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From BronxWench on October 30, 2018 Synth This one was complex, layered, perplexing, and exhilarating. I'm really not sure which POV tugged at me more. I think it was a close call between the grief of Iteration, and the sacrifice of Ur Dragon. That last line... "As the ocean tasted dragon blood." Just wonderful, and while not what I'd call traditional horror, it was just as terrifying and intriguing. Beautiful! Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed Interation 33175 in a manner did manage to see her son again. She knew it not but she managed for a momentary glimpse that he lived still. Ur Dragon was the only being to accurately recognize the threat the watchers represented. From her perspective, these puny beings were able to communicate with her flawlessly despite her never lowering herself to talk to them. As a parent she had to make the hardest decision. Did she stay in a rapidly degrading situation where she would die like all her children or did she do the most pragmatic thing and leave. As long as she lives. Dragonkind can’t be wiped out. Her precious cargo will hatch dragons again. From GeorgeGlass on October 27, 2018 Synth A bit repetitive, but I like the combination of fantasy and sci-fi. I also enjoyed the way that Synth (like a benevolent version of Skynet) weaponizes construction vehicles to defend its creators. Thank you, Synth is indeed similar only its aggression and hostility are directed at everyone who isn’t a watcher. Avoid, That northern continent on the other side of the world and don’t harm the watchers and you will be okay. Step foot on that continent, however… Thankfully, the southern continent is isolated by currents and distance. Nautical/Maritime Circumnavigation won’t reveal that Oceania has another continent. So that leaves mainly the dragons as the only ones who know about it. And they aren’t going to share what happened there. Ignorance and safety is bliss… At least for the next ice age and two thousand years.

Céad míle fáilte romhat!

Will there be a Xmas one cause I’ve already got an idea.

An Old God so nearly free decides to not break free of its prison but rather bends the bars just a bit and uses its tentacles for some fun. To the dismay of the monastery and its clergy. With the nunnery nearby sure to be visited next. The Lord of Hatred possesses one of his cultists and woos an avowed demon hunter determined to kill him and his cult. Mixing business with pleasure has always held certain risks. Unicorns wage war on vampires The god of war is tricked by his lover the goddess of love into seducing his most favored warrior a father discovers his only child is a possessive demon. the cruelty of children mixed with raw demonic power A princess gets bored so she charms a dragon into abducting her chaste, courtly love knight protector A virus turns all androids and robots into sex crazed machines while its up to sexbots to save their creators from an orgasmic fate. Games no longer are mere games but objects of life or death as even friendly games of chess or checkers results in the death of the losers. Deimiurges rush to complete a universe on time as the deadline approaches. Harem wars. A world where one’s harem size determines their power. A lesbian is cursed with the power to seduce any man is encountered by a gay man cursed with the ability to seduce any woman. Each with the ability the other craves. With Ragnarok fast approaching Hel goes fuck that and takes her siblings to the mortal world to live happily as mostly human. Mostly functional family. Freya provokes the ire of Aphrodite and this time no mere golden apple is going to cut it. Hera, Queen of the gods leaves Olympus for the mortal world where she unexpectantly meets the god of divorce. Aliens invade earth only to discover that lust is contagious. bored as hell the god of destruction tries to create something for once. An elder god decides to save the world despite the small fleshy things on it seemingly determined to destroy it. There is a secret war behind the scenes as people with their own private dimensions. These lords and Ladies of their own demesnes try to absorb each other holdings because only one can have their own complete world. While others are content to enjoy their own personal fragments of one. Only werewolves can find their one true love. Since they are the only beings capable of seeing the invisible threads of fates that binds two people together. Turns out gods are real, the latest tech makes it abundantly clear… And then the gods take notice.

Her innocence. Sofi is a kinslayer now. A la cinderella gone bad.

From PlagueClover on October 26, 2018 Synth by InvidiaRed Your writing style is quite unique. I was uncertain about it at first, but as I got into the story, I found that this unconventional, robotic voice you took on for this was effective in establishing the atmosphere. There were some technical issues. Mostly just missing punctuation and some sentences that could be simplified to help the reader follow the chaos. In all, it was a fascinating read, but Jesus Christ, poor dragons! Them fucking robot rods! Great job InvidiaRed! Thank You X.x if you could point me in the general direction of where those technical issues are. Much appreciated The near total extermination of the watchers is an indelible moment in Oceania's history. It is unfortunately for them a fixed moment. Unavoidable, through no inherent fault of their own. They are deeply enmeshed with one another in a mental internet, a shared mindscape. This is ultimately what dooms them. Since if one of them is murdered they drag everyone connected with them and the web of death unfolds exponentially and tragically. The children survive but they’re broken in ways singular minded people cannot understand. Those children eventually develop a language that is emojis and color. the watchers are inherently type 2 civilization on the kardashev scale. On an oceanic world filled with gods,monsters and magic . They are beings of knowledge. This unprovoked act by the elves screws elvenkind forever. As for foundation rods. They are a metallic alloy designed to withstand magnetic forces, friction, heat and pressure. Since using railgun tech they anchor their building deep into the earth. Those buildings aren’t going anywhere. Luckily for the dragons, it was the hypervelocity impact that killed them. To paraphrase from grand inqusition. There is one thing you must never give a watcher and that is time. For while the watchers may lose a battle or two. They will never lose a war.

I always enjoy your works.

Synth is posted It was either now or never. Cause I was getting losing confidence. Same event different perspectives.

I’m loving the stories they’re great Im gonna re edit somemore cause self doubt backstabbed me

Ah. The tape hungers.

I’ve been writing on this blessed website for years. I usually delete stories if I’ve written like a couple chapters and I don’t get many hits. There’s only a single story that I’ve kept. Grand Inquisition. It's just with life got in the way. Haha. Its pretty much on near-permanent hiatus. I put alot of effort into it. I mean I got two, three chapters left its just. Its like I got the finale planned but well...the journey to said finale is just… Not me any more. Or rather not whom I was or am currently. A bittersweet journey’s end is still bitter.

Dragon scales while protective are not a match for hypervelocity missiles nor self-replicating nanomachines.

Excellant, Its got prideful elves conducting genocide. Dragons being subject bullet hell. A creation that fights back fun for the whole family. Wooo! Now i’ll edit it and slowly drive myself insane in the meantime.

So do you post a link here if you finished?

A solid choice. There are a couple of good ones. Like Candy.

I mean, grand inquisition isn’t my first but. I’d have to take it down and re-upload.

The first section completed. Summary: A creation witnesses the breaking of its creators.

Yep

Synth Decided that I’m going to write on one of Oceania’s pivotal moments. Birthday’s coming up so I decided why not Lore Bomb? Muhahahaha