JayDee

I pretty much agree. Some very funny bits but quite a lot of filler, too.

You! Thank you for your review! And I only just noticed you changed your forum name to match your archive name. In my defence, I haven’t been around so much. Who am I? Wait and see. Unless I never write another part in which case don’t Who is this Great Uncle Todd? He’s an occasional pug wrangler. He never liked Sarsa’s writing either. He’s been dead since before part 1 so I didn’t bother with an MiCD tag. There’s a growing feeling that he isn’t really your Great Uncle. And if... Pimping Sarsa out. Other misuses of magic. Had a win on the power ball. Maybe. He might just have inherited it. He didn’t take it with him anyway. Sarsa lies. She’s a writer. Is the entire thing an illusion? Nah. But there’s at least one more big one. Who the hell is the second dead guy? The her... the vill... the third guy in another tale. And what’s with all these meaty corpse roles being played by men? It’s the damn patriarchy I tell you. How come he wasn't afraid when he died? Would you be afraid of some guy with a stick and a book looking like a cosplayer if you had a gun? Most of the people Kate has smelled were terrified when they died, particularly the ones who died from a wolf to the throat. more clues With me only realising who you* were when Kate asked your* name I suspect there’s plot holes and insufficient details. Most of the folks who lap up the murder mysteries to guess the killer would hate it. I never mastered foreshadowing and aftshadowing isn’t my strong point either. *You know what I mean. Damn second person. I should have done first person. Maybe the follow up will be four first person chapters from Lupa, Kate, Shannon and Kiz. “Hey assholes! First person vampire story! I could tell you more about what happened but, fuck it, this is my story. Let’s go bite some people. Om nom nom nom.” I hope I have time to do more. I can see it in one parts, or maybe two, to a proper ending and with more Sarsa because, let’s be honest, big cocked demonesses are the only selling point for many readers. I’ve kind’ve mined the obvious jokes about writing but I’ve got a few more barrel scrapings that I think I can work in. And I think there may be more blood. It’s a JayDee story. Thank you again for the review! Hope you’re having a nice day. Edit: Getting the quote boxes right on the new forum software gives me trouble!

Pen Name: JayDee Story link: You! - 4: Got Review replies link: Review Replies -Original Type of fic: Flashfic Rating: Adult + Fandom: Original Pairing: Still isn't one. Warnings: AFFO, ChallengeFic, Exhib, TF, Other> Corpse(s)

[Off topic] I can’t shake this mental image of Resident Evil’s Nemesis in a dainty sailor fuku, going after Brad Vickers for snuggles and long walks in the moon light [/Off Topic]

Oh, sure, I get that, in yaoi no matter how apparantly femme someone is, they’re male. In video games it led to everyone’s gay for Bridget. I’ve always been a little unsure about content levels on AO3, that’s why I’ve not posted a whole lot there, but I can’t think The Price would go beyond ‘em. That is, until the readers are lying awake at three in the morning with all the lights on.

Ahh, yeah, I didn’t think it was a requirement to label as snuff, but because it had come up in a couple posts I thought I should double check,

Thank you for your thoughts! I’ve been trying to do You! as gender neutral, partly because anyone can then feel more into the character and partly because Tumblr now gets upset if you even assume your own characters’ gender. I suspect it’s one of those areas where my lack of ability as a writer lets me down! I think the original plan for part 3 was going to involve some inadvertant wolf-ass-in-face moments to justify the title but with it being over a year I thought there was a nice opportunity to throw in some 2016 gags. It would be kind’ve a shock, huh? That autograph book is going unfilled There’s only one thing that can stop a terrible fanfiction writer. They’re going to have to knuckle down, pool their resources, and get Sarsa a job with a shitty shift pattern. Heh… a little team of heroes. And Lupa. I’m sorry to see you haven’t had more reviews on The Price. It’s a great story.

Thank you for your review. Sarsa loves to read, it was a dead cert she’d find Harry Potter at some point and then the Sue-ening would be an inevitible consequence. I figure wolves don’t have as much of a concept of time, but You! do. I had some other stuff about how the evil in the internet is responsible for a lot of the bad shit happening, but there’s a word limit on those things. Maybe in You! 4… Lupa’s way angrier about things than Kate. After initially running away, Kate’s accepted a role a follower to Kizzy’s alpha, otherwise she’d have been alpha wolf with her own pack and acting a little differently. Lupa, on the other hand, is still pissed at how hard it is to be an athiest when you’re hanging out with a demon and an angel. Or something. Thanks again but sadly I bet I’m still going to be short of time!

I’m still intending to do the Willow story when I have time. And that 100 word prompt challenge. But since it’s been over a year since I was able to write anything, an extra chapter of this’n isn’t such a terrible thing. I had trouble keeping it in present tense and probably messed up again despite some re-writing. You! Thank you for your comments. I understand it is not the first chapter I’ve written that has caused peeing. Sarsa’s stories are worse than 2016, because 2016 eventually came to an end but Sarsa is still writing. I may not be back at it for long, I think I’ll have little time

Just for personal interest here – I didn’t think there was a snuff label requirement? I thought the only requirement is the same as for any type of story, to have the correct codes from the list? If characters are dying then MCD and maybe also Contro, Violence depending on method of death, and Nec if there’s snuggling afterwards? Also, without making any comment here on the TOS or the application of the rules… Deathstalker is a very talented writer, One whose Name was writ in viscera*, and I shall miss them on the archive. *I’m not footnoting forum posts** **OK, ok, it’s paraphrasing John Keats’ last words.

Pen Name: JayDee Story link: You! - Part 3: Wolf Moon Review replies link: Review Replies -Original Type of fic: Flashfic Rating: Adult + Fandom: Original Pairing: Still isn't one. Warnings: AFFO, ChallengeFic, Exhib, Hum, TF

“They’ve built a visitors centre next to the receiver. They’re calling it Stonehenge. Damn primitives!” “Does it have a cafe?”

I agree, they’re interesting little reads.

Say they had a battery 2000 years ago that was full of juice allowing for a longer range, while now two millenia of streaming space porn (or general usage) mean they have to basically be on top of of the spot?

If you’ve been carefully following Melrick’s posts you’ll have been able to work out this guide was coming for some time.

The best option is absolutely to ignore the trolls as they want a response. What you’ve written above, while sensible and rational, would likely just be viewed as a score and a “We gotta get more of this” attitude leading to further trolling. Basically, everything that’s already been said. I’m late in here! I, uh, I tend to quote nasty comments against me for the amusement of myself and others but I know that the previously given report/ignore advice is correct.

“When you stop buying a calendar and start using a stone circle.”

It… it sounds a lot like me. I mean, not at writing. But in general.

Well, I’ve had a little time to play around with LibreOffice and it seems fairly straightforward so far, so if I can just crap out 1000 words or so for a dribs drabs story chapter I can actually achieve mine! So, You! 3 then… pippychick> I can see the posters now: “Daddy, what did YOU do in the Trump War?” And the father looks up concerned that he didn’t produce enough porn during the long dark years.

I just have: “Gonna find time to write.”

Thanks DG and CloverReff for your thoughts, google docs and libreoffice continue to get the love. It’s a bigger field than I realised. I really doubt that I’ll have the time to trial lots of different processors though; I don’t even know if I’ll have much for the writing! It’s quite a bit to think about

Thanks again folks, especially for the re-assurance on the google docs sharing. I actually use a much more recent version of word occasionally in the day job, but that’s not a good setting to write porn with I’d not heard about LaTeX, but yeah it does seem like much of the typesetting features wouldn’t be needed for me since I mostly publish to AFF and don’t put out e-books or similar.

Thanks guys! Im leaning even more towards google docs now. I already have the google account even! I know google docs has the document sharing features, is it easy to check you havent inadvertently shared something? Some of my stuff really needs to ensure it has a detailed Dont read any further notice. Especially the WAFF. I suppose one way to do it would be to start with google docs and then maybe look more at libre office if I am missing the extra functions. Like a paperclip saying “It looks like youre writing erotic horror. Here is the template for a psychiatric examination application.”

In the event I get back into writing, it’ll be without my old Microsoft Word 2000 / Wordpad combo (for rtf formatting). I’m now on a not quite as old, but still ancient, machine and I can’t find the old CD to try a re-install! I’m not interested in pirating software, but there’s freely available options like OpenOffice, LibreOffice that I don’t know a lot about. I need something with a word counter and spell checker, and maybe some of Word’s grammar check functionality like double words and so on. I’ve heard a lot of good things about Google Docs, but I am not sure how powerful it is. Thoughts? There might well be an old discussion thread about this somewhere but I’m assuming that the tech has moved on some. Thanks in advance for everyone’s thoughts.

I did a quick search on originals to see if anything matched your terms. This seemed a likely shot: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103437 I would have done this sooner, but have been busy.