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From JayDee on October 16, 2020 Part 6! SPOILERS IN REVIEW Harry was going slow and steady as possible. He kept his wand at steady as possible Ooof! I’ll fix it. Lines that are the same in porn scenes as non porn scenes Definitely more of a slow and steady chapter for that, no rampaging flesh hungry monsters here – I liked the take on using magic to open the hole, get the seeds, and then close it again. I laughed out loud at the one line “Granted Harry knew Argus was probably into blokes. At least that was what Harry thought. Argus took him to the root of his dick with a fervent gusto that made him reasonably sure.” Harry isn’t dumb but… If you read the stories he’s well… Unobservant, Oblivious and Occasionally foolish. So it’ll all balances out What you’d want to call more than circumstantial evidence there. But what’s this darkness hanging about? Is Argus hiding something devious? Well, gotta have some conflict for stories. Foreshadowing DUN DUN DUH!!! Nice descriptions around the Patronus too!

From DeathLingers on October 14, 2020 i thought this would be alpha harry guess not. concidering he somehow lost control over voldemort on the first ch ive lost interest, refuse to read a possible uke harry. well i can try again later when im not tired and annoyed Thank you for the review. This particular story will probably not be your cup of tea then. This particular dark lord Harry is Versatile/ Leaning towards Powerbottom. He’s slowly coming into his power and all but he’s definitely the one in charge.

You tease you.

Yay!

Just a preview at the moment takes place right after Temporary and the Winter Holiday short Powdered Sugar <3

Tricked Lucifer thought there would be no consequences for his casino fun. TBA

As when would the new thread be posted?

That is an excellent idea. She’s broadcasting on all frequencies in a polite manner. The problem is entire system is an unofficial war-zone and she may or maynot be responsible for grief for all sides involved. “ I don’t want to alarm anyone but Hesperides is gone and my transponder is broadcasting on all frequencies. I am your hostess and inadvertant dj for this evening and the first song of the evening is Rescue Me. Followed by I Need A Hero”

Okay, I’m first up. If a human being in a spacesuit gets too close to a star before rescue. Ala inadvertently vented off into space already in a spacesuit but too late to reach the escape pods from a asteroid collision with the space station and essentially slingshotted towards the sun. I know there should be some thermal/radiation damage. But is there anything else I should be aware of?

Avoid the silver spoon route, If he’s seeking affluence enough to resort to this kind of tactics He’s probably either not affluent himself or from some minor house/lineage. Best route would be if he somehow managed to not only devise his twisted tactics but force his way to the top. He might be a lazy pervert but at the very least he shouldn’t be stupid.

I adored it <3

Yes, Exactly a bad person with a bad special ability.

So bad powers, bad person?

Ah. So more of a harem protagonist then.

A)One of the darkest aspects of Harry Potter’s world is that love potions are readily abundant and heavily used to the point there had to be several wizards/witches who had to develop cures or other tricks to circumvent. D&D/ Pathfinder/ D20 systems have charm magic which forces the afflicted to view you, your words and actions in the most favorable ways barring blatantly suicidal orders or outright harmful ones. Aka. Best friend forevers at least until the effect wears off. The Bigger Badder version with a prison record Is Dominate Person/ Monster in which the effect is outright mindcontrol. Both of these completely compromise a victim’s free will and belong to Coercion. The former implies a widespread date rape culture in which witches are the targeted demographic if by the sheer variety young witches are given access to is any indication. The latter is one of the reasons why the horny bard trope is so abundant. There’s no way to mince words, Any method of enforcing your desires on others is a moral event horizon. They’re a villain.