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From Lunarsilver on November 13, 2020 Thanks! More chapters are in the works. No spoilers.

So it seems that after 7 years of posting stories here on AFF, I still have virtually no ability to predict which stories will be popular and which will fall flat. When I wrote the first chapter of "The Cartooniverse Mother-Daughter Crossover Sextacular," I thought it would be a huge hit, but in the almost 2 months since I posted it, it hasn't garnered a single review in the archives. At the opposite extreme, I thought my non-canonical Lilo & Stitch story "Biological Imperative" would be too niche to attract much of an audience, yet it has received 5 reviews in the day-and-a-half since I posted the first chapter. Ain’t complainin’!

She's certainly undergoing something experimental.

If any reviews come in for “Biological Imperative,” I’ll respond to them here.

I’ve just posted chapter 1 of the new Lilo & Stitch story, titled “Biological Imperative.”

To my own surprise, it looks like the next thing I'll post will be chapter 1 of my non-canon-compatible Lilo &Stitch story. FYI, all consent in that story will be dubious at best.

I’m really tired, and it’s my own damn fault. I should have started my NaNo writing much earlier in the evening, but I suddenly got on this big kick writing my deeply perverted one-shot story “Wedding Night.” So my “legit” writing got a late start. Now I’m gonna go lie down and put on The Owl House until I fall asleep.

I wish that in 2016, Bob Iger could have been the outside-the-beltway candidate instead of Trump. America could have been The Happiest Country on Earth.

There’s going to be a lot of damage to repair, but I think Biden is the guy to do it, especially if the Senate remains in Republican control. He’ll be better at reaching across the aisle than Trump ever was.

I guess if the Clock King can make his OCD a superpower, I can make my ADD one.

Although my smut writing has slowed substantially because of NaNoWriMo, it hasn't stopped all together -- mainly because it helps me cope with various stresses. But now my writing is in full chaos mode, meaning that I work on whatever I feel like working on at the moment, without much thought regarding what I want to finish next. It's likely that I will finish a thing or two this month, but I have no idea what they will be.

The Italian cabbie in Night on Earth picks up a passenger who ends up describing his rather bizarre sexual history, which includes having once fucked a pumpkin.

From DoctorYnot on October 31, 2020 Rather than going paragraph by paragraph, I’m going to respond to your comments as a whole. Given that this was the longest chapter in the story so far, I wasn’t inclined to make it longer still by including more buildup. I’m weirdly anal about having some uniformity among chapters (except for the occasional one that just gets away from me and ends up being way longer than the others). In hindsight, what I probably should have done is dropped some hints in chapters 2 and 4 (in which Lincoln is in school) that Mrs. Johnson sees that something is up with Lincoln, and that she at least might be a bit attracted to Lincoln herself. But when I write a story like this, I guess I have a tendency to choose a “model” and stick with it – in this case, making only Lincoln and his partner the only POV characters in each chapter. Again, me being too anal for my own good. BTW, it was your previous comment that inspired me to throw the pregnancy bit in there. I hadn’t considered it before, but once you put it in my head, it seemed too exciting a bit to leave out.

From Fairy-Slayer on October 30, 2020 Given Coach Pacowski’s use of barbed wire in his obstacle course, one could argue that sex with Mrs. Johnson was the less kinky activity of the two. By this point, he’s had quite a lot of practice. Which, really, is the thrust of this story (as it were): precociously horny boy with precocious sexual and interpersonal skills is turned loose on his elementary school, and wackiness ensues. My feeling is that Mrs. Johnson’s good judgment has an OFF button somewhere in there. Thanks for another day-brightening review!

Hey there, SWP1. Glad you enjoyed the latest chapters of “Just One Rule” and “Wishful.” (I like the Gretchen/Adyson comparison.) Hope you had a good Halloween. I certainly did: A friend helped me build a candy slide in front of the house, and we got almost 200 trick-or-treaters. It was fun.

We shall see...

From Isabella8923 on November 01, 2020 Thanks again!

From Thundercloud on November 01, 2020 Thanks! I tried hard not to waste any words at the beginning. I do refer to Sam as “her” a few times during the intro, but I don’t really describe her physically until the sex scene starts, so I can see how you might have been unclear about Sam’s gender. Thanks! I was really aiming for that. Like Jenny seducing the dad? Given how he’d abused her and her lasting injury from it, I don’t think I could have made that believable. I would have had to make his abuse of her sexual rather than physical, and I didn’t want to take this particular story in that direction (especially since Jenny is the one under-18 character). Thanks for the review!

Really enjoyed your story, @JayDee. But I want to read it again before I review it.

From JayDee on October 29, 2020 Thanks! I tried to cram in as much info into as few words as possible. It's certainly a favorite topic of mine. I'm so glad the ambiguity of the situation generated the suspense I was aiming for. LOL! Huh, I didn't think about that particular connection. I was just thinking "mad with lust and super-strong." Thanks!

Yes! Ooooh, and a nice long list of content codes.

Now posted: “Just One Rule” Chapter 6: Extra Credit.

From InBrightestDay on October 27, 2020 You can always count on me to make you feel better about your own perversions. The suspense was unintentional, but I’ll take it. Basically, while her siblings were having wild gorilla sex, Jenny was planning the perfect crime. As soon as I thought of that line, I knew I had to use it. I tried to foreshadow it a little with the way that they look at each other, and the way Sam touches Freddie’s arm, but I may have undersold it. I wish that I’d had a little more time to think about and then work on this one. I was actually going to save this one for next Halloween, but when my original story for this year fizzled out, I figured I’d better switch to this. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reviewing!

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