Desiderius Price
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Sigh… trying to come up with a Halloween story without creating another multi-chapter epic.
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Then there’s getting the LOTR fans with “Say, did you ever read Celebrían?”
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Ah.. you can’t get me there. One does not simply forget Celebrian.
And honestly? Given the choice between that and Legolas by Laura… ? Compared to that Celebrian was actually kind of well-written, and in some ways much easier to stomach, as it were. I know which one would make me scream first if put on constant repeat, and it’d be the one without
properuse of full stops and commas…
If only Celebrian had been written withoutthe endless bucketloads of semen, unrealistic horse and warg rape, and with just a little bit more attention to the elements of psychological torture and horror elements… wait, what am I saying?!
Sorry. Yes. *dutifully falls into line*
Still wonders if it could be saved, privately.
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Though, for a halloween fic, I’ll keep it shorter, obviously, but yeah, this has potential. (I’ve already trashed like three or four starts to it.)
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need advice for writing emotional devastation
Desiderius Price replied to SirGeneralSir's topic in Writers' Corner
If that doesn’t work, shock your character with a taser, makes ‘ya feel better, but it might not help the character. -
Hey, there’s the Halloween stories coming up, join us. http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/65894-2017-halloween-party/#comment-409328
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Half of chapter 26 was me stalling on the deed. (I didn’t want to, but had to.) And then there’s today, when I realized that chapter 28 was the best spot to end the story. Chapters 29-30 now form the starting point for a sequel, so some of the loose ends from Dale’s Game will be wrapped up there. (Not certain when I’ll start posting that, because there’s the little issue of the halloween story.) And, thank you for the review. It’s nice to know when it’s being read/enjoyed, makes my day
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Thank you for the review, hopefully you’ll enjoy the rest of the chapters when you read them. I’ve enjoyed writing the characters too, most of the time, doesn’t really seem like I’m writing them, rather they’re experiencing their own lives.
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The final chapter, chapter 28 is posted. Bit sudden, but I kinda realized that this was a better end than what I had originally planned. Thus, the extra material will likely form a sequel, where I’m not as rushed.
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