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  1. Now time to start reading… sorry I’ve not been reviewing folks.
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  2. I’d like to salute the folks here who are doing NaNo this year. I’m still trying to finish the novel I started two NaNos ago, but I hope to be back in it with a new novel next year.
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  3. Was how I summed this story up previously, and, well, it holds true today. Thank you for taking the time to read and review. It’s always nice to hear opinions on our work as writers! I kind of remembered this as being a really boring dull story – which was almost certainly the intent of the sex as a play on the vanilla theme! – but reading it back just now I see there really are some not terrible jokes in there. I didn’t want the reader looking at the non descript chair because then I would have had to describe it. I think some of the other entries in the hentai foundry contest actually did a pretty good job of sexy sex. Or one of them did. Maybe. It was ages ago and I am no longer a member. I think he’s got a fair reason to be narked off! He’s the third fuckin’ choice on the list, “Oh, sure, I’ll be the best men when the other two have fuckin’ left the dimension or died. Asshole.”. If this was a Naruto/Hinata wedding story he’d have been balls deep in her by the third paragraph. Now… who could have put a diabolical recipe for spaghetti on the internet? What fiendish fanfic writer might have been spreading her wings into other genres? Particularly given how a lot of the recipe blogs have around 10000 words of un-needed extra exposition about unrelated mattes that smack of narcissistic self interest... Also, why did a banshee end up fighting the plate? Weird choice. I think there were points there where I just threw supernatural stuff in. Thank you for the review! I do appreciate it, and I’m glad it didn’t feel a total waste of time to you. Hopefully. Thanks again!
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  4. Then I have some good news: I’ve started working on a sequel that will include more action with Rita and a couple of other mature women, as well as some different lolis and a teen or two.
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  5. Hello, all. I've been traveling, so I haven't had a chance to post any updates until today. A few things: First, I've finally finished the rough draft of chapter 3 of "Flesh." I'm hoping to get it polished up and posted before the week is out. Second, I think I'm done with the "finish two, start one" thing. The number of partly posted chaptered stories I have has shrunk from eight to five, and that's where I'll leave it, at least for the near future. Third, I have a very short Loud House one-shot that should be ready for beta soon. Nothing hardcore, just an amusing little vignette. Fourth: SWP1, I have indeed made some progress with the next chapter of “Wishful.” Hoping to have it ready some time next week. Also, did you happen to check out “Day of the Deadly”?
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  6. I'll take it on... And hopefully should be able to get to reading everyone's entries in Halloween... I have made headroom in NaNoWriMo! A beachhead has formed, so I can read some.
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  7. For all my NaNo WriMos: https://www.nytimes.com/2019/11/04/books/nanowrimo-national-novel-writing-month.html
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