GeorgeGlass

I wish that in 2016, Bob Iger could have been the outside-the-beltway candidate instead of Trump. America could have been The Happiest Country on Earth.

There’s going to be a lot of damage to repair, but I think Biden is the guy to do it, especially if the Senate remains in Republican control. He’ll be better at reaching across the aisle than Trump ever was.

I guess if the Clock King can make his OCD a superpower, I can make my ADD one.

Although my smut writing has slowed substantially because of NaNoWriMo, it hasn't stopped all together -- mainly because it helps me cope with various stresses. But now my writing is in full chaos mode, meaning that I work on whatever I feel like working on at the moment, without much thought regarding what I want to finish next. It's likely that I will finish a thing or two this month, but I have no idea what they will be.

The Italian cabbie in Night on Earth picks up a passenger who ends up describing his rather bizarre sexual history, which includes having once fucked a pumpkin.

From DoctorYnot on October 31, 2020 Rather than going paragraph by paragraph, I’m going to respond to your comments as a whole. Given that this was the longest chapter in the story so far, I wasn’t inclined to make it longer still by including more buildup. I’m weirdly anal about having some uniformity among chapters (except for the occasional one that just gets away from me and ends up being way longer than the others). In hindsight, what I probably should have done is dropped some hints in chapters 2 and 4 (in which Lincoln is in school) that Mrs. Johnson sees that something is up with Lincoln, and that she at least might be a bit attracted to Lincoln herself. But when I write a story like this, I guess I have a tendency to choose a “model” and stick with it – in this case, making only Lincoln and his partner the only POV characters in each chapter. Again, me being too anal for my own good. BTW, it was your previous comment that inspired me to throw the pregnancy bit in there. I hadn’t considered it before, but once you put it in my head, it seemed too exciting a bit to leave out.

From Fairy-Slayer on October 30, 2020 Given Coach Pacowski’s use of barbed wire in his obstacle course, one could argue that sex with Mrs. Johnson was the less kinky activity of the two. By this point, he’s had quite a lot of practice. Which, really, is the thrust of this story (as it were): precociously horny boy with precocious sexual and interpersonal skills is turned loose on his elementary school, and wackiness ensues. My feeling is that Mrs. Johnson’s good judgment has an OFF button somewhere in there. Thanks for another day-brightening review!

Hey there, SWP1. Glad you enjoyed the latest chapters of “Just One Rule” and “Wishful.” (I like the Gretchen/Adyson comparison.) Hope you had a good Halloween. I certainly did: A friend helped me build a candy slide in front of the house, and we got almost 200 trick-or-treaters. It was fun.

We shall see...

From Isabella8923 on November 01, 2020 Thanks again!

From Thundercloud on November 01, 2020 Thanks! I tried hard not to waste any words at the beginning. I do refer to Sam as “her” a few times during the intro, but I don’t really describe her physically until the sex scene starts, so I can see how you might have been unclear about Sam’s gender. Thanks! I was really aiming for that. Like Jenny seducing the dad? Given how he’d abused her and her lasting injury from it, I don’t think I could have made that believable. I would have had to make his abuse of her sexual rather than physical, and I didn’t want to take this particular story in that direction (especially since Jenny is the one under-18 character). Thanks for the review!

Really enjoyed your story, @JayDee. But I want to read it again before I review it.

From JayDee on October 29, 2020 Thanks! I tried to cram in as much info into as few words as possible. It's certainly a favorite topic of mine. I'm so glad the ambiguity of the situation generated the suspense I was aiming for. LOL! Huh, I didn't think about that particular connection. I was just thinking "mad with lust and super-strong." Thanks!

Yes! Ooooh, and a nice long list of content codes.

Now posted: “Just One Rule” Chapter 6: Extra Credit.

From InBrightestDay on October 27, 2020 You can always count on me to make you feel better about your own perversions. The suspense was unintentional, but I’ll take it. Basically, while her siblings were having wild gorilla sex, Jenny was planning the perfect crime. As soon as I thought of that line, I knew I had to use it. I tried to foreshadow it a little with the way that they look at each other, and the way Sam touches Freddie’s arm, but I may have undersold it. I wish that I’d had a little more time to think about and then work on this one. I was actually going to save this one for next Halloween, but when my original story for this year fizzled out, I figured I’d better switch to this. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reviewing!

Where authors can post responses to any reviews of their 2020 Halloween Party stories.

Yesterday, I posted my Halloween story “Unleash.” On the one hand, I’m happy to have actually gotten it done before Halloween; on the other hand, I wish I’d had a few more weeks with it, just to kick ideas around in my head before I started writing. Finishing “Unleash” has opened a slot on the List of Twenty. I’ve decided to fill it with a story called “Wedding Night,” which is inspired by the artwork of Hezzer and which takes place in a world where futas are the ruling class. A poor family effectively sells their daughter to one of these wealthy futas at a high price because the daughter is an “early” – a girl who becomes fertile at a young age, before showing any outward signs of puberty. You can guess what direction the story takes after that.

Re: “Wishful” From Fairy-Slayer on October 26, 2020 Now that you mention it, I like to think that, too. Honestly, I just didn’t think of it. But Valerius has probably learned not to get too attached to his serial masters, given that he’s been through a great many of them over the millennia. Thanks! One of Jomahawk’s stipulations was that Angelica would reveal some kind of secret to Jace, but he left it to me to decide what that secret would be. So I’d have her confess something, and then I’d think, “No, that’s not a good enough secret.” So I’d write another, and another, and then I ended up not actually wanting to get rid of any of them. I really wracked my brain to come up with that. Because Angelica is inspired by Lucy Loud, I remembered a Loud House episode in which Lucy “cheated” on Edwin by reading werewolf novels, and there we are. Hey, no spoilers. What did I just say?! I don’t remember Pervy Spice. Did she quit the band before they got famous? Thanks for another mood-lifting review!

I’ve finished my story and opened up the Halloween Party to all! (I’ve added the link to the top post.) Folks can add their stories when ready, and please post your title and tags here so I can add them to the Introduction page. Oh, and here are mine: Unleash, by George Glass Warnings: Inc, M/F, MiCD, Violence Summary: Seeking the courage to escape their abusive father, three teens try a new street drug that can empower you to act on your deepest desires. But what if your deepest desire isn’t what you think it is?

Re: “The Order of Things” From The all seeing eye on October 25, 2020 I don’t have plans for one right now, but it could happen if the right idea hits me. Even if it doesn’t, I’m sure I’ll be writing more stories in this vein. Also, if you liked this story, you might also enjoy “The Wrong Locker Room.”

From DoctorYnot on October 24, 2020 I don’t know what to say in response to this except “Stay tuned.”

Just checking: Does anyone have a story that’s finished and ready to post? I’m hoping to have mine ready tomorrow.

Re: “Wishful” From Jomahawk2694 on October 24, 2020 At this stage of the story, I tend to think of the token as nudging reality in whatever direction will help fulfill its owner's desires. There was probably a rainstorm coming anyway, but the token might have made it more severe and longer-lasting. With convenient rain bands that thunder violently during orgasms but quiet down when it’s time for dialogue. I'm so glad you liked that part, because I was wracking my brain to come up with a confession for Angelica to make that didn't just repeat something that had already happened in the story. (And even so, it kind of did – hence the reference to Neva.) Aw daaaaaamn, I never even thought about that. Yes, that absolutely happened. We shall see. You know I love a cliffhanger. I'm so glad you've been this happy with it. Writing this story has taken me in directions I wouldn't necessarily have gone on my own, and that has been a great experience for me.