JayDee

While I sure don't have fans, the concept of expanding the viewable sections makes a heck of a lot of sense to me!

From the reviews and the in-story impreg, probably a pregnant Felicia sex scene... Maybe with some other physically unpleasant hobo types joining in. The guy who requested the couple of chapters of anal for did a cool Felicia / Ian picture based on a bit he liked in the first chapter for me, which was a pleasant surprise. I am currently working on a Wonder Woman story as an exchange with another writer so I dunno if I'll ever get back to Felicia any time soon.

Wow - didn't realise it could save that much time. Just been through and deleted all of the flames - there's a few negative reviews left, but they're more than just "gaaah!" "ugh" and the aforementioned "die in a fire"s so that's okays. I know the difference between the acceptable negative review and TOS abusing flame. Hardly any reviews left!

No, it's not a good thing - but as I said above when it happened there or other snark sites I just laughed it off. I recognise I am one of the worst non-intentional-troll-bad writers on this archive (in terms of themes, quality and sheer repetitive dullness) so it would be entirely churlish of me to be annoyed by negative feedback. about half to three quarters of all my reviews have been pure flames of the 'Die In A Fire' variety, and I had previously left them there to show no hard feelings, but now that flames are being deleted as part of the review boards clean up I keep meaning to go back and do my bit by deleting them all, and save the clean up crew a few seconds work!

Yep - couldn't find the link before for some reason, but his other one of mine was here: http://www.toplessrobot.com/2008/10/fan_fi...nd_the_puss.php ...it was an interesting surprise to come back too after a couple weeks away! I have had my scrawlings violated twice by a droid with its baps out. On the plus side, I got one of the 20 honorable mentions in the site's Robot Haiku contest!

Good for you! Enjoy your increased freedom!

I'm pretty certain he can argue, amongst other things, 'Fair use'. There are assloads of snark sites out there, some direct link, some don't. Livejournal is heaving with them! Two more with a deal of AFF stories quoted etc are www.whygodwhy.org and www.toplessrobot.com (the latter being a nerd blog with a weekly fanfiction review - they did mine eg here http://www.toplessrobot.com/2008/04/fan_fi..._can_take_t.php and another story another time. [Edit - I actually love the hell outa topless robot. They have great video and picture links. As far as the reviews go, they're actually considerably less harsh than the section on WGW, where the users have generally called for me to be strung up and mutilated. When I saw the first screencap of the new Walking Dead TV series on Topless Robot I was squeeing like a schoolgirl and looking for something to glomp.] If he's/TR's users are acting like a troll on the site than that's something you're in a good position to deal with, but trying to get alll the off site quoters/snarkers/MSTers and so on moved could be problematic. When It happened to me here and on WGW and other places I tend to laugh [edit 2 - Another issue with going after offsite things like this, well, every time some legal representative has tried it with somethingawful.com or worse 4chan they've ended up with their letters/emails posted up and gained a whole lot more un-wanted attention from trolls, while finding that the mocking is protected by the whole fair use thing as well as various other apparant legal nicities. I do sympathise with the authors who don't care to see their works ripped apart like that on topless robot or the many other places doing much the same, but honestly, as mean as its ever got I've never seen anything quite as bad as the mainstream critics gave the movie Gigli. Didn't realise the topless robot folks had started flaming on this site though, back when they did my stories I only knew because I already followed the blog. I have a minor Star Wars character as an avater so I qualify as a nerd anyhow!]

Just wanted to say that if there was an award for great use of the smileys, the first post in this thread ought to be up for it

The Zeta Project was a spin off series from Batman Beyond. Didn't last long. Zee is the nickname for Zeta a robot/android, who appeared in an episode or two of Batman Beyond and Ro was another main character in TZP.

Tim Drake/Robin and Nightwing were in The New Batman Adventures Cartoon (which folowed Batman TAS), which doesn't seem to have it's own cartoons section. Have some emo cartoon Nightwing, from one of the series': White Rabbits - The story is about the Batman villain, the Mad Hatter, reading Alice in Wonderland, doing some drugs to the music of Jefferson Airplane and having homicidal urges. It's a crossover insofar as the character of the Mad Hatter himself was stolen by DC and turned into a crazy mind controlling child molestor when they got all grim, but his stories have featured Alice iconography that borders on theft. Barbara Gordon was Batgirl in a bunch of cartoons. I dunno about online but I bet cartoon network has repeats you could see. Actually, that's Babs in the nightwing above. Dick really wanted a mullet in those days... There have been Batman cartoons since at least the 1970s. I honestly can't see where you're getting at the ones under cartoon needing to be under comic, since there isn't enough detail to say whether the author was diddling herself to a comic or a cartoon. Superhero comics usual skewing to a male buying audience would suggest cartoons and movies are generally a more likely source tho' I uh, I get that there aren't many people to moderate and administrate the AFF archive, but I wonder if your time might be spent more productively on subjects you're familiar with, rather than checking every story, running some web search and hoping to get it right. Sort of, if you actually know the topic well then it's a great contribution to say that something's in the wrong place, but if you don't and an admin goes and moves it and then moves it back when the author points out some evidence, then it's yours, theirs and the authors time wasted... Wow, I sound like a dick.

Title: Kill-O-Gram Author: JayDee Rating: Adult++ Summary: Kissogram Amy Pond is raped and strangled by a lusty former customer before the raggedy Doctor ever returns for her... Feedback: Yes, please. Codes: Abuse, COMPLETE, Contro, Death, HJ, Language, M/F, MCD, N/C, OC, Oneshot, Other, PWP, Violence Fandom: Dr Who URL: http://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095544 Thank you all for reading this promotion. If this sounds like your kind of story, have a read! ~JayDee

Sounds like Flesh Seraph's Dickgirl Washroom to me: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600098118

Title: Black Death Author: JayDee Rating: Adult++ Summary: Ten angry and sadistic black rapists violate and kill Kitty Pryde on Magneto's orders. Feedback: Yes, please. Codes: Abuse, Anal, Bigotry, ChallengeFic, COMPLETE, Contro, Death, Humil, Language, M/F, MCD, Minor(16 years old), Moresome, N/C, Nec, OC, Oneshot, Oral, Other, PWP, Racist, Scat, SoloM, Tort, Violence, WS Fandom: X-Men: Evolution URL: http://xmen.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090763 Thank you all for reading this promotion. If this sounds like your kind of story, have a read! ~JayDee

Try a simple one - start like a process map - restrict each section to one short paragraph, and have only two choices on each paragraph, with lots of "ending" or "go back to start" to restrict further progress on branches. Get skeleton plots worked out on this, then go back and write more detail etc into the paragraphs if you want. I think there are some pretty detailed guides already on the internet - try google to see if you can get more detailed tips. I tried one about three years ago but didn't really get anywhere.

"Is that calamari in your pocket, or are you just pleased to see me?"

It's a little too niche for me, I fear. Must be someone to help ya though.

It really depends what you write - to take an example from looking at my hits, a story about a major Harry Potter character fucking a dog is inexplicably popular, while other topics are somewhat less so.

The second one sounds like possibly the greatest idea for a Harry Potter fanfiction I have ever heard here. I hope someone finds it for you so I can have a read too!

I certainly couldn't afford to spend any on it if I were to need access today.

WHOOHOOO! I don't get to look in here for a few days, and when I come back there's a story I've been looking forward too I have posted a review on the story for ya

I kept meaning to write Hermione and her dad, but never got around to it... Can't remember seeing any others.

Sadly this may be the case since I have seen folks here identify stories from far less detail before. Keep checking back tho because you might get lucky.

I am pretty sure Pjurado did some with both of 'em in at the same time, but I don't think he has stories on here so try his subpage on www.greyarchive.org - password is on the forum there (free!) For just Lara, Deathstalker has three good ones with strong peril (The story Tomb Raider - Breaking & Entering has no snuff, the other two do) See his page here - the Tomb Raider stories are clearly marked! - http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/authors.php?no=6932 EDIT - I feel kinda silly now! Just realised I already recommended DS in that other thread, so you'd maybe have already seen his stories! Well, maybe the PJ stuff'll be what you want.

Oh, that old excuse! If I had a penny for every time I heard the "I was only at the brothel to brew potions" line...

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