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Another Shokan Lust review! Thank you for your further review! I figured she'd be likely to be unshaven in the dream as it was something Sheeva only did to her fairly recently, as for the body hair, I think I said before it was quite likely given her time in the dungeon that there'd be some. I'm afraid there's very little chance of armpit play in this story, sorry. At least there was horny hardcore, hairbrushing in part 4.... just me then. Hopefully won't be too long 'til the next part. I'm trying to write a short oneshot story before I do it though (certainly hoping it'll be shorter than the two-part original fic I did between parts 2 and 3!)

Shokan Lust review Thank you for your review! If that's what it reads like I am happy to take credit for it being intentional

Shokan Lust review Thanks for your review! She used the thighs in part 1 May use them in a later part, but I'm thinking it's more likely not to be, sorry. Kano is off enjoying Motaro's hospitality, I'm sure it's stretching his abilities.

Review for Shokan Lust Thank you for your review, and please, don't apologise! There's no requirement for reviewers to be nice, just honest. (there's not really a requirement for honesty, either, though it's preferred!) I'm certainly not going to try to convince you that you should have loved the part, because obviously it was not to your taste, but I'd like to respond on one point: Anal - There's no anal penetration in the part, unlike the male characters of Slash, there's no prostate to milk for the female characters, so the only anal penetration will be on a male character in the last part. The anus does have a similar amount of stimulatable nerve endings for both genders, though, and I hoped here the emphasis was more on Sheeva coercing Sonya into doing something like that; she doesn't get off from the rimming alone, but from Sonya also fingering her. It's a fair point that most women don't enjoy rimming, most men aren't that into it either I'm told, but I figure the same would be true of the main sexual warning of the story: It's a rapefic, with coercion. Anyway, this was the last bit of rimming planned so hopefully won't spoil future chapters for you Thanks again for your feedback, and I hope the next chapter is more to your liking although in some ways the main kink there is perhaps just as niche.

Showing for me - under "my control panel" for adding, and under main archives for the link to the stories? http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/index.php

First draft of part 4 is done! Melora84 gave me some good pointers on how to improve the opening so I am gonna try and get that done and polish the rest and then it'll be posting time. Hopefully. This is a slightly bigger part, but then part 5 is kind've a one scene/two kinks part so it'll be shorter again. Part 5 will have Mileena's first appearance, too, but isn't written yet. Heh.

Great! Neil's gently hinting for votes through that social media, but you wouldn't catch the likes of Jonathan Swift doing that. On account of being dead, mostly. Otherwise, he'd probably be putting out "Vote me and get a free baby to eat" pamphlets I shouldn't wonder.

http://www.theguardian.com/books/booksblog/poll/2014/jul/09/poll-choose-literary-character-for-51st-london-book-bench?CMP=twt_gu ...or if you prefer one of the other folks, vote them instead. It's all good. Except Rowling fans. She's got enough. Posting this here as doomed the Gaiman attempt, hasn't it? Eeep.

I did it too. Yay! Inclusiveness!

I didn't really do anything, I was well below any call! It's like I said before tho', those who like feet like 'em and those who don't just don't have that level of interest! I'm sure someone will cover that feet love somewhere I never get enough reviews for my pages to feel cluttered, but obviously I can see comments here just as easily so go ahead and comment wherever is easier Thanks for your further comments, I'm happy to hear you're still enjoy it, despite the whole "ankles up" point of view. And another one on the page for Shokan Lust Thank you! Glad you liked it. Hopefully have part 4 done in about a week!

And another review, thankfully less anti-FF Thank you for your review! Glad to hear you are still reading and enjoying it, yes, hoping Sonya will be a good and happy pet!

Another review for Shokan Lust, but before that, two things: One, an artist was having a sale of cheap quick-produced commissioned so I commissioned a $30 Sonya/Sheeva Not Safe For Work picture which you can See here if you like. One or two minor technical issues, but otherwise pretty darn good. Two, I discussed the whole foot fetish thing with Melora84, and won't be adding any to the story because it just doesn't do anything for 'em, and I'm trying to get the request to match what they like. Will also edit a couple bits out later. Anyway, the review, Thank you for your comment. I respectfully disagree with your opinions on lesbians, and think part of it may be against the site TOS on references to other users, although I can sort of understand where you're coming from as actually I'm pretty sure most men secretly want a man to fuck them, hence all the homophobia. Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts, but I rather suspect the story won't be following a plot path you enjoy!

Thank you for the three extra views of the thread! I hope I haven't taken up too much of your time, and if any of you come back or read this anew, please check out part 3 of Shokan Lust! Details as above, except: Content Codes: Bond, ChallengeFic, F/F, Fingering, Hum, MC, Oral, Rape Click Here!

You gotta say please. Say please, you'll have an ass glowing like a cherry! Professionalism is the watchword of the wench.

The point is... what's the point? Well, being silly for a start. Wonderful thing silliness. No, there it is. The point. What you did was, you went and found this thread that was like a month since an update and then about 6 years since the thread started and of that, was about half pro-christian, and them noting the issue was far right, not just "the right" and what you did then was unleashed what feels like a total persecution complex, and frankly I'm a little baffled as to why. But even then it's not as if every thread here is slightly to the left of Karl Marx. The most I've seen is folks maybe express a different opinion, but s'not exactly squelching. I guess I can see how it's nice to feel persecuted in some way, but possibly you'd get a stronger buzz on somewhere more actively politicised. I mean, look at the stuff on guns. There ya were, all ready to have a big "you can have my guns when you take 'em from my cold dead fingers" type of discussion, and it turned out that most of the other users were packing more heat than the IDF. Even I used to have a Shotgun (and relevant paperwork). Rabbit pie, man, gotta spit out the pellets. I dunno. Maybe do some more of that thinking y'all are promoting. If you try hard enough you might find someone willin' ta start persecutin' ya and give that complex some depth, but the mods'll shut 'em down pretty fast if they do. Hell, I'm prolly due a spanking for this'n, get the ol' naughty points up. ho-hum. Anyway, best of luck.

I just don't understand it at all. Here we are surrounded by near 8GB of hardcore man on man butt fucking action, male pregnancy, demonic tentacle rape, pony molestation, deep anal French kissing. sonic the hedgehog being used as toilet paper, torture, violence, sex outside marriage, romance and even a little foot fetishism, and you haven't been able to find more than two or three active Conservative Christians amongst the users of the forum! What is the world coming to?

I had a dispute with a neighbor about my religion. They claimed that in this day and age it was backwards to construct a giant figure out of wicker, fill it with people, and burn it for the glory of Crom Cruach. Eventually they warmed to the idea.

Back 'fore the world wide web, long before the eternal September, before even Usenet had started to spread a whole lot out, button down homebody housewives the length and breadth of the United States were carefully typing out scorching hot Kirk/Spock stories and sending them to fanzines. Kitchen floors were slipperier than when Gomer Pyle got his own show. I don't think they even bothered with the MM tag then, because it was all two fisted man action. It was a golden age, and I missed it. Ahh well. At least I got to see Gummi Bears before whatever bastard reboot they're undoubtedly about to unleash on an unsuspecting world rendered numbly compliant by the internet friendly pony hijinks. The golden age is done. The dark age is coming and it is Gummi shaped.

I don't know the truth of it, but I did hear it once said that it came from the slash between the names on the earlier popular fanfics like Kirk/Spock, which if not true sounds like it oughta be.

I don't write real person fic anymore, so this is kind've academic, but I'm assuming that you don't require the written permission from real people who are also famous (unless there's an archive of very strange emails behind the celeb domain) so in this age of social media and youtube fame, where's the line of fame drawn? Like, if a user wanted to write a story about a youtuber with a few hundred or few thousand subscribers, is that allowed, or do they have to be at least "first round voted out on Big Brother" level of utter nonentity fame, first? Just wondering how it's decided, really, as I say, not something I write myself now.

Well, I did nearly just have her shout Nintendo.

You got any character names? Anything that might have been the title or author names?

Pester me all you like, it's all good. S'what the threads are for! I don't blame ya, I just figure I'll be honest as to the likelihood of it gettin' done that way! A surprising amount of users don't read the tags. Is a shame. They do good job of warning. Thanks, glad you liked the Sheeva/Stryker one too

Hi Theo! Thanks for visiting the thread here. There's a few authors here who do respond to reviews in forum threads, but it doesn't get quite the usage it could do - I only started reply threads myself in 2010. A bit of a missed opportunity, as writers and readers communicating through a forum seems like a good thing! Not so much a footjob scene as a bit within about three paragraphs, but if you check it out I hope ya like it. As for Mileena, well, it's clear she's in the story from the message Sheeva got at the end of part 2, but her role is planned differently I'm afraid. I'm sure everyone loves a Mileena blow job, though, it's that wonderful goofy smile of hers. Such a darling. Can't promise anything about Cage. I might not even manage to write that far! S'a big project. Sorry on that, also. But, hey, he's died and come back in the games like, what, three times? Death isn't the end in the MK Universe, as Scorpion's famous self help guide "How To Bone Death" revealed. I feel I ought to add a note of caution - while I am always happy to hear it, I've had a lot of folks say they're a new fan, and then read something other than the one story they'd read, and then I never hear from them again. Except possibly with a lot of cusswords. The thing is. I've written a lot of quite widely differing very-niche stuff, and the futa fans don't like the lesbian stuff, the violent fans don't like the WAFFy M/M stuff, the beast fans don't like the necro, and nobody likes the furry stuff. Not even furries. Still, if you like Shokan Lust at least, it's all good and I hope I can live up to some of your hopes.

Thank you to all two people who viewed the first promotion! I hope it didn't take too much of your moderating time Well, anyway, Click here for the concluding part, for which the codes are already posted, except for it now being Complete. And thanks to everybody for reading this promotion!