JayDee

Full listing? I’m in…. Well I’m not, I’ve got 100+ of the fucking things. I don’t have all week. Samahlen (combined one-shots): 22260 / 105 – Now this is a good story. Literally so good it got me to play a game that I then loved and wrote a bit of fanfic for myself. [off topic] Alistair should totally have been a male warden romance option. And Morrigan a female warden option. And Dog for both of… Ok, ok, I’ll shut up now[/off topic] I respect that. I guess I get squirrelly at the thought of someone’s first impression of my writing being something I’m not 100% proud of. That kind’ve sums up alla my writing to be honest… Nothing’s perfect! Multiparters definitely seem to have more chance of picking up reviews. And, yep, genre definitely makes a differene. That’s sort of the point I was making with the HP stories I have – some of them are really bad and some are kinda ok to good, but there’s only one of them that never got a review. Even that unfinished scat fic I wrote got reviews and that was just me being vulgar. As for story pulling: I pulled all my Real Person Fic stories years ago from AFF, but have re-written and expanded some of them to be about non real folks. I also have a few stories – some of drabble or micro fic length – that I’ve never really put up on AFF for one reason or another. The reason I pulled all my early JD stuff originally in like 2006 I can’t fully remember now. 12 years ago! I think one of the old mods said or did something that irritated me. This was pre-current forum days, I think, though possibly after… was it yahoo group? There was that AFF livejournal for a bit too... For my old username I took ‘em all down because of the one username rule, and because some real world folks saw some of my writing, but later on I asked DemonGoddess and she said it was ok to have my old username stories under my old username so I re-loaded some of the best of them. Probably coulda stuck a few more up but I doubt I will now. Maybe one of these days.

I suspect Minor1 is one of those tags like Rape that a large portion of readers understandibly actively avoid and a small portion actively look for. Some of the tags will get readers for a fandom or original topic about which they know/care little just because the fetish/kink/straight up mental sickness (Hello ABDL! I kid, I kid!) is the most important element to them. Though, weirdly, they’re often more likely to review to plead for more of said fetish sometimes in fandom they do know better, “Wow I really loved seeing your OC Mike wearing that pair of Depends, have you ever thought of how Batman must use something similar?” etc etc Than click and skip by unreviewed. Recording the dragon prints like that sounds like a good idea, but I suspect I might find it a bit depressing if I tried it with mine.

I’m not posting links ‘cos this isn’t a review whore thread. As most of what I write is one shots I am used to getting one or two reviews a story, with the odd one getting more and the multiparters occasionally getting 20+ Given my often niche subject matter not a big suprise! Anyway, I got to thinking about hits vs reviews – I have a story with 60K plus hits and considerably less reviews, but also I have a few stories with no reviews at all. And I wondered if it was worth looking at them to see if there’s any specific reason why they didn’t get even the pity reviews so many of my others got! So in order of dragon prints these are: Games > Fallout > No Mercy in Novac - Dragon Prints : 15278 15K reviews. Even with this likely representing one or two masturbators revisiting a few times, it’s quite a lot of people who’ve been interested enough in the fandom and the summary with it’s promised “gang of horny rapists” to click, but then haven’t liked or hated it enough to leave a comment. My strong suspicion with this one is that a lot of them have seen the note that this is a re-write of one of my earlier stories and either didn’t want to try again, or understandably felt this was a likely sign of poor quality hack work to salvage the porn scenes of 2007 JayDee. Games > Mortal Kombat > Sindel's Lullaby - Dragon Prints : 7000 I suspect that what happened here was the many readers who liked “Shokan Lust” didn’t pay close enough attention to the codes/description on this very different story, realised what they were getting after clicking and noped the fuck out. 7K though. Harry Potter > Crossovers > Nightmare at Hogwarts - Dragon Prints : 5798 This is my only HP fandom fic to get zero reviews, and for getting reviews HP fandom used to be like shooting fish in a barrel. You could literally write a necrophile sex dwarf and people would give it an honest appraisal. The only reason this one has so many dragon prints is because it’s been on AFF since I started re-loading my stories on AFF in 2007 after taking them down that first time (and accidentally not saving that hot Kate/Dad Angel fic I wrote. I’m a dumb fucker). So I think the reason for no reviews is niche appeal, less popular character, Het content, teen version of old character, and Freddy not being Freddy enough. S’a piece of shit story tbh. Cartoons > Josie and the Pussycats > Just A Cat - Dragon Prints : 3925 I thought this’n did have reviews tbh. Maybe the user’s content was deleted? Anyway, kind’ve a cheat to include since while it has no review on AFF it did get reviewed as part of “Fanfiction Friday” on the old Topless Robot site, and numerous reader comments that quite failed to understand it wasn’t intended as a serious literary heavyweight work, but just a 70s cartoon Afro-American woman with a penis nailing a white dude. Because that shit’s hot. Shut up. It is. 0 onsite reviews can’t be wro… fuck. FWIW this is probably one of my better unreviewed stories, but it is a fairly small fandom and dickgirl-on-male is not everybody’s cup of spunk. Movies > Southland Tales (2006) > Nobody Now Dragon - Prints : 2984 Movie that tanked at the box office, and didn’t make a whole lot of sense even when you read the prequel comics but still had some fun scenes and and dialogue and folks playin’ the roles. So on that basis, and the very niche amputee fetish, not surprised it didn’t get a lot of folks who looked at it happy to leave even an anon review. Another one of the batch of stories I re-wrote to be about a fanwork, although the original one wasn’t actually posted anywhere – they rejected it at CSSA which must take some doing. Games > Viewtiful Joe > Hulk Davidson has Sylvia for Dinner - Dragon Prints : 2726 A vore request/story exchange I did for a fandom I knew sweet FA about, so it probably scores poorly for being a lesser known Capcom property, not being especially close in character to the actual property, and featuring people eating. Cartoons > Extreme Ghostbusters > The Goth and The Goatherd - Dragon Prints : 2028 Not all of my re-write attempts were very good. Shoehorning this one into EGB didn’t really work. Not surprised at the low hits or low reviews – again, lesser popular fandom and niche content. Games > REsident Evil > Control Takes Jill - Dragon Prints : 1565 Niche content, but big fandom where folks usually don’t mind violent rapey gory stories. I guess It was just wrong place, wrong time. Not my best work as I was having a hard time writing anything at the time, and then forgot to post it here for ages (was a request topic fic I wrote as a reward for another forum’s thread) Just one of those things. Originals > Fucking Halloween Party Dragon Prints : 1267 Since Reviewed! (That you reviewer!) There’s some nice sex in this one and again actually cheating to be here – it did get reviewed when originally posted as part of the Halloween special multithread, but I wanted it on my own profile to keep alla the character stories together, and 1200+ people checked it out and didn’t really care either way! I certainly am not suprised of my four stories with no reviews and low dragon prints two are originals because that’s a harder sell outside of specific topics anyway. Maybe shoulda gone for “Cocky Succubus’ Halloween Party” Games > Elder Scrolls Oblivion > Decorative Destruction - Dragon Prints : 991 Someone wanted Jar Jar Binks to go to the Elder Srolls universe and rape a specific NPC with a tiny part in the game. I owed them a story and wrote it. Readers saw Jar Jar and scrolled the fuck down. I expect it’s 900 Star Wars bot searches. Weird idea. Had some nice descriptions I think, but I haven’t been back to check. Games > Elder Scrolls Morrowind > The Orc's Weapon - Dragon Prints : 619 It’s got NoSex tag, and features a character from an older game and, well, I liked it but I can see why it didn’t take off. Was a sequel to my better written Friendship’s Gift in a way. Originals > The Man in the Tree Dragon Prints : 602 Since Reviewed! (Thank you reviewer!) I did 52 prompts, one a week, for a year. This was the week I couldn’t think of any goddamn thing worth a shit and so crapped this out. It’s deservedly forgotten to the point I didn’t remember it until I saw it. ...I started with the most dragon prints stories to be positives. Anyway, that’s my Unreviewed. How’s about y’all?

Death’s Cold Fingering is one of those stories where I think “Well, it’s kinda fucked up but at least nobody has to look at it if they don’t want to!” and then I get reminded that actually the mods have to check all the stories for codes and disclaimers and such and feel a little bad. I mean, if If I’d posted this on old school gurochan’s /lit/ board someone would totally replied “So, can Anthony fuck Rita Pedal Bin style in part 2?” by now. and that’s not the kind’ve fic you want to even skim. On the plus side, I don’t do celeb! BronxWench review: This is one time when I think not having played the game won't make a damned bit of difference. Poor, poor Paul... Rita was most persuasive, and after all, it's not like Sofia was going to complain. On the other hand, consent is consent, and it's really not enough to assume the dead won't mind. Sort of the ultimate #metoo with one hell of a karmic kick at the end. Good to have you back and posting! Thank you for the review! I really appreciate it. I mean, I even like getting the negative reviews so the positive ones are really nice! I always err on the side of caution with consent issues and they definitely didn’t ask first so it got a Rape tag without a moment’s hesitation. Paul wasn’t really capable of giving informed consent to fingering Sofia’s shade either. A baseball bat to the head definitely counts as a form of coercion, right? Paul should have been strong and stood up to his punky necrophile girlfriend about right and wrong. Done a bit of Educatin’ Rita. Although, really he was coerced too. Rita’s the repulsive one here! I don’t know that I’ll be posting much more – I have a lot in my scraps folder of notes and half (or much less) started stuff. I still dream of getting the Willow gangsnuggle story finished, I’ve got a first draft that I originally did for the Fate/Fun/Finesse prompt before deciding to make it You! 5 which basically just has Lupa pissed off under a silence spell thing that I might manage to make half readable, and that’s the closest to done. I'd be nice to write more though, when I have the time. I miss it. I miss reading stories as well – I used to read a hell of a lot more. It’s Good to see you getting your writing published out there!

The Taking of Felicia Hardy remains in zMisplaced Stories [ADMIN use only] > Spiderman, and I am sure when I posted it in 2009 there was an X-Man domain but not a seperate Marvel domain. This was a long time ago and there’s been a lot of booze since then, and the only reason I haven’t done the decent thing and taken it down and re-loaded it on the Marvel side myself is because it’s got 12 reviews, which is an insane amount for me. Well, it had 11 but today another one: Donglibog review: Just read part 1. Really enjoyed it. I kinda like the fat guy character. Many thanks for your review! I really appreciate the feedback. Per the disclaimer at the start part 1’s plot and several elements were requested by KZ-01. Now, KZ-01 had a favorite fantasy and that was a smokin’ hot woman with a guy who was ugly as fuck in same way – fat, horrible features, Ted Nugent shirt that sort of thing. I say had, but for all I know KZ-01 still has the same desires. He made quite a few requests and the Felicia Hardy one appealed to me so I wrote it! Now the reason for explaining this is firstly to say I don’t take total credit for the fat guy character and secondly to let you know that KZ-01 inspired/requested fat guys appeared in other stories that you may also like if you can find them! Sadly I don’t have the links, but someone can probably help. Anyway, I appreciate the review, thanks for your kind words.

I “played” a visual novel game on steam last september. It was short but free to play – with achievements! - and apparantly has a premium version with a buncha sex off of Steam. Anyway, afterwards I did a first draft of a story, maybe 1000 words, and then forgot about it. Then, recently, when I felt up to trying to finish the half-done final part of You! I found the draft in the same folder and took a shot at finishing it over the last week. It became my 31st story in AFF’s Games domain Death’s Cold Fingering. You may be able to guess I couldn’t think up a non-shit or even half coherent title. As with many PWPs the story takes a few actual events from the game, described in my half-assed prose, and throws in sex with them. It’s at least one death less violent than most playthroughs of the game, and almost certainly has less sex than the premium version, because all the free one has is sliding puzzles and violence. But what the hell, I’m just a fanfic hack. Anyway. Just using the old review/reply thread for a bit of extra Authors Notes which I’m sure’s allowd somewhere in the rules. Sometimes think it’d be easier to have all my review reply/extra notes in one long thread rather than spread out per subdomain.

Sub: Games Title: The Last Weekend Story Written: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090713

I don’t know it! If you could remember any more details such as character names or descriptions eg was it described as a “moon god” or “celestial being” anything like that? Any more specific terms can help a search or trigger a memory from someone who read it.

You! People have been saying to me for a while “I can’t wait to see the end of you!” and I’ve said “You know my writing?” and they’ve looked confused and said “You write?” Review! Thank you for the review, I really appreciate it! If I manage to write again there would be more Kizurial - She’d have a chapter of her own in I! if I get to write it, so would the others. I have edited the top of chapter 5 to include the “NoSex” warning code. Could catch, thanks for the mention! There’s at least a certain amount of nudity or exposure in previous parts and readers might be upset to discover only a cut off mildly-subtle reference to a penis. I personally have a less than pure mental image of Lupa feeding. If y’are inspired go for it – as I recall you inspired me to play Dragon Age: Origins and I really loved that Thank you again! Now we just need 3 G words for more prompts if DG ever has freed up time again… Goth Gushing Geromorphism?

You! finally finished. So if I do never write anything else again at least that’s one thread tied up and left unhanging. Of course, there’s always that first person follow up I! I could write to answer the important questions such as 1) Will it work? 2) What Kate did next 3) how many more of my old OCs can I kill off? 4) Pepsi or Coca Cola? Gotta review! Five chapters, nearly 5000 words, 2000+ hits and finally an 18th review! We’ve all been there! :p I couldn’t have taken that path though because there’s a strict rule in the TOS about setting power crazed futa demons against the archive moderators. Even in fiction! I know, I was initially shocked too, but you’ve got to remember that most of these aren’t the original mods. And that’s why they have the rule. Thanks for the review, the gag made me smile

Sadly some users just never got into toilet, blood or rape content. It’s a weird world out there, but I wouldn’t hold it against FrankT to not like that stuff.

Pen Name: JayDee Story link: You! - 5: By Five Review replies link: Review Replies -Original Type of fic: Flashfic Rating: Adult + Fandom: Original Pairing: Entire story is pairing free. There’s no sex either. Warnings: AFFO, ChallengeFic, Complete, MCD.

I understand he was no longer invited to carve the turkey at Thanksgiving.

Seven years might be enough for them to have moved on. Or then again, maybe you never do get over a story about your brother and you with that kind of content. Incest tag is bad enough, but the torture, death and cannibalism tags would likely have made it quite a bit worse.

Good question…. a bit of google fu & a couple other search engines on the names shows it’s no longer coming up in searches so it’s gone and forgotten until one of the people who copied it at the time (There’s always folks who do, even if they shouldn’t) reposts it, I guess. I’ve re-written some of my old RPF stories to be non RPF/fanfiction stories – leading to the always hilarious accusations of stealing from myself despite note at start – but given the circumstances I don’t think I’d re-write those ones.

And then there was this happy fun time! Weird addendum, the guy died a couple years later, he’d had heart problems. His obituary made the paper for his town with, again, very distinctive names. No mention of the sister fetish.

I had very little problems killing off characters. Well, except for thinking up the best ways to do it.

I hope you have a lot of sales and critical acclaim and that!

I’d like to be able to fly. Just because really.

Point 4 was left intentionally blank. And unintentionally mysterious. Also, some more info including an interesting point about the font apparantly having T&Cs that it can’t be trademarked. Well I thought it was interesting. http://www.pajiba.com/think_pieces/cocky-writer-romance-author-faleena-hopkins-trademarks-cocky-and-tries-to-shut-down-others-using-the-word.php

https://twitter.com/Ceilidhann/status/992512485528932353 So for the question/debate D’ya think that’s a bit cheeky? or… cocky? Just how much do you think I now want to write a romantic novel with cocky in the title? It can’t be a take off on hers ‘cos I’d never even heard of her before this Wonder if it’s some kind of publicity stunt? There is no point 4.

Taken by Surprise got a review! Thank you for this review, I liked getting the review very much also I appreciate it!

This is the most fucked up thing I ever wrote

Download that word processor! Strike while the bunny is humping!

Next thing it’d be staff questions for “Do I need to tag my vampire stories for vore? What about if they drain the blood and make blood sauage?”