GeorgeGlass

Okay, it's time to admit that I need help once again. It's been about three months since I started work on a sequel to my Loud House story "Enter the Sandboy," and I still don't have a clue about what the title should be. Not that it should be a big deal, because it will be months before any of it is ready to post; I just feel dumb having nothing to call it other than "Untitled Sandboy Sequel." The gist of the story is this: Lincoln has been getting it on like crazy with his sisters and mom all summer long (ie, ever since the events of "Enter the Sandboy"). However, he is expressly forbidden to have sex outside the family. But now the school year is starting, and Lincoln finds himself drawn to quite a few of his female classmates and even a couple of his teachers. To make matters worse, Lincoln's fit physique (thanks to his physically demanding summer camp, plus all that sex) and newfound confidence are making him a girl magnet. So, inevitably, the perpetually horny Lincoln starts boning girls and teachers at school (while also continuing to get plenty of action at home). I'd appreciate any title suggestions folks might have.

I’m insanely late in doing this, but I’d like to recommend “Moonlit Snow,” the story that @InBrightestDay wrote for the AFF Holiday Party. Lovely world-building (especially for a short story), action that’s not only great but historically accurate, and a really touching ending.

Re: “Kiss and Make Up” From beanburrito on January 15, 2020 Loved it! Great concept and length. Thank you!

Re: “Flesh” From Metamorphic on January 14, 2020 What can I say? I have very broad tastes. Thanks for the comment!

Just dropping in to say that chapter 6 of “Flesh” is posted. The title: “Birth Control: The Game.”

Re: “Kiss and Make Up” From Fairy-Slayer on January 11, 2020 Well, in the real world, that would be the most plausible explanation. Again, yes, in the real world... But of course. My original concept was that the mom actually would make them have sex to get it out of their systems. But that seemed like stretching plausibility 'til it snapped. That's when I had the idea for her to make them kiss, and then things get out of hand from there. Yes indeed. Thanks for another uplifting review.

Well, "Kiss and Make Up" seems to be popular so far. In the day-and-a-half since I posted it,iIt's garnered 600+ dragon prints here on AFF, plus a review from @JayDee! And over at Hentai Foundry, the story has earned 21 favorites so far. (Some of my other stories have been posted on HF for years and haven't yet gotten nearly that many favorites.) Okay, less boasting, more posting. Probably the next things I'll post will be chapter 6 of "Flesh," and the 11th and final chapter of "Country Summer." Shortly thereafter, I'll post chapter 1 of “For the Price of One.” Of course, all of this is subject to my usual whim-driven writing process.

Re: “Kiss and Make Up” From JayDee on January 10, 2020 Yup. My initial title for this story was "Tension." But then I liked Sinfulwolf's suggestion of "Kiss and Make Up" better. I was deliberately vague about the siblings' ages because (1) I wanted to portray their relationship as more or less equal and (2) I wanted to post this story on Hentai Foundry, where under-18 stuff isn't allowed. Thanks! Honestly, I'm not sure which way Enid would go, but I think she'd probably at least get Penny on the pill. Thank you very much.

“Kiss and Make Up” is posted! When her teenage son and daughter won’t stop fighting, a mother forces them to confront the true cause of the tension between them. But she might wish she hadn’t. SWP1, sorry, I’m not at all familiar with El Tigre. @FairySlayer, I’ll be very interested to find out what you’re working on.

Hey, all. I’m still not 100% recovered, but at least I felt well enough today to go back to work, where I make the world a better place by moving commas around. Being sick threw off my game in terms of writing, but now I’m back in the swing of things. Made lots of progress tonight on several stories, including one I don’t think I’ve mentioned yet. I keep a list of story ideas – some highly detailed, some not even a sentence long. One of these short items, which has been on the list for a very long time, is “Some kind of cartoon crossover.” Inspiring, I know. Anyway, for unrelated reasons, I recently made a list of all of my incest-themed stories and realized that while I’ve done tons of father/daughter, mother/son, and brother/sister stuff, I’ve neglected the mother/daughter category pretty badly. Then, still being in a list-making mood, I listed some cartoon mother/daughter pairings that I might like to write about. But I wasn’t sure whether I wanted to devote an entire story to any one pairing, and that’s when it occurred to me that I should put them all together in the same story – specifically, by having them compete in a mother/daughter sex contest with a large cash prize and lots of meta references. (“Don’t worry, nobody here knows us, and none of this is canon.”) So I’ve started work on the story, which involves these pairs: Rita and Lola Loud from The Loud House Helen and Violet Parr from The Incredibles Marge and Lisa Simpson from The Simpsons Vivian and Isabella Garcia-Shapiro from Phineas and Ferb Agent K and Riley Daring from The Replacements Lois and Meg Griffin from Family Guy May the best pair win. P.S. I swear by the power of rule 34 that I had this idea before I started reading @FairySlayer’s Spazzgirl Letters.

Hmm, I must think on this… BTW, I was home with a cold today, so on your recommendation, I’ve started watching Ruby Gloom. It’s very cute; I especially like Doom Kitty. And not just because she resembles the cat who is napping on my legs as I type this, although that’s a contributing factor.

Hey there. Had a lovely New Year’s; hope you did, too. As to your questions: It’s very nearly finished. I’m hoping to post it next week. It’s coming along, but only slowly; I ended up spending some time on the chapter after that one this week. I should be ready to start posting that one (titled “For the Price of One”) as soon as I finish one of my stories that is currently in progress. Three of those are now one chapter away from being finished, so that should be soonish.

Yeah, that’s about right.

Ah, so it seems my problem was that I couldn’t tell that you were talking about two different characters. Maybe I just wasn’t paying close enough attention.

Yes, I am. I’ve written several original stories in the first person, but honestly, it’s never even occurred to me to try writing a fanfic that way. It just seems too daunting to try to be fully in character in every single sentence...although now I’m becoming curious to try it.

Okay, last post of 2019! First, a recommendation: I recently started reading @FairySlayer’s Spazzgirl Letters, and so far, I’m quite enjoying it. It's an anthology of sex stories, each one about a lesbian encounter between two loli characters from two different cartoon series. Each story comes in the form of a “Penthouse Letters”-style tale told from the POV of one of the participating characters. This, to me, is next-level stuff: Writing dialogue that is faithful to a character’s voice is one thing, but writing an entire story that way is quite another. (I’ve never been bold enough to try it.) I’m not familiar with every character, but four chapters in, I’m finding it plenty entertaining. Second, I’ve been doing another cycle through all 20 stories, and it’s looking like the next thing I’ll finish is a one-shot titled “Kiss and Make Up” (my thanks to @Sinfulwolf for the title suggestion). The summary: When her teenage son and daughter won't stop fighting, a mother forces them to confront the true cause of the tension between them. But she might wish she hadn't. Happy New Year, all!

I’m afraid I still don’t get it. It appears that she was a heavenly angel, then became a fallen angel, then became a heavenly angel again. When and how she became a vampire, or married a mortal man, I don’t know.

So it appears that my undead-ar is really poor: I misidentified @InBrightestDay’s Lady Aldreda as a vampire and failed to understand that @JayDee’s MC was one. I think the “once-fallen angel” thing confused me because I’ve been watching too much High School DxD.

So, it seems @InBrightestDay and I have passed like ships in the night. My turn to blow the foghorn. From InBrightestDay on December 27, 2019 This was one of those stories that starts out as a simple idea – in this case, “reindeer orgy” – and then just gets away from you and becomes a whole thing. Much of the world-building is a result of that. Whoops, you’re quite right. Apparently, the main function of their UV vision is to avoid being crippled by snow-blindness. Wow, you’re the first person to catch that. Could be, yes. C’mon, how could I not reference that? I posted this story on Inkbunny, too, and of course the main complaint there was about the sex scene with the elf. Actually, it takes hours for the reindeer and days for Santa, because the reindeer aren’t aware of it when Santa stops time. You got me there; I didn’t think that one all the way through. I just thought of the “Nothing tastes like reindeer” line, then remembered a Swedish friend talking about eating reindeer, and I just stuck that line in there. Thanks for the review!

Maybe I could write a story next year about the unexpected sexual adventure of Greta’s twin sister.

Ah, okay. I had the idea that albinos have pink eyes, but apparently there isn’t a single, agreed-upon definition of “albino.” In any case, hats off again for a story that is both mentally and emotionally engaging.

Hey, SWP1. Glad you liked “The Ninth Reindeer.” I’m pretty pleased with how it turned out. The next chapter of Wishful is coming right along, but there’s plenty more to do. BTW, I saw The Rise of Skywalker last weekend. Whatever some of its detractors may say, I thought it was fun to watch and a satisfying conclusion to the Star Wars story. Hope you’re having a great holiday.

From JayDee on December 25, 2019 I suppose she would know, given her legendary ability to make a man permanently hard. Thanks! I figured Rudy had enough to deal with without acrimony from his new teammates. And the "welcome orgy" scene wouldn't have worked under those circumstances. This story was partly inspired by artwork I've seen on Inkbunny of hot reindeer getting it on at the gym. I'm a lot more comfortable writing m/m stuff when it's about furries, and I figured this story was a good place to engage in some of that -- particularly given that, with the addition of Rudy, the guys outnumber the girls on the Team. I came up with that very early on in the planning of the story. It was what ultimately inspired me to write the Rudy / Greta scene at the end. I figured I couldn't do a story about talking reindeer without including some comedy. Well, you know, there had to be something to distinguish the Holiday collection from the Halloween one. Thank you!

From Thundercloud on December 24, 2019 LOL. Glad you liked those scenes, even if furries aren't your thing. Thanks. I'm glad. Thanks for the review!

BTW, my apologies for the length of my story. I didn’t have time to write a shorter one.