GrayNeko

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    George Glass' fanfic review response thread

    I can honestly say I did not see the inspiration for Rashomonster being such a piece of high art, then again I’m woefully uneducated about classic cinema. It never really occurs to me to model stories on things like that and if my works happen to share similarities to things like that it is usually pure coincidence. Still it was a fun story and I admire your ability to do concise work. I have a tendency to snowball a story as I go.
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    GrayNeko's Review Response and Discussion Thread

    Luz couldn’t at first and you’re right as to the reason why, but I think I found a pretty good middle ground by the end of the chapter since she did begin manipulating Eda’s mind. I often find that in these hypnotizing stories, there’s a little in the way of moral dilemma about what they do so I hope I could convey Luz’s struggle at least halfway decently. Now it’s safe to say she’s embraced her desires and won’t be nearly as hesitant anymore. As to who, I mentioned to my readers on AO3 that the next chapter might upset some of them since this story has been fem focused so far. I wouldn’t be doing Luz justice if I ignored her full sexuality.
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    GrayNeko's Review Response and Discussion Thread

    Latest chapter for Ears is up here.
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    George Glass' fanfic review response thread

    I’m working on it, got about 2,000 words down so far. Hopefully I’ll have it ready in early April.
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    GrayNeko's Review Response and Discussion Thread

    Thanks, hope I can continue to surprise and please.
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    GrayNeko's Review Response and Discussion Thread

    George, you hit the nail on the head exactly with where I was going with Amity. There was another piece I’ve read over on AO3 that explores the idea of Amity having a sweat kink so I paid a little tribute to that piece in this chapter while also thinking about the greater implications. With Luz being so aggressive and making the first move Amity was allowed to be vulnerable and she embraced it completely. I’m glad people have enjoyed the steaminess of this chapter, I figured it was time to really get the ball rolling and it’s only going to snowball from here.
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    GrayNeko's Review Response and Discussion Thread

    Thanks. I hadn’t considered fisting but it certainly isn’t out of the realm of possibilities.
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    GrayNeko's Review Response and Discussion Thread

    Latest chapter of Ears to You, Luz Noceda is up!
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    GrayNeko's Review Response and Discussion Thread

    Hey Fairy-Slayer, good to hear from you. I’m glad the exposition doesn’t feel forced and fear not there shall be plenty of naughtiness to come. As for your question, I like to imagine that’s why there are so many demon blooded witches on the Boiling Isles. They initially interbred to breed out this weakness and over time touching ears became so taboo that the real reason was lost or forgotten by the majority of the population. That and with Belos in charge and walking on the grass is a imprisonable offence I imagine anyone suspected of being an ear rapists would probably get black bagged pretty quickly. Or maybe that’s how Belos rose to power in the first place. *Insert spooky conspiracy sounds* Or maybe not.
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    GrayNeko's Review Response and Discussion Thread

    Thanks! Always love hearing from you George. I’m glad Willow has a following, I like her as a character but she doesn’t do much for me otherwise. I’m surprised people haven’t expressed disappointment that I didn’t go further with her in this chapter. The great thing about The Owl House is all the little details. Aside from watching the show on my Disney+ account I’ve downloaded almost the whole season from Mega so I can rewatch specific scenes to make sure I’m getting things right and it’s gratifying to hear that it pays off. Luz is definitely going to be grappling with the consequences of her actions from the end of the chapter but I didn’t want to spend too much time there wrestling with it. To be fair though she hadn’t eaten all day and wasn’t in a great state of mind to begin with. Joking aside, I really wanted to establish that though this might have all started as an accident there’s an allure to this situation that Luz can’t resist, no matter how much she might hate herself for it. Again, I’m glad you and all the other readers are enjoying this story and I look forward to the Star vs story you’ve been talking about.
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    GrayNeko's Review Response and Discussion Thread

    Yeah, we’re definitely going in that direction. I’ve been very happy to hear people enjoying the drama aspects.
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    GrayNeko's Review Response and Discussion Thread

    Next chapter of Ears to You, Luz Noceda is up here, enjoy.
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    GrayNeko's Review Response and Discussion Thread

    You are very welcome Fairy-Slayer. I saw a lot of chatter in the 4chan threads about the pro and cons of ear erogenous zones in regards to The Owl House, with some complaining that it was too Ferengi and obvious but I thought it made for the most fun for Luz to take advantage of. Plus since witches are magic it’s more than just something that gets a witch’s motor running, as Luz will soon discover. And as for the speed and intensity of Eda’s reaction, I was trying for more porn than plot with this, but sometimes I think plot is my real porn. My initial shot went way further than petting and making out but it stopped making sense the more I wrote, though I will get there in future chapters.
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    GrayNeko's Review Response and Discussion Thread

    Thank you. I am currently working on writing more and I hope you’re not too disappointed when more pairings are included.
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    GrayNeko's Review Response and Discussion Thread

    Glad you liked it. Working on it when I have the time.