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  1. Re: “A Little Goes a Long Way” From Lady Freelove on May 24, 2020 I’m very glad. I love making people laugh. You know, on purpose.
  2. Re: “F**k Perfect” From Lady Freelove on May 23, 2020 Thank you! This story was inspired by a Tumblr post from a woman who deliberately left her dryer full of hers and her daughters’ panties when a hunky Russian repairman came over. I thought that was a great concept and ran with it (with the poster’s permission).
  3. Re: “A Sweet Little Girl Like You” From Lady Freelove on May 23, 2020 Yes, I wouldn't have guessed that you would want to read this one. Not when I've got other stories that I think you would like better. Yup. I'm sorry this was a hard read for you. But I did put all the appropriate warning labels on it. I have many sides. I don't apologize for that. But I appreciate the compliment about my writing skill. I'd suggest that you avoid my other stories that have the Rape tag. You've already read the only one that's relatively benign ("Wish List"), which has the Rape tag only to warn away the easily triggered. Now, if you want to read a story with a similar level of fantasy but that’s much more up your alley content-wise, you might check out “Just Doin’ What We Do.”
  4. Re: “The Order of Things” From LeoChes on May 22, 2020 Thanks. And thank you for giving this story its first review! I don’t have any immediate plans to write more of this one. But if you liked “The Order of Things,” you might also enjoy my upcoming story “The Wrong Locker Room.” I expect to post it in the next week or two.
  5. From VaultHunter18 on May 19, 2020 Thanks, VaultHunter! (Imagine that I’m saying that in Marcus’ voice.) Indeed, one more chapter awaits. Stay tuned!
  6. So, a few things: --I think the next thing I’ll finish will be chapter 2 of “Keene’s College Weekend.” This chapter will be about three times as long as chapter 1. I’m hoping to send it off to beta by the weekend. --I’ve also got a oneshot story titled “The Wrong Locker Room” that’s pretty close to finished. It’s a furry MMMMMM/b Minor1 dubcon story, so it’s probably not going to get any reviews here, but the folks at Inkbunny will probably like it. --I’m starting to think about splitting the next chapter of “Wishful” into two chapters. The first sex scene is a bigger production than I had originally planned, so now I’m thinking of making the chapter about just that and ending with a bit of the plot twist/exhibition piece. The next chapter would have the rest of that and then the second sex scene. --I got a whopping four reviews today from Lady Freelove -- a couple of them on stories that hadn't received any reviews until now. It seems she is a voracious reader as well as a fun writer. (I’m currently enjoying the first segment of her new piece, “Reina’s Story.”)
  7. Re: “A Day at the Beach” From Lady Freelove on May 17, 2020 Thank you, and thanks for giving this story its first review! Sometimes, when I write these kinds of stories, I think about what would be the most obvious and logical thing to do -- and then do the opposite. When I started writing this one, I thought about having the mom and son go to a secluded beach where no one would see them. Then I decided that it would be more exciting if they went to a beach where everyone would see them, and where everyone was okay with it because they were doing the same sort of things.
  8. Re: “Wish List” From Lady Freelove on May 17, 2020 Thank you! I really love writing these first-person stories where you get to see the MC’s thought process. I think that helps make them relatable, too.
  9. Re: “A Very Special Thank You” From Lady Freelove on May 17, 2020 Sydney isn’t a telepath; the voices come from her own head. One of my psychology professors said that there are people who hear voices regularly, but these people aren’t considered psychotic because (1) they know the voices are coming from within and not from demons or alien transmissions or whatnot, and (2) the voices say relatively benign things (“Don’t forget to take out the trash”), rather than criticizing the person or telling them to go shoot young couples in the park. I thought that was an interesting idea that I wanted to play with in fiction.
  10. Re: "Dear Hazel" From Lady Freelove on May 17, 2020 Thank you! And thanks for being the first person to review this story. I wrote this story when it occurred to me that if I had feelings like that about someone and just had to express them, that I would do it in the form of a letter like Neil does. FYI, I had just started writing this story when I was suddenly seized by the idea for "Impulse," which is basically about someone acting on the same kind of desires that Neil expresses in "Dear Hazel." Whereas I usually take months to write a story, I feverishly wrote the first draft of "Impulse" in about a day. After editing and posting it, I went back and finished "Dear Hazel.”
  11. Hey there. So glad you liked that chapter, and I think you might like the next one even better. As to your questions: Chapter 6 of “For the Price of One” is coming right along. I’d say it’ll be ready in a week, definitely in two weeks. That chapter is also coming right along, but there’s plenty left to do. It’s got two big sex scenes, plus a major plot-related scene in the middle, so it could end up being the longest chapter yet.
  12. Re: “For the Price of One” From Fairy-Slayer on May 16, 2020 Recall that during their initial sexual liaisons at Ramón's place, and their first one at Serena's – when Maya wasn't home -- Serena wasn't nearly so loud. She only got loud when Maya was in the next room. So Ramón put two and two together. I lean a little hard on the old "She'll do anything as long as it's someone else's idea" device in my stories, but it's just so much fun. I don't think she'd have told Ramón about the camera if she were. No, Serena isn't shy. She just likes to have a little push when it comes to certain things. Thank you! Crap, I knew I was going to make a mistake like that at some point. Will have to go back and fix that. Thanks. That's why I never bold my name in the byline.
  13. From Fairy-Slayer on May 16, 2020 It's funny: While I find coming up with story titles difficult, I love writing chapter titles. Indeed. My thinking is that Lori and Bobby had planned to lose their virginity to each other some time ago, but that their plans were derailed by the Santiagos' sudden move to the city. Besides, they're only 17; it's not unrealistic that they wouldn't have had sex yet. As for telling Lincoln, Lori doesn't care how much disclosure is necessary as long as she gets her special night with her Boo-Boo Bear. Yeah, I felt like another "Oh, shit, the movie's over and everyone's leaving" ending was unnecessary. Nor did I want to go the route of some rent-a-cop shining a flashlight into the van and busting them. We'll deal with all of that a bit later on. Thank you!
  14. Having spent the past two weekends tackling ambitious to-do lists, I’m already planning to spend at least one day of the coming weekend doing virtually nothing but chilling on the sofa and watching TV. Good thing season 5 of She-Ra drops tomorrow. 

    1. GeorgeGlass

      GeorgeGlass

      My Saturday of virtually nothing was everything I dreamed. :) And season 5 of She-Ra was excellent – a fitting end to the series.

  15. Rafael: Definitely. He’s a side of beef. Gustav: Okay, yeah, I could see it. Jeremy: It would be great if Star made him her little bitchboy. Toffee: So I guess this story would predate his demise? Ferguson: Oh, my. Well, I guess variety is the spice of life. Ludo: Okay, drawing the line here. Not only is he small, stupid, and grotesque, but being an avian, he probably doesn’t even have a penis. Other monsters: Hmm, how about that hunky minotaur-thing that Ms. Skullnik briefly dated? And there’s the giraffe guy (maybe it’s not just his neck that’s long), two-headed guy (maybe he has two dicks, too), and of course Spikeballs (come on, the name alone...).
  16. Thanks! And this was not the final chapter; there’s one more to come.
  17. So there’s Marco, Tom, Oskar...who else do you have in mind?
  18. Chapter 4 of “Twist My Arm” is posted! Vanzilla may be parked, but Lincoln’s in for quite a ride nonetheless.
  19. I was sad to learn today that The World’s Concubine, whose stories I have enjoyed, has died of coronavirus. I know she had some good friends who will miss her.
  20. Re: “For the Price of One” From Lady Freelove on May 12, 2020 No worries, there’s more in the works!
  21. Re: “Nothing Beats Two Pair” From Lady Freelove on May 12, 2020 Thank you! Your stories were a real inspiration.
  22. I’m pleased to say that I’ve just sent chapter 4 of “Twist My Arm” off to beta. So unless it needs major revisions, it should be posted soon.
  23. Ten questions I'd ask various superheroes if they were real:

    1. Squirrel Girl: What are you going to call yourself when you're forty?
    2. Black Panther and Aquaman: Shouldn't you guys be, like, at home settling trade disputes instead of running around in tight pants?
    3. Martian Manhunter: Suspenders with shorts? Is that a Martian thing?
    4. America Chavez: If you just gently poked some cookie dough with your finger, would it make star shapes?
    5. Iron Man: What do you do if you have an itch?
    6. Beast Boy: So, when you turn into an animal, is it always a boy animal?
    7. Wolverine: If you and Vandal Savage got in a fight, which of you do you think would get bored and go home first?
    8. The Flash: Do women actually like the speed thing? Because, you know...
    9. The Thing: Do you think the right moisturizer would help?
    10. Violet Parr: Have you ever searched your own name on a site called Rule34?

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    2. GeorgeGlass

      GeorgeGlass

      @Strange_idea Certainly.

      @WillowDarkling Foal me once, shame on you. Foal me twice…

      @JayDee All I know is, dog welding is not something you should try in your garage on the weekend, I’ll tell you that.

    3. Strange_idea

      Strange_idea

      Well, squirrel girls both knows she's never going to and is ditzy enough to be totally caught off guard if she does. 

       

      They do both, but aqua man is an easily bored conqueror king first and a politician second, while t'challa's generally solving a trade dispute by hunting the most dangerous game. 

       

      With manhunter it's an "I'm every bit as strong as Superman and know EXACTLY what you just thought. What are you going to do?" thing. And probably easy to shape-shift into. 

       

      You KNOW Tony added some kind of massage device and it went wrong.

       

      This is actually Canon, but beast boy can turn into other humans (but isn't allowed to by writers) and even species like krytponians. Since several species are female only,  that would mean he can change genders. And if not he can borrow it from an animal. 

    4. JayDee

      JayDee

      Any character used to knock around with the Doom Patrol’s gonna be able to get freaky when the situation calls for it. They oughta bring back Danny the Street.

  24. Made some halfway decent progress on stories this week. Also did some figuring out about how much more of each of my in-progress stories I’m going to be writing. For the Price of One: 2-3 chapters, depending on how long some of the scenes I’m planning end up being. (BTW, “2-3” may not be precise, but it’s still an improvement; before this week, I had no idea how much more of this story I was going to write.) Twist My Arm: 2 more chapters, plus a short epilogue Flesh: Also 2 more chapters, plus a somewhat longer epilogue Wishful: 2 more chapters. Chapter 6 may end up being the longest of them all, so it’s taking a while to write; it’s got two big sex scenes and a major plot revelation in between them. Keene’s College Weekend: 2 more chapters. Chapter 2 is going to be the longest by far, because it covers a full day, unlike chapters 1 and 3. So that one is also taking a while to write. Once I finish one of these, the next thing I plan to start posting is a 3-chapter Craig of the Creek story titled “Creek Dreams.” SWP1: Glad you liked chapter 5 of “For the Price of One.” I hope you’ll like the next one just as much.
  25. Re: “For the Price of One” From thatguywiththeface on May 08, 2020 High praise, thatguy! Thank you.
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