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So...do we have a place to post the stories yet?

Re: “Excuses” From The World's Concubine on December 08, 2019 Thank you! This story was an unusual one for me; whereas I it usually takes me weeks or months to write a story like this one, I wrote most of “Excuses” in one day. I just got so into it that I couldn’t stop. (I still went back and polished it later, of course.)

Okay, my reindeer story is ready. Just tell me where to stick it! Wait, that came out wrong.

Yes, it is very much like that. I’d say that Die Hard and Lethal Weapon are among the best action movies of the ‘80s.

From The World's Concubine on December 05, 2019 Re: "Twins: An Incest Poem" Thanks. And thanks for being the first person ever to comment on it. Re: "Some Girl" Thanks! I originally wrote this for a Valentine's Day contest, and I really wanted the love between Carl and Robin to shine through. "Some Girl" was intended as a one-shot story, but I was so happy with the result that I felt the need to continue on with these characters, which resulted in the "Holiday Trilogy." Re: "Fireworks" Thank you! I was "actually there" in the sense that the resort is based on a real place where I once went on a family vacation. Nothing nearly so exciting happened, though. Re: "Comfort and Joy" Thanks! I really like the idea of familial love manifesting in forbidden ways and being strengthened rather than diminished by that. I'm so glad you enjoyed this trilogy, and I really appreciate your taking the time to comment on it.

So I recently started watching High School D x D and quickly got hooked. Today, I realized why: It’s got lots of fantasy action and oodles of fanservice, but it’s also got good storylines and genuine emotion. Which is exactly what I try to put into my stories. SWP1, hey there. Some answers to your questions: Yup, already bought most of my Christmas gifts. How about you? As a matter of fact, I am writing a Christmas story right now. Its working title is “The Ninth Reindeer”; it’s about Rudy, a young reindeer who's fresh out of flight school and who is recruited at the 11th hour to join Santa's team for its annual round-the-world flight. And while the training is grueling, there are some pretty sexy perks. I’ll be posting the story in the AFF Holiday Party. Have made a good start on chapter 5 of “Wishful,” but there’s plenty left to write. Definitely looking forward to The Rise of Skywalker. I’ve heard they’re going to get more into Finn’s backstory, which I’ve been curious about. My favorite Christmas movie is Lethal Weapon. How about yours?

Re: “May’s Family” From The World's Concubine on December 03, 2019 Thanks! In hindsight, it almost seems written for you guys.

I feel like I wrapped it up with the time-skip forward in part 3. But who knows—inspiration could always strike.

Just posted chapter 4 of “Flesh.” Grant makes Christi pull an "all-nighter" with him, and it doesn't involve studying.

Re: “Comfort and Joy” From Lady Freelove on November 30, 2019 I’m so glad that you checked this series out, and even more glad that you liked it. I’m really proud of how it all turned out. If I had made it a quadrilogy instead of a trilogy, that probably would have happened in the final story. I just felt the kids weren’t ready for that yet (and maybe their parents weren’t, either). Thanks for the review!

Re: “May’s Family” From Lady Freelove on November 28, 2019 Thank you! I had been thinking – and hoping – that you might like this one, since it takes a similar “family history” approach to the one you use in your stories.

Your ball-pit story sounds like more fun than mine. A fictionalized account of it might make for a good short story. Just throwing that out there.

Re: “The Ball Pit” From The World's Concubine on November 27, 2019 After reading Lady Freelove’s initial review, I was a bit stunned that she would recommend this story to you (or anyone). Oh, my. Well, I’m pretty sure most of them are alien-free. Thanks! And sorry for the trauma.

Re: “The Ball Pit” From Lady Freelove on November 26, 2019 Yes; it’s really meant as erotic horror. Honestly, I’m surprised you read this one.

From Thundercloud on November 26, 2019 Thanks! I’d been thinking about this story since LAST Halloween, so I had a lot of time to consider how the whole thing was going to work. Given the company this story is in, that’s high praise indeed. Thank you.

And yet when I tell people I practice priapism, they tell me I should see my doctor.

Maybe. But Ruby Gloom suddenly sounds much more interesting to me. May have to go looking for it sometime.

Re: “Conscious Sedation” From Fairy-Slayer on November 23, 2019 Yeah; "a sixteenth of an inch" doesn't seem to carry quite the same weight. Ruby Gloom is a fly, right? You'd think they'd take advantage of every tiny unit of measure. Yup. IMO, in just about every profession, there are people there for the right reasons, and people there for the wrong ones. Indeed. "They fuck you in the hospital!" --Leo Getz If Bob Iger knew what I've been doing with his company's intellectual property, he'd probably make me disappear. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

People might not be checking anymore, so I thought I’d alert TCR and PlagueClover that there are new reviews on their stories.

Re: “Conscious Sedation” From toddhoward314 on November 23, 2019 If that’s the biggest criticism you can come up with for this story, I will take that as a compliment.

Re: “Lincoln’s Lesson” From DebbieCync on November 22, 2019 Thanks! I’m guessing that if the story had gone the way you expected, it would have been much longer.

Thanks, SWP1. Glad you liked it.

“Conscious Sedation” is now posted. A twisted anesthesiologist takes advantage of a nine-year-old patient. A good time is had by some. And now my list of in-progress stories is back to a perfectly manageable, not-at-all-insane twenty.

From JayDee on November 21, 2019 I had a lot of fun writing the Jace/Alice scene. As soon as I had the idea of Alice daring Jace to figure out what turns her on, I felt like I really had a lock on the whole scene.. The idea of Snowdrift being a rescue dog and therefore eternally grateful to Jace came from Jomahawk. Then I had the fun job of figuring out how what the Wishful equivalent of that relationship would be. Thank you, and thanks for the review!