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  1. This is where I’ll post replies to any reviews that my Loud House story “Enter the Sandboy” may garner.
  2. Well, it took a bit longer than expected, but the final chapter of Auntie's Home is posted at last. It ended up going through two rounds of beta; Jomahawk pointed out some weaknesses in the first draft, so I changed up some of the dialogue and added almost a thousand words of new material to flesh out certain scenes. I think it's now a fitting finale to the story. Now, in accordance with my self-imposed "Finish two, start one" rule, I can begin posting my new Loud House story, Enter the Sandboy. Chapter 1 has already been betaed; I just want to give it one more look before I post it, probably tomorrow. I also recently made some headway with the final chapter of The More, the Merrier. I'd say it's about 50% written now. (When this thing is done, I’m going to take a long break from massive-orgy stories. )
  3. Had a huge burst of inspiration tonight and finished a rough draft of the final chapter of Auntie’s Home. I just need to give it a read-through, then I’ll send it off to betaland.
  4. Amphibia is totally worth watching. It’s much in the same vein as Gravity Falls and Star Vs the Forces of Evil

    1. Strange_idea

      Strange_idea

      Agreed. They're planning a between-season collection of shorts, too

    2. GeorgeGlass

      GeorgeGlass

      Schweet. I liked the Gravity Falls shorts. 

  5. Glad you enjoyed chapter 3 of “Wishful.” I had some fun writing it. Not making a huge amount of progress with TMTM, to be honest. The chapter is going to be about 6000 words, and I’ve written a little more than 2000. I need to get into a groove with it – at least with the Coltrane/Hirano girls scene, on which I’ve made the least progress. I’d also really like to make some headway with the final chapter of Auntie’s Home, since that’s the story that has gone the longest without an update. Plus, if I can finish that story, then I’ll allow myself to start finishing and posting chapters of Enter the Sandboy. The password thing was a phishing attempt that several people here have been targeted by. Somebody hacked AFF last year and got a bunch of usernames and passwords, then sent a bunch of auto-emails claiming to have hacked your whole life when all they had were those 2 pieces of info. (If they really had anything of value, they would have emailed me at one of my RL email accounts.) I’ve changed my passwords and deleted the emails and am no longer worrying about it.
  6. Re: Wishful From JayDee on July 26, 2019 I had to give each sister something to do when Jace was fucking the other one, and since the bunnies were literally born and bred to be performers, I figured they'd each put on a show to keep things moving along. Jomahawk, for whom I'm writing this story as a thank-you for all his beta reading, gets the credit for that idea. I just came up with the name. I sure hope so. Thanks for the review!
  7. Re: Wishful From Jomahawk2694 on July 26, 2019 When you said that the rabbits would "finish each other's sentences," it made me think of the Dee Dees (Harley Quinn's granddaughters) from Batman Beyond. That gave me the idea of making them clowns and acrobats. I'm so glad! Hope you'll like the next chapter just as well.
  8. Yeah, it happened to me, too. I’ve changed all the passwords that I should have changed a year ago.
  9. Glad you like my stuff. I hope to finish chapter 6 of Mia in the next 2-3 months. I know that sounds like a while, but I have several other stories that have gone longer without an update than Mia has. On the other hand, it’s always possible that inspiration will strike and I’ll binge-write the rest of the chapter in a night.
  10. Just spitballing here: Lawless Red Sunset (you know, because the west) Badlands
  11. I just tried to reset my archive password, but when I click the link in the email, the page it takes me to gives me the message below, even if I click the link the moment I receive the email. Can you help? Password Reset This Password Reset is no longer Valid
  12. Looks like I’m about 80% done with chapter 3 of Wishful. I hope to post it some time this coming week. In other news, I’ve been spending a lot of time on a new Loud House story titled “Enter the Sandboy.” I’m excited to start posting it, but per my self-imposed restrictions, I can’t do that until I finish at least one more of my in-progress stories. Fortunately, I have three stories that are all one chapter away from being finished; not sure which of those it will be.
  13. Why have I never met a female electrician? I get that carpentry and plumbing require a certain amount of upper-body strength, but does electrical work? Or is that profession just an impenetrable boys’ club?

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    2. JayDee

      JayDee

      There’s a domestic and industrial firm near me that advertises itself specifically as “female electrical contractors”. Definitely some out there! Our regular plumber’s a woman too.

    3. JayDee

      JayDee

      Ooh! Has anybody done an electricians romance yet and called it “Sparks” or similar?

    4. Praetor

      Praetor

           I thought I saw one when my neighbour’s apartment had a blow out but it turned out to be a costumed stripper and they were having a frat party or something.  I am sure there is a very boring answer involving trends in education and gender disparity in the work force.  I imagined it would level out since things are getting so complicated even car mechanics are now basically electricians and need degrees to keep up with the space ships they’re rolling out nowadays.  I remember my mind being blown when I got a new car that only had 1 key and could open and start the car from my house.  I imagine electricians are also having to become highly educated.

  14. Ooooh, I’m liking “Kiss and Make Up.” Definitely a contender.
  15. Thanks for all the feedback, folks! Some of these ideas are great. (I really want to use “Hell in a Handbasket” some time.)
  16. So I’m working on a short story about a mom who gets tired of her teenage son and daughter’s constant arguing and who figures out that the root of their conflict is unresolved sexual tension. So she resolves it by making them have sex. I’m not madly in love with the title ideas I’ve had so far (“Tension,” “Work It Out”), and I’m wondering if any of y’all have other suggestions.
  17. Hey, all. I'm pleased to say that "The Ball Pit" has already garnered over a thousand hits. No reviews yet, though; even in this anonymous online world, it takes a certain amount of guts to review (thereby admitting that you read) a story like that. I was happy when someone finally gave "You Get What You Pay For" its first review last weekend. SWP1: --I don’t have any particular feelings about the original Lion King or the live-action (kind of) remake. Having seen Spider-Man: Far From Home last weekend, I think I’ve seen all the big summer movies I’ve been wanting to see. --Other stories are coming along – I’m doing another cycle through the whole list because I wasn’t sure what I most wanted to work on – but nothing is that close to finished. Ch 7 of Auntie’s Home is maybe halfway done, and ch 5 of TMTM is about a third done. No idea what will be finished next. --The next chapter of TMTM will focus mainly on the Hiranos/Coltrane and on Balthazar/Gretchen/Adyson, followed by the grand finale. --Thanks for checking out ch 8 of Make It All Better. I haven’t heard much else from readers regarding that chapter.
  18. So “The Ball Pit” is posted. Be warned, it is seriously brutal.
  19. Re: “You Get What You Pay For” From InkHeart17 on July 08, 2019 Before I begin responding to your comments, let me thank you for being the first person brave enough and/or pervy enough to review this story. Thank you! "Fucked up sex" is definitely among my favorite literary genres, and I'm happy to share my stories with others who enjoy it. I feel that way about a lot of my stories. I love writing a porn-story within a porn-story. It adds more eroticism while simultaneously revealing something about the character who is telling the story. As I always say, an involuntary physiological response is the sincerest form of flattery. Oooh, that's not a bad idea. I'm pretty tied up with other stories right now, but I wouldn't rule out the possibility of revisiting this one. FYI, forthcoming stories that might particularly interest you are "Goldilocked" and "The Ball Pit." I expect to post “The Ball Pit” some time this week.
  20. Well, I had a burst of inspiration and finished chapter 8 of Make It All Better tonight. Angie and Daddy finally confront the beast, and boy, is she horny. Also made a lot of progress on “The Ball Pit” tonight. That will probably be ready to post later this week.
  21. Looks like the next thing I’m going to post is chapter 8 of Make It All Better. I’ve been stuck on it for a good while (the last time I posted a new chapter of that story was in December), but I’ve finally figured out how the chapter should end, so I’m hoping to finish it in the next few days. Nothing else is all that close to being finished. The next thing I’d like to finish is chapter 3 of Wishful, because after Make It All Better, that’s the story that has gone longest without an update. SWP1, hope you had a great Fourth. I actually did once write a Fourth of July story: It’s called “Fireworks,” and it’s a sequel to my Valentine’s Day story, “Some Girl.”
  22. From Trip on July 04, 2019 Thanks! My top priority when writing fanfic is being faithful to the characters. And because the characters are so distinctive on the show, it’s not that hard to make them distinctive on the page. When I started thinking about writing this story (which was my first Loud House fic), I thought about what kinds of RL issues a boy with ten sisters would have to deal with, and that’s where all of that stuff came from. Thanks for the review!
  23. I watched the most recent episode of She-Ra and the Princesses of Power the other night, and I was disappointed to discover that I'm going to have to remove my favorite piece of dialogue from my in-progress fanfic "What Happens on Mystacor." It was written on the assumption that Glimmer and Bow have known each other since childhood, which turns out not to be the case. Stupid canon. :/ In happier news, after finishing two chapters in two days earlier this week, I couldn’t decide what to do next, so I did another cycle through all 20 of my in-progress stories. Whenever I do this, I hope that inspiration will strike and that I’ll suddenly make a huge leap forward on one of the stories, but that didn’t happen this time. But last night, when I was trying to decide what to do next, inspiration suddenly struck like a mofo and I wrote about 2000 words of “Goldilocked,” a one-shot story (about a girl who breaks into the Three Bears’ house and ends up becoming their sex slave) that I’ve been working on very slowly for almost four years. Now it looks like I might finish it in the foreseeable future. Finally, now that Little Rose is finished, a new story has been added to the List of Twenty. It’s a one-shot called “Day of the Deadly,” and it’s for this year’s Halloween story jam. (Yes, I know it’s only June, but given how slowly I write...) A summary: When the cartel killed Graciela’s brother Enrique, all hope of getting their village out from under the cartel’s thumb died with him. But on the night when the veil between this world and the next grows thin, there may be one more chance.
    1. InBrightestDay

      InBrightestDay

      “Japan’s Fisheries Agency has allocated the equivalent of about $463 million to supporting whaling for the 2019 fiscal year.”

      So the government is paying whalers to harvest an animal with fragile populations that people aren’t eating in the first place?  Looks like this emoji’s time has come once again:

      :ffs:

    2. JayDee

      JayDee

      Shinzō Abe is Captain Ahab confirmed.

    3. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      Breaks my heart more than a little bit. I have… conflicting feelings about hunting in general, and though whales are my favourite animals in the universe, I can be convinced hunting them isn’t a total outrage, provided it’s regulated, sustainable and obviously doesn’t touch the species with waning populations, but greedy people be dicks and almost always take shit too far. So no. Don’t touch my whales, dudes! 

  24. Re: Country Summer From FlutteringWings on July 02, 2019 Thanks! I started writing this story with absolutely no plan except that I wanted there to be a great variety of sexual activities. I don't write a lot of m/m stuff, but when I do it's usually furry and always involves young characters. Yeah, uber-masculine man fucking young girl does it for me, too. From the beginning, I was uncertain about whether and how I wanted to involve Maisy in the action. By the time I got to this chapter (the third-to-last), I realized that if I was going to do anything sexual with Maisy, I'd better get to it. And then the idea of her scene with Ben came to me. FYI, as most country people do, Maisy has mixed feelings about incest. Like Jeph, she's probably only fucked the boys a couple of times each. Which is pretty much why Bobby Joe wasn't invited. Can't have anyone competing with the birthday girl for anal attention. I'm imagining this bit of dialogue: Earnest: Think we oughta invite Bobby Joe? Mike: Not unless he’s suddenly learned to ‘preciate the supply side of ass-fuckin', no. Well, then, stay tuned. We're done with Bobby Joe, but there might be a teensy bit of Maisy-action in the last chapter. And definitely some Mike + Earnest-action. And a bunch of Mike + Earnest + Geraldine action. Thank you, and thanks for the review!
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