GeorgeGlass

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Yes, the first chapter is a bit short; the more "action"-oriented chapters will be considerably longer. Totally agree about Stacy. That girl deserves some serious love, and she's going to get plenty in this story. Thanks for being the first to review!

This is where I'll respond to any reviews of my Phineas and Ferb story, "Tri-Date Area."

Re: "Unbidden" Thank you! I'm really proud of this story.

Re: "A Very Special Thank You" First off. my apologies for responding so slowly to your review. Email burial and all that. Thank you! Ah. The idea for this one came from a friend called Eh Steve, who won a raffle I put on for my watchers on Hentai Foundry. I had never written a futa story before, and I liked having the opportunity to try something new. I'm also glad that this piece came out as well as it did.

Thank you! Although I would argue that "plausible" is a bit of a relative term when you're dealing with P&F. Initially, she gave Phineas control because she didn't want to make him do something that he wouldn't have wanted to do in his heart of hearts. Only later did she discover that she enjoys being tied up and dominated. Yeah, it bugged me to find out that she never got up the nerve to act on her feelings...and that later, Phineas had the same issue. I suppose they could have thought that Phineas was deliberately ignoring the signs of Isabella's interest rather than confronting her about them (for fear of ruining their friendship), but the fact that none of them brought up the subject even in their teenage years just doesn't make sense to me. I could kind of see it. Phineas has always taken the lead when it comes to his and Ferb's daily projects; only rarely would he solicit ideas from his brother. Thanks. See my response to the previous review (above) for details about my next P&F-related effort.

I ain't no squealer! I don't have any immediate plans for more Phineas/Isabella stories. Next up is "Tri-Date Area," which is about Candace, Jeremy, and Stacy deciding to have a three-way relationship.

This one is kind of embarrassing: Years ago, I wrote a trilogy of short fanfics about Wilykit and Wilykat from ThunderCats. And somehow, in switching from one computer to another, I lost the MIDDLE story. I've never found it again; I think the only place I posted it was on a ThunderCats-themed Yahoo group that is now defunct.

If you're writing a fanfic, then it's easy: You can just use an established character as the basis for comparison. ("Phineas looked up at the teenager, who was almost a head taller than he," "Her breasts seemed enormous, more than twice the size of Vanessa's"). More generally speaking, throwing numbers at readers is probably less effective than describing the character's appearance as others might perceive it. ("She looked like an Olympic volleyball player--six feet tall, willowy, and deeply tanned." "The man's short, wide physique reminded Matt of an airlock door.") IMO, adding these subjective details makes the character's appearance more memorable for readers.

Re: "F**k Perfect" Thanks very much. Unlike a lot of my other stories, I tried to make this one as realistic as I could manage without making it boring. And thanks for all the reviews!

Re: "Company Policy" I'm afraid that story is a one-shot, but I can never rule out the possibility of a sequel. Thanks for the comment!

Thank you very much. I think you have hit on an important reason for this story's popularity (which has surprised me): The fact that it isn't entirely realistic makes it easier to just enjoy the sadistic/masochistic pleasure of it without thinking, "Ew, I'm getting off on something awful that happens to real people." Then I've done my job. Thanks again!

I can guarantee that at least one will be thonging it up in the next (and final) chapter. I hope the last chapter will fulfill your expectations...among other things.

Re: "A Beach Like No Other" Yes he does, which is something I'll get into a bit more in the last chapter. The story is largely inspired by Glassfish's comic, "A Day at the Beach" (which can be found in its entirety at http://xbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=a_day_at_the_beach).If she drew a comic about my story about her comic, the paradox could destroy the universe.

Re: "Some Girl" Glad you liked it. And I think you've inspired me; I've got an idea for a Fourth of July story involving these characters and some cousins they haven't seen for several years. (One of those "My, how you've grown--hot" scenarios.)

Re: "Some Girl" Thanks. This is actually a one-shot story, but if you'd like to read something in a similar vein, you might like "The Small Hours" and "Satisfaction."

Thanks! I didn't use the BDSM tag for LBM; I just used the Rape tag, because I tend to think of BDSM as consensual. Had this been a longer story, I think I would have liked to show how people other than the Flynn-Fletchers and Mrs. Garcia-Shapiro might react. But I really wanted to do a self-contained, one-chapter thing here, and not a big, multi-chapter, multiple-POV thing like "Tri-Date Area" is going to be. Thanks again! Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it! I deliberately finished and posted this story before "Act Your Age" aired, fearing that that episode might ruin the whole notion of Phineas/Isabella for some people.

If you're using Word, the easy way to deal with this problem is to use Find/Replace to replace every paragraph break with a manual line break before you paste the text into the box to upload. For some reason, AFF's text editor always puts a space after a paragraph that ends with a paragraph break, but it won't do that with a manual line break.

Thank you! This is the first time I've written a fanfic about a movie rather than a TV show; the fact that it's a single story and not a series provides a lot more latitude for developing the characters beyond what we see in the source material. But, of course, I try to develop them in ways that are logical and believable. I've got a couple more in the works: "Tri-Date Area," in which Candace, Jeremy, and Stacy decide to give having a three-way relationship a try (wackiness and hot, sweaty group sex ensue), and "Queen for a Day," in which Isabella, zapped by a random green ray from the sky, is suddenly treated like royalty by everyone--including a certain pointy-faced boy from whom she's craving some lovin'.

That's why being a Disney queen is better than being a Disney princess. Until the kid hit puberty, anyway; I don't think age of consent was really a thing back then. But yes, the potential political advantages of such a marriage are Herringholtz's chief reason for inviting Prince Hypatios to this event.

Author: George Glass Title: In the Light of Day: A FROZEN Epic Summary: Seven princes come to the kingdom to seek Elsa’s hand as Prince-Consort. But not all in attendance are what they seem, and behind the ball gowns and canapés lurks a plot that could destroy Arendelle—and its Queen. Feedback: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/59083-review-responses-for-in-the-light-of-day-a-frozen-epic/ Fandom: Frozen Pairing: Anna/Kristoff, Elsa/OC Warnings: Abuse, Exhib, M/F Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered. Very chaptered. URL: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094620 This story has it all: romance, action, political intrigue, BFFs, heroic reindeer, beers foreign and domestic, a snowman doing yoga (no, not hot yoga), and a finale that will blow you away. If you're an adult who enjoyed FROZEN, come check it out!

Thanks! You are not the first person to tell me that. But I'm hoping that the story itself will be strong enough to keep readers interested, even if it doesn't feature their favorite 'ship.

Wow. I can't say I've ever had ideas for a fanfic about a movie (or anything else) that I didn't like. Is it still fanfic if you're not a fan?

Re: "A Beach Like No Other" I would prefer not to answer that question until after the fourth and final chapter is posted, because anything I might say would be at least slightly spoiler-y.

Whoops. I hope the consequences aren't too severe. Professors are hypersensitive to plagiarism these days, mainly because plagiarism is easier to commit than it's ever been.