GeorgeGlass

It's true. My first response to the "to find out why, come to us" message might well be, "They want to sell the nukes back to the highest bidder."

Some people, fearing an invasion, would go survivalist and begin stockpiling guns and ammunition, building bomb shelters, etc. A smaller number of people would look to the aliens as potential saviors. Attendance at religious services would rise, both because of fear and because the appearance of intelligent extraterrestrial life would shake many people's worldview. Many people would be desperate to find any scrap of information about the aliens. Governments would do anything possible to get hold of alien technology. Fashion and design trends would emerge that would be inspired by the aliens' apparent aesthetic. That's all I can think of for the moment.

Thank you. Not sucking is what I strive for. Seriously, I'm glad if you think I did justice to Ferb and Vanessa. Ferb is so below-the-surface and Vanessa is so hot and dark that they ended up being really fun to write--a big change of pace from Phineas and Isabella. Thank you! As for everyone else's dreams, well, a story about dreams has to leave a LITTLE mystery... I will confess that this story was harder by far to write than any of my P&F to date. I've always believed that rules and limits enhance a writer's creativity, but this story taught me that the opposite is also true--having NO rules or limits can be crippling. I had massive "option paralysis" trying to figure out what would happen in each chapter, because potentially, ANYTHING could happen in the dream world. It's like having an all-powerful genie give you ONE wish, and then spending weeks agonizing over what to wish for. So while I loved having all that freedom, I also found it to be weirdly stifling. Next up: Romance and disaster in space in "Danville, We Have a Problem"!

Recently, they had the "Mission Marvel" episode of PHINEAS AND FERB because Disney now owns Marvel. But what if Disney had bought DC and had a P&F/YOUNG JUSTICE crossover instead?

Thanks! I didn't want to have to pull a coitus interruptus on Phineas and Isabella to cut to Ferb and Vanessa, and I didn't want to write a chapter that was twice as long as the others, so I decided to let the couples have their own chapters just this once.

Thank you! Someone asked me a while back whether I might write a fic that involved Vanessa, and I realized that I had somehow neglected to feature the hottest character in P&F in any of my stories. So this story is partly an attempt to make up for that deficit. The weird part is, I think I'm enjoying writing the Ferb/Vanessa bits more than the Phineas/Isabella bits, because there is so much more to explore. Thanks, Ron! I hope you'll like it.

I get the impression that Vanessa and Monty aren't yet all that serious. Also, I sort of have it in my head that Vanessa kind of has a thing for Ferb but won't act on it (in waking life, at least) because of their age difference. Vanessa and Ferb will definitely have to confront the barriers to their having a real-world relationship. Oh, yeah, there's all kinds of ways this can--and will--go. I'm afraid you're expecting a lot more in the way of plot than I'm planning. We're pretty much about to dive right into the "adults-only" portion of this story. Plus, I REALLY don't want to imagine Heinz getting it on with...anybody. I will definitely publish that story (working title: "Danville, We Have a Problem") here. Outer-space disaster awaits!

Thank you!

I wrote this story (http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094250) some time ago but didn't post it on AFF because I thought it seemed too...extreme. Then I saw a description of another story posted on AFF that makes this one look pretty tame by comparison, so I decided to just go for it. Anyhoo, below are my responses to reviews of this story. Thanks! I'm not that big on sequels, but I do sort of have an idea for one. I'll need to let it cook for a bit longer before I decide whether it's edible.

Re: "There's a New Seraph in Town" Thank you very, very much. Everything you said about the story is exactly what I was trying to achieve. I really appreciate the props, especially from Gabriel himself!

I have a fanfic that I had posted on other sites but that I had never posted here because I thought it was too twisted for AFF. Reading this thread made me realize that there's no such thing, so I posted the story last night. Thank you for the inspiration.

Thanks! I'm here all week.

Re: "There's a New Seraph in Town" Creating a review reply thread before the story has gotten any reviews: blind optimism or shameful arrogance? Yes. In any case, if any of you lovely folks reviews "There's a New Seraph in Town," I will joyfully reply here.

Author: George Glass Title: There’s a New Seraph in Town Summary: A first-year med student is visited by an angel who wants to take Halloween back from the Devil by throwing the ultimate Halloween party. Feedback: Feedback in general and concrit in particular very much appreciated. Fandom: Original-amundo Pairing: Wouldn't you like to know? Actually, I really hope you would. Warnings: M/F, mutual masturbation, miscellaneous fooling around. Oh, and don't mow the lawn when it's wet. Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered. All chapters have been posted. URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106551

Thanks! I've been a little distracted lately by a <gasp> original story that I've been inspired to write, but I will be back on the "Sweet Dreams" case soon!

Thanks for all the work, DG. This means the name of the site itself has changed, right? I notice that "Adultfanfiction.net" still appears on the title page and in the headers and such. One thing at a time, I suppose.

Definitely going to try to take maximum advantage of the dream-environment--for the purposes of both plot AND smut.

Fairy-Slayer: I actually sort of imagined this story as a stage play with a single set. Sadly, this is not actually what Future-Candace looks like (per "Phineas and Ferb's Quantum Boogaloo")--hence the whole nerdy discussion about interference from the future and an alternate timeline. A lot of that was a side effect. Candace's new body is so responsive to sexual stimulation that it doesn't much care where that stimulation is coming from. Thanks! I needed some way of not Changing Everyone's Lives Forever. I think they would handle it all with considerably more maturity and good sense. And by they, I mean Jeremy. And if Heinz had the sense God gave spearmint gum, he'd do that very thing. Thank you!

Because I posted this story long before I'd ever heard of review response threads, I responded to the first several comments on this story with a comment of my own. For the sake of completeness, I'll post that comment here first: coldfang66: Thanks VERY much for your reviews of this story and "Rated F." Being true to the characters is extremely important to me, and it's very nice to have the validation. Aysha: Hope you got my PM via the discussion board. Thanks again. Wheatherman: Thanks. I can kind of see what you mean about the "common sense" thing, but there IS precedent for Candace hearing voices (or at least one voice) in her head. More importantly, I needed a substitute for Stacy, who is Candace's de facto common sense. Anon #1: Check out the in-progress "Truth or Dare 2.0". Anon #2: Thanks! andrewmyles: Thanks very much. I don't feel like it's a real Candace story if there isn't a Valuable Lesson at the end. Even if it's cheesy. And I hope the story is adequately fappable.

Thank you! The idea for this story actually came to me a couple of years ago when I thought, "What would happen if Phineas and Ferb somehow saw a porno movie and decided to make their own?" At first, it was just a joke; only later did I decide to actually write it up. It was mainly mean to be porn, but there were so many opportunities for comedy, and for making it more like a real episode of the show, that I couldn't resist them, and it eventually ended up being much more like an '80s sex comedy than straight-up erotica--hence the title. Thank you again!

Other people are indeed connected in their dreams, but the story focuses on these four pretty much exclusively. This is not really going to be an action story (although I've got an action/adventure-heavy story in the works, so keep an eye out for "Danville, We Have a Problem"!), but I'm planning for this one to have more emotional depth than its predecessors. Thanks for the comment!

Yup! And 3, and 4, and maybe 5.

Thanks very much! Being true to the characters is what I'm all about. Well, it's what I'm mostly about; I'm also somewhat about making them have sex. Glad you like it so far. I hope the coming chapters will satisfy.

I tend to agree. Telling reviewers how to write their reviews will just turn them off even more.

Despite having things to do, I couldn't resist doing a little experiment regarding reviews. I looked at the review-to-hit ratio of each of the 5 stories that I have posted both here and at Hentai Foundry, and I found that not only have my stories gotten more than twice as many hits on AFF as they have on HF, they have earned more reviews per hit here, as well. (Both ratios are low, however: The percentage of hits accompanied by a review was 0.28% on AFF and 0.16% on HF.) More subjectively speaking, the quality of the reviews on AFF has also been higher. And that's all Science Boy has to say on that subject.