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The 10th and final chapter of “Just One Rule” is posted! I’ve also posted some author notes in the review response thread.

Author notes [SPOILERS] As in “Enter the Sandboy,” most of the chapter titles are meant to provide a small hint as to which character(s) Lincoln will have sex with in that chapter. Lincoln and his friends returning to the 5th grade when the new school year starts is a joke about -- and an exploitation of -- the inconsistent passage of time on the show. The Louds had at least two Halloweens, two Christmases, and three April Fools’ Days without any of the kids having a birthday or moving on to the next grade. Of course, now they’ve actually aged everyone up a year, probably just to screw with me because they know I don’t have cable anymore and can't watch the new episodes. Lola and Lucy each get a full sex scene with Lincoln in this story because they were the only sisters who didn’t have full intercourse with him in “Enter the Sandboy.” Lynn's line "If you don't squeeze that butt, nobody else will!" was said by a substitute instructor in my morning exercise class. She immediately followed with, "Oooh, that was inappropriate." The scissors trick that Stella uses to unlock the door of the empty classroom in chapter 4 was one that worked on the faculty elevator at my elementary school. Elizabeth’s Mystery -- a Loud-world analogue of Victoria’s Secret -- was mentioned before in my story “The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant.” Reusing it in this story was kind of a cheat, because the two stories are not canon with each other. The hardest chapters to write were chapters 7, 8, and 10. Chapters 7 and 10 were difficult because orgy scenes are always complicated; you have to keep track of what everyone’s doing and what state of dress (or undress) they’re in, making sure not to completely neglect any character. Chapter 8 was difficult because it had to follow the orgy scene in chapter 7, and because I had to find a way to make it different from all the previous one-on-one sex scenes with Lincoln and a same-age girl. For chapter 8 (“Crushing It”), my original idea was for Lincoln to get busy with Paige, the girl he crushes on in the episode “L is for Love.” But then I decided that it would be more fun if Lincoln did it with Cristina, a girl who was repulsed by him after seeing him flirt with a picture of her on video in “Making the Case.” Cristina’s slip of the tongue when she says “Can I talk to you for a sex- I mean, a sec?” is the result of a typo I made while writing that line (the x and the c being next to each other on the keyboard). I thought it was funny and decided to just go with it. Cristina’s older sister Casey is not canon. I made her up for the sake of this story. “Fritz Sabatino,” the disgraced founder of Royal Woods Community College, is an allusion to Chris Savino, who created The Loud House but is no longer associated with it because of multiple accusations of sexual harassment. Lily's outfit in chapter 10 was inspired by a piece of fanart I saw that shows Lily in fishnet stockings. There will be one more story in this series, making it a trilogy. The third story has no title as yet, but I have begun outlining it.

Re: “Record” From DoctorYnot on May 28, 2021 Well, you DID inspire it... Thank you! IMO, Lynn's defining personality traits are her nonstop intensity and her competitiveness -- even with herself. She has to push everything to the limit. I felt that those characteristics made her ideal for a story like this. Accurate voice is very important to me -- especially when it comes to the Loud sisters, because it's important to make them sound different from one another. Part of how this story went from being an idea in my head to being word-flesh is that I could really hear Lynn's voice in my head, taunting Lincoln in that way. Yeah, "You know you want to" is pretty beaten to death, whereas "need to" sort of takes away even more of Lincoln's sense of control. I like that metaphor. Just as every comedian needs a straight man, every horror story needs a victim. This is where I had to "craft a new side to her," as you said earlier, because one wouldn't necessarily expect Lynn to be a keen observer of things. But I needed her to be aware of Lincoln's adolescent weaknesses in order to make her as scary as she needs to be in this story. I did a bit of outlining there to make sure that each blowjob was more intense than the previous one. Yeah, but Lynn was trying to turn him on, not off. Part of what makes Lynn an effective antagonist in this story is that everything she accuses Lincoln of is actually true. She knows him as well as he knows himself, but she's willing to speak of the things that Lincoln doesn't want to admit to. Just had to throw a bit of Lucy-color in there. Even if black isn't actually a color. When it comes to sex scenes, I often find that the dialogue is the most fun part to write. It certainly was for this story. Thanks! As you point out, Lincoln's fantasies were important to making each one different from the others. That, plus the gradual increase in intensity and Lynn showing Lincoln more of her body to get him turned on. Lynn forcing her way into Lincoln's fantasies seemed like an idea you would come up with, so I went for it. Thank you! And thanks so much for the detailed review.

I finally have news about something other than “My Wish”: I’ve been making a lot of progress on chapter 10 of “Just One Rule.” I expect to have it off to beta in the next few days.

The next chapter of “My Wish Is Your Command” is up. Here, we jump forward in time a little. Chapter 4: What Are Sisters For? Whatever Bart Wants

I made good progress on the final chapter of "Just One Rule" last night, but there's still more to do before it will be ready for beta. On the other hand, I expect to post the next chapter of "My Wish Is Your Command" on Sunday.

The next chapter of “My Wish Is Your Command” is up! Chapter 3: Aunt Misbehavin’

Yeah, I may have just overestimated the popularity of The Simpsons as a porn-fandom. (This story probably would have been more popular a decade or two ago.) And yes, Nani is hotter than any Simpsons character, at least in their canonical forms.

So far, “My Wish Is Your Command” has proven to be something of a dud. The only “reviews” it has received so far involved one reviewer telling me what they wish I’d done and the other telling me what to do next. I don’t exactly get this, because this story is much in the same vein as “Biological Imperative,” which was quite popular. More evidence that I still have zero idea what readers want. Anyhoo, I’m not sure what will be ready for posting next, but it might well be chapter 3 of “My Wish.” I’m making progress on a lot of other things, but nothing else is terribly close to being ready for prime time yet.

Re: “Wishful” From Fanfictionfan360 on May 10, 2021 Thanks! She’s got good taste.

Re: “Just Doin’ What We Do (A Halloween Story)” From Maxsteele1986 on May 08, 2021 No – Emily, Joe Bob, and Emily’s sister and brother-in-law were normal humans. That’s why they didn’t transform when the others did. It’s also why Joe Bob says, “Our families have helped keep the peace between humans and weres for more than two hundred years.”

As promised, the next chapter of “My Wish Is Your Command” is posted. Chapter 2: School, but Cool

I think I'm going to be posting new chapters of "My Wish Is Your Command" at a faster rate than I expected. The story is easy to write because it has no real plot arc; it's more like a series of slice-of-life stories presented in chronological order. Barring some major distraction, I’ll be posting chapter 2 tomorrow.

Honestly, I never would have thought of it if I hadn’t seen episodes of Star Trek: TNG and Fame that ripped off the plot of Rashomon. I thought it would be fun to do the same thing in a fic, especially a fic in a Japanese-inspired fandom like Big Hero 6. I helped that I had the story outlined in my head from the start, and that the story was meant to follow the basic three-act structure of a TV show.

Re: “Rashomonster” From GrayNeko on May 01, 2021 That was pretty much what inspired me to write this story. Her insane crush on the leader of Big Hero 6 seemed to justify a lot of really out-there behavior on her part. Cool. I like that. I decided that I haven’t been writing nearly enough surprise-buttsex scenes in my stories, and there we were. Well, you got some of that in “Biological Imperative,” at least. There will be some in “My Wish Is Your Command,” too. This story is the length it is because it follows the model of others that have ripped off the plot of Rashōmon. For example, in the Star Trek: The Next Generation episode "A Matter of Perspective," we first learn that a scientist was murdered. Then we see the story of what happened from three different characters’ perspectives, and then, at the end, we see the truth. That’s the model I went with. BTW, a few hours after I posted the chapter, I realize that I had forgotten to include my authors’ notes. I’ve added them at the end of the final chapter. Or a Cutie-Beast surprise. For all we know, Hiro’s reproductive DNA was temporarily altered along with the rest of him. Thank you, and thanks for the review!

The final chapter of Rashomonster is posted! Chapter 3: The Why of It

Hey there! I was just thinking about you the other day. Glad you’re doing okay and that you are COVID-free. (I am too, and I got vaccinated a while back, thankfully.) Thanks for all the comments. Glad you’re liking Rashomonster, the final chapter of which I expect to post before the weekend is out. As for the Little Rose sequel, there is much yet to be done.

From Fairy-Slayer on April 29, 2021 An excellent question, whose answer may be beyond my capacity for rhyme. Thank you! I didn't think this chapter would work without Ana having some serious internal conflict to deal with before the sex (as with Cristina in chapter 8). I thought about having her pay him afterward for that very reason, but since Lincoln didn't actually tell anyone where he was going, it didn't seem necessary from a plot standpoint. Plus, I didn't want to put Lincoln in the position of feeling like a boy-whore. Thank you! Lincoln's crush on Ms. DiMartino was the main reason why I wanted to include her in this story (along with her general hotness, of course). In the other chapters, Lincoln is driven mainly by horniness; I wanted one chapter in which he had another motivation, too, one which would make the sex scene different from the others. "Psst! Nobody tell Clyde about Rule 34!" She's definitely not as cautious as she should be. Agnes strikes me as one of those adults who never decided that the time for youthful wildness was over. Ooooohhhh, that was...clever, I will grudgingly admit. Thanks for the review!

Been making lots of progress on lots of stories this week, but no especially noteworthy progress on anything except for the third and final chapter of “Rashomonster,” which I expect to post this weekend.

Re: “Comfort and Joy” From Maxsteele1986 on April 29, 2021 Thanks! I’m pretty fond of this one. I have more stories in the works that are in a similar vein, so stay tuned.

Re: “Company Policy” From Maxsteele1986 on April 28, 2021 Back when I wrote this story, I chose Radio Shack as John’s previous employer because they were rated (in two different surveys) as the worst company to work for. Maybe your employer has moved into the lead since then.

Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on April 25, 2021 Before we get into your review, I just want to say that it’s everything I hoped for and more. I’m so pleased to know you found it hot. I was really trying to pull out all the stops with this chapter, which meant doing things I hadn’t done in previous chapters, and that’s always a risk. Glad it worked. LOL! *chuckle* And thank you for not calling it a “fustercluck.” I think this chapter required as much outlining as all 8 of the previous chapters combined. Thankfully, writing stories like “Hot Yoga” and “The More, the Merrier” gave me valuable experience in writing orgy scenes. That was me indulging my own fetishes. I love the mating press, especially when impregnation is involved. They are first and foremost entertainers, as well as being horny bunnies, so it just seemed logical that they would be the ones facilitating the action. I had to make some tough choices about what to include in this chapter and what not to. Ultimately, I felt that since we’d just had 2 straight chapters of Angel/Angelica, I would give more of the spotlight to the other characters in the final chapter. OMG, I’m kind of loving these ideas. Indeed, the Wish-world is full of possibilities. And I would be honored if you wanted to write stories about it. I’m so glad. You are so very, very welcome. Joma, you have such a big help to me over the years, and Skitty, you seem to make him so happy, which just gladdens my heart. It’s only Monday, but getting this review from the two of you has already made my whole week. Thank you.

Ah, so Luz is finally gonna try the sausage? I’m all for that.

Except that women actually WANT to have sex with Lincoln.