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I feel like I wrapped it up with the time-skip forward in part 3. But who knows—inspiration could always strike.

Just posted chapter 4 of “Flesh.” Grant makes Christi pull an "all-nighter" with him, and it doesn't involve studying.

Re: “Comfort and Joy” From Lady Freelove on November 30, 2019 I’m so glad that you checked this series out, and even more glad that you liked it. I’m really proud of how it all turned out. If I had made it a quadrilogy instead of a trilogy, that probably would have happened in the final story. I just felt the kids weren’t ready for that yet (and maybe their parents weren’t, either). Thanks for the review!

Re: “May’s Family” From Lady Freelove on November 28, 2019 Thank you! I had been thinking – and hoping – that you might like this one, since it takes a similar “family history” approach to the one you use in your stories.

Your ball-pit story sounds like more fun than mine. A fictionalized account of it might make for a good short story. Just throwing that out there.

Re: “The Ball Pit” From The World's Concubine on November 27, 2019 After reading Lady Freelove’s initial review, I was a bit stunned that she would recommend this story to you (or anyone). Oh, my. Well, I’m pretty sure most of them are alien-free. Thanks! And sorry for the trauma.

Re: “The Ball Pit” From Lady Freelove on November 26, 2019 Yes; it’s really meant as erotic horror. Honestly, I’m surprised you read this one.

From Thundercloud on November 26, 2019 Thanks! I’d been thinking about this story since LAST Halloween, so I had a lot of time to consider how the whole thing was going to work. Given the company this story is in, that’s high praise indeed. Thank you.

And yet when I tell people I practice priapism, they tell me I should see my doctor.

Maybe. But Ruby Gloom suddenly sounds much more interesting to me. May have to go looking for it sometime.

Re: “Conscious Sedation” From Fairy-Slayer on November 23, 2019 Yeah; "a sixteenth of an inch" doesn't seem to carry quite the same weight. Ruby Gloom is a fly, right? You'd think they'd take advantage of every tiny unit of measure. Yup. IMO, in just about every profession, there are people there for the right reasons, and people there for the wrong ones. Indeed. "They fuck you in the hospital!" --Leo Getz If Bob Iger knew what I've been doing with his company's intellectual property, he'd probably make me disappear. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

People might not be checking anymore, so I thought I’d alert TCR and PlagueClover that there are new reviews on their stories.

Re: “Conscious Sedation” From toddhoward314 on November 23, 2019 If that’s the biggest criticism you can come up with for this story, I will take that as a compliment.

Re: “Lincoln’s Lesson” From DebbieCync on November 22, 2019 Thanks! I’m guessing that if the story had gone the way you expected, it would have been much longer.

Thanks, SWP1. Glad you liked it.

“Conscious Sedation” is now posted. A twisted anesthesiologist takes advantage of a nine-year-old patient. A good time is had by some. And now my list of in-progress stories is back to a perfectly manageable, not-at-all-insane twenty.

From JayDee on November 21, 2019 I had a lot of fun writing the Jace/Alice scene. As soon as I had the idea of Alice daring Jace to figure out what turns her on, I felt like I really had a lock on the whole scene.. The idea of Snowdrift being a rescue dog and therefore eternally grateful to Jace came from Jomahawk. Then I had the fun job of figuring out how what the Wishful equivalent of that relationship would be. Thank you, and thanks for the review!

Re: “Wishful” From Sithlordshades on November 21, 2019 Actually, “Country Summer” has one chapter left to go. But I have a lot of writing to do on it. Glad you’re enjoying it. Thanks for the comments!

Re: “Wishful” From Fairy-Slayer on November 20, 2019 The side effects have only begun. The question now is, how much can the Wishful bleed into the real world? I had a ton of fun writing that chapter. There's no substitute for hog-wild male fantasy. We'll be seeing a good bit of politics in the next chapter. Some of the fetish stuff is not what I would come up with on my own. But stretching my limits is part of why I do the odd request story. I'm enjoying the cultural stuff. I imagine the kain living in loose bands like the Comanches, humans living in discrete kingdoms like medieval Europeans, and the Benata having a vast bureaucracy like the feudal Chinese. And bunnies in warrens. They remade The Prisoner? This is the first I've heard of it. It can't be weirder than the original, can it? Thanks for the review!

Re: “Wishful” From Jomahawk2694 on November 20, 2019 Never played that, but I'll take your word for it. Thanks! Writing each half was a very different experience from the other. With Neva's part, there was the constant challenge of figuring out exactly what she would and could do to please Jace with her feet and legs. Writing Alice's part, in contrast, was just pure salacious fun. That's not really going to be a thing in this story. I see Alice as someone who considers introspection and facing her own issues to be an important part of learning to become a therapist. So she's aware of her own incestuous desires and has made peace with them. So glad you liked that. Well, you're going to have to wait a bit; as usual, I've got nineteen -- okay, twenty right now -- other stories that are clamoring for my attention, too. (Did I mention that one of them has the working title of "Waltney World"?)

Chapter 4 of “Wishful” is up! Jace loves his dog, Snowdrift, and she loves him back. But her counterpart in the Wishful loves him in a very different way.

In the interest of transparency (hey, it's right in the thread title), I must confess that I recently broke one of my own rules and allowed the List of Twenty to expand to 22 stories. One of these is a short story that I found so erotically compelling that I couldn't resist the urge to start writing it. It's titled "Conscious Sedation," and it's told from the POV of an anesthesiologist who takes advantage of a very young, not-very-awake female patient. Yeah, I know, I’m a mess. The other new story is the one I'm writing for the AFF Holiday Party. I wanted to get started on it to give it a reasonable chance of being finished in time for Christmas. It has no title yet, but it's about a new reindeer joining Santa's team. There's a lot of work involved in getting ready for The Big Night, but there's also a fun initiation. Fortunately, having just posted "Lincoln's Lesson" got the list back down to 21 stories, and I expect to post "Conscious Sedation" soon, which will make it an even and completely not-insane 20 again. Speaking of finishing things, tonight I completed the rough draft of chapter 4 of “Wishful.” Assuming that I have enough free time to proof it, it could be posted as soon as tomorrow evening.

I’m in. Already started writing. Reindeer sex!

Re: “Lincoln’s Lesson” From Fairy-Slayer on November 17, 2019 Yes, I had some fun imagining what they'd all have on under their clothes. Seemed like a trait that might run in the family. I was really uncertain about how to resolve the situation until I thought of that line and then thought of having Lola say it. I guess his standards of comfort are different for textbooks than for comics. Half the reason I wrote the story was those bits, which just kept coming to me. "Dang it, where are my glasses?" Thanks for the beta-help and the review!