InvidiaRed
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Watched this with my little niece then this happened. When Disney goes dark they don’t kid around.
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Define poison. Cause filthy substances technically count on a count of guerilla warfare.
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Ghoulneedle made past a 1000
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Oh, I’ll definitely get around to it sooner or later. Going purely by length, that thing looks to be your star attraction.
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Lol.
Its third. Conquest is 2nd
and Grand inquisition is highest
All time would be Demonic for some reason.
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InBrightestDay's (Originals) Review Reply & Discussion Thread
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This is one of the worst ideas in the history of forever. Short term gain is not worth. The vindictive and total opposition long term. People get patient, they get clever and then just at the moment of triumph or weakness and then they come at you with everything in a total I'm taking you with me mentality. In summation... Just don't go after people's loved ones. Its a bad idea in a history of bad ideas. -
Update, premade covers aren’t going to cut it Dx
If I have to shell out the money I want it exactly as I pictured it.
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My novel. haha
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Sweet! I didn’t know you had a novel. What’s it about? I’m not asking for a complete plot synopsis or anything, but what’s the genre, for instance?
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Lichlove- TBA
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The road back starts when you realize what your mind is telling you and what everyone else telling you are so different that they cannot be reconciled. Kevin in a sense sees her in a manner similar to that of her creator. Its really a profound moment when she sees what she had allowed herself to forget. That a human of all things helped plant her feet on the road back. An interesting note on Wrath. Eparlegna is saying without meaning to is that Kevin is scared. Because at the root of lashing out is panic and anxiety and primal fear. A potent flammable cocktail so easy to set a flame. Well to be fair. Dead Space 3 had nowhere else it could go. Brethern moons harvesting earth and all. It wasn’t like it there would be some last second rescue. Issac got tentacled in the end. lol. -
Writing a dark lord is hard Dx
When they are the main character.
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There’s that famous old list of important Evil Overlord tips too:
https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/EvilOverlordList
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Sometimes people say I’m too harsh on myself. Then they read one of my stories and say I’m not harsh enough.
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I’d wait for march. Cause you probably got stuck in the backlog but that doesn’t mean rejection.
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catharsis takes many forms. I enjoy the story too much to stop now. That’d be a thousand times worse than taking a bookmark out and promptly reading the last page of a book and declaring you’ve finished the story. tsuj hctaw ruoy knird rof ehs yam ton be eb a dneirf -
Blurbs are turning out to be my kryptonite Dx
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I don’t know if that’s a problem. I had the summary/blurb for WitS be from Kevin’s PoV, but the story isn’t all from his perspective.
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The job of the blurb is to get a potential reader to say, “Hey… hmmm...” and to look at the book’s summary—that one to two paragraph bit from the flyleaf or back of the book that clinches the sale.
Your blurb got me interested enough to look at a summary (when you have one, of course!). I’d say it did its job, right there.
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Valentine’s is just around the corner Haha.
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Slow and steady wins the race. I think I just took my first baby steps to be an Author.
ISBNs Checkmarked.
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Congratulations on your first step!
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*Shin Megami Tensei Digital Devil Saga Flashbacks* Demi-Fiend oh god... Well why don’t you use Fall/ Decension or even Damned to describe them? Apotheosis Or Ascendance is a state of becoming more. Wouldn't it make more sense for the augmented human to have Fallen? Sure said human is more powerful but in doing so said human is much less than what they were. They are Damned. (Made more poignant if they willfully chose power over any chance of salvation.) -
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There’s a list of agencies for folks outside the USA too –
https://www.isbn-international.org/agencies
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The price drops if you buy multiple ISBNs. You’d need one for a paperback edition, one for the ebook edition, and so on, so it can be cost effective to purchase them 10 at a time.
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From ANON - Makersc on January 29, 2019 I love that the main POV is the dark lords rather than that of a hero who is supposed to slay the dark lord it’s a nice change, it’s also very well written. Keep up the good work. Elf Death is indeed the main character. It’s actually rather hard to write him because I don’t want him to be mary sue. I don’t want to over play his flaws and I do want him to be likeable. Or at the very least so that his motivations are understandable. He’s a old thing. A potent thing. He doesn’t expect easy victory but he has already conquered the continent twice. From here on out. The carnage starts and he doesn’t intend to stop until his throne is returned to him.
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From InBrightestDay on January 27, 2019 I like this one. I expected something kind of sad or emotional, but there's a surprising amount of humor to it, especially the entire Hitler bit, which makes me wonder if the teen with the Word above his head comes from some alternate timeline or if it's just an effect of being outside the stable bubble. (Whichever you consider funnier. She’s saying don’t be a monster. What he’s hearing is don’t be successful.) I also like the way you describe Tinarah's mental illness. It's not that she feels sad, it's that doesn't feel anything, which is its own kind of horror. (It’s mostly from personal experience…. I very nearly didn’t survive highschool. Anxiety and depression fed on one another till it was unbearable.My parents caught me before I contemplated the unthinkable) The one thing I would criticize is that sometimes the way the lines are broken up creates doubt about their implication. As an example, this part here... “Yes? No? I don’t even know any more.” She reluctantly admitted aloud as she sat next to the teenager. ...is easy enough to figure out. The top line, the quote is what she is reluctantly admitting. The problem is that because of that format, this line... “I feel dead inside. My emotions are muted at best. How can you possibly say that? You bear a word of creation above your brow. You are a god… And….I am nothing.” Tinarah angrily shouted. Thrilled at the momentary eclipse her angry had surged. She felt it even now slip away. Drained by the foul ennui that had poisoned her. ...is now harder to understand. Did she angrily shout that she's nothing, or did she say calmly that she's nothing (there's a period there, after all, rather than an exclamation point) and then just yell wordlessly? I can't really tell because of the way the story's lines are broken up. That criticism aside, I did still enjoy the story, both the banter between the two characters and the implications of a much wider story outside of this one. Thank you I’ll fix it for clarity.
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From Ayrick on January 01, 2019 Damian is so out of his depth. Where is gouhlneedle at? Passion is a hell of a drug. Ghoulneedle is out of cold for the next few chapters.
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I survived two hellish days.
Between Jevoah witnesses getting thrown out of the mall because they think holidays are evil and santa is secretly satan near children.
To witnessing the dregs of society I can safely say i’ve lost quite a bit of hope towards humanity but not quite to nihilism yet.
Anywho hope yall had a good holiday.
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QuoteThank you BronxWench, blessed Be
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Beastiary coming along nicely. :3
