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Schweet! My story does not want to be alone on Halloween.

Finished a first draft! I’m hoping to find the motivation to edit and polish and upgrade it from “painful to read” to “not fuckawful.” The blood isn’t bloody enough too. Surprised myself getting this far with it really.

So there are different types of magic elements, using fire for this one. Fire, Holy fire, Hellfire. I have always known Holy fire to be a blue or white, maybe golden? but there is also a fire that undead tend to use, it can also be a blue or white. Normal fire is …… normal but what about Hellfire? I have been thinking about it and I feel that a deeper red, maybe a blood red would be better to make them feel different? any thought on this one?

GG, it’s always so nice to see a review from you. I’m actually surprised we haven’t seen more work about The Owl House, especially given how much the show loves books, reading, and fanfiction. I’ve been lurking on several TOH threads on the adult sections of 4chan and been seeing a lot of art highlighting the witches and their ears so I thought a story along those lines would be fun. As much as I want to just write some good ol’ porn I find myself working out how to make it believable and so far responses to it have agreed on that which makes me happy. I know Lumity is the lead pairing and hopefully they commit to that early in the second season but there’s just something about an experienced older woman, and Eda especially, that made her the best choice to begin with. I can promise there will definitely be scenes with Luz and Amity, as well as a number of other characters and I’ll adjust the tags accordingly when those chapters drop (sometimes I feel like tagging stuff that hasn’t happened yet spoils the discovery of reading and sometimes I haven’t fully decided what a story will feature as I go). As for Luz’s sexual awakening, I think we can all agree that she’s no stranger to the idea of sex and the show has made it pretty clear she swings both ways if given the opportunity but she also started out as an outcast on Earth so her experience and practical knowledge would be limited.

Well it depends on what the magical combinants are. Holy for example should just burn bright no matter what and little to no smoke. Hellfire in contrast should be smokier in contrast due to its unholy nature/ Implications of its reactants. Typically hellfire in fantasy is much redder/(I’ve seen purple) WOD uses balefire , https://whitewolf.fandom.com/wiki/Balefire_(WTA) Several characters of mine have died to the rather nasty stuff. Since aggravated damage is something you can’t just shake off you die in a few rounds and you can’t soak aggravated damage. https://dresdenfiles.fandom.com/wiki/Hellfire Hellfire in fantasy is either bright green, green or more sickly colors to denote the hazard its entails. Sure, its more destructive but you’re also dabbling into things that at the minimum puts your self/ the soul at risk. No matter what color you use. Note that hellfire, is essentially highlighting and magnifying the worst aspects of fire itself without the positive ones to mellow it out. Its description should reflect that at the very least. People panic at the smell of smoke, or the first flickers of fire. Hellfire should be magnified 10x Cause the spirit even subconsciously should be hammering that primal part of the brain screaming GTFO NOW! Undead should use more phantasmal fire. Think corpse lights or willow wisps. ghostly fire may not burn as hot as regular fire but it should be just as nasty if you get hit with it. maybe illuminating the person’s bones/spirit while its affecting the body. Maybe, even making the unfortunate person phantasmal themselves as their essence burns.

Sickly green for Hellfire, definitely. Think 1960s-type neon acid green. It always induced a strong desire to tear my eyeballs out and soak them in a cooling bath, that color…