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Desiderius Price

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  1. Bring along some reading! (Like my story )
  2. So, the answer to avoid a multi-chapter halloween fic is to add in a well placed flashback.  Seems to do the trick, summarizing the mood (with a nice bonus of not having to add in the minor1 tag).

     

    1. CL Mustafic

      CL Mustafic

      That sounds like a good idea. I’m just going to write a scene with established characters so the temptation doesn’t strike me to write something longer. :D

    2. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      This particular halloween fic has been tough to get started, with so many options, but not wanting to stomp over where my other stories are heading.  Same universe, as always, with a nice bonus that it’ll set something up to feed into another story.

    3. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      Oh crap… Thanks for reminding me early. I always want to do a oneshot for halloween, but only ever think about it when it’s too late. Now what the hell am I gonna write?! Gaaah… 

  3. Sigh… trying to come up with a Halloween story without creating another multi-chapter epic.

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    2. JayDee

      JayDee

      Then there’s getting the LOTR fans with “Say, did you ever read Celebrían?”

    3. pippychick

      pippychick

      Ah.. you can’t get me there. One does not simply forget Celebrian.

      And honestly? Given the choice between that and Legolas by Laura… ? Compared to that Celebrian was actually kind of well-written, and in some ways much easier to stomach, as it were. I know which one would make me scream first if put on constant repeat, and it’d be the one without proper use of full stops and commas… ;)

      If only Celebrian had been written withoutthe endless bucketloads of semen, unrealistic horse and warg rape, and with just a little bit more attention to the elements of psychological torture and horror elements… wait, what am I saying?!

      Sorry. Yes. *dutifully falls into line*

      Still wonders if it could be saved, privately.

    4. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      Though, for a halloween fic, I’ll keep it shorter, obviously, but yeah, this has potential.  (I’ve already trashed like three or four starts to it.)

  4. If that doesn’t work, shock your character with a taser, makes ‘ya feel better, but it might not help the character.
  5. Hey, there’s the Halloween stories coming up, join us. http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/65894-2017-halloween-party/#comment-409328
  6. Half of chapter 26 was me stalling on the deed. (I didn’t want to, but had to.) And then there’s today, when I realized that chapter 28 was the best spot to end the story. Chapters 29-30 now form the starting point for a sequel, so some of the loose ends from Dale’s Game will be wrapped up there. (Not certain when I’ll start posting that, because there’s the little issue of the halloween story.) And, thank you for the review. It’s nice to know when it’s being read/enjoyed, makes my day
  7. Thank you for the review, hopefully you’ll enjoy the rest of the chapters when you read them. I’ve enjoyed writing the characters too, most of the time, doesn’t really seem like I’m writing them, rather they’re experiencing their own lives.
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