GeorgeGlass

When I'm writing, I typically separate my paragraphs with a vertical space (ie, a paragraph mark). AFF seems to insert such spaces automatically when I post a story, so I have to go back and delete my extra spaces. Also, sometimes I don't WANT a space between 2 lines (eg, if they are part of a list or a schedule), but I can't seem to make the spacing go away. Is there a way to deal with this?

Re: "Cruel Nature" I suppose Xyla didn't consider that there might be a good reason why the termination of Feral-induced pregnancies is mandatory.

I go by the policy that we use where I work--I only make changes that I can justify to myself. That is, if I can't come up with a concrete reason for why I should make a particular change (eg, "Adding this bit of dialogue will help develop the character without slowing down the action," "I should add a comma here because this is a compound sentence"), then I don't make it. Using that approach seems to make it fairly clear when I should stop editing.

Re: "Cruel Nature" I think I'd worry a bit about anyone who didn't dislike some aspect of this story. But thank you! She definitely has a serious backbone deficiency. I've always had a pretty high baseline level of anxiety myself, and I've often struggled to avoid making the easy decision instead of the best one. Xyla is kind of a worst-case-scenario version of that.

Re: "Cruel Nature" You'll find out very soon--I'm just about to post the second half of the story.

Seriously. Some of the twisted stuff my fingers type makes me think "I'm glad you boys are attached to me so I can keep an eye on you."

Re: "The Interview" I'm usually a bit of a stickler about scientific accuracy, or at least plausibility. In this case, however, I decided to throw scientific accuracy completely out the window--right after beating it with a garden mallet and setting it on fire--because I really wanted this story to be a pure erotic fantasy. Thanks for the information about breast size and milk production. I actually spent 2 or 3 minutes earnestly Googling that subject before giving up and deciding to go the whole mallet/fire/open-window route. In any case, you have inspired me to put a disclaimer in the first chapter about the inaccuracies. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Re: "The Interview" Glad you're liking it, and thanks for the review. Daisy's life is definitely undergoing a major shift. You'll have to wait a couple of chapters for the bulls, though. Hopefully, that won't take long. I will confess that I actually have the next 2 chapters already written. I'm not posting them all at once because (a) it takes a little doing to reformat them for AFF (they were originally posted at Hentai Foundry) and (b) I'm hoping that posting them at this pace will spur me to finish the fourth and final chapter. I will be posting chapter 2 very shortly.

Re: "The Last Toy" Thank you! The ending was the first thing that came to me, and then I built the rest of the story around it.

Re: "The Last Toy" No worries, there are two more chapters coming very shortly! I'm glad you're enjoying it. As for Sallybear...no spoilers.

And I went back and broke up the paragraph in which Doofenshmirtz describes his various Inators so that the Isabufordinator isn't buried in the middle. Yay, obsessive-compulsiveness!

I did my best. I figured after a long story like that, the ending ought to be climactic. The Isabufordinator is first mentioned (perhaps too briefly) in chapter 8, when Doofenshmirtz is showing Perry his various Inators: "Over in the corner is something called the Isabufordinator. I’m not exactly sure what it does; some girl sent me the plans online." (The girl would be the hefty Isabuford fangirl with whom Eva was arguing in an earlier chapter.) Hey, gotta have a little suspense here and there. Cool. Although I'll probably end up writing my relatively short, rather dark Suzy-fic first. I'm going to assume you meant "peace" and aren't hitting on me. (Or maybe you were struck by the Peach Cobbler-inator.)

Just what I wanted to hear! I suppose Candace's busting obsession got put on the sidelines a bit in this story because of the whole saving-her-brothers'-lives thing. If that's what you mean. Yup, just one chapter left. Gotta have a little denouement. (My junior-high English teacher would be so proud.) I've only got two P&F-related ideas in my head that I think are actually good enough to write up. It's not impossible that I'll have more, but I also have lots of other story ideas that I want to bring to life, too. Oh, and I'm very glad you made that comment, because I wasn't sure that anyone was reading this thread besides me!

Re: "Leilaya's Evening" Thank you! As I note in the disclaimer, I wrote this story for a contest winner on Inkbunny, so he got to choose the main character and the fetishes that the story would involve. Even though I'm not all that into, for example, dragons and footjobs, I found myself enjoying finding ways to write about them that would do them justice and would be as exciting to me as to the contest winner and other readers.

Parking In Zone Zero Attracts Zesty Zitherists P E N G U I N

I forgot to mention MIzore from Rosario + Vampire. ("Call me your little snow bunny"...oh yeah...)

Never go into space without chicks. When the woods are the never-ending, icy-cold, soul-sucking darkness of space...

Thank you very much. Being faithful to the characters (while finding new stories to tell with them) is always a top priority for me.

Cheetara from ThunderCats. The original was hot, and the new one was even hotter. Agent K from The Replacements. Willow and Tara from Buffy the Vampire Slayer. Just about any version of Wonder Woman.

Aren't there some metallic crystals that are super strong? I vaguely recall that in Michael Crichton's AIRFRAME, they talk about "growing" jet engine turbine blades out of such crystals.

Never one moment of fluff in your life? Surely that's impossible. You've probably had such moments while on this site. (Unless "fluff" has a more specific meaning than I think it does.) I think you're right on the money with that. It occurred to me the other day that almost every story I've written has involved some sort of taboo--incest, rape, prostitution, bestiality, or what have you. Breaking the rules of society is hot. I guess I'm not really trying to cater to a particular audience--the stuff I write is probably too varied for all of it to be to any given person's taste, anyway (other than mine, that is). I just find reader behavior extremely counterintuitive, especially when it comes to what men and women like. I sometimes wish I could connect with the audience a bit more. I have a few readers who regularly leave me reviews, and I write responses to them in the forums, but I have no idea whether they are reading those responses. But I do see your overall point.

It's actually a real weapon called a chakram--a weapon made famous (for better or worse) by Xena: Warrior Princess. There was an episode of Deadliest Warrior on which a couple of experts threw chakrams at pig carcasses. I thought, "Yeah, like you're going to hurt anything with your killer Frisbee," but the chakrams sliced through the carcasses rather neatly.

What if an angel's "halo" were actually a circular throwing weapon ala Tron? Some of the Hindu gods have weapons like that.

No spoilers. Perry may or may not save Ferb. You may or may not forgive me. As noted above, if Stacy doesn't get some in this story, she'll get a bunch in one of my upcoming ones. And Japanese girls must be awesome, because Japanese guys like them, and they like a lot of stuff that's cool. I think I used up all my Ferbnessa mojo in "Sweet Dreams." I kind of feel like I've already told the best story about them that I'm ever going to tell. In fact, after this, I think I really only have two P&F stories left in me: "Tri-Date Area," which will be about a 3-way relationship among Candace, Jeremy, and Stacy, and an as-yet untitled, rather dark rape-revenge fic involving Candace and little Suzy Johnson (whom I have long considered to be the most evil P&F character there is. Sorry, Doctor D).

Glad you enjoyed the chapter, minus the implicit death threat. As for Stacy, if she doesn't get any in this story, she's going to get lots in my upcoming one, "Tri-Date Area."