GeorgeGlass

Thank you, and more thank you! And I shall remember the word "faptastical" for the rest of my days. I hope you'll enjoy the rest just as much. On an unrelated note, I'm sorry about your Tumblr account apparently being nuked. Happens to the best of us. Oh, and me.

Thank you! The next chapter will have a bit more action and a bit less interior monologue, but I have hope that it will be just as enjoyable.

Hello, fans of pervy Phineas and Ferb fiction! If you are kind enough to review my story "Little Blonde Monster," I will reply here. WARNING: This thread contains spoilers for the story (because the reviews do). If you haven't yet read "Little Blonde Monster" and you think you might want to, I strongly recommend clicking the link above and going for it before looking at the rest of this thread.

Re: "Caitlyn's Punishment" Excellent advice! Although perhaps (just perhaps) a bit too late for poor Caitlyn... Thanks! The villain is the linchpin of a story like this. They get the same vet who works the Donkey Show down in Tijuana. Thank you, and thank you! Thanks for the rec! I'll check it out. Re: "Caitlyn's Punishment" Well, time is relative--I actually posted the two chapters 6 days apart. Not quite sure how long it will take to post the third and final chapter, given that I've got a lot of stories going at the moment.

That's a very interesting idea. The story is already pretty well sketched out at this point, but I won't rule out the possibility of a 1-chapter prequel. Also, if there is any total stranger whose advice I would trust with regard to a story like this, it would be one who calls herself "Vixen Bitch." I can do better than soon--I can do 20 minutes ago.

Re: "Caitlyn's Punishment" Oh, I'm sure it won't be that bad...It'll be worse.

Re: "Wish List" Thank you! I think this item from the FAQ explains how to do it (although it's a little confusing because they call it Recommended Authors and not Fav Authors): http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/29616-how-to-use-the-new-recommended-authors/ If you liked "Wish List," you may also enjoy "Wild Side" and its sequel, "Everything She Needs."

Re: "Daddy's Rules" Thank you! But...really? I have 24 stories in the Originals category alone. Are you a superhuman speed-reader, or are you one of those people who only sleeps an hour a night? You're in luck--I'll soon be posting the first of three chapters of "Caitlyn's Punishment," a story that fits at least some parts of this description.

Sorry--it was a goofy reference to the shlock-tastic 1980 film THE BLUE LAGOON, which starred the then 14-year-old Brooke Shields (whose character steps on a stonefish and nearly dies at one point), some curly-headed 18-year-old guy whose career never recovered, and various body doubles for the many, many nude scenes. Roger Ebert called it the worst movie of the year.

You mean that spiny fish that tried to kill Brooke Shields?

I always wondered who picked up the Blood God's wallet after Blade killed him. Now I know.

Thanks, everybody!

I am very pleased to announce that "Backward Glance" won first prize for People's Choice AND Judge's Choice in the Spring Fling story contest on Hentai Foundry.

By the way, this story contains a couple of "Easter eggs" for literary types. No one has mentioned finding them yet...

Re "The AngelPlay Winter Catalog" Well, there certainly are various product lines to explore. Hmm...

Author: George Glass Title: Backward Glance: A Multi-temporal Romance Summary: A young physicist and her soulmate blow their chance at happiness. Will even a second chance be enough? Feedback: Feedback is always very much appreciated. Fandom: Original Pairing: Physics major and Comp Lit major. Some say it's unnatural. Warnings: M/F, preg. Solo story or chaptered story: Three chapters.All have been posted. URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107062 Some stories you write; other stories grab ahold of you and make you write them. This was one of the latter.

Re: "Backward Glance" Sorry to worry you--I had orthopedic surgery back in February, which took me out of action for a little while (mainly because of the pain meds), and between my recovery, a flood of work, a lot of professional activities, and suddenly becoming president of my neighborhood association (I was vice president, and then our president resigned unexpectedly), I've just been pretty preoccupied. But I really wanted to finish "Backward Glance" in time to enter it in the Spring Fling contest on Hentai Foundry, and I think that has gotten me at least partially back into the writing groove. I'll add add a warning to the beginning and advise readers to wear earplugs. Not in the least; not only have I never played Bioshock, I don't know I thing about the plot. Now, though, I may have to check it out. Thanks! The contest had a word limit, so there was only so much room for citrus fruit. No worries--I've definitely got some things in the pipeline (including that Suzy Johnson story), so stay tuned. And thank you for all your support.

Re: "Wish List" Yeah, I've taken to typing these things up in Notepad and then pasting them into the text box once I'm finished, just in case something goes wrong. Thanks! Thank you. I'm very big on editing. Because this story is a one-shot, I didn't want to slow it down with too much backstory or character development so close to the end. If this were the first of several chapters, I think I would have done something like what you suggest. I see what you're saying, but I actually deliberately avoided using the word "Daddy" for a couple of reasons: --Mariel is an older teen, somewhere between 17 and 19, and she's pretty mature despite her shyness. Thus, I didn't want her to sound too childlike. --I had previously written two stories, "Wild Side" and "Everything She Needs," about a father and daughter who definitely DO have a dom/sub relationship (including the daughter calling her father "Daddy"). I wanted the relationship between Mariel and her father to be at least a little bit different from that one. Thanks very much. I'm not all that big on sequels ("Everything She Needs" being a rare exception), but I will write them if I feel like I have a good enough idea for one.

>Fairy-Slayer 2014-03-24 id # 3000069220 >I finally got a chance to listen to it, and it's so good I listened again. I’m flattered! >There were a lot of good bits that made me laugh or struck me as terrific, though unfortunately there was no way to note them all. However, everyone telling Phineas that Isabella had a crush on him for the longest time was adorable; the IsaBuford site was scary funny; polymer that "TASTES like chewing gum" cracked me up; everything takes longer to fix than to build was great. I was thinking of the episode in which Baljeet’s bike got a flat tire, and it seemed to take the boys quite a while to fix it. >The only thing that could have been cute was if the girls (at least) were still shy about undressing in front of the boys when it's just for the purpose of changing clothes, like some instinctive thing. Not a deal-breaker by any stretch. Oh, that’s a clever idea. >Trojan Horse - of course of course. Neigh! J >The plot itself was very show like, from the invention, the problem, and the B story with what Isabella (rightly, IMO) told Phineas when he was being clueless to her needs again. Heck, even Phineas agreed with her, so yeah. >Actually, it was one of those higher-level episodes where there was real danger (especially for Ferb) and then Candace and the community all rallied. "A very special episode" perhaps. As soon as I got the idea of hundreds of kids wanting to pay P&F back for all great things they’ve done over the summer, I couldn’t let go of it. >I did start to get worried about Perry and Doof not showing up, but it seems that they were saved, er, Candace was thwarted just in the nick of time. Terrific. Yeah, I couldn’t introduce that part too early without having big gaps between their scenes, so I had to put it off for a bit. >That targeting-system bit was hilarious. It would explain a lot, wouldn’t it? >Poor Stacy though, but maybe the sex strap will give her ideas for later on. I can’t seem to write one of these stories without at least one of the teens losing her mind. >Too bad Candace couldn't think of a way to bust her brothers for their other activities, but she had more important things in mind. Plus people who live in Glass houses and all that. J >The brief descriptions of the group's sexual escapades blossomed nicely as the story went along, and as it sometimes was mixed in with the relationship advice it was even poignant at times. When it became most descriptive it was excellent, and then we got a really nice recap. Because this was a sequel, I really wanted the sex and relationships in this story to be at least somewhat more evolved than they were in the previous one; really, that was much of the point of writing this story. >Now I just feel bad for Irving and Eva because it's going to get very confusing. But I'm not going to lose any sleep over it. Inator effects always wear off eventually. And in the meantime, there’s got to be some entertainment value in seeing Irving try to imitate Buford. J >Thanks for a really fun story, especially on a day that was otherwise driving me nuts. Still, even when I was home and resting it was just as good the second time. Maybe a third is in order too. I’m very glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for yet another detailed, thoughtful, and uplifting review.

Re: "Daddy's Rules" I'm very glad you liked it. As I mentioned to the previous reviewer, the story was deliberately written to be a short, one-chapter piece. Perhaps you would enjoy some of my other stories?

Re: "Daddy's Rules" Thank you. It's a pretty rough story, so I understand the "oddly" bit--I feel that way about it myself sometimes. It definitely puts a little distance between the characters and the reader (with apologies to any literate bears out there). I see where you're coming from, and I'm pleased that you'd like to see more, but the brevity of this story is deliberate. I wanted to do a short piece that wasn't bogged down by extensive plot and character development (like all the stories I had written before then) but that instead showed you a moment in the lives of this extremely dysfunctional family and let you extrapolate as much more as you cared to. In any case, I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing.

Re: "Some Days, You Get the Bear" Thanks! I honestly haven't felt too much inspiration to write since I had my hip operation last month (everything I've posted on AFF since then has been stories I've already written and posted on Hentai Foundry and/or Inkbunny), but when I saw a post about the contest and that the limit was 500 words, I figured I could surely write something decent of THAT length, at least. And it was exciting to have someone do a picture based on something I wrote; that was a first for me. I'm feeling a bit more inspired now.

Re: "Snow" Thank you--both for the comment itself and for making it spoiler-free.

Thank you!

Ah, good question. I just created a new thread here: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/55777-george-glass-review-responses-original-fiction/