JayDee

Louisiana Pit Fight: Sandi Stone Vs Jody Two days and two nights? "Prouda you, boy" Thanks for your review! I wrote this story for someone with a pretty specific muscle woman fetish years ago and I figured they were pretty much the only person who'd dig it, so it was nice to get a review! I keep meaning to do a Bob Glover and Freddy Allen wacky adventure sometime too

Request 1) M/M, rape, bond Poe/Kylo in the interrogation room. It helps that they're both ridiculously good looking, but I think a PWP scene with Kyle screwing Poe would be very hot, especially with Kylo using the force to get into Poe's head. Thank you for taking the time to read the request, please leave a link if you do it! Might add more requests later.

Let it go!

Thanks for the tip! I'm perfectly happy to read M/M, I'll check it out.

Nothing says spirit of the season like Shane and the late Kirsty MacColl singing "You're a bum You're a punk You're an old slut on junk Lying there almost dead on a drip in that bed You scumbag, you maggot You cheap lousy faggot Happy Christmas your arse I pray God it's our last" Quite why this hasn't made it into a Snoopy holiday special I just don't know.

That's an awesome claim to fame! Me, I wouldn't want to be in the same room as Shane McGowan's teeth. a

Killer Frost Killer Thank you for your review! I guess I don't fully understand it (I get Weird, but not the modifier!), but I am grateful for any comment at all so thanks for your time and thought.

Stargirl: Black Bred White Bread Thank you for your review! I've started on the ending chapter, but slow going, it's harder than a re-write doing new stuff Power Girl is in it, but not in a sex scene. I think the only time I did a story with PG previously was in Part 3 of Fun with Dick and Rose and that was by far the worst part, so I might have to do a proper PG story soon. Deathstalker recently did a good one! Thanks again for your review

Under Joan's Bed Thank you for your review! Yeah, I did a whole bunch of weekly prompt fics and the flashfic length meant that the chapters had to be short and quite often the full stories too I did plan another three parts, but I didn't write the plan down and then I forgot it. Was going to involve kinky tentacle sex at some point, I think. The prompts are also responsible for me using words I wouldn't necessarily think about as there was quite often words that don't crop up in my regular writing as the prompt. Or, indeed, in any writing anywhere. Such as Frittle. So I guess they get the vocab credit! I might re-do my sig with the flames I got rather than reviews. They're deleted but I have copies in the old flames thread, and most of them would probably be seen as harsh but fair. Thank you again!

Suggested wording for your email: "Hi Paranoia! Are you dead?" If you are, I'd appreciate if you didn't reply as it gets dark at night. Yours, Yamii"

Ok, so, missed an oportunity for a punny chapter one there, "Rape of That Sabine Woman," just to wind up the fine art fans. On the erotic side! I thought the scene in part one was actually pretty hot. Not bad at all for a first effort, I thought, used the force quite well. Could use a little more polish on the grammar - basically the same thing as people say about my stories! - eg with the tense in "She had came." or ""Just finished me!" I don't know that I'm enough of a fan of that part of Star Wars fandom to check out the rest (being pretty busy all the time!), but good luck with your story, and, yes, there's a lot of cases with many hits and not many reviews.

I had a quick look, think you might need a rape tag for that first chapter. What with the whole begging him not to fuck her and then him fucking her. I'll try and give a little more feedback later. Don't know those SW characters at all!

DA:Origins Morrigan in her spider form also counts as giant spider. Just throwing that out there in case anybody knows of any stories using that angle... I think Zevran would take a shot.

I've seen the first parts of TDM's and all of Deathstalker's so I wondered if anybody can please recommend any by any other author, any theme from WAFF to rape as long as elements 1) Giant Spiders, 2) Lots of sex with said oversized arachnids, 3) 18+ age characters. I'm very happy to see original story recs and that is why I picked this section for story search, but it doesn't have to be original category, I'll try fandom stories too, but it would be silly to start a thread in every fandom with spiders asking for recs! And also, I would really prefer to get recs based on stories readers have read and enjoyed rather than just from users with five minutes spare who've searched "spiders" and copy/pasted the first link - just to save you the time as much as anything as I already have that search method covered! Thank you for your time in reading this and thanks in advance for any recs.

Thank you! I'll keep these ideas bubbling then.

Uh... would you mind if somebody was inspired by the title of your thread to write a story about a novel eating someone's brain? Asking for a friend. JayDee, hoping nobody remembers they have no friends.

Stargirl: Black Bred White Bread The latest of my re-writes! This was originally a fairly short two parter, but is now up to three parts based on the first two, with a new-but-for-two paragraphs final part to finish off that I'm working on. Still doing a little polishing on parts 2 and 3, but should have part 2 up tomorrow and probably part 3 next week. Anyway, a generalised review, which proves there is such a thing as Hi there! Thanks for your comments. That story certainly has a powerful character dominated! It's nice to hear from a long term reader, I guess there's been quite a bit of variety so I think readers who like one story probably won't like another. A certain sense of being sickened is probably the healthiest response to some of my stories, though obviously not if I do a wholesome idea like the Chief Wiggum/Comic Book Guy slash request I had recently to play off the hard gay imagery of a corrupt cop and a bearded chubb like CBG. I do love to get feedback and responses, and that's why I've been adding more "review me!" type comments of late because it has seemed like the number of folks willing to review has tailed off, but I've always been lucky that it isn't a major driving force for me as it seems to be for some amateur writers. I write as a hobby and for the fun of it and that's a'right. Still though, each time I get some good feedback it is a good feeling, even negative reviews because at least my story reached someone somehow. Even if it was in the "made them throw up" sense. Thanks for your time in leaving the comments and I do hope you continue to enjoy for as long as I'm allowed to continue writing (ie until I am locked away in a secure facility and banned from accessing the internet after someone in authority reads chapter 6 of "Ending the Fan".)

The stories in the anime sections and anime-specific sections are anime themed. The stories in the non-anime sections are where you post the other stuff http://www.adult-fanfiction.org/html-index.php Check out the list on the left hand side!

If you do a sequel, make it a porno - "Yay! It's Magus the Tumescent!"

Well for all I know it's a playful reference to you having hidden cameras installed everywhere.

TrickyTreats by Dirty Angel The meta stuff was pretty amusing at the start, especially the stuff around Magus the Omniscient. Incidently, the line “Ok, which one of you psycho’s put teeth on my giant girl wiener?” is definately not a question I ever expected to read on AFF! What with the Aliens reference as well, I have a mental image like H R Giger doing a safe sex advert. Liked the three headed cat, too. The ending did seem sudden, but, hell, that got lampshaded too so I guess it works! Sequel to feature foeofthelance then? foe'll be getting y'all to restart the big forum orgy at this rate...

Right Like Rain by KoKoa_B Wow, that was pretty brutal. Very much a Halloween horror story. Tthe foreshadowing about the rain was good, and how it just went from everything feeling OK to an overwhelming attack. The dangers for heroes with families, I guess. Very thematically apt, anyway!

Hey, George! Thank you for the review and thank you especially for the typos part! (Todd kissed her? eesh! How did I miss that?!?) I'll compile a little list and then ask Chrissy to re-post the updated version when I'm sure I've got them all (I'll re-read it myself in another couple weeks and notice more!) I'm really happy that I had enough in there of the background for it to make sense, too! She's actually reading his memories from his orgasm - which was how she got Astrid's too - the semen was just for life energy, absorbing a little more power. I can probably clarify that too Yeah, definately a different set of powers - though I'm sure a, say, Spawn story where he'd had to fuck his way to redemption would have gone down well. -- I see there's another couple stories to review too, so I'll get onto them before long, tomorrow maybe

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Thanks to all three of you! Another vote for laughs in it, so I must've got it pretty much right Thank you for your review also! Three little sex scenes isn't usually my style, I tend to go for one huge sex scene with no plot, so it's good it worked. It's just an old fashioned love story, really, Girl sucks boy, girl fucks other boy up the ass, girl meets girl. How many times have we heard that one? I went through a phase with the AFF review system where I kept somehow losing my reviews. Since then I write 'em in word and paste them across. I'm sure it's fixed but I'm not taking chances!