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InvidiaRed

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  1. That’s why death by hand blender is so surprising.
  2. So content yourself with the humilation of making him wearing clothes and not chained to the bed Hahaha.
  3. I’d go with with either sudden fatal aging, collapse into dust route. Or a slow decline as friends and family notice. Or A kiss of death. Or sucking the soul out of them.
  4. Its not like their sun is gonna suddenly explode. Or their reality ends with a total vacuum collapse.
  5. Ah yes. Here’s the greatest sex of your life… Now prepare to kiss the front end of a bus with failing brakes. I disagree it would be more mean spirited to not include any such thing would make that world more of one drowning in ennui and half empty.
  6. Well I usually use a pillow. I’m usually rather forward with it. Made them fall down a flight of stairs. Falling off a building onto exposed rebar. Drowning by concrete. Hurled from a vehicle straight into a wood chipper(no seatbelt) Kissed by death, devoured by a pack of feral cats, Entombed with a mummy, Mummified by natural exposure, Having their heart summoned directly from their chest in front of their family. Having their clothes inverted into their insides. Curses aging them into dust and last but not least having that bitch thrown out an airlock and then blasted by the ship’s primary weapon. Some characters are just meant to die. Others may not have intentionally been marked for death but the story just goes that direction. If I do like the character they should get a proper send off. Lots of foreshadowing. I’m not that much of a monster to heartlessly not give the character advance notice. Sometimes you start off liking a character but then they evolve in ways you don’t forsee and then you hate them with a passion that no star could match. These characters are bound for final destination deaths with as much spite as possible with all speed. Authors like it or not can pretty much be naught but spiteful deities. It depends on the character and the situation. There’s only been a handful of characters i’ve written who did what they set out to do. They knew they weren’t coming back… But they went anyway. Those ones I have the most trouble trying to keep them alive short of divine intervention. It would be rude to ignore that inherent nobility. Even if they have gruesome ends Valhalla awaits.
  7. Well I’d argue it depends on the sex drive and circumstance much like real life. Somepeople fuck like bunnies and some people enjoy turning it into an eventful hour-long event with sensual precision
  8. Dont forget Lima Syndrome. Where the captor falls for their captive. Or dependency or other sycophantic behavior. Which further muddies the swamp water.
  9. There’s nothing wrong with being optimistic. Stranger shit has happened in reality. And pessimism isn’t all that its cracked up to be.Even in darker settings.
  10. Its defintely better to err on the side of caution. Its a heavy topic.
  11. Scat and anything involving minors. Everything else is fair game.
  12. Pulled Lichlove and its surrounding stories. I’m not going to say much but I did find an editor :D

    1. BronxWench

      BronxWench

      That sounds very promising! Hopefully this is the start of good things! :D

  13. Sometimes there doesn’t need to be one. In my experience. You can hint, throw comments and other snippets to create a bigger back story. How do they react? How do things affect the characters. Do certain things remind them? You can create an effective character purely on how does the character react to the world around them.
  14. Yep. Some people just jump right off that slippery slope rather than slide off.
  15. spite and malice have their place to be sure. But its much more satisfying when one of the biggest problems for the protagonists is just normal people going about their lives
  16. Antagonists are in many ways the easier to create than protagonists. They laugh,cry and generally do everything the protagonists do. The who what when and why generally take care of the rest.
  17. <3 Essentially yes. When you got long lived races with millenia+ lifespans in a world with peoples with normal life spans It might seem insane but a little war here and there is just good neighborly manners.
  18. Oh good, I’m in good company. Oceania I can write about forever. There’s alot of history there. As is expected when characters have incredible longevity. Character conflicts can last for millennia. Since one of the main characters is 102,50 year old.
  19. Found this gems https://www.quora.com/What-are-slang-terms-euphemisms-for-a-penis http://bit.ly/14hM1V4
  20. indeed it is. For muses are fickle things
  21. Such a thing exists?
  22. Depends on how vocal the people are in flagrante delicto. Cooing is more comforting baby talk/pet talk
  23. Fresh is best. Even if its 160 pounds of talking beef, bread, lettuce, tomato, and cheese
  24. Well, start with a logical approach. Why are they nude? Hawaii can get very humid. Enough to make wearing any clothing uncomfortable.
  25. Nice.
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