JayDee

Publicly shaming plagiarism isn’t needed it just feels really good.

I’d settle for ‘em just letting George add new categories!

Whore of Heaven – part 3 reviewed! Thank you for the comments on part 3 also! All done now – at least it’s short He’s upgrading Megaman style – beat someone, take abilities! Wipe out the body on Earth, he can reform back in Hell. Well, until someone binds him. The creator: “These assholes doing all the raping are why we can’t have nice things.” Possibly inspired by some human looking devils in things like Devil’s Advocate and End of Days, though I don’t really remember now. Gotta get those soul contracts signed Spoilerwise I genuinely didn’t think it revealed anything that wasn’t in InBrightestDay’s summary for The Woman in the Statue - It does spoil parts The Least I Could Do which InBrightestDay wrote based on the original ending. I totally accept the amended ending isn’t for everyone but I still kinda like it, and I am sorry it’s weakened your enthusiasm for InBrightestDay’s far superior story (that’s not me being self-deprecating, it really is awesome). As well as the ending, I made a few other changes to fit in better with the sequel (there was a suggestion that Luzurial was shorter originally, and I think InBrightestDay spotted some other internal continuity stuff!) so I’m gonna take it as a plus that only the ending felt mostly tacked on Technically the only story to read first might be the Zombie Mother story I wrote even before WoH, which explained how Eparlegna got his current body. I stuck a few call backs to it in, such as the reference to Eparlegna is keeping the head of his half-human body’s mother. Still taking the reviews as a big plus, as you liked the rest of it I am glad you’re glad you read it Thanks again!

The trick is to find the site owner on the way to market, offer ‘em a handful of magic beans. There’s not a website owner in the world wouldn’t like their own beanstalk to the kingdom of the giants. Except maybe that Gadget Hackwrench fansite.

Whore of Heaven – part 2 reviewed! Thank you for the second part review also! Even more appreciated. I feel like I kinda screwed up the human servants thing with Eparlegna’s bad-boss activity at the end of the third part. I now believe having him use them more would have made more sense – The Dracula/gypsy comparison is cool, how it should have gone for sure. Kinda wish I’d done more with Bernice too, hopeless last stand badassary is something I got a softsport for tho’ Those two bad cops! I started on a story with Molly’s sister one time, never did get it finished. Glad this bit was hot tho! Haha, nah I’m pretty sure the site had that as one of the earlier codes. S’been part of wholesome fnafiction content for years. Maybe :D. I read a consensual Harry Potter/Narcissa Malfoy scene a few years back that did it phenominally well, much better than I’d managed here. It doesn’t get answered in the story here, but I think the ultimate answer for them having the sex organs is “ Angels were supposed to fuck,” but there was a bit of a miscommunication along the way from the higher order angels who didn’t have sex organs (gonna burn yer bits off trying it with the Seraphim!) and the closer-to-mortal-sphere types who do. Thank you again for the reviews

Whore of Heaven Thank you for the review! Appreciated as ever. Thanks! I wouldn’t be surprised if it was in an anime somewhere Monsters as embodiment of sins is a real old concept, but I guess most sources don’t try and smut it up. InBrightestDay did some really outstanding takes on it in The Woman in the Statue. The Sloth monster there is probably the one I’d have to face. Seems like good sense to me! Again, I think it’s an older idea of light and dark versions fighting each other so I can’t take the credit for it, but I can for deciding to throw it in! Not quite Chekhovian foreshadowing there! I think the bad guy probably also likes pillars because they’re vaguely phallic. Thanks! It gets a little sleazy! Sleazier. Thank you again for the review.

You can’t buy the site. You have to be given the ceremonial dildo by the Lady of the Lake. It sounds bad, but it’s better than the old method of having to pull it from the stone. You ever hear stone moan? It’s horrific.

For the Honour of The Slytherin second review this month! I wonder if it’s been linked somewhere? Thank you for your review. I’d agree it’s pathetic, but I’m really not seeing either the glamour or the encouragement. I mean, it’s in a bare stone room and emphasises how much it sucks for Hermione. Anybody who’d read that and think “Yep, this would be good in the real world with real people” is going to be already messed up in the head. As for adult sites having limits – On sites creating content (videos etc) using real people the limit should be whatever consenting human adults choose to do/act out with each other without any form of non-fictional coercion (and adult roleplay with whatever limits the participants set). In fiction, fuck it. There’s loads of stuff I’d not want to read at all, but I don’t see any problem with creativity from them as has it and write it. Ensure any trigger content is clearly signposted so that people who do not want to read it can avoid being subjected to it, but beyond that it’s for people to decide what they want to read or write in fiction. I suspect it is not something we’d agree on ever but thank you again for the review.

Intimidated by the big thread game? Just want some closure? From Appalachia and feel like counting all your fingers? This is the forum game for you. How it works: Read the most recent post in the thread carefully. Type the next highest number. Submit the post. If the highest number in the most recent post is 11 the game is over. You’re too late. If it’s above 11 some guys from up the more rural hollows were taking part. If it’s not here at all the mods didn’t see the funny side. So. Here were go. It begins. 1

The original x-men of Cyclops, Marvel Girl, Beast, Angel, and Iceman? Soaping each other up?

See, I didn’t know that, s’why I asked I looked into it after you mentioned it, found this – https://www.grammarphobia.com/blog/2017/12/icbm.html and I gotta say it’s pretty funny they changed from IBM to ICBM within a year because of nerds making the same mistaken association I did – IBM corp wins the day! Always worth knowing something new. Yeah, will do – I’m a little busy right now!

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*Nodding* Gotcha. Kermit’s the power behind the power.

*looks at puppets* K-Kermit?

For the Honour of The Slytherin Danke sehr aufmerksam! Es gibt zwei weitere Geschichten – For the Profit of The Slytherin Revenge Of The Ravenclaw Entschuldigen Sie bitte meine schlechten Deutschkenntnisse.

If Glykon turns out to secretly be the villain behind all the bad stuff I’ll be dead disappointed.

People read it and wonder why it feels so short, anxiously unaware 1.1m of the recorded words are fnord.

It’s a toss up as to whether it’s 1200 extra people who thought it too fuckawful to review, or one person going back that many times in disbelief at the sheer amount of typos.

You Can Take The Boy Out Of The Moisture Farm.. Nah – Palpatine’s Granddaughter’ll team up with the old but still tough Ahsoka and fuck everyone up! Coulda been worse- he didn’t kill any younglings or sandwomen at least :D Thank you for your comments! Much appreciated and made me smile :)

I wrote more on the first page of this thread than I have in the last 12 months.

A link on reddit that doesn’t go to Rick Astley singing “Never gonna give you up”? It had to happen sometime! Thanks! And it’s never too late to leave copious reviews :p

They’re over there, shaking their fists at George R R Martin.

Had a quick google – this reddit thread suggests they got a DNS issue. Guess it’ll be back when resolved – https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/m6t86r/has_asstrorg_shut_down/

Sometimes they just need cleaning up a little, hence the expression “Bring a bucket and a mop for this work in progress.”

Definitely an interesting way to go about it -I hope it didn’t seem like my thoughts were negative/critical on the theme – I’ve written gangrape stuff myself after all!– but a testament to your writing skills in making the tentacle monster really sympathetic! I’ll have a look at the other one at some point, possibly not today “Do you have any books on the supremacy of the aryan race?” “...step into my parlour.” *puts lunch break sign out* No probs!