JayDee

Shokan Lust Thank you for your review! Sorry 'bout the errors, feel free to point to any specifically wrong, 'cos even with a couple drafts it's possible for me to overlook 'em Funnily enough, the first draft was less gory, but without the extra violence then, amongst other things, it didn't really emphasise Sonya's change over to the Outworld mindset enough. Getting off over a slapfest isn't the same as over Mileena taking that poor ol' palette swap apart. I'll give warning now, that as the story's planned there's a bit of violence in parts 6, 7 and 8 too so it might not be your cup of tea to continue! I guess Mortal Kombat wasn't really known for having peaceful solutions to problems. Friendships don't count Sorry for confusion over the comment - what I meant by was "There's kicking in part 5, and no foot focus. Am I evil?" - the kicking was in this part with Mileena kicking Hornbuckle, and Hornbuckle's flying kick back, so I was kind've jokingly apologising for the characters using their feet but in a non-sexual way, given the feet-requests in the reviews.

Hope she gets through the latest round a'right.

Alrighty, well, I guess the attitude of everyone else apart from you two is is "Just fucking google it." So I unleashed my google fu, and thanks to screencaps and descriptions I know 1) is Cyber City Oedo 808, 3) is the little miniseries version of Vampire Princess Miyu (and the stalker wasn't a journalist!) and I think that 5) may well have been Battle Angel, but I don't really remember it well enough apparently. I certainly don't recall any sex, but the descriptions seem to suggest it had a shitton. So it's just the damn dragon thing. And now I really want to see Cyber City Oedo 808 again most of all.

Shokan Lust That's an especially Mortal Kombat flavored statement. Very appropriate Unfortunately, I have no spine. Which is why I sit terrified whenever I post fanfiction that my door will be kicked down and I'll be dragged off for crimes against humanity. Sorry for all the delays, I'm not as expert on getting out multi-part fiction as some folks (Some might say my Black Cat story has been awaiting a final part for a few years... They wanna see the adventures of Boner, the ugliest security dog in the world) and I have just been so busy with real life stuff I haven't had the energy to write. This is the current status: I started the first draft of part 5, stopped, threw it away. Re-wrote the complete part first draft last week. Sent it to the requester who made some very good points for how to improve it, so I need to implement them and then it ought to be good to go. Just time/energy again, I'm afraid. I sometimes think I should have held off posting any of the parts until it was all complete. Thank you for your continued interest! I am dedicated to finishing this story even if I take a while, and at least with a planned ending after eight parts I have something to aim at.

Well, as long as Henry doesn't turn up to argue... it's not up to me what people post here. I'm just a user. I hope I didn't come across as too much of an asshole but I felt I should be honest.

I got lucky! He did two of mine in the end Other one was here, and I had hopes for more but then Rob Bricken went to work for another site and Fan Fiction Friday stopped. Archive is still there and worth a look tho'

Hey man, I respect your creativity and all, but like I said when y'emailed me I'd generally prefer not to see celeb stuff. I realise that the version on AFF isn't a celeb story, but it's still real people photo manips. And while I gotta give props for the suprisingly appropropriate Predator cock I'd really appreciate it if you didn't share more photomanips with me. Please don't take this the wrong way, because I totally get you're expressing your creativity around my stories and I do respect that, but these days it makes me a little uncomfortable. It's way me. It's weird, because I like drawings and that, but photo manips terrify me. Obviously it's up to you what you choose to do, I can only put my thoughts out there in reply. Good luck, though, with your future creative works. I hope you continue having fun!

Thanks for the heads up - haven't been around for a few days but I've got a few with 16-17 year old characters, I'll check through and delete 'em if they are not already deleted.

Still not made any progress on part 5 of 'lust, have been busy as all heck and I started it but didn't like what I had. So back to the drawing board. A second review for Struck Down and Sodomised, the latest in what is apparently a long, long line of Sheeva with a cock stories. At least based on the reviews for the non-cock story. Thank you for this review also! The other MK story I'm writing, Shokan Lust, is hopefully ending as a prequel to this one, so when it is written part 8 could well have cock!Sheeva (unless I end up doing strap-on instead!) Really nice to get feedback on the story so thank you again.

Ahh. Well. Five Women. One Night. [AFF Edit Edition] a story I wrote, and then re-edited for AFF to change one major and some minor characters. Was a very long story for me and whenever I look at it again now the writing feels scrappy as hell. So many errors. I once planned out a sequel, was gonna have Rain Robinson from Star Trek: Voyager. Probably for the best I never wrote it. Thank you for your review! Glad you liked it. And it's always nice to see folks wearing hats in this day and age.

Yeah, these would definitely be quite old series, at least from the 1990s if not older - Akira sounds right, looked it up and yes! That's it! As for the bomb collars, yes I remember the other guys now, and I thought the one guy was a criminal so makes sense others would be. I don't think it's Gantz though. Thanks for looking into it at least!

Hi, This is not fanfiction specific so I have posted here. I saw some series or possibly they were just tv movies/miniseries type one offs years ago and I cannot recall what they were called, so with the hugely active anime boards here I figured someone might be able to identify what they were. I can remember some of the series names like Dominion Tank Police, Ghost in the Shell, Pokemon etc I don't think any of them were hentai/porny ones. It's not real important ('nother point in favor of aimless babble posting) but I was kinda curious so I will start with these five: 1) I think the characters had some kind of bomb collars on their necks. There was one guy with like white or pale hair who looked pretty feminine, and I think he was a criminal of some kind. It was awesome. 2) In another one, there were these people who were dragon or dragon spirits and there was a lot in there about tension between Japan and America and there was one woman who was a total bitch who might have been half American and I think she lost. 3) A little vampire girl and her masked buddy had wacky adventures. A journalist stalked them. 4) Kick ass biker scenes, lots of explosions, think it was some kind of post-war civil war type thing and psychic powers. Akira! Thanks 5) There was a girl who was some kind of robot or android (not Ghost in the Shell) and I think a floating city where rich people lived tethered to the ground with something like spinning blades moving up and down that stopped people climbing up. Any ideas? I don't wanna google fu, because I'm lazy. And also "android girl" and "feminine lookin' dude" returns many, many replies. Must be tropes.

Sorry, I just can't remember where it was.

Shokan Lust Thank you for your review, glad you're liking it. I've been totally run off my feet and maybe a little burned out but hoping to get part 5 done soon. I've finally made a start on it!

I'm not sure, beyond people making the requests I've written for them, it may be random for me!

An Ending in Two Colors was very much a "Holy fuck, I can't think of a good prompt idea this week, guess I'll settle for something shit" story in my desperate attempt to do one prompt a week for 52 weeks. It was, quite rightly, ignored by all. And then, this Thanks for your comment. There must be some! Folks round here luurrrve ridiculously overpowered whiny bitch boys.

Shokan Lust review Thanks for your review - I too hope I continue it. I'm glad you find it hot - since it's porn an' all that's part of the point! - and the pheromone element. I would clarify though, it's not dub-con or meant to be any kind of take on it - it's rape. Sonya is held prisoner, coerced and effectively drugged into participation. There is no point in which she gives, or later, is able to give, full informed consent which makes everything portrayed rape. I personally dislike the term dub-con because every time I see it, someone is using it to describe rape and not wanting to call it rape because rape is evil. Which it is. But the fact remains that despite the strenuous claims of the legal representatives of frat boys, intoxicating people to get them to fuck you is still rape. As is all the many other cases labelled "dub-con" where clear unequivocal consent for sexual activity is not obtained. ...mini rant over. Thank you again for your review, and apologies if my fundamentalist approach to terminology has caused you offence.

Well this all feels a little necro'y (and not the good kind) but about my post above from 2012 referring to a site policy on flames and talking about me deleting my own - I got that impression from the discussion in this 2010 thread, specifially, this post and this post where then-mod RogueMudblood and y'self indicated that deleting our own flames saved time for the staff! It's all a bit old, but I felt I should clarify my point, and obviously from the new post there it doesn't apply any more and I shall henceforth not delete any flames if I get any. Anyway, most flamers seem to find it too much hassle to leave reviews these days so hasn't been a problem for me since then anyhow!

I don't. S'too damn exploitable. One person who really hates a story/writer can simply get it re-voted until low score, like with my Felicia Hardy story (here) where I had 12/13 votes with it showing 4 or 5 stars and next day over 100 down to 2 stars, 'cos they'd obviously got bored of trying to get it down to 1 star. I just ignore 'em. And in that one case, found it amusing enough that someone was engaged enough to take the time and effort to try to annoy me that I didn't ask to have it reset! Give me a review, positive or negative, any day over the stars and if the plan on the code changes is still to remove 'em then good riddance.

Thanks for finding a better quality link. S'not metal, s'rock'n'roll! [/Lemmy's insistent terminology] And Girlschool were sweet heroines. [/blatant lies]

I've had major problems finding time to write more for Shokan Lust, which is a shame because it's all planned out and ready to rock (and possibly also roll). In the meantime, another review: Thank you for your comment! I hope you continue to like it when I manage to get part 5 scrawled.

So, I thought I had some ideas and when I looked 'em up they were all too early or too late, or already listed. This is the last left and frankly probably not sexy enough. Or at all: Please Don't Touch - Motorhead and Girlschool

Posting three weeks after the last post in a thread to complain about it being previously resurrected? Feeling somewhat bored, were ya?

Ohio Vanilla, a story of the most vanilla sex I could imagine for a little theme thing over on hentai-foundry's forum, because I was silly enough to pay attention and vote for it, and then felt somewhat obliged to write something. Oh, base mind of the JayDee! What cruelty you inflict on me! Now, this is the least sexually arousing thing I have ever written, to the point that the resolutely NoSex tagged Friendship's Gift is sexier, mostly due to a barely dressed Khajiit and a regretful Orc with his pants down. Even so, a review: Thank you for your review. I believe the expression might well be "This is your brain on Vanilla." I guess it is good that it at least raised a laugh or two, so not all terrible