InvidiaRed

Her innocence. Sofi is a kinslayer now. A la cinderella gone bad.

From PlagueClover on October 26, 2018 Synth by InvidiaRed Your writing style is quite unique. I was uncertain about it at first, but as I got into the story, I found that this unconventional, robotic voice you took on for this was effective in establishing the atmosphere. There were some technical issues. Mostly just missing punctuation and some sentences that could be simplified to help the reader follow the chaos. In all, it was a fascinating read, but Jesus Christ, poor dragons! Them fucking robot rods! Great job InvidiaRed! Thank You X.x if you could point me in the general direction of where those technical issues are. Much appreciated The near total extermination of the watchers is an indelible moment in Oceania's history. It is unfortunately for them a fixed moment. Unavoidable, through no inherent fault of their own. They are deeply enmeshed with one another in a mental internet, a shared mindscape. This is ultimately what dooms them. Since if one of them is murdered they drag everyone connected with them and the web of death unfolds exponentially and tragically. The children survive but they’re broken in ways singular minded people cannot understand. Those children eventually develop a language that is emojis and color. the watchers are inherently type 2 civilization on the kardashev scale. On an oceanic world filled with gods,monsters and magic . They are beings of knowledge. This unprovoked act by the elves screws elvenkind forever. As for foundation rods. They are a metallic alloy designed to withstand magnetic forces, friction, heat and pressure. Since using railgun tech they anchor their building deep into the earth. Those buildings aren’t going anywhere. Luckily for the dragons, it was the hypervelocity impact that killed them. To paraphrase from grand inqusition. There is one thing you must never give a watcher and that is time. For while the watchers may lose a battle or two. They will never lose a war.

I always enjoy your works.

Synth is posted It was either now or never. Cause I was getting losing confidence. Same event different perspectives.

I’m loving the stories they’re great Im gonna re edit somemore cause self doubt backstabbed me

Ah. The tape hungers.

I’ve been writing on this blessed website for years. I usually delete stories if I’ve written like a couple chapters and I don’t get many hits. There’s only a single story that I’ve kept. Grand Inquisition. It's just with life got in the way. Haha. Its pretty much on near-permanent hiatus. I put alot of effort into it. I mean I got two, three chapters left its just. Its like I got the finale planned but well...the journey to said finale is just… Not me any more. Or rather not whom I was or am currently. A bittersweet journey’s end is still bitter.

Dragon scales while protective are not a match for hypervelocity missiles nor self-replicating nanomachines.

Excellant, Its got prideful elves conducting genocide. Dragons being subject bullet hell. A creation that fights back fun for the whole family. Wooo! Now i’ll edit it and slowly drive myself insane in the meantime.

So do you post a link here if you finished?

A solid choice. There are a couple of good ones. Like Candy.

I mean, grand inquisition isn’t my first but. I’d have to take it down and re-upload.

The first section completed. Summary: A creation witnesses the breaking of its creators.

Yep

Synth Decided that I’m going to write on one of Oceania’s pivotal moments. Birthday’s coming up so I decided why not Lore Bomb? Muhahahaha

Got an idea too. Will start writing when I get home from my double shift.

Oooooh. This sounds fun. Alas, what lies we weave with masks. For which is the true face?

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