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  1. This fic would take place before the movie, back before Neo when Trinity would still be seeking out Bluepills and the One. The scenario would be something like this: Trinity is on a mission that is compromised when she falls into a trap where she is affected by a program that temporarily robs her of her ability to bend the rules of the Matrix/any martial arts programming she learned. She learns from Tank that he can overwrite it, but it would take fifty minutes. So in the mean time, she tries to hide/find a phone. The nearest one is at an old warehouse, so she goes there. She steps in there and looks for the phone. Just as she sees it in a corner, she gets sprayed with knockout gas. When she comes to, she’s leg-cuffed to a table in a basement interrogation room, captured by a random bluepill security guard who works alone. This security guard is thoroughly unattractive, hairy, and overweight, the antithesis of Trinity’s beauty and toned physique. The guard explains that while he doesn’t know why she’s wanted, he knows there are cops/agents out there looking for her, and offers her a choice: to spread her legs for him and he will let her go, or otherwise he will alert them and turn them over. Trinity is helpless because of the program infecting her, and knows being turned out means death. Her cell phone has been taken from her, but she remembers she has around thirty minutes left, so she has no choice but to endure the guard’s lusts until then. The main erotic point in the story is the situational humiliation at Trinity’s expense. In the Matrix, she’d normally be able to take out any non-agent, and we all know what a huge player she is in a bigger game being played. But here she is, being taken not by any all-powerful agent or programming, but a random bluepill mook of a security guard. He is completely ignorant of how powerful and important a woman he has in his hands: to him, she is just powerless woman that fell under his control by extreme luck, who will be a means of finally satisfying his blueballs. The fact that he’s so unattractive and unfit makes for an erotic contrast with the beauty and toned body of Trinity. She would be forced to strip, then bent over the table and fucked, watching herself being taken in the two-way mirror by this ugly, ignorant slob. Trinity tries to block it out by just remembering that this is just a simulated reality. However, as the guard (who happens to be very well endowed), ruts on her, she's slowly overtaken by the sensations she experiences are something she has not experienced for a long time, given she probably has no time for it in the real world. She gradually begins to enjoy it, albeit silently. The guard could force her to moan for him as well. The pleasure for her is such that she begins to respond genuinely, thrusting her hips back to meet him, vocalizing sounds, etc. Eventually, he squirts his seed deep inside her, while unintentionally bringing her to orgasm as well. After they are done, she feels the effects of the programming wear off. She breaks free of her bonds, and considers killing the guard, but after experiencing mixed emotions, decides against it and just runs for the phone still naked, making it just in time. She keeps quiet about her experience to the rest of the crew, while the bluepill has the memory of the mysterious woman he came across… The viewpoint could begin with Trinity, and we could get glimpses of the guard's POV, mostly his marveling at his fortune and how good his first time is...and taking arrogant pleasure in satisfying her with his crude but effective attentions. If this sounds good, hit me up so we further flesh it out.
  2. I'm sure most people know about the Dick Tracy series, be it the classic comic strips, the movies from the 40's, that one movie made in 1990, etc. A main supporting character is Tess Trueheart (Tracy), GF and later wife, who's supposed to be a blonde knockout of a woman. Now, countless times, she gets mixed up in her man's crimefighting, and been at a villain's mercy, be it a Big Bad or some low level thugs. It'd be interesting to see someone take a shot at a noncon/reluc with this classical character. Now, it'd be boring if some villain just has her held captive and does the whole "Bring the woman to me!" thing. An more interesting story would be based on a strip I once read: a young criminal, seeking to avenge his criminal girlfriend's death (died trying to escape), quietly breaks into the empty Tracy household, intending to ambush the detective when he comes home. However, Tess arrives first, and so the criminal takes her captive and simply waits for Tracy. In the real story, Tess manages to set herself free and take him out long before Tracy gets there. In my idea's reality, perhaps the young criminal has not gotten laid since his girlfriend's death, and convinces himself to switch his plan to one of poetic justice: since Dick Tracy took away his woman, it's only fair if Tess is given to him as means of reparation. He pulls this off by thwarting her escape attempt, and then threatening to go through with his plan to ambush Tracy, unless she gives herself to him. And she does, right there in the house...and throwing in a twist of cuckoldry, she could enjoy it (since Dick Tracy is always away fighting crime, bedroom life couldn've been less than stellar). And it strangely works...the villain decides that this was a way better revenge...and leaves. That's my basic idea. If you wanted to really screw things up for Tess, she could get pregnant from it....or get blackmailed for more sex...etc, Ive decided the main driving force for this story is sexual humiliation...not in the physical sense, but more the psychological sense. Here are some bigger examples: 1) The obvious one: Tess is coerced into giving up her body to a villain, in order to save her husband from a sure to be fatal ambush. No, the villain is not a powerful crime boss....this is a C-grade villain who hasn't had much luck with any criminal exploits in the comic strip. Yet, in terms of revenge, he's going to surpass every other villain by taking the detective's stacked hot blonde wife. This is happening in their own home, in their own bedroom. 2) An element of doubt on Tess's part: she's only going through with this to save her husband. But she's going to be haunted by the thought of whether she could have resisted in any other way, taken a third option. 3) Cliche, but she's going to end up enjoying the intercourse. Due to the villain inevitably being better hung/better in bed than the detective. 4) The villain is Brow Jr. (son of a famous villain, his deformity being a large brow with many folds). Now, my idea is that because of his deformity, no woman would have him, and he only got with his now-dead GF because she also had a villain-deformity. The contrast between his ugly self and Tess's beautiful figure would factor into the humiliation. The one only real small detail I'd request is the 'turning point' moment, where Brow Jr realizes Tracy's wife is stacked and ravishing her would be a better idea....he 's directing her up the stairs to lock her up, and climbing up after her, he finds himself suddenly facing a really nice ass in tight capris. That's when it hits him. And perhaps, he could reference this moment later on in the story, maybe to taunt Tess. I can totally envision the story starting off with her waking up next to Dick Tracy and realizing that he'd slipped in, late from police work again. She walks to the bathroom for a shower....and stops to admire how despite her age, she's still got a body and face to kill for....and mourns how her husband doesn't seem to have time to appreciate it while it's still there. And decides that she'll wear something sexy today.....and sets the stage for the main body of the story, where the young criminal unknowingly takes full advantage of her state. What do you think? Anyone up for writing this with me?
  3. I've always pictured Tess Trueheart in my mind as a perhaps more innocent version of this woman right here: http://www.fem.com/fileadmin/content...nackt-peta.jpg http://culturemagazine.ca/joyentsite...d/shannon2.jpg
  4. Hey everyone, For the longest time, I've wanted to have a story about Dick Tracy's knockout of a wife, Tess, get it on with one of his rogues gallery. But since the regulars are too busy to take it up as a challenge, I've decided to roll up my sleeves and try writing part of it myself. But I still would like to perhaps team up with someone to do it, as my writing experience is limited and could use input from an other. http://www2.adultfan...nreluc-request/ Above is the link to the original thread, which has all the details about the story as a base. Would anyone like to try collaborating this one out? Edit: In case the link doesn't work, here's the descrip cut and pasted: I'm sure most people know about the Dick Tracy series, be it the classic comic strips, the movies from the 40's, that one movie made in 1990, etc. A main supporting character is Tess Trueheart (Tracy), GF and later wife, who's supposed to be a blonde knockout of a woman. Now, countless times, she gets mixed up in her man's crimefighting, and been at a villain's mercy, be it a Big Bad or some low level thugs. It'd be interesting to see someone take a shot at a noncon/reluc with this classical character. Now, it'd be boring if some big name boss villain just has her held captive and does the whole "Bring the woman to me!" thing. An more interesting story would be based on a strip I once read: a young criminal, seeking to avenge his criminal girlfriend's death (died trying to escape), quietly breaks into the empty Tracy household, intending to ambush the detective when he comes home. However, Tess arrives first, and so the criminal takes her captive and simply waits for Tracy. In the real story, Tess manages to set herself free and take him out long before Tracy gets there. In my idea's reality, perhaps the young criminal has not gotten laid since his girlfriend's death, and convinces himself to switch his plan to one of poetic justice: since Dick Tracy took away his woman, it's only fair if Tess is given to him as means of reparation. He pulls this off by thwarting her escape attempt, and then threatening to go through with his plan to ambush Tracy, unless she gives herself to him. And she does, right there in the house...and throwing in a twist of cuckoldry, she could enjoy it (since Dick Tracy is always away fighting crime, bedroom life couldn've been less than stellar). And it strangely works...the villain decides that this was a way better revenge...and leaves. That's my basic idea. If you wanted to really screw things up for Tess, she could get pregnant from it....or get blackmailed for more sex...etc, Ive decided the main driving force for this story is sexual humiliation...not in the physical sense, but more the psychological sense. Here are some bigger examples: 1) The obvious one: Tess is coerced into giving up her body to a villain, in order to save her husband from a sure to be fatal ambush. No, the villain is not a powerful crime boss....this is a C-grade villain who hasn't had much luck with any criminal exploits in the comic strip. Yet, in terms of revenge, he's going to surpass every other villain by taking the detective's stacked hot blonde wife. This is happening in their own home, in their own bedroom. 2) An element of doubt on Tess's part: she's only going through with this to save her husband. But she's going to be haunted by the thought of whether she could have resisted in any other way, taken a third option. 3) Cliche, but she's going to end up enjoying the intercourse. Due to the villain inevitably being better hung/better in bed than the detective. 4) The villain is Brow Jr. (son of a famous villain, his deformity being a large brow with many folds). Now, my idea is that because of his deformity, no woman would have him, and he only got with his now-dead GF because she also had a villain-deformity. The contrast between his ugly self and Tess's beautiful figure would factor into the humiliation. The one only real small detail I'd request is the 'turning point' moment, where Brow Jr realizes Tracy's wife is stacked and ravishing her would be a better idea....he 's directing her up the stairs to lock her up, and climbing up after her, he finds himself suddenly facing a really nice ass in tight capris. That's when it hits him. And perhaps, he could reference this moment later on in the story, maybe to taunt Tess. I can totally envision the story starting off with her waking up next to Dick Tracy and realizing that he'd slipped in, late from police work again. She walks to the bathroom for a shower....and stops to admire how despite her age, she's still got a body and face to kill for....and mourns how her husband doesn't seem to have time to appreciate it while it's still there. And decides that she'll wear something sexy today.....and sets the stage for the main body of the story, where the young criminal unknowingly takes full advantage of her state.
  5. I'm just going to bump this, since this area isn't a very active section anyways. Edited some details on first post.
  6. KZ-01

    Me and my youth pastor's wife

    Red Ink, is there a way I can contact you so we can collaborate on this? Email?
  7. KZ-01

    Youth Pastor's Wife

    Awesome. Good to know that it's going. =)
  8. Okay, I'm going to admit that this was a fic premise I once tried to start but never finished....I want to see if maybe someone would have better luck with it? I'm sure most people know about the Dick Tracy series, be it the classic comic strips, the movies from the 40's, that one movie made in 1990, etc. A main supporting character is Tess Trueheart (Tracy), GF and later wife, who's supposed to be a blonde knockout of a woman. Now, countless times, she gets mixed up in her man's crimefighting, and been at a villain's mercy, be it a Big Bad or some low level thugs. It'd be interesting to see someone take a shot at a noncon/reluc with this classical character. Now, it'd be boring if some villain just has her held captive and does the whole "Bring the woman to me!" thing. An more interesting story would be based on a strip I once read: a young criminal, seeking to avenge his criminal girlfriend's death (died trying to escape), quietly breaks into the empty Tracy household, intending to ambush the detective when he comes home. However, Tess arrives first, and so the criminal takes her captive and simply waits for Tracy. In the real story, Tess manages to set herself free and take him out long before Tracy gets there. In my idea's reality, perhaps the young criminal has not gotten laid since his girlfriend's death, and convinces himself to switch his plan to one of poetic justice: since Dick Tracy took away his woman, it's only fair if Tess is given to him as means of reparation. He pulls this off by thwarting her escape attempt, and then threatening to go through with his plan to ambush Tracy, unless she gives herself to him. And she does, right there in the house...and throwing in a twist of cuckoldry, she could enjoy it (since Dick Tracy is always away fighting crime, bedroom life couldn've been less than stellar). And it strangely works...the villain decides that this was a way better revenge...and leaves. That's my basic idea. If you wanted to really screw things up for Tess, she could get pregnant from it....or get blackmailed for more sex...etc, Ive decided the main driving force for this story is sexual humiliation...not in the physical sense, but more the psychological sense. Here are some bigger examples: 1) The obvious one: Tess is coerced into giving up her body to a villain, in order to save her husband from a sure to be fatal ambush. No, the villain is not a powerful crime boss....this is a C-grade villain who hasn't had much luck with any criminal exploits in the comic strip. Yet, in terms of revenge, he's going to surpass every other villain by taking the detective's stacked hot blonde wife. This is happening in their own home, in their own bedroom. 2) An element of doubt on Tess's part: she's only going through with this to save her husband. But she's going to be haunted by the thought of whether she could have resisted in any other way, taken a third option. 3) Cliche, but she's going to end up enjoying the intercourse. Due to the villain inevitably being better hung/better in bed than the detective. 4) The villain is Brow Jr. (son of a famous villain, his deformity being a large brow with many folds). Now, my idea is that because of his deformity, no woman would have him, and he only got with his now-dead GF because she also had a villain-deformity. The contrast between his ugly self and Tess's beautiful figure would factor into the humiliation. The one only real small detail I'd request is the 'turning point' moment, where Brow Jr realizes Tracy's wife is stacked and ravishing her would be a better idea....he 's directing her up the stairs to lock her up, and climbing up after her, he finds himself suddenly facing a really nice ass in tight capris. That's when it hits him. And perhaps, he could reference this moment later on in the story, maybe to taunt Tess. I can totally envision the story starting off with her waking up next to Dick Tracy and realizing that he'd slipped in, late from police work again. She walks to the bathroom for a shower....and stops to admire how despite her age, she's still got a body and face to kill for....and mourns how her husband doesn't seem to have time to appreciate it while it's still there. And decides that she'll wear something sexy today.....and sets the stage for the main body of the story, where the young criminal unknowingly takes full advantage of her state. What do you think? Anyone up for writing this?
  9. KZ-01

    Youth Pastor's Wife

    Nobody's written this yet. Is anyone interested?
  10. KZ-01

    Youth Pastor's Wife

    Alright! Looking forward to it.
  11. Nice. So I see the WW fic is done. Do you still have any ideas regarding writing a third chapter?
  12. Never noticed you responded in this thread, ahaha. A pic...nice? Is it something that can be shared? As for getting back to Felicia, two months from that post, do you have any time or have the muse?
  13. KZ-01

    Youth Pastor's Wife

    Sent you a message with the details.
  14. KZ-01

    Youth Pastor's Wife

    You can write it in 3rd person/make the main character whoever you wish. And I think your ideas of setting sound pretty good, so run with it. Third, yes, go ahead and make the pastor's wife's name your own. I don't mind. Haha,at this point it seems more like your fantasy than mine, but hey, your musings do have a point.
  15. If you'll look at the Dick Tracy section, you'll see a Dick Tracy noncon/reluc story I wrote part of a long time ago....since then I've restructured it a lot, though the basic idea is still the same: Brow Jr breaks into Dick Tracy's home, and when he sees his beaitiful wife Tess, he changes his plans to having her and then blackmailing her to continue it (essentially cuckholding Dick Tracy for the rest of his life, without him knowing it). I've written much stuff past the posted material....but I'm getting stuck gluing it all/adding in the fills. Anyone want to help me out on it? PM me if you are.