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  1. I thought this was a good point, so I went and added the WIP tag to my in-progress stories.
  2. The archive is separated by medium, not by network, so those shows would fall into the Cartoons category.
  3. Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on March 27, 2021 Oh yeah. That bit about Athena putting herself directly between Jace’s face and his tablet screen is what one of my cats used to do to my wife all the time. Have I mentioned how fetish-compatible you and Joma are? She’s probably a G-cup. It’s hard to say for sure, though, because the Benata use an ideographic language instead of an alphabet. *whistles casually* Oh, my. That thought puts a smile on my face. Thank you! No worries, feel free to pace yourself. Thanks for the review!
  4. Re: “Wedding Night” From IttyBittySkitty on March 27, 2021 Okay, first of all, not only is this the cutest review I've ever seen in my life, but you wrote it about a story that I would not have expected either of you to read, let alone like. You two are full of surprises. "Hot but twisted" is among my more favorite subgenres. Right now, Flora is a young, fresh flower. Eden wouldn't want to mess with that. It's entirely possible that Eden will want Flora "restored" at some point, maybe after Flora has pumped out her first five or six kiddies for Eden. LOL! I'm with Joma on this one. Did I mention that this is the cutest review ever? The game that came out broken? Not sure I like that comparison. (I kid you. :)) Ooooh, that'a a rather good comparison. The backstory I have in my head is that at some point, aliens came to Earth (or some version of Earth) round about the 16th century. Rather than colonizing the planet, they used genetic engineering to mix their DNA with that of humans, which produced the first Ladies. The aliens gave them immense wealth and technology, and once the Ladies were established as Earth's permanent overclass, the aliens moved on to repeat the process on other worlds. The way I conceive of this world, that will depend on the children. Only about 1 in 5 will be born a Lady; the rest will be girls. (Males are only found in the working classes.) The Ladies will be given the best possible education and an inheritance, while the girls will be trained to serve them. No sons (see above), but yes, Eden will most certainly train her futa-daughters to be ruthless -- sexually and otherwise. I hadn't thought of continuing Flora and Eden's story in particular, but I might very well write other stories set in their world. Oh, most certainly. I'd be intrigued to see what you come up with. Thanks for the review! It made my day.
  5. Re: “Rashomonster” From GrayNeko on March 25, 2021 It took me a minute to get that. My initial thought was that it was a monster that devours Swedish crispbread. Thank you! Much like my own. That’s why I gave up writing regular fanfiction. More is on the way! And on the topic of "more," might we be graced with another chapter of "Ears to You, Luz Noceda" any time soon? Thanks for the review!
  6. Chapter 1 of “Rashōmonster” is up! Fred is injured in an accident when he encounters Go Go and Wasabi at the lab after hours. But why are all three of them lying about what happened? (Spoiler alert: Because sex) Also, Eh Steve read “Monsters” over at Hentai Foundry and also commented on the similarity to Ghastly’s Ghastly Comic. Now that I’ve seen the tentacle monster in said comic, I can see why – even the tentacle monster’s eye-stalks are like Takito’s.
  7. I’ve never actually used the WIP tag. I always figured that if the story doesn’t have either the COMPLETE tag or the Oneshot tag, then it’s clear the story is still in progress. (Not that the COMPLETE tag actually stops commenters from asking about what will happen in the next chapter.)
  8. Re: “A Little Goes a Long Way” From JayDee on March 23, 2021 Thanks! This was a big experiment for me, as I had never written a dialogue-only story before. But with only two characters, it seemed doable; I think it would have been much harder with even one more. I’m actually not big on ageplay myself. But when I learned about littles, I saw a lot of potential for comedy in a grown woman wanting to act like a little girl. Thank you! I had so much fun writing this one. And I definitely made use of the “the submissive is the one in control” trope. One of those “getting what you need instead of what you want” situations. Thanks again, and thanks for the review!
  9. “Wedding Night” is posted! The summary: Flora is an Early—a girl who becomes fertile long before showing any outward sign of puberty. Now, Flora belongs to High Lady Eden, who is eager to take advantage of Flora’s fertility. Inspired by the art of Hezzer. I think that will be enough rapey original stories for a little while. The next thing I’ll post will probably be chapter 1 (out of 3) of “Rashomonster.”
  10. Re: “Monsters” From Fairy-Slayer on March 20, 2021 Thanks! They don’t teach monster kids about teenagers until at least 10th grade. Too graphic. Yeah, I definitely went with the anime-hair thing. I also get the impression that dyeing one’s hair is a major act of rebellion for a Japanese teenager, so it seems like something a bunch of real baddos like these gals might do. Oh, and a couple of author’s notes about this story: According to my internet research, all of the girls’ names in this story are authentic Japanese names. Tora means "tigress," and Rin indicates a person who is cold, severe, and dignified. The other four names were chosen for their resemblance to English words: Miseri for misery, Sada for sadism, Nagi because it resembles "naga" (a mythical snake creature) and "Nagini" (Voldemort's huge snake in Harry Potter), and Saeko because it is pronounced like "psycho." To my knowledge, Takito is not a real name -- which was a deliberate choice because I didn't want the monster character to have a human name. It's based on "tako," the Japanese word for octopus.
  11. Been making a lot of progress on a lot of things lately. The most noteworthy progress is on an original oneshot story called "Wedding Night," which is inspired by the artwork of Hezzer and is about a young girl who is purchased by a ruling-class futa to be her bride (read: breeding slave). It will probably be ready to post in the next few days.
  12. No, I didn’t perceive them that way at all. Thanks! As the title implies, monstrousness is more about behavior than how many limbs you have.
  13. Re: “Monsters” From JayDee on March 19, 2021 Making it a comedy seemed too predictable; I’m sure someone (or many someones) have done a tentacle-monster-gets-raped comedy already. I thought it would be more interesting to go the other way with it. BTW, if you want to see my attempt at a rape comedy, check out “A Little Goes a Long Way.” I’m not sure she ever leaves the library; her web is probably on the ceiling. Makes for a short commute. Thanks! I was trying to make them believable mean-teens. Some blobby monsters are capable of empathy, others not so much. Thank you, and thanks for the review!
  14. From SailorNemesis on March 17, 2021 Although there’s a pretty solid dose of Nani-sex in chapter 7, too. Does she even have a name?
  15. “Monsters” is posted! More proof that it’s not easy being green. @FairySlayer, I tried that link in a couple of different browsers, and they both warned me that it wasn’t safe to go there. Maybe it really IS ghastly.
  16. Chapter 7 of “Biological Imperative” is posted! Stitch and Lilo get what they want: a new girl to use and a tasty bit of revenge, respectively. FYI, Googling “Uncle Ghasty” just gets me a bunch of hits about Uncle Ghastly from The Flintstones. So you may need to explain, fellas.
  17. Quick question: Which of these three sentences do you find most readable? Assume that the speaker has only one boyfriend and one daughter, and that Randy also has only one daughter.

    "This is my boyfriend Randy, my daughter Evie, and Randy's daughter Rose."

    "This is my boyfriend, Randy, my daughter, Evie, and Randy's daughter, Rose."

    "This is my boyfriend, Randy; my daughter, Evie; and Randy's daughter, Rose.

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    2. Melrick

      Melrick

      I’ve had a cup of tea and a nice lie down since my rant, and now I’m feeling more calm. lol  Basically, whatever feels right for you is what you should go with.

    3. JayDee

      JayDee

      The worst thing is a colon in the wrong place. Such as in your lunch.

    4. Maxsteele1986

      Maxsteele1986

      I think the 2nd one is the best one.

  18. Update: Yesterday, I ended up making a bunch of progress on the next chapter of "Biological Imperative." So now it's looking like that will be the next thing I post – probably tomorrow night. I'm also pretty close to finishing "Monsters," an original oneshot about an young tentacle monster who is confronted by a gang of teenage girls.
  19. Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on March 15, 2021 Chapter 4 is where things start ramping up. No spoilers. But I'm a cat person, too. Joma specifically requested that particular fetish for Snowdrift’s alter ego. I hope I did it justice. Alice has wanted Jace, and vice versa, since long before the magic token came into the picture. But the influence of the Wishful brought Alice's desires to the fore. Again, no spoilers. I can't wait for you to see it.
  20. Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on March 15, 2021 Joma came up with the name "Wishful." Mmmm, Classic Lola is hot. Thanks! When Joma said that the rabbits would be twins who finish each other's sentences, it made me think of the Dee Dees (Harley Quinn's granddaughters) from Batman Beyond, and that gave me the idea to make them circus-type performers. Did I mention how in sync you and Joma are with your fetishes? Porn logic is best logic. Hmmm, yes, hopefully. Thank you, and thanks for the reviews!
  21. Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on March 14, 2021 Yup, very much like a genie lamp. You’ll find out how much so later on. Nope, you got it right. Is he all three? Eh, maybe not. You'll find out more about that as you go. You read "Multiversity"? I'm flattered. FYI, I recently started outlining a new Gravity Falls story, titled "Depravity Falls." Wow, you and Joma are really in sync with your fetishes. Yeah, Joma was pretty specific about the lingerie. Even if he hadn't been, authentic medieval underwear probably wouldn't have made for a fun read. Coin of the Realm is not a real game, but it is indeed inspired by Catan. I hope you'll like it just as much!
  22. Thanks! I found the episode in which Lincoln flirts with Cristina’s picture quite memorable, and I thought it would be fun to have the new-and-improved Lincoln make a comeback with a girl with whom he was very much on the outs.
  23. Category Name: Big Hero 6 Section category to be in: Cartoons > +1 through F Do you have any stories for it?: But of course.
  24. Thank you! I appreciate your taking the time to review this story (multiple times) despite your not being comfortable with all parts of it.
  25. Now posted: “Just One Rule” Chapter 8: Crushing It. Not exactly sure what I’ll post next, but it might be chapter 1 of “Rashomonster.”
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