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And two more reviews, bringing the total up to seven, for Shokan Lust Thank you for your review. What you can always do is, get a username with no connection to your real life, and then only log into AFF through a Firefox private browsing window. Then only your ISP will know of your lust for Shokan feet Seriously, though, us writers love feedback so thank you for reviewing! That's another vote against the cock finale, I guess I will definitely have to see about writing two versions - one with cock, one with strap-on. I suspect there may be a rule against posting both versions to AFF (I remember the rules relating to stuff I do most often more clearly!), but I can always supply a link to an alt version! I agree a lot of detail in sex scenes is desirable, I am trying for a good porn/plot balance, build up and anticipation as well as four armed fisting extravaganzas!. We'll see how that works out as it goes on! More of Sheeva powerful and dominant and the master? I got that in the plan! See me and the requester got kind've a balance, I've always been a big Sheeva fan, they're a Sonya Blade expert. I figure the story will work best if I can get both characters in. Back to the hoping for best there, I think. Feet: Here's the thing. Folks who like feet? Well, folks who like feet can read for hours on feet. Them as are not so bothered, well, they get bored quick. Since the requester hasn't indicated any specific foot fetish I wasn't gonna go do any, but if I find a moment where it might fit I could try and do a little foot focus. As I recall I had her give Stryker a bit of a footjob in my previous MK fic, but that had penis and so wouldn't appeal! Cage: His destiny remains... un-chosen. Ish. Kind've favoring Death. I am JayDee... But look on the bright side: The requester really doesn't like necro, so at least he can remain undefiled if he does die. For most writers this wouldn't be worth mentioning, but for JD! Thank you for your review! Thanks to you also for decloaking and leaving a review. I've tossed my foot thoughts out to Theo above, and can only say the same really. I guess I spent too much time on plot and character thoughts for once, and not on the sex! It's not exactly futa after chapter 8, it's chapter 8 is the last chapter and that's futa (unless I get a strap on alt written). But, hey, if I hadn't written Sheeva with a cock the requester wouldn't have requested a Sonya/Sheeva story! Thanks for your understanding over the request, and thanks for your support on the rest of the story! And, since you're reading the replies, Hi! Thanks again! And, one other bit of promo, I did do a couple other FF game flashfics if you want the no penis stuff - Left 4 Dead 2: The Witch's Lust and Half-Life 2: Judith's Punishment Short, but I think they came out quite well.

And again, Shokan Lust gets a review: Thank you for your comment. Yes, indeed, it is a winning combination. Speaking of Five, did Tom Brady ever land one?

And a further review while I was replying to the previous two Maybe part 1 was possibly a little light on sex, with just a little masturbation... Shokan Lust Thank you for your review! Those female Shokan hands are pretty much designed for fisting, the narrower three-finger shape would fit pretty well. Goro's could be more of a challenge. I'm trying to cover a few different acts between them, so chances are there will be more fingering than fisting, but I have a couple bits in the plan that are thinner on sex content, might try and get some more in there. The shaving - worth noting that Sonya's been in a dungeon for weeks. Though not referenced, her arms, legs and armpits are probably still pretty hairy. The logic for the shaving was like this: 1) Seemed a different and cool use for Sheeva's claws than the fatality shown in game, 2) Sheeva's own costume was so narrow at the crotch she had to be either shaved or naturally hairless down there, she's just getting Sonya the same way 3) I was worried that Sheeva might have to go before Kahn and not realise she had a blonde hair stuck in her teeth. In quite a few of my stories there's bush Just not this one. Sorry, hope it won't ruin your enjoyment of the rest when it is written.

Two more reviews for Shokan Lust! Thank you for your review! I'll try and cover the points off: Yes, it's Sheeva, yes it's F/F, but, well, the guy who requested it did so after reading my other story where Sheeva had a cock. And the plan, at present, has cock in part 8. Which means that parts 2 - 7 will remain F/F, real F/F, but part 8 will have a cock. All of the character development and stuff will be done by end of part 7, though, and part 8 could just be ignored! It may even have a version written with a strap on instead of a cock. The requester does apparently like the Sheeva cock and I wrote my own Sheeva cock story, but it was DG/M. Sorry about this disappointment, and I hope you are able to keep reading and enjoy the rest of chapters until then. Mind Control - this is the best tag I thought for the herbs used in the bath in part 2 as they have a powerful effect on the mind , and to a lesser extent for a kind of pheremonal effect that Sheeva will have on Sonya. This is because I think it's more convincing for Sonya to end up devoted to Sheeva after sexual assault because her mind's been corrupted. Un-corrupted Sonya has no mercy for rapists, as shown in part 1. I'm really grateful for your kind words, though, as I'm normally something of a PWP pornographer I thought it might be nice to take a shot at something with a bit more character and build. I honestly don't know how well that aim will turn out, but hopefully I will have reviews to tell me (and the feedback from the requester who's kind of a Sonya Blade specialist). No, I'm not Santa Claus, but I am related to the Easter Bunny on my father's side through my great grandfather, Johann "Bunny Fucker" Hasenpfeffer. Thank you again for the review! Thank you! Good to hear that you are enjoying it, I do hope I can keep it up! It's the biggest project I've tried in years and I'd really like to do a good job of it if I can. I'm hoping the next parts will cover the high points of individual days, so hopefully (lots of hope!) the stops will feel natural.

I was kind've faced with this recently when I was requested to write a story with a guy's OC, where the only Japanese I know is Nintendo. I thought, well, I could just bang stuff in a translator and hope that readers don't form a lynch mob, and then I just had her speak English, and the one bit where she spoke Japanese was written as <"something like this"> Which seemed to work.

Shokan Lust, now planned for 7 parts of FF action (and one of a F/M/DG scene) has received a review! Thank you for your review! I was starting to think it wouldn't get one on AFF! I will hopefully have part 3 done before too long, it is all planned, just got to be written.

Sent, thanks!

I've always been one of those folks who think there could be too many tags, so this is totally hypocritical and shit, but can the old time AFF code Bond - Bondage be brought back? Currently there's only BDSM, and since BDSM needs to be consensual (and, y'know, safe and sane) to be BDSM it means I can't use it when folks are getting bound up in less than full consent situations eg peril, mind control, dyslexic warlock's accidental summoning of a rope monster .... I know I could just as a Bond tag anyway, but it feels more official if it is official. Yeah, I'll sit over here with my big ol' hypocrite sign.

10 views on the promotion of part one suggests that it is reaching an audience of moderators checking I don't break the rules, and bots. Hi guys! Thanks again for moderating / bot-scanning this promotion, and to anybody else, Hi! Thanks for reading. Ahh well, with mindless enthusiasm, part two is now updated: Details as above, except Content Codes: ChallengeFic, F/F, Fingering, Fist, Hum, MC, Rape, Solo, Click here!

MMMM.... soft centres...

"Ginny, why are you so still and cold?" "It's my Tonks impression!"

I think the policy is that they need five of each pairing for a subcatagory - the ones with less have had the stories removed/deleted whathaveyou for whatever reason. If people are writing these stories and not requesting subcatagories then the moderators won't necessarily realise there's enough for one to be created. You can always start a thread on the forum with the pairings you know about, list 'em together and then at some point one of the moderators might have enough time to move 'em to subcatagories! Is a thought.

Miharu Sarutobi Must Resist! Thank you for your comment! I wasn't going to write my back into the story, and then I thought what the heck and gave it a cameo. Ahem. I mean, I guess this story is kind've a return to the really over the top rapey rape fics I used to knock out ten a penny, but I'll say now for the express purpose of winding up some folks at a fanfiction forum covering off deviant and depraved fantasies of popular characters and other deep rooted psychological reasons undoubtedly. At least there's no snuff in this story, heck, I added that magic no-physical-damage-at-all thing to keep away from that. The story will be kept going into part 2 which I will be posting next Wednesday or so. Check back then, thanks again for your comment! Edit: Ooh, and I got my first 1 star rating for ages, it really is old school JD

Title: Miharu Sarutobi Must Resist! Author: JayDee Rating: Adult++ Summary: Plucky rookie Demon Huntress Miharu Sarutobi is tricked and trapped by an unexpectedly powerful and very well hung demon which needs the power of her orgasm to escape into the world. She must resist! Feedback: Yes please. Codes: Anal, Bigotry, ChallengeFic, Fingering, Fist, Hum, M/F, OC, Oral, PWP, Racist, Rape, Scat, Violence (includes those for part 2, due next week) Fandom: Original > Paranormal/Supernatural> M/F > Demon on Girl. URL: Click here! This is the first of a two part story, part 2 due next week. It was fun to do something utterly mindless, and then pepper it with pretentiousness. The character is Devil_PS's, and pictures and other stories featuring her can be found via internet search. Was a good guy to do a request for, though. Thanks for reading this promotion even if you are are not a spambot. All you damn humans with your free will and unwillingness to sell penis enlargement drugs *shakes code* ~JD (This is indeed the story I asked for help on the disclaimer. Hope it is all shipshape, but if not I will edit!)

Great, thanks again for all your help. I am hoping to have the story uploaded this week

Title: Shokan Lust Author: JayDee Rating: Adult+ Summary: Languishing in Kahn's dungeon after the first Mortal Kombat, Sonya is given to Sheeva, but the Shokan warrior would rather have a trained pet than a troublesome prisoner. Feedback: Yes please. Codes: ChallengeFic, Hum, MiCD, Solo, Violence [to be expanded with further parts] Fandom: Mortal Kombat 2 and 3 URL: Click here! This is the first of a planned four part story I'm doing for a request, part 2 will be posted in about a week with some minor extra polishing and part 3 when it's finished. Thanks for reading this promotion even if you are just a spambot. Us spambots gotta stick together. ~JD (This is not the story I've been asking about disclaimer help with))

A'right, story is nearly finished and so he has added comment to my profile below stating: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/JayD/profile As you can see it says: "I am aware of JayD using my character Miharu Sarutobi in a story and I am okay with this." All good?

A'right, I'll get the story finished first and then I'll go back to 'em and ask 'em to post a specific character permission comment then I'll link that for a screencap - knowing me, if I do it before I write the story I'll never get the damn story finished and it'll be academic anyway. Thanks again.

How about his comments on my H-F profile requesting if I take story requests? Or does it need to be specific to the character? Scroll down past the story links and that - http://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/JayD/profile Thanks again for your help Free Advertising's all well and good in most cases, not entirely sure they want it in my stories! "The Happy Meal was stuffed WHERE?"

They slot together pefectly. What more do ya need?

Thank you for your time and help with this! Regarding 2 - I've noticed that a lot of published works do use fake brands and stuff if they haven't got a product deal in place, so that's why I was more worried it might be needed, but if that's the AFF policy I reckon it'll be ok. The character being referenced isn't quite as well known as Supes, but still returns a shitload of google hits so I figure she's hit the old pop culture standard. Regarding 1 - Here is one of the stories he's had written with this OC (you can see the credit for him at the top) http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Monsinne/12889/Hunting-Demon And links to pictures he has commissioned are here: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/Devil_PS/profile I've stuck with the H-F links because he contacted me through H-F about writing the story. Thanks again!

Two things, really, 1) Where somebody has created an Original Character that they've got several writers/artists to do works on, does this still go under Original stories with the Original tag and a disclaimer of who owns the character or does it become a fanwork and need to go elsewhere? I don't know that this guy has got stories with his character on AFF yet, but certainly he has a few works elsewhere. He seems to have paid for some of them, suggesting monterary investment beyond a normal OC, although JD writes for free 2) I looked through the FAQs and citation bit but I didn't see for sure and this is probably such a stupid question that the whole post will be deleted and then the section of server with them overwritten with random 1s and 0s and then cut out and thrown in a foundry, but: If a character in an original story refers to someone from a published work, for the sake of argument Superman, do I need to put in citations and disclaimers and everything for that? I don't think it's come up before in my original strories because most folks were too busy gettin' horribly violated to make pop culture references, and I just don't like to get in trouble with the staff. Thanks for your time in advance even if you do just delete it for being stupid/wrong place, because that still takes clicks!

Now, I wasn't aware of Tetris until the first Game Boy release, but it is the reason I no longer have working thumbs. Since it's now 30 years since the pre game boy original release I thought I would request some of the talented writers here to put out some Tetris PWP. Thanks for reading and considering this request.

New review on Revenge Of The Ravenclaw Thank you for your review! I misread your username as "Bigwig" and thought "Oh crap, the bunnies have found me." For some reason, I wasn't nearly so worried about truckers. Yes, very fucked up story. This was one of the ones that got my extended allcaps disclaimer of course, I was just flicking back through it for the first time in years and, well, Quite. As for Lily Potter, half the time when I did HP stories it was for a prompt or request, and I guess there was never anything requested with her. I did come up with a title set after that attack by Voldemort - "Lily and the Lust of Libitina" - but I never got around to it. Which is probably for the best. Thanks again for your review.

You could always start a thread of your own. With hookers. And Blackjack.