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Taking another quick look at the first couple pages on the main subdomain – I see your stories! – there’s been relatively few updates – stories on page 2 were last update in 2020 so at this stage I think the remaining fans would settle for being whelmed in any capacity! Ooh! Willow finds an online D&D group and plays a goblin? Called Glur- ahem. No, I mean I assume group snuggling. I’m thinking I’ll check it out once I’m doing working the challenge, mostly so I don’t think “Shit! I wish I’d thought of that!” or worse end up inadvertantly ripping it off. It’s not actually my idea though @julpups heya, had you seen Deadman’s Willow group story mentioned there? Could well be something close to your literary vision has already been realised

And you’ve already written the line for when Glurk’s fans are cheering on a more public display: “Glurk! Glurk! Glurk!” Don’t worry if you don’t get around to it. I look forward to whatever you’re working on! I’m sure it’ll be great

Ah well, I have to actually finish it first. But Julpups had a dream, a dream to see Willow getting cocked more times than Davy Crockett’s rifle, and left with a face like a painter’s radio, and in possession of an exceptionally well-travelled hershey highway, (admittedly, the challenge was not expressed in quite those terms, Julups being a somewhat higher-class individual than me), and it is now my hope to actually succeed in finishing what I started! That all babbled, if you’re a Buffy fan and like the sound of the idea, you could probably take the challenge and do a better and quicker job than me. It looks like the subdomain’s been a bit quiet of late, so I am sure any new contributions would be good ones. Although when the new series happens it’ll hopefully get busier. I haven’t really been to check it out myself for years, I only just got back into fanfiction mindsets recently.

Ah, well, if they were a scammer I feel less bad about raising it! Thank you for looking into it. Looks like I missed a a couple: https://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600107091 https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081641 Does the new software stop ‘em doing more or is it just a case of keeping an eye out?

Under Joan's Bed Thank you! I always had some ideas for more parts, I just never got around to them. If you can’t be buddies with the monster under your bed who can you be buddies with? Thanks again in case you ever stop back by and see this belated review reply!

Holodeck Bitch Thank you for this review! Apologies I did not see/respond at the time, but if you ever happen over this way I appreciate your thoughts. There was the odd episode, I confess, where as a much younger JD I imagined the entire crew naked. It was easier for some, than others, as we got to see Chakotay’s ass in that one episode, and, of course, the Doctor surely has the body of a greek god sculpted there by Doctor Zimmerman. I’m sure while the story there had some sexual feelings of a four legged variety, Janeway was very much a bipedal fancier type in canon. If you ignore that one episode where she and Paris got turned into lizards and had a bunch of baby lizards. Still, it wasn’t as bad as Spock’s Brain am I right, Kiz?

Edit – I put here because of the possible scammer element, but possibly it should be in the spammer subforum, apologies! Got this review, hadn’t spotted it until now. Unless I did and said something previously. My mind hasn’t been great. Saw it tonight, anyway – https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081649 User here – https://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=1297031347 so, here’s the thing. There’s been bots and users etc for years over on fanfiction.net (and I presume elsewhere) that post stuff similar to this, and those ones are all scammers. Taking advantage of gullible children or vulnerable adults mostly. As this is a registered user of the site I hesitate to cast such an accusation here but, well, let’s look at the facts It’s a 1000 word POS fic I crapped out just to have one on the Lord of the Rings subdomain and because I was afraid if I actually wrote the Galadriel idea I had, she’d get me somehow. You do not want her as an enemy. I’m not sure I’d even be comfortable having her as a friend. Anyway. So putting aside the story’s short length and literally shit quality, we have the review. Positive but utterly generic, and wanting contact off site. Then, I try google for other reviews by this user and, well, https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081720 https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081623 https://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600056826 https://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600106964 https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081666 https://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600107089 https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081664 https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081671 I’m not convinced this user’s intentions are entirely genuine if I’m honest. It feels like a buncha almost spam like reviews, all generic, all wanting off site discussion, no money mentioned but come on… Happy to be proven wrong, like.

Hello, sorry I missed this before. I assume you’re long gone but in case you are not anyone else is wondering, I’ve never done commissions (not even for original work!) and while I have done requests I am busy with one at moment so not open for more. Sorry! I hope you got your idea written though.

Another missed review from when I wasn’t doing shit about shit. Bart the Ripper II: Mothersnuffer From ANON - I came on January 27, 2022 Thank you for the comment! I am glad you enjoyed the story. I think that was one of the ones that made the old topless robot fanfic reviewer drink. With good cause!

Progress report on this challenge – 3 chapters basically bar final proofing/editing completed, covering the first part of the structure near the top of this page. I am now working on thew next chapter, which will hopefully be a chunk of the part 2 structure above. Definitely going to be more than 4 parts! However, main reason I am posting is I’ve slowly started going back through my profile and deleting out various spam reviews (lot of super dodgy links) when I saw one I had not noticed/responded to before! Pleasurable Evils review by ANON - Kayla on May 21, 2022 I realise at this stage the odds of you seeing this reply are slim to none, but I still want to say thank you for this review! I appreciate you taking the time to comment and I hope you haven’t had to read anything that’s quite such a … ride since. Thank you again!

The concluding Part is now loaded – link https://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600110651&chapter=2 Chapter specific content codes: Complete, Humanoid, M/F, TF. Oral sex

I really appreciate the clarification there! I’ve seen worse too, but I’m happy with a B. B minus maybe. I can say also you’ll probably want to avoid the Buffy fic I’m working on since there’s a whole lot of frantic sloppy drool-splashing face fucking with extra heavy loads planned for it, on the plus side I don’t usually write sound effects so only 2 out of 3 would be really bad… Also, instead of choking frog I picture a Goblin, Glurk, who just gives the best BJs. “Tavenkeep! Why’s this place called The Goblin’s Head?” “Go see Glurk in the back room, traveller, and take a gold piece.”

Could be worse – drop the magic hat down an old latrine and suddenly you’ve got the Golgothan demon from Dogma after you!

The Man on the Clapham Omnivorebus Review @BronxWench on January 12, 2026 Thank you! And thank you for the review. I appreciated it. I don’t think this is entirely the sort of thing to find a wide audience tbh , but it was fun to get back to write something. It’s a tough one isn’t it? Like, if you really think the horrible monster isn’t real then you must be on a normal bus, having an absolute psychotic break meltdown while hallucinating horrible things. Which is a hugely unpleasant experience. Or so I’ve been told. Some of those pints of cider though? Worth the horror! Then again, if the horror is actually real, at least you aren’t crazy, although it probably doesn’t feel any better. Heh, honestly, I chuckled a bit writing it. I wrote one line for this Buffy fanfic I’m back working on the other day that had me absolutely hurting for laughing, but it’s probably a combination of only me actually finding it funny but also being too silly to leave in so I might have to cut it and leave it for a sillier fanfic down the line. I gotta do a follow up where he’s being rescued from a succubus by a vampire who needs more energy, “Hey, if you want to keep that semen in your balls, let me drink your blood!” ...part 2 conclusion out within a week! Thank you again for the review, I absolutely appreciated it.

The Man on the Clapham Omnivorebus – Part 1 up! Part 2 is basically finished but just going through final grammar/spelling etc checks. I wrote the whole thing out last month, and just did the final draft on part 1 yesterday, with part 2 outstanding. It’s set in the same setting as some of my other stories, but no need to have read them to understand either the sex elements or the supernatural elements. I mean, Dylan hasn’t, and he’s the main character. Review by @InBrightestDay on January 11, 2026 Thank you for the review! No alerts! I’m not very alert myself though so can’t hold forum software to a higher standard. Not bothered about your avatar covering mine – might actually work in my favor given your better reputation! I didn’t let the fear stop me – I just think maybe I should have done! Thank you, though, I’m glad you like it. It was kinda a silly wordplay idea I stretched into a story! The concept of a monster bus is kind of inherently silly, but I figured what the hell, try and be a bit serio-nope. No, there’s a references to a monster being defeated with a dildo [That could be any blonde haired, occasionally-black-eyed, pervert pulling the ‘you shall not pass!’], and a werewolf getting a groper to shit himelf. Oh well! Man, I wrote that line last month. Then the other day I saw a clip of something and I was like “Wait, is this AI? There’s a fucking dinosaur stomping a car in the background.” and then it turns out that the dinosaur – a model – was, in fact, in the background and the clip was genuine. It’s crazy, the days of the camera never lying are long, long gone. I’m just glad it’s the Omnivorebus and not one of those crappy backward Hell names. Suberovinmo? Actually, not terrible. Heh, SCP – Lets send a few Class-D’s to catch the bus. We’ll find it eventually! I’m glad it came out creepy! It’s supposed to be over-the-top in unverse creepy to really make the captive upset and scared and suffer more before they die. Otherwise it’d be quicker to just drop ‘em through the floor into a pool of digestive acid. In universe, it was was not the creation of a then-entirely-balanced mind. In the real world, eh, same probably. The male refractory period be a harsh master. It’s only potential, so it’s not like a pro-life idea at least. Dylan’s been kind of confused, or terrified, or off balance, but finally he hits something he knows the answer too – the fuel tank’s gonna take some time to refill… I don’t think I ever did anything with hair play before, and of course usually it’s pretty much just a teasing/feather touch thing, but that demon’s got a lot of hair, it’s heavy, there’s skin rubbing too, and mentally a fear of death getting his body into reproduce save the genes mode, and all that led to a million to one chance and he’s boiling over like an unwatched pan. I assume some of my characters would react differently, for example: Shannon: “OOOH! That was fun! Come all over me again!” Dylan: “To save my life?” Shannon: *Anakin meme* Dylan: “To save my life, right?” Did you really like the blowjob? I genuinely found myself thinking I hadn’t got any of it all that good after all this time. I’ve written a couple more since, working on another story, and feel like I’m improving while still not *quite* there. I dunno, I guess my writing muscles are atrophied. That’s one of those pubs that has got to have been independently made 1000s of times in the last 41 years, since the first Terminator, I assume, but at that point you’re trying to find a different way to use it. Hey, thank you again, in fairness I don’t even remember a lot of my best, or worst so it’s kinda a vibe feeling that it isn’t as good! I really appreciate you taking the time to leave a review! Part 2 should be up within a week. Pretty much done, but need to final proof it and maybe make a couple small changes.

Summary: Caught by the bus, wounded, horrified, Dylan needed an angel. No mortal alone could escape the insatiable public transport vehicle once snared. He got something else... Feedback: Appreciated but not expected. Fandom: Original / Supernatural. Pairing: OC / OC Warnings: Hum MF Oral Violence Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered. Part 1 up. URL: Here

I just… I mean, when everyone who sees it says the same thing about a commercial you just have to wonder how it ever made it past those focus testing audiences they ran in Alabam-oh right. Having to share beds was very common in poorer families for years, especially before central heating and that. It was just something people did. It only changes as their relationship does, which is neat! Partial nudity beating out full nudity once again! Those seven veils dancers knew their thing, no wonder you could lose your head over one. IBD over here trying to attract the attention of the valkyries a much less violent way Heh, been a while since I loaded anything but I can still very clearly remember how some issues seem to be utterly invisible until posted.

Now I hear a pro-wrestling announcer, “Bah gawd! It can’t be! InBrighestDay has returned to AFF, swinging that sex fic like a mad man!”

Ah, good old selfcest. Like accidentally creating a stable time loop by coming back to the past to warn you not to have sex with your future self because it will cause the end of the world, but one thing leads to another.

So, and I realise this may be the kind of tastelessly offensive question you may want to ignore, but if Famine fucked Fallow, or vice versa, would that be masturbation?

I saw George’s thread the other day about a spacing issue on posting. was that what you had? https://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/77018-spaces-disappearing-when-i-paste-text-from-word/#comment-458671 Could be there’s something playing up! I didn’t have a comment because I haven’t uploaded anything for a while. Great you got it finished after all this time. I’ll get in and get it meaningfully reviewed! Edit – done. Real shame these holiday anthologies don’t get more folks these days

One way to keep public sex under cover! It does look like a great venue. It’s honestly great to see fine old buildings still in use and getting some good public access. They’re only 99% effective 😛 Is she absolutely on the pill then, and not just under a hypno compulsion to pop a breath mint and assume it’s the pill? No, it’s fair enough, I just wondered if that was what the line was about. I am sure it gets brought back later on. Don’t worry about it, honestly, truly! like 90% of my stuff was pretty nasty content, and I don’t need reviews to review. It’s just been a while since I was reading or writing or in the right headspace to do either I guess.

Oh, yeah, got lucky with that one! I think if I ever go back to the FF universe, it’ll be for twink Cloud getting railed by futa Tifa. There’s not a lot of demand for it, I grant you.

Hot Dog! By @Thundercloud Thank you for the review! With those circa 1000 word flashfics could be kinda hard getting much character in, so nice that one worked for ya. I tended to find with writing those I’d end up having to cut bits out to make the limit, It’s been a few years but I may well have just not had room for extra jokes. Would definitely be some good gag options though! As for the words… well, obstreperous is probably most common, especially as obstreperousness, will more often feature in broadsheet newspapers or more journal-like magazine articles, while oblation and oakum are probably best known/used in much more niche categories, although you probably wouldn’t be too surprised to find them in fantasy works either. All three words probably count as more common than some of the prompts we used to get! Thank you again.