InvidiaRed
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Sunday night at the earliest I’m afraid. I want to proofread it again (perhaps the curse of over editing.)
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7200 minutes from now.
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So…
What do you do when your brother disowns your parents?
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I suppose it would depend largely on why he disowned them.
My brother and I came damned closed to disowning our sister at one point. We literally did not speak to her for a few years. We’ve all reconciled since, but being family doesn’t give anyone a free pass to cross lines, at least for me.
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I’m just gonna keep my head down and stay out of his latest fascination with bridge burning.
As far as I can discern. There isn’t a reason.
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Sounds like the wisest course by far, especially if he’s in the habit of bridge burning.
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Seen this one! It’s a good skit. There’s been a few fanfics have done the concept seriously which may be more worrying.
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Its that time of year again
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Survived Thanksgiving.
Still, feel pity for those working Black Friday.
Everyone knows Cyber Monday is where its at.
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Amazon warehouse staff gonna forget what it’s like to piss.
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Strange dream I had. To take a death that was not yours. Cause the option is apparently there to die in another’s stead. All I know it was of the utmost importance that they live.
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I’m up for it. It doesn’t even have to be important for them to live tbh.
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Might go with that one I suggested awhile ago. Santa, his gimp, wife and the quest to find his next ho.
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Halfway through mine
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There’s something to be said for writing a sex scene and suddenly get waylaid cause you don’t know the growing season for olive trees.
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“My characters are happy. They got way laid in an Olive grove.”
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There’s also the possibility to be laid by the Olive grove.
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So who is hosting Christmas?
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From GeorgeGlass on October 31, 2019 Immunda Your style of just one or two sentences per paragraph is unusual, but it didn't really bother me. Although some of the sentence fragments did (eg, "A disturbing warbling laugh"). I like the expression "Gods pass me by." Lots of Halloween-appropriate imagery. I think the most vivid was the burnt baby crawling out of the hole, "gurgling happily as its blackened flesh crackled." The Mortane Pantheon runs on appeasement. Each requires specific sacrifices for the privilege of being… Unmolested. A privilege they can(and do) revoke at whim. Or to be even bigger jerks “Give” Their favored to another member. So even if you do appease one for the moment. Well, you didn’t appease another and the cycle continues. Being favored is largely seen as a fate much worse than death. “Gods pass me by” Is the closest to prayer all the inhabitants know. They’re pleading for the gods to ignore them. The lucky few who manage to flee Mortane are struck by a hardline cultural differences. Highly superstitious, Largely illiterate and dangerously xenophobic. Meeting the larger world and surviving is a challenge. But those who survive all share one thing in common they dare not return. Otok- child sacrifice by immolation, The burning of knowledge and places of learning. Zuqvi- Her appeasement requires the ritual murder of adults by children. Xiljh- The child must slay the parent they love most while it watches and then let it drink from their youthful heart-blood. Vzfeb- The willful spread of sexual disease and the brutal execution of healers. Etc…
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its midrange fast food. Kinda harsh to say hell on earth.
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From PlagueClover on October 29, 2019 Immunda by InvidiaRed Okay, so your style always takes me a moment to get used to. All the quick paragraphs and snaps from one action to the next. The pacing is lightning quick, but man... Okay, I shuddered. Quite a bit at the end there. Though, I kinda have to note that the moment you used 'Justicar' it suddenly became Mass Effect in my brain lol. Anyway, this was violent and horrific and dark, and so very fucking twisted. Which is nice, you know, to get an expresso shot of some super messed up horror right before Halloween, so this does an excellent job of that. Well done! Justicar was the best way i could to paint what I wanted as quickly as possible but its accurate. Haha. Didn’t want to use paladin. Overused.
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From JayDee on October 28, 2019 Immunda by InvidiaRed …thought I might have some missionary position jokes but, holy fuck, another one making me Holy Fuck at he end. That is one crapsack shithole of a nation you’ve got there, but an interesting one as well. The kind of wham moment here after she thinks she’s cleansed the altar… that’s some fucking good horror that is. I feel bad for the baby like. The ending was really grim. So good job on that, too! I sure as fuck didn’t see it coming. Y’all are taking the horror seriously this year! Mortane is a hell on earth for a reason. Yeah. Nothing like cleansing an evil god out of an alter just for another to be ready and waiting.
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Have to say. Got to respect Asesemana
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Kinda weird that Tarnished Lion is my most viewed story. Surreal.
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No, It does make sense. Cockroaches offend the whole swarm principal in our brain. When you see an adult cockroach it means there are more nearby the you don't see. And that uncertainty opens straight to fear of the unknown.
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I’ve learned alot from this about myself. Walking biological syringes are just a straight no for me. In addition to Weevils, Kissing Bugs, Lice, Bed bugs and probably anything else in that Class.
