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From JamesRyder on June 24, 2021 Thank you so much! I shall.

Wow, chapter 1 of "Weekend at Waltney World" has only been posted for a day, and it has already garnered 600+ dragon prints and 2 reviews! It feels good to have a hit after having a few flops recently. Speaking of flops, it looks like the final chapter of "Cartooniverse" will be ready for beta in the next few days. SWP1, good to hear from you. I’m glad you’re enjoying “Weekend” so far. As for the “Little Rose” sequel, I haven’t made too much progress as of yet. I really need to outline it before I try writing more of it, because pantsing it just isn’t working for me.

Re: “Weekend at Waltney World” From Digifan303 on June 23, 2021 Thanks. Hope you’ll enjoy it. Sorry, I meant to post the link at the beginning of the chapter. You can find it here: “The Happiest Place”

Re: “Weekend at Waltney World” From darkmoon21 on June 22, 2021 Thanks! Hope you’ll enjoy them.

The first chapter of “Weekend at Waltney World” is posted! Chapter 1: Costumes

From Nsnsndjd on June 21, 2021 Well, there’s no higher praise than that, so I thank you.

The next chapter of “My Wish” is posted! We jump forward in time again and see what Bart gets up to at age eighteen. Chapter 7: The Best Way to Start the Day

Chapter 1 of “Waltney World” (which may or may not be the final title) has just gone off to beta. The next chapter of “My Wish” should be ready soon, too. And I continue to make progress on other stuff, including the final chapter of “Cartooniverse.”

I’m already planning my Halloween story. It’s the one I aborted last year in favor of writing “Unleash,” but I’ve since had a good chat about it with Jomahawk, who have me some solid ideas about how to make it work. So “Night of the Were-Bimbos” is in the works!

Well, you wouldn’t guess it from my rate of posting, but I’ve actually been doing a lot of writing lately. It’s just that I’ve been making incremental progress on a lot of things and not great progress on any one thing. This will probably lead to my posting a bunch of stuff in rapid succession in the not too distant future. In non-writing news, I recently watched the season 2 finale of Amphibia. Holy moly, that was a big one.

From DreamWorlds on June 15, 2021 Yeah, this story is a bit derivative of Flesh – okay, a lot derivative of Flesh – but there’s just something fun about all-powerful shotas having their way with every female they can get their hands on. Well, it was that or turn him into a giant jack-in-the-box, and that’s been done. Grant was more driven and creative than Bart. But we’ll get more into Bart’s psychological manipulations and their effects on his family and peers as we go. Thank you!

The next chapter of “My Wish” is posted! Chapter 6: Happy Birthday, Maggie

I’ve been making good progress on chapter 6 of “My Wish.” This chapter is longer than most, but I expect to post it this weekend. What will be post-ready after that, I’m not sure. I have a few things that could be ready soonish if inspiration strikes. I’d also really like to finish up “Cartooniverse,” but the final chapter is only 5200 words right now; there are probably at least 1500 words left to write.

From Fairy-Slayer on June 07, 2021 Wow, try saying THAT five times fast. With “Whoops,” I decided early on that it wasn’t going to be that kind of story. This story, on the other hand… That idea came to me kind of late, but then once I had it, I realized that I should have thought of it from the beginning. That’s quite possible. Not that I’m consciously aware of. From here, things in the Loud house can only get crazier. Especially if they have visitors...

Dang. this thread has more spam than a Hawaiian 7-Eleven.

The next chapter of “My Wish” is up. Chapter 5: Terri-fied

Re: “Father’s Love” From Fakeacc on June 01, 2021 At least you can console yourself with the thought that you’re probably less sick than I am.

Glad you liked it! I’ll just tell you right now: There will not be any birth scenes in the third story. Not my cup of tea. Sisters getting pregnant, on the other hand...

The 10th and final chapter of “Just One Rule” is posted! I’ve also posted some author notes in the review response thread.

Author notes [SPOILERS] As in “Enter the Sandboy,” most of the chapter titles are meant to provide a small hint as to which character(s) Lincoln will have sex with in that chapter. Lincoln and his friends returning to the 5th grade when the new school year starts is a joke about -- and an exploitation of -- the inconsistent passage of time on the show. The Louds had at least two Halloweens, two Christmases, and three April Fools’ Days without any of the kids having a birthday or moving on to the next grade. Of course, now they’ve actually aged everyone up a year, probably just to screw with me because they know I don’t have cable anymore and can't watch the new episodes. Lola and Lucy each get a full sex scene with Lincoln in this story because they were the only sisters who didn’t have full intercourse with him in “Enter the Sandboy.” Lynn's line "If you don't squeeze that butt, nobody else will!" was said by a substitute instructor in my morning exercise class. She immediately followed with, "Oooh, that was inappropriate." The scissors trick that Stella uses to unlock the door of the empty classroom in chapter 4 was one that worked on the faculty elevator at my elementary school. Elizabeth’s Mystery -- a Loud-world analogue of Victoria’s Secret -- was mentioned before in my story “The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant.” Reusing it in this story was kind of a cheat, because the two stories are not canon with each other. The hardest chapters to write were chapters 7, 8, and 10. Chapters 7 and 10 were difficult because orgy scenes are always complicated; you have to keep track of what everyone’s doing and what state of dress (or undress) they’re in, making sure not to completely neglect any character. Chapter 8 was difficult because it had to follow the orgy scene in chapter 7, and because I had to find a way to make it different from all the previous one-on-one sex scenes with Lincoln and a same-age girl. For chapter 8 (“Crushing It”), my original idea was for Lincoln to get busy with Paige, the girl he crushes on in the episode “L is for Love.” But then I decided that it would be more fun if Lincoln did it with Cristina, a girl who was repulsed by him after seeing him flirt with a picture of her on video in “Making the Case.” Cristina’s slip of the tongue when she says “Can I talk to you for a sex- I mean, a sec?” is the result of a typo I made while writing that line (the x and the c being next to each other on the keyboard). I thought it was funny and decided to just go with it. Cristina’s older sister Casey is not canon. I made her up for the sake of this story. “Fritz Sabatino,” the disgraced founder of Royal Woods Community College, is an allusion to Chris Savino, who created The Loud House but is no longer associated with it because of multiple accusations of sexual harassment. Lily's outfit in chapter 10 was inspired by a piece of fanart I saw that shows Lily in fishnet stockings. There will be one more story in this series, making it a trilogy. The third story has no title as yet, but I have begun outlining it.

Re: “Record” From DoctorYnot on May 28, 2021 Well, you DID inspire it... Thank you! IMO, Lynn's defining personality traits are her nonstop intensity and her competitiveness -- even with herself. She has to push everything to the limit. I felt that those characteristics made her ideal for a story like this. Accurate voice is very important to me -- especially when it comes to the Loud sisters, because it's important to make them sound different from one another. Part of how this story went from being an idea in my head to being word-flesh is that I could really hear Lynn's voice in my head, taunting Lincoln in that way. Yeah, "You know you want to" is pretty beaten to death, whereas "need to" sort of takes away even more of Lincoln's sense of control. I like that metaphor. Just as every comedian needs a straight man, every horror story needs a victim. This is where I had to "craft a new side to her," as you said earlier, because one wouldn't necessarily expect Lynn to be a keen observer of things. But I needed her to be aware of Lincoln's adolescent weaknesses in order to make her as scary as she needs to be in this story. I did a bit of outlining there to make sure that each blowjob was more intense than the previous one. Yeah, but Lynn was trying to turn him on, not off. Part of what makes Lynn an effective antagonist in this story is that everything she accuses Lincoln of is actually true. She knows him as well as he knows himself, but she's willing to speak of the things that Lincoln doesn't want to admit to. Just had to throw a bit of Lucy-color in there. Even if black isn't actually a color. When it comes to sex scenes, I often find that the dialogue is the most fun part to write. It certainly was for this story. Thanks! As you point out, Lincoln's fantasies were important to making each one different from the others. That, plus the gradual increase in intensity and Lynn showing Lincoln more of her body to get him turned on. Lynn forcing her way into Lincoln's fantasies seemed like an idea you would come up with, so I went for it. Thank you! And thanks so much for the detailed review.

I finally have news about something other than “My Wish”: I’ve been making a lot of progress on chapter 10 of “Just One Rule.” I expect to have it off to beta in the next few days.

The next chapter of “My Wish Is Your Command” is up. Here, we jump forward in time a little. Chapter 4: What Are Sisters For? Whatever Bart Wants

I made good progress on the final chapter of "Just One Rule" last night, but there's still more to do before it will be ready for beta. On the other hand, I expect to post the next chapter of "My Wish Is Your Command" on Sunday.