JayDee

Andraste's Ass! The dev team really do think of everything!

No, no, Not at all. *Flees*

Don't give up hope, folks do take up challenges. Sometimes. Maybe. Plus, thanks to the limited graphics engine 'old' Wynne had the same body as Leliana, which basically raised more questions than it answered.

I used to think I couldn't write too! After over a decade of trying under different pen names it turns out I was right. Uh... ahem, moving on. I'd still go with my original thought that the fandom for the series is so small in AFF terms most of the forum users are probably unaware of the series Some writers find more detailed requests restrictive it's true, while others find that with most of the plotting work done, it's quicker to toss out a story based on a detailed request. Depends on the writer really. I tended to get on better with detailed ones because then I knew what I was writing was closer to what the reader wanted to see.

Pretty much applies to me for that as well! Plus my tendency to say something flippant and silly without realising that someone's having some major real life issues in there and then cause offence and or awkwardness.

Okay, duly noted! Shokan Lust has another review, Thanks for the review though, glad you're loving it, and sadly, no, nothing like that planned for the last couple chapters. The closest it came to any punishment was the rimming scene - sorry!

The best thing about that line is that you could re-use it if you ever wrote a scat fic. Edit: bah - BW beat me too it!

Shokan Lust Thank you for your review, firstly I'm glad you're still reading and enjoying. Means I'm getting something right with Melora84's ideas! As for every chapter, I do get that too - That's why I said thanks for all the reviews I had got, and I was hoping to maybe persuade some of the folks who kept coming back and hadn't given a comment at all to give a comment. And while that perhaps didn't entirely work, it did get Stratego!

...and with another review, Shokan Lust matches the review count of my other multi-parter, Ending the Fan! Yay! Thank you for your review! Definitely gonna keep going - there's two more chapters to go! I'm glad the sex is good for ya and the fic, it's nice to hear

Sounds like something the billy goats came up with, to keep 'em distracted.

Or possibly a Stratego viral marketer. We may never know for sure.

Shokan Lust has gained, well, ...and so it continues. So, while not technically a review, it does sound like a great game. Shame it wasn't spell checked though - folks might want to play the game and declare they have a matshul!

Shokan Lust Part 6 has gone up, with only two parts and possibly an epilogue still to write! Two new reviews: Thank you for your review - I was a little confused to start with, because all of the sex scenes are rape scenes, but I do get what you're driving at - the servant's attempt, rather than all of Sheeva's successes. I just had a look, and given how many examples there are on TV Tropes Attempted Rape page to the point of cliché, it's definitely fair to describe that part of the chapter as cliché. I'd like to point out that including that section was my idea, and not part of the original request so Melora84 doesn't bear any of the responsibility for it being there. I would say, and this isn't a defence, but just a clarification of motivation, was that the aim wasn't about forging a bond between the characters, the whole "Rape is true love thing!". To my mind there isn't, can't be, a true bond (or true love) between them because of Sheeva's manipulation of Sonya. The aim of the scene when I suggested it was partly to get a shitload of blood over the place for Sonya and Sheeva to fuck in, to show Sheeva brutalising someone, and to emphasise Sonya's changes throughout the story. The obvious one being Sonya getting off on the violence and bloodshed that mark her as transitioned to Outworld, and seeing herself as Sonya's property/pet, the way Sheeva wants her to be. It's not love. A threatened rape was probably the wrong way to go about it, though, especially with the context of all the other rape. I guess it was a little different in part one, when Sonya wasn't bound, so she could just kill the rapists herself rather than just severely injure a knee. Thanks again for your review, it really made me think. Thank you for the review. Glad it was hot! The piercings actually increase sensitivity, so I guess that and aesthetic value were partly behind Sheeva's doing 'em. Not sure how much actual sex there will be in the next part, I want to include at least one scene though because, dammit, I'm a pornographer rather than an author. Fisting could feature.

A lot of office drones have to work Saturday mornings (sometimes longer) anyhow. It wouldn't be skipping the weekend to simply have Monday morning's events take place on Saturday morning. Otherwise, look at what folks do on weekends when not working and see how you can apply your themes to it. Going Shopping, or to the movies, or doing yardwork, or going temple or church or or picnics or theme parks or whatever. I try to write porn, which probably would not be appropriate. At the very least, it could risk becoming recursive.

I guess the more chapters you got, the more detail and things happening, the bigger a project gets. Some authors prefer to knock out oneshots, others seem not to be happy unless there's at least 60 chapters. If it ends up with nobody taking the request as is, you could always sit down and write like a point by point treatment of what you want in the story, then maybe expand the points some more, expand on them a bit. Then a bit of polishing and some dialogue and you got a story!

Hi Warellis, I don't know that it's a case of difficulty, it's probably more it being a smaller fandom in AFF terms, or the request sadly and simply not appealing enough to the writers who do know the fandom enough to check it out . It seems a lot of folks would refrain from replying to a request just to say they can't/won't do a story because doing so would get the requesters hopes up to see a reply, only to cruelly smash 'em! Like this. Sorry 'bout that. FWIW, as requests go I think it's a fairly detailed one that sets out what you want and that's no bad thing. Better than "Someone should do something with Lilith!!!" See, in my case I can't do it because 1) I'm up to my ass in another story 2) There's a couple others I'd like to do afterwards and 3) If I did a Darkstalkers fic, it would totally be be Felicia and Hsien-Ko, and called something like "Cat got the Corpse." ...different tastes, I guess. G'luck though, finding someone to take it!

I'm not a mod, obviously. Standards and what not. But, I can't think of any reason why editing both chapters to swap text wouldn't work, and you can always edit chapter titles too. I'm now curious if there is a reason why deletion/re-posting required, seems like an odd rule if it's a rule rather than a technical thing I'm missing! Must remember to check back later!

Gotta agree, regular schedule is the way to go. I wish I could keep regular with updates meself!

I didn't know the author's writing, but that really sucks. Bah, what a downer.

I guess those pawprint tattoos must be what they mean by "The Bark Mark"

Thanks!

http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/1322-who-all-has-gained-access-to-this-lovely-room/ http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/4741-password-is-changing/ Them two threads from the old wossname forum (tragically, my suggested title of "Secret Forum for JD Worship" was shot down) retained their pinned status after it was folded into aimless babble. If any of y'all have loads of free time and have covered every other possible job (up to and including reading and reviewing that epic Great American Novel I'll write any decade now) any chance of unpinning them? Just seems like they might confuse new users bein' pinned at the top of aimless babble an all. It's not really a tech support question so I posted here. You could always replace them with a "Say how awesome Waffles are" thread. Thanks for your time. And Effort. And not hiring that comedic pair of hitmen to kill me. Yet.

Hannah Abbot / Pansy Parkinson / Yaxley Someone must have written a fic with that pairing, just for the initials, so go on and link it!

Eh, that gallimaufry prompt wasn't too terrible - but, we had it rough in those weeks! No, but seriously, content aside (and anything I did with Real Persons) 'cos the current story I'm on is too gory for some, and not gory enough for others (waaay less gory than the source game!) some of the writing in my old stories is appallingly weak in places, I went back through one of my older Mortal Kombat chapters before starting on my current multi-parter and it has bits that're clunky as fuck! Instead of word pictures, imagine an etch-a-sketch being used by a one handed gal on a roller coaster. I'm not fishing for praise here with that comment - the shit I really can't stand I took down from everywhere I could. Like this one Dragon Ball Z request I did as a despite knowing nothing about the series. I assumed it was something like Pokemon. Apparently not. That was a steaming pile...

Shokan Lust Thank you for your review, glad that you're enjoying it - but really? I sure as hell have written stories I haven't enjoyed. Some of that shit was appalling. Ahh well, maybe you missed the worst! Thanks again!