Corrupt the Midwife part 2 is live.
Thank you for the review! Well, trying my best and I appreciate the support on this story. Only three or four more parts to finish it!
I feel like I am too quite of practive with proper writing from scratch rather than my old work re-writes, I guess all skills rust if they are not getting used and creative writing is no different. This being the case, It’s not quite feeling tickety-boo for me. I tried to get it Ship-shape and Bristol fashion, and feel like it went a bit shit-shaped and borstal fashion, as they might have said in the 50s. I also kinda regret not sneaking in the 1957 Little Richard lyrics :
“Jenny Jenny, ooo, Jenny Jenny,
Jenny Jenny Jenny, won't you come along with me,”
Still, thank you kindly again! I hope part 3 is better.