InvidiaRed

I did mange to find a back up copy so I'm back on track not only am I'm going to publish when I find time but I'm going to lengthen it and sadly it won't be today schoolwork and all so consider it a very late Xmas gift when it is finished

Hi I'm looking for a Beta for my first story Surviving Lust what happens when a Succubus falls for a vampire slayer? All sorts of things This story is a slash with M/F as well Action/ Violence I need An openminded Beta to proof read my stories and someone with great grammar and punctuation usages and( maybe spelling I'm not perfect) as well as someone to converse on ideas and such My email is available upon request InvidiaRed

I finished it but I missplaced it on one of my many thumbdrives have mercy I'll post it as soon as I unmisplace it

Winter Break just started so if I start now you might get it Chirstmas day

thanks

* raises hand* I could take a crack at it.... during christmas break if your willing to wait that long

I sprayed hot chocolate from reading that

um... I hate to break it to you but one of my friends has an ear fetish. She once told me she liked how it felt down there

Hello well I'm new (obviously) but hopefully I get to know some people and create and or inspire some fanfiction XD I fell in love with Fanfiction and so here I am

Fandom: Orginial Name of character: Bloodwing Silvershine Race of character: Shifter ( think of humans with a secondary form) Age of character: 18 summers Height of character: 5'4 Weight of character: 185 Brief background of character: he's an inhabitant of the Hive islands and is sent on quest personally by the queen herself. To see if anyone survived mankind's civilization's collapse as well as gather information on the outside world Character's position or job: Knight of silverswarm Strengths/Skills: Swarm shifting and surivival training Are these skills typical of the fandom? If not, why?: yes and no while there are other shifters around. Swarm shifting isn't changing into one other form it's a transformation into dozens or even hundreds of the same creature mostly likely insects Weaknesses/Bad habits: eating things most people find disgusting and being a scholar. He also trusts everyone (growing up without deception will do that to you) Distinctive features, if any: flies are always around him Are these features unique in the fandom? If so, why?: not really every shifter has a trait that gives a clue to what thier secondary form is Connections to canon characters (if any): The Hive Queen as well as his mentor Albator Ravenwing How does your character get on with those around him/her?: He is respectful towards those in postions of power and those of advanced age. And is generally live and let live towards others What does the other characters think of your character when they met her/him? Considering he's being allowed to go outside the islands he could be reacted to anywhere from fascination to outright hatred and everything in between. I'm new to AFF and this idea poped into my head.

the best way to learn about futuristic socities would be to read stories set in the future like science fiction. Exactly, how far into the future is this society in a decade? a century/centuries? because it's kinda important if its in the far future where nano's help keep you body in shape and diesase is a myth or even has recreational purposes then society has to reflect that like (Ex: like getting a newsfeed on your data displayer that someone actully got sick and people start freaking out because its unheard of.) setting wise you have free reign from utopia to distopia maybe corporations are the true power in your setting maybe the people are just like us ... With better toys

She is realistic no sue that I can see however, I think you need to differenate between vampiric immortality. and true immortality since you protray them as hard to kill but not impossible to achieve.