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I really appreciate the clarification there! I’ve seen worse too, but I’m happy with a B. B minus maybe. I can say also you’ll probably want to avoid the Buffy fic I’m working on since there’s a whole lot of frantic sloppy drool-splashing face fucking with extra heavy loads planned for it, on the plus side I don’t usually write sound effects so only 2 out of 3 would be really bad… Also, instead of choking frog I picture a Goblin, Glurk, who just gives the best BJs. “Tavenkeep! Why’s this place called The Goblin’s Head?” “Go see Glurk in the back room, traveller, and take a gold piece.”

Could be worse – drop the magic hat down an old latrine and suddenly you’ve got the Golgothan demon from Dogma after you!

The Man on the Clapham Omnivorebus Review @BronxWench on January 12, 2026 Thank you! And thank you for the review. I appreciated it. I don’t think this is entirely the sort of thing to find a wide audience tbh , but it was fun to get back to write something. It’s a tough one isn’t it? Like, if you really think the horrible monster isn’t real then you must be on a normal bus, having an absolute psychotic break meltdown while hallucinating horrible things. Which is a hugely unpleasant experience. Or so I’ve been told. Some of those pints of cider though? Worth the horror! Then again, if the horror is actually real, at least you aren’t crazy, although it probably doesn’t feel any better. Heh, honestly, I chuckled a bit writing it. I wrote one line for this Buffy fanfic I’m back working on the other day that had me absolutely hurting for laughing, but it’s probably a combination of only me actually finding it funny but also being too silly to leave in so I might have to cut it and leave it for a sillier fanfic down the line. I gotta do a follow up where he’s being rescued from a succubus by a vampire who needs more energy, “Hey, if you want to keep that semen in your balls, let me drink your blood!” ...part 2 conclusion out within a week! Thank you again for the review, I absolutely appreciated it.

The Man on the Clapham Omnivorebus – Part 1 up! Part 2 is basically finished but just going through final grammar/spelling etc checks. I wrote the whole thing out last month, and just did the final draft on part 1 yesterday, with part 2 outstanding. It’s set in the same setting as some of my other stories, but no need to have read them to understand either the sex elements or the supernatural elements. I mean, Dylan hasn’t, and he’s the main character. Review by @InBrightestDay on January 11, 2026 Thank you for the review! No alerts! I’m not very alert myself though so can’t hold forum software to a higher standard. Not bothered about your avatar covering mine – might actually work in my favor given your better reputation! I didn’t let the fear stop me – I just think maybe I should have done! Thank you, though, I’m glad you like it. It was kinda a silly wordplay idea I stretched into a story! The concept of a monster bus is kind of inherently silly, but I figured what the hell, try and be a bit serio-nope. No, there’s a references to a monster being defeated with a dildo [That could be any blonde haired, occasionally-black-eyed, pervert pulling the ‘you shall not pass!’], and a werewolf getting a groper to shit himelf. Oh well! Man, I wrote that line last month. Then the other day I saw a clip of something and I was like “Wait, is this AI? There’s a fucking dinosaur stomping a car in the background.” and then it turns out that the dinosaur – a model – was, in fact, in the background and the clip was genuine. It’s crazy, the days of the camera never lying are long, long gone. I’m just glad it’s the Omnivorebus and not one of those crappy backward Hell names. Suberovinmo? Actually, not terrible. Heh, SCP – Lets send a few Class-D’s to catch the bus. We’ll find it eventually! I’m glad it came out creepy! It’s supposed to be over-the-top in unverse creepy to really make the captive upset and scared and suffer more before they die. Otherwise it’d be quicker to just drop ‘em through the floor into a pool of digestive acid. In universe, it was was not the creation of a then-entirely-balanced mind. In the real world, eh, same probably. The male refractory period be a harsh master. It’s only potential, so it’s not like a pro-life idea at least. Dylan’s been kind of confused, or terrified, or off balance, but finally he hits something he knows the answer too – the fuel tank’s gonna take some time to refill… I don’t think I ever did anything with hair play before, and of course usually it’s pretty much just a teasing/feather touch thing, but that demon’s got a lot of hair, it’s heavy, there’s skin rubbing too, and mentally a fear of death getting his body into reproduce save the genes mode, and all that led to a million to one chance and he’s boiling over like an unwatched pan. I assume some of my characters would react differently, for example: Shannon: “OOOH! That was fun! Come all over me again!” Dylan: “To save my life?” Shannon: *Anakin meme* Dylan: “To save my life, right?” Did you really like the blowjob? I genuinely found myself thinking I hadn’t got any of it all that good after all this time. I’ve written a couple more since, working on another story, and feel like I’m improving while still not *quite* there. I dunno, I guess my writing muscles are atrophied. That’s one of those pubs that has got to have been independently made 1000s of times in the last 41 years, since the first Terminator, I assume, but at that point you’re trying to find a different way to use it. Hey, thank you again, in fairness I don’t even remember a lot of my best, or worst so it’s kinda a vibe feeling that it isn’t as good! I really appreciate you taking the time to leave a review! Part 2 should be up within a week. Pretty much done, but need to final proof it and maybe make a couple small changes.

Summary: Caught by the bus, wounded, horrified, Dylan needed an angel. No mortal alone could escape the insatiable public transport vehicle once snared. He got something else... Feedback: Appreciated but not expected. Fandom: Original / Supernatural. Pairing: OC / OC Warnings: Hum MF Oral Violence Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered. Part 1 up. URL: Here

I just… I mean, when everyone who sees it says the same thing about a commercial you just have to wonder how it ever made it past those focus testing audiences they ran in Alabam-oh right. Having to share beds was very common in poorer families for years, especially before central heating and that. It was just something people did. It only changes as their relationship does, which is neat! Partial nudity beating out full nudity once again! Those seven veils dancers knew their thing, no wonder you could lose your head over one. IBD over here trying to attract the attention of the valkyries a much less violent way Heh, been a while since I loaded anything but I can still very clearly remember how some issues seem to be utterly invisible until posted.

Now I hear a pro-wrestling announcer, “Bah gawd! It can’t be! InBrighestDay has returned to AFF, swinging that sex fic like a mad man!”

Ah, good old selfcest. Like accidentally creating a stable time loop by coming back to the past to warn you not to have sex with your future self because it will cause the end of the world, but one thing leads to another.

So, and I realise this may be the kind of tastelessly offensive question you may want to ignore, but if Famine fucked Fallow, or vice versa, would that be masturbation?

I saw George’s thread the other day about a spacing issue on posting. was that what you had? https://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/77018-spaces-disappearing-when-i-paste-text-from-word/#comment-458671 Could be there’s something playing up! I didn’t have a comment because I haven’t uploaded anything for a while. Great you got it finished after all this time. I’ll get in and get it meaningfully reviewed! Edit – done. Real shame these holiday anthologies don’t get more folks these days

One way to keep public sex under cover! It does look like a great venue. It’s honestly great to see fine old buildings still in use and getting some good public access. They’re only 99% effective 😛 Is she absolutely on the pill then, and not just under a hypno compulsion to pop a breath mint and assume it’s the pill? No, it’s fair enough, I just wondered if that was what the line was about. I am sure it gets brought back later on. Don’t worry about it, honestly, truly! like 90% of my stuff was pretty nasty content, and I don’t need reviews to review. It’s just been a while since I was reading or writing or in the right headspace to do either I guess.

Oh, yeah, got lucky with that one! I think if I ever go back to the FF universe, it’ll be for twink Cloud getting railed by futa Tifa. There’s not a lot of demand for it, I grant you.

Hot Dog! By @Thundercloud Thank you for the review! With those circa 1000 word flashfics could be kinda hard getting much character in, so nice that one worked for ya. I tended to find with writing those I’d end up having to cut bits out to make the limit, It’s been a few years but I may well have just not had room for extra jokes. Would definitely be some good gag options though! As for the words… well, obstreperous is probably most common, especially as obstreperousness, will more often feature in broadsheet newspapers or more journal-like magazine articles, while oblation and oakum are probably best known/used in much more niche categories, although you probably wouldn’t be too surprised to find them in fantasy works either. All three words probably count as more common than some of the prompts we used to get! Thank you again.

“What do you mean you were only speeding to get Toys R Us open for a sale?” ...Yeah, not quite the same No worries!

“Hello, tech support? Yes, I clicked the wrong button and a rampaging porn monster burst from my machine…. yes… yes…. yes I did try turning it off and on again…. I showed it a JayDee story followed by an InBrightestDay one… No, it’s already eaten all the cookies… it’s currently in the other room trying to order a big meat pizza it can’t afford to pay for and then hire a plumber to “clean some pipes out.” Look, just tell me how to stop it playing cheesy synth music every time it starts doing something.”

Oh, cool! I hope it wasn’t too much trouble. Definitely hoping to read and review all of them before I suddenly find myself back in the black pit of despair where I spent the last four or five years! (actually, i hope to avoid that pit entirely. Depression fucking blows.)

There’s a few misc Zootopia stories, how does it work once a subdomain it added? Do they need moving? I am sure I knew things like this once here. From google there’s at least these ones from misc cartoons – The Knotty Thot https://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096097 What Does The Fox Say? https://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096212 Nick Wilde has a shitty day https://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095625 [from a brief look, this one REALLY lives up to the title!] Lunch with the Mayor https://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095382 Dinner and Dessert https://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095378 And one in movies A Star in the Bed https://movies.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095490 Just seeing this thread I was sure I’d seen some zootopia before so had a quick search. I, uh, I spent a few hours hammering a way trying to remember how to write earlier and sometimes it helps to mess around with google to de-focus

Checking back some (ok, seached the forum for ‘Meaningful’ :D) , I see you’ve been working it on and off since at least 2020. I know that feeling, trying to take the time to get something down exactly right. I generally just said screw it and tossed out something wrong instead :D I for one remain looking forward to it. I like some antici…. pation! [/Dr Frank N Furter]

Mark certainly seems to lack the active malice of some of the other characters from what I recall and read in that chapter. Even his taking advantage is really just going along with this hypno kink role play girl getting freaky around him. And his dog. Especially since she’s not quite perfect in the bits when she’s pretending to be hypnotized. Even as blind guy he might at least subconsciously pick up on the faked trance bits, ya think? The landlord, on the other hand, was concerned he was accidentally fucking someone too young, and just seems cheerfully pervily happy to watch some lesbians go at in on camera! Still, I am a few chapters behind so more to be revealed to me!

This made me think about how many authors I’d recommended. I mean, there’s been a few writers I’ve really enjoyed over the years, so I went and looked. Zero! Zilch! Nada! Sweet Fanny Adams! The square root of fuck all! My “recommended authors” page has less names than the 2025 member’s list at the Harvey Weinstein appreciation society. No idea why I never engaged with the author recommending feature, considering I was at least vaguely active on the archive for a while there. At least I apparently recommended a few indvidual stories over the years on the recommended reading page. Stuck a story link or two in my forum sig. I suppose one way to look at is an author as regularly active and established as George only ended up with 150 odd recs out of all those users slamming the view count up on every story, and in a related point otherwise engaged/active users like me just never even used the feature, not receiving receving a rec doesn’t really mean anything bad.

Thank you! That has worked. I really appreciated the step by step guide. it must be tough making things fool proof when the fools get down to my level! I’ve made a note for it somewhere I am less likely to lose it this time. I wouldn’t be at all surprised if I wrote the old one down, picked it up a year later and went “No, that sounds unhygenic” and threw it out. Your time and effort for the site is as ever appreciated!

No problem at all! I didn’t think about the Reading one, but it makes sense it’d come up same way. Google has been come increasingly, well, less than great, but it’s nice to see some of the old search string modifiers pulling through in 2025. BronxWench – It’s a really neat little feature for the site! Yeah, I probably clicked through just as you indicated above to find it, but couldn’t actually remember when I came to post, heh. I may be getting old.

Hey, so a bit random but while just messing around trying to get back into my archive account I saw there’s now the most recommended authors listed on the members page (I don't remember it before!) sadly it doesn’t say who has George recommended, but I couldn’t help but go “Wow” at the numbers there. After George at number one, the most recommended authors at 2-5 only just have more recs combined than George does on his own! A very popular author, it seems, I for one am hoping to find time to read that Zootopia fic. I do like me some rabbit cop. And it would surely be nice to read a Zootopia fanwork that doesn’t leave me thinking Arby’s. Well, unless it does. I assume she gets the meat at any rate. The page I was stumbled on with the list: https://members.adult-fanfiction.org/ (-does everyone else see that table at the top? Wasn’t sure if it was just showing because of how I reached it or something. “Top 50 Recommended Authors”?) And back on topic slightly, I think a google search using a search string like this in bold would bring up most of the recommended authors pages with your username on it, probably missing some, but worth a shot if you then had time to click through them all to see! I’m sure they can’t all be Jan Brady’s alt accounts 😛 site:members.adult-fanfiction.org "recommended authors" "GeorgeGlass"

ah, hello, sorry, the password I thought I’d used last time isn’t working on the archive, I assume I have misremembered it, is there any chance you could please send me another reset? Profile is here https://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=1296777934 Thank you!