”

From Lady Freelove on August 22, 2019 First, let me thank you for reading and commenting on so many of my stories. You are quite the voracious reader! Re: “Excuses” Thanks! This is one of the few stories that I drafted almost entirely in one sitting because I got so caught up in writing it. Re: “Some Girl” Thanks! I really enjoyed writing this one. Re: “Fireworks” *bows* Thanks very much. A friend who liked the Valentine's Day theme of "Some Girl" suggest that I do a sequel based on another holiday, and then ideas just started to come. Re: “Satisfaction” Thanks! This one was originally intended to be a short story -- that is, chapter 1 was to be the whole story -- but after I posted it, I realized that I didn't want to stop there, because there was so much more that could be done with the characters and their evolving relationship.

So, much progress to report. First, I’ve just posted “The Order of Things,” my furry brother-on-brother-on-brother underage incest story. Check it out if that’s your thing. Second and third, I expect to have the final chapter of The More, the Merrier ready for beta in the next couple of days, and chapter 3 of Enter the Sandboy should also be ready for beta by the end of the week. (Jomahawk is the beta for both stories, though, so the Sandboy chapter will have to wait in line.) I’ve also made solid progress on chapter 4 of Delta Delta Delta, but there’s still quite a bit left to do.

I can’t guarantee that I’ll do anything with them, but I’ll at least listen. Would you mind either PMing me or posting them in my Transparency thread?

Glad you like my stuff. I expect to have the chapter of Mia ready for beta in the next couple of weeks.

Re: “The Ball Pit” From Metamorphic on August 19, 2019 Thanks! And thanks for being the first reader to comment on this story.

From Fairy-Slayer on August 18, 2019 We shall see. Indeed. Certainly, the reason for this household epidemic of nightmares remains a mystery. Don’t read too much into that. She's just a cute girl who, in Lincoln's mind, makes a more appropriate foolin'-around partner than one of his own sisters. Thanks for another fun review!

From VaultHunter18 on August 18, 2019 Thanks! More is on the way. I certainly had a few when I was Lincoln's age. There are eight chapters left to go, so there's a good chance that at least some of your wishes are going to come true. Thanks for the comments!

I’m thinking special needs. He doesn’t seem hostile enough to be a troll.

I have a bunch of other ideas for LH stories, some of which would involve the twins and/or Lucy, but none of these ideas are very well developed yet. Haven’t yet had any thoughts about Sam, but I certainly would consider including her in a story if the right idea popped up.

This user posts these “Can I be in it” comments on every story site he visits, it seems. Just letting you know in case he’s bugging other people here, too. http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600096089

From YamiNoKami on August 18, 2019 Not a bad bet. You'll find out for sure in the next chapter. To be revealed! But the title of the next chapter ("It Came in the Night") might give you a clue as to which sister is next. I'm currently working on another LH story titled "Twist My Arm." Here's a quick summary: Bobby and Ronnie Anne are in town for just 4 weeks, and Lori is determined to make the most of her time with her Boo Boo Bear. Even if she has to force Lincoln to do the same with Ronnie Anne. Thanks for the review!

On the show, Lincoln is fairly consistent about being a good big brother, so that seemed in-character for him. I think Girl Jordan is really cute, so I couldn't resist. Yeah, couldn't let Lincoln get away with deluding himself like that for long. He’s going to have to find a way to deal with all of this. Thanks for the comments!

Well, chapter 2 of Enter the Sandboy is posted, with 8 to go. I expect to continue to post chapters of this one at a faster rate than I do with my other stories, because (1) the chapters are all pretty short and (2) I’ve done at least a little writing on every chapter already.