Desiderius Price
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I tend to forget some of those senses as I write. Taste, smell, and touch are less written about, than vision (primary) or sound (secondary). So, yeah, write in sounds, that does help stories, IMO. And, don’t forget to smell, taste, and touch … depends on what you’re writing, I suppose. If you’ve got a pile of crap, skip the description, we all know what it’s like.
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Sound words, I kinda use like a spice, here and there, peppered about. I’ll typically do them on their own line, like dialogue, because it is, in a way, dialogue. For instance, flushing a toilet, I might just put in “FLUSH!” Because, well, that’d invoke the proper image, without having to have a character announce they’re flushing, or write “The toilet was flushed”…. or the like. I mean, if a character’s in the bathroom, and a “FLUSH” occurs, you can generally guess who flushed it.
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IIRC. I think I encountered this before, and it seemed to be a timeout on the captcha. Assuming you’re copy-pasting from another program and fixing formatting; do the new story fast, copy-paste (don’t bother with fixing), hit submit, and then go into your story manager, edit the chapter, and fix the formatting.
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Chapter 2 is up.
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What’s it with me wanting to write in characters having sex at church? Certainly one way to keep the services interesting, I suppose.
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Uh-oh, I’ve already broken into the halloween candy...
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“Think of the children!” Of course, especially for the witches who find them a delicious snack.
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Someone at my office brought it in – in plastic tubs. I have to walk past the @#$%^&*! mini-packs of peanut M&Ms as soon as I open the office door.
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Oh my god, Marley! I both pity you and want to be you.
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Super Gardener, able to hear plants in distress.
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I think there was a Tales of the Unexpected that had that as the plot once. This guy could hear his neighbours rose bushes screaming as they were pruned. Eventually, he took an axe to a massive old oak tree and deafened himself or something, after trying to convince people that he could hear plants were in pain. He was trying to record it, I think.
My mother reckons it’s some old drama/ tv play for today series we have on DVD. Forgot what it’s called.
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Shit? Sounds like a scat fan.
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Did I read your interests properly? M/M snuffs?
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Can we call tomorrow the 25th so we can start posting Halloween stories? We can go back to the 20th later.
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Review for “The Repair Guy” Definitely made for a fun write after finishing my Halloween story!
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I like vegetarians… properly grilled and seasoned to taste.
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Author: Desiderius Price Title: The Repair Guy Summary: Alyssia opts for extended service after the repair guy shows up to fix her A/C in his underwear. Feedback: Sure, feedback with constructive criticism! Fandom: Original Pairing: N/A Warnings: Exhib, MF, Other, WIP Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered URL (AFF): http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108774 URL (AO3): https://archiveofourown.org/works/55313575 Review Replies: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/59549-jaimies-campfire-starrebels/ (ie, I needed to write something nice and fluffy after I finished my Halloween story...)
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Life is nature’s way of keeping meat fresh…. (to quote Doctor Who)
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Funny enough, IIRC, the summer heat wave many years ago (in a house w/o AC) as a kid is how I started sleeping nude.
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and school not having started back home… So… we’re rewinding back to August, sorry…