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Re: “There’s a New Seraph in Town” From Rick_Andrew on April 03, 2021 The year I wrote this, I wanted to go the opposite direction from the usual horror stories and write a feel-good Halloween story instead. If it made you feel good, then I’m glad to have succeeded.

Re: “Monsters” From DreamWorlds on April 03, 2021 Then I have done my job right.

As of just now, I have finished the "cycle" that I started a week ago, adding at least 200 words to every chapter of every story that I'm working on. This did not result in my having a huge burst of inspiration and making massive progress on any one story, but it did cause me to do a lot of useful thinking and, in some cases, additional outlining of stories, along with the writing. I'm a big believer in the concept that a lot of our thinking goes on subconsciously. So it didn't surprise me that in the later parts of the cycle, I suddenly got ideas for things to add to or mention in stories I had worked on earlier in the cycle. I hope that will keep going for a bit. In any case, now I'll go back to sort-of focusing on the things I most want to finish next: the next parts of "Cartooniverse" and "The Power Arcane." Whether those will actually be the next things I finish remains, as always, an open question.

Having posted a flurry of new stuff last week (IMO, two oneshots and a chapter counts as a flurry), I don't really have anything on tap right now, or even a particular thing that I feel especially inspired to work on. So I’ve been doing a cycle through all my in-progress stories, adding at least 200 words, not only to each story, but each chapter of each story (if it’s far along enough that I know where one chapter ends and another begins). I started on Friday, and now I’m maybe a third of the way through. Currently, I’m adding to my Simpsons story – the one in which Bart becomes omnipotent and becomes Springfield’s sexual tyrant -- which will be called “My Wish Is Your Command.”

Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on March 29, 2021 Aw, crud, I crashed Skitty. Who do I call for tech support? I almost forgot that the request for chambermaid shenanigans came from you. Glad you enjoyed. When life hands you lemons, make porn. Or however that saying goes. That would be me. *head overinflates and explodes* That could happen, yes. Although, as Fairy Slayer pointed out, it might be a touch awkward if a traffic copter lands in the back yard. Thank you! And I hope you like where that ending leads in the next chapter. Joma, try turning her off and back on again. Anything? Thanks for the review!

From Fairy-Slayer on March 28, 2021 Thanks! Yep. Plus, do you really want to bang an OC? I had so much fun writing that. Honestly, it's the main reason why I started the "the other guys start to envy Lincoln" storyline. Or you may be right. My original plan with this chapter was to make it about Lincoln's (relatively) new crush, Paige. Then I switched gears when I decided it would be more fun to make it about Lincoln's former, utterly alienated crush instead. But I might have overdone it in showing what a 180 Cristina was making. There's a lot that had to happen in this chapter before the sex could actually work. Plus I added the dream sequence in there. So there was a lot of non-sex stuff at the front end. Thanks! Part of the challenge of writing this chapter was finding a way to make Cristina different -- sexually -- from the other girls Lincoln has banged so far. The whole thing with Casey and her collections of sex toys and porn were aimed at that. Even worse, he could have let it slip that Cristina's blowjob ISN'T on par with Lily's. Casey does not want to watch her little sister have sex. And Chuck doesn't want to go to jail for making child porn. Thanks for the review!

I thought this was a good point, so I went and added the WIP tag to my in-progress stories.

The archive is separated by medium, not by network, so those shows would fall into the Cartoons category.

Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on March 27, 2021 Oh yeah. That bit about Athena putting herself directly between Jace’s face and his tablet screen is what one of my cats used to do to my wife all the time. Have I mentioned how fetish-compatible you and Joma are? She’s probably a G-cup. It’s hard to say for sure, though, because the Benata use an ideographic language instead of an alphabet. *whistles casually* Oh, my. That thought puts a smile on my face. Thank you! No worries, feel free to pace yourself. Thanks for the review!

Re: “Wedding Night” From IttyBittySkitty on March 27, 2021 Okay, first of all, not only is this the cutest review I've ever seen in my life, but you wrote it about a story that I would not have expected either of you to read, let alone like. You two are full of surprises. "Hot but twisted" is among my more favorite subgenres. Right now, Flora is a young, fresh flower. Eden wouldn't want to mess with that. It's entirely possible that Eden will want Flora "restored" at some point, maybe after Flora has pumped out her first five or six kiddies for Eden. LOL! I'm with Joma on this one. Did I mention that this is the cutest review ever? The game that came out broken? Not sure I like that comparison. (I kid you. :)) Ooooh, that'a a rather good comparison. The backstory I have in my head is that at some point, aliens came to Earth (or some version of Earth) round about the 16th century. Rather than colonizing the planet, they used genetic engineering to mix their DNA with that of humans, which produced the first Ladies. The aliens gave them immense wealth and technology, and once the Ladies were established as Earth's permanent overclass, the aliens moved on to repeat the process on other worlds. The way I conceive of this world, that will depend on the children. Only about 1 in 5 will be born a Lady; the rest will be girls. (Males are only found in the working classes.) The Ladies will be given the best possible education and an inheritance, while the girls will be trained to serve them. No sons (see above), but yes, Eden will most certainly train her futa-daughters to be ruthless -- sexually and otherwise. I hadn't thought of continuing Flora and Eden's story in particular, but I might very well write other stories set in their world. Oh, most certainly. I'd be intrigued to see what you come up with. Thanks for the review! It made my day.

Re: “Rashomonster” From GrayNeko on March 25, 2021 It took me a minute to get that. My initial thought was that it was a monster that devours Swedish crispbread. Thank you! Much like my own. That’s why I gave up writing regular fanfiction. More is on the way! And on the topic of "more," might we be graced with another chapter of "Ears to You, Luz Noceda" any time soon? Thanks for the review!

Chapter 1 of “Rashōmonster” is up! Fred is injured in an accident when he encounters Go Go and Wasabi at the lab after hours. But why are all three of them lying about what happened? (Spoiler alert: Because sex) Also, Eh Steve read “Monsters” over at Hentai Foundry and also commented on the similarity to Ghastly’s Ghastly Comic. Now that I’ve seen the tentacle monster in said comic, I can see why – even the tentacle monster’s eye-stalks are like Takito’s.

I’ve never actually used the WIP tag. I always figured that if the story doesn’t have either the COMPLETE tag or the Oneshot tag, then it’s clear the story is still in progress. (Not that the COMPLETE tag actually stops commenters from asking about what will happen in the next chapter.)

Re: “A Little Goes a Long Way” From JayDee on March 23, 2021 Thanks! This was a big experiment for me, as I had never written a dialogue-only story before. But with only two characters, it seemed doable; I think it would have been much harder with even one more. I’m actually not big on ageplay myself. But when I learned about littles, I saw a lot of potential for comedy in a grown woman wanting to act like a little girl. Thank you! I had so much fun writing this one. And I definitely made use of the “the submissive is the one in control” trope. One of those “getting what you need instead of what you want” situations. Thanks again, and thanks for the review!

“Wedding Night” is posted! The summary: Flora is an Early—a girl who becomes fertile long before showing any outward sign of puberty. Now, Flora belongs to High Lady Eden, who is eager to take advantage of Flora’s fertility. Inspired by the art of Hezzer. I think that will be enough rapey original stories for a little while. The next thing I’ll post will probably be chapter 1 (out of 3) of “Rashomonster.”

Re: “Monsters” From Fairy-Slayer on March 20, 2021 Thanks! They don’t teach monster kids about teenagers until at least 10th grade. Too graphic. Yeah, I definitely went with the anime-hair thing. I also get the impression that dyeing one’s hair is a major act of rebellion for a Japanese teenager, so it seems like something a bunch of real baddos like these gals might do. Oh, and a couple of author’s notes about this story: According to my internet research, all of the girls’ names in this story are authentic Japanese names. Tora means "tigress," and Rin indicates a person who is cold, severe, and dignified. The other four names were chosen for their resemblance to English words: Miseri for misery, Sada for sadism, Nagi because it resembles "naga" (a mythical snake creature) and "Nagini" (Voldemort's huge snake in Harry Potter), and Saeko because it is pronounced like "psycho." To my knowledge, Takito is not a real name -- which was a deliberate choice because I didn't want the monster character to have a human name. It's based on "tako," the Japanese word for octopus.

Been making a lot of progress on a lot of things lately. The most noteworthy progress is on an original oneshot story called "Wedding Night," which is inspired by the artwork of Hezzer and is about a young girl who is purchased by a ruling-class futa to be her bride (read: breeding slave). It will probably be ready to post in the next few days.

No, I didn’t perceive them that way at all. Thanks! As the title implies, monstrousness is more about behavior than how many limbs you have.

Re: “Monsters” From JayDee on March 19, 2021 Making it a comedy seemed too predictable; I’m sure someone (or many someones) have done a tentacle-monster-gets-raped comedy already. I thought it would be more interesting to go the other way with it. BTW, if you want to see my attempt at a rape comedy, check out “A Little Goes a Long Way.” I’m not sure she ever leaves the library; her web is probably on the ceiling. Makes for a short commute. Thanks! I was trying to make them believable mean-teens. Some blobby monsters are capable of empathy, others not so much. Thank you, and thanks for the review!

From SailorNemesis on March 17, 2021 Although there’s a pretty solid dose of Nani-sex in chapter 7, too. Does she even have a name?

“Monsters” is posted! More proof that it’s not easy being green. @FairySlayer, I tried that link in a couple of different browsers, and they both warned me that it wasn’t safe to go there. Maybe it really IS ghastly.

Chapter 7 of “Biological Imperative” is posted! Stitch and Lilo get what they want: a new girl to use and a tasty bit of revenge, respectively. FYI, Googling “Uncle Ghasty” just gets me a bunch of hits about Uncle Ghastly from The Flintstones. So you may need to explain, fellas.

Update: Yesterday, I ended up making a bunch of progress on the next chapter of "Biological Imperative." So now it's looking like that will be the next thing I post – probably tomorrow night. I'm also pretty close to finishing "Monsters," an original oneshot about an young tentacle monster who is confronted by a gang of teenage girls.