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  1. The answer depends heavily on the fandom. The Star Trek universe is so thoroughly fleshed out that you could write an engaging story without using any canonical characters (CCs); as long as you include familiar alien races, technology, etc, and otherwise follow the “rules” of the Star Trek universe. (But you couldn’t do that with, say, Brooklyn 99, because that show is all about the characters, not the world it’s set in. ) The broader point here is that readers will probably accept a fair number of OCs in a fic as long as they are engaging and fit in with the fandom and its characters. I included several OCs in my Star Vs the Forces of Evil story “Star’s Crossed Lovers,” and readers generally liked them because of the way they interacted with the CCs.
  2. Re: “Delta Delta Delta” Thanks! Makes me realize how many chapter 1s I’ve been posting lately. But I hope you’ll enjoy the future chapters.
  3. Well, I got on quite a kick writing the alternate ending of “Splinter,” so I just finished the draft and sent it off for beta. Given that I have posted chapter 1 of three different stories recently, it will be nice to move one story into the “Finished” column. Of course, even as “Splinter” is nearly ready to fall off the List of 20, a new story waits in the wings. My friend Jomahawk, who has been betaing for me for ages without my returning the favor, has asked me to write a story for him, so I’ll be getting started on it soonish.
  4. You know how people say that you should write for yourself? Well, I have one story for which that is literally true, because I started writing it for my own entertainment years before I ever thought of posting stories on the Web. It's called “Delta Delta Delta,” and it's the story of a cute, busty college freshman who pledges a sorority that accepts only well-endowed women as members. I started writing this story close to a decade ago, but I only wrote two chapters out of an intended five. But I always knew I would get back to it eventually--it's been a permanent resident on my list of 20 stories--so now, I am. I’ve just gone through the first chapter, made some edits, and posted it. I’ll be doing the same with the second chapter some time soonish. I figure posting what I have might give me some additional impetus to finish the other three chapters. Yes, the story will definitely have the same rotating perspective as “Hot Yoga” had. Yes, there’s going to be more kissing in general, because everybody is a little calmer this time around (Jenny has learned just how much incense to use) and can ease into the activities more than they did in “Hot Yoga.”
  5. Ah, that clears it up. Thanks!
  6. Yes, the problem is with all text on the site, not just with what I write. I’ve tried messing with the font and text size settings in Chrome, but doing that doesn’t seem to have any effect on how the text in these Forums appears. For now, I’ve switched to the “Black Chrome” theme for this site, which makes most text a nicely readable white-on-black. But for some reason, it also renders the controls at the top (Archives, Browse, Activity, etc) nearly unusable; when I try to click on Activity, I get Calendars or something instead.
  7. I got a review kind of like that on one of my stories just yesterday. My feeling is, if someone actually takes the time to tell you in detail what issues they have with the story, that means that they actually felt it was worth their time to do that. If any of it seems like useful feedback, great; if not, then they’re entitled to their opinion, and you’re entitled to disagree with it.
  8. Here’s one I should have asked years ago: What’s the difference between the “Dom” and “D/s” story codes?
  9. Sometimes, when I’m not sure what to write next, I go through my 20 in-progress stories and make myself write a few paragraphs for each one. Worst-case scenario, I make a little progress on all 20. Best-case, inspiration strikes when I’m partway through the list and I make a lot of progress on one. Since yesterday, I’ve been cycling through the 20 stories, and I discovered that there was one for which the first chapter was nearly finished, so I finished it. It’s an unabashedly pedo-riffic father-daughter incest story titled “Little Rose,” and I just posted the first chapter last night.
  10. Is there some setting I can change that will make the default text color in the Forums something other than light gray? It’s really hard to read against the white background. I tried the other themes available, but each had its own problems.
  11. Glad you liked chapter 1. As for chapter 2, I really can’t say when it will be ready. As I’ve probably mentioned, I literally have 20 stories in progress at any given time, and I never know which one I’ll be inspired to work on when the opportunity arises. Earlier this evening, I spent a little time on the alternate ending to “Splinter” and on an original story titled “A Sweet Little Girl Like You” that I’m writing for the winner of a raffle I did on Inkbunny. Last night, I worked a little bit on chapter 2 of “The More, the Merrier,” chapter 4 of “Auntie’s Home,” and a diary-style one-shot story titled “Imaginary Tokyo.” Which will be finished next, I can’t say.
  12. I love my pets, but I think it's creepy when people start acting like their pets are their children. On my commute this morning, I saw a car with a sticker that read, “My child has four paws.” I found myself wondering, if this person were in a burning building and had to choose between rescuing their dachshund or a neighbor's child, which one would they save?

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    2. GeorgeGlass

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       I mean, suppose it’s your child vs a neighbor’s elderly grandparents?  Similar choice,

      No, “save this human or that human” is not similar to “save this human or that dachshund.” I’m sorry, but in my book, human lives take precedence over animal lives. 

      Of course, this isn’t a hard and fast rule. In a burning building, I would choose to save one of my cats over, say, Larry Nassar. But then, I’d probably choose to save my toaster oven over Larry Nassar, so...

    3. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      In most peoples books, human lives take precedence over animal lives. But not all, and I really don’t think there’s something wrong with that. I can’t tell you to see human lives and dachsund lives as similar, and you can’t tell me not to. We favour humans because we are humans, so there’s that obligatory loyalty there, and most of us have been taught that we as a species are superior. If you relate more with humans of course you’re going to value their lives more. That doesn’t mean their lives have more value. Unless you define value as in how they contribute to human society. 

      For example, I believe life is valuable and that belief isn’t conditional to how I relate to other species or how those species can contribute to human society. But if there was a dog or a potted plant in a burning building, I wouldn’t save the potted plant over the dog. I don’t relate to a potted plant. I don’t understand how their suffering functions the same way I understand a dog. But a child vs a dog would be a much tougher choice to me, because I understand both. I’d probably choose the child, but I would not be able to live with myself – that dog’s death would haunt me. 

      I do see my pets as my children. I don’t think they’re the same as human children, of course human children grow up into human adults, and trumps or cosbys so there’s a smidge more responsibility involved in shaping their minds and teaching them respect, and if they bite somebody, the neighbours can’t have them immediately executed. But I love them unconditionally. I value them. I am responsible for their lives, their happiness, and I am the only loving, nurturing authority they know. And I work at a shelter so I see what abandonment does every single day. I worry often about what will happen to them if something happened to me. 

      As you can tell by my rant, I feel very strongly about this.

    4. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      After I lost my cat, I cried, I really cried; it was the first time in decades that I had.  I knew he meant something before, but I didn’t realize until afterwards exactly how much he did mean to me, still means to me; I even have his urn on my desk here; not sure I’ll ever be able  to “part” with him.  So, I understand the sentiment behind that bumper sticker, really understand it, and I’d probably be one who’d rescue my (remaining) cats over a neighbor’s kid (if I was in an apartment). 

      Of course, that’s more hypothetical, because I’m in my own house, with some distance to the neighbors, thus if their kid were in danger from my burning house, well, either the kid is rescuing *me* (and I won’t be in a position to object), or started the fire.  And in a fire, I would most likely try to make sure they made it out safely, even if it puts me into danger.  Hopefully, fingers crossed, I’ll never have to know the answer to this what-if.

  13. Chapter 1 of “The More, the Merrier” is posted! In other news: I’ve started writing an alternate ending to “Splinter.” I’ve never written an alternate ending to a story before, and when a reviewer suggested it, I thought it would be an interesting challenge.
  14. Most character deaths in my stories are planned well in advance – sometimes when I’m first conceiving of the character. Thus, even if I become attached to the character, it’s okay when they die, because the way they die is part of who they are. I couldn’t change my mind and save the character from death without changing who the character is. Of course, this only applies to characters that I myself created. I don’t think I’ve ever killed a canon character in a fanfic (although I’ve killed off OCs in fanfics).
  15. Re: “Dil-Drones” Thank you! And thanks for being the first person to review this story. A while ago, in an online discussion about sexbots, I wrote a goofy post about how the Sexbot Uprising was coming. And that led to the idea for this story. I imagined a version of Skynet that formed its view of the world on the basis of the contents of the internet, ie, largely pornography. Seemed just as plausible as the computer wanting to wipe us all out.
  16. I hope to finish up the chapter and get it off for beta tonight or tomorrow. My beta reader usually gets back to me within a week, and unless he recommends major changes, I should have the chapter posted shortly after that.
  17. Re “Auntie’s Home” I liked the idea of a mother training her son to be a dom, and that’s where the idea for this sequel story came from. Glad you’re enjoying it.
  18. So, the latest: --I’m nearly finished with chapter 1 of the “Hot Yoga” sequel, “The More, the Merrier.” The first chapter will be short-ish, because it’s mostly setup, and this story doesn’t require as much setup as “Hot Yoga” did. After that, there will be four full-length chapters. --A reviewer may have just inspired me to write an alternate ending to Splinter that would be darker than the “canon” ending. Will have to give it some thought.
  19. *Spoilers below for events up to “Sadie Killer”* Given that the story takes place before Lars ends up in space and Sadie quits the Big Donut, not ending it that way would have made the story incompatible with canon. And canon-compatibility is kind of a thing with me. However... You know, I’ve never done an alternate ending for a story before, and I have to say, I’m intrigued by the idea. I will consider this.
  20. 2 brief announcements: First, I’ve moved this thread into a forum that allows guests to post in it. Second, I just posted the sixth and final chapter of “Splinter.”
  21. Thanks, Willow. I’m staff (albeit useless staff) here, so I managed to move it myself.
  22. Well, since you said please (twice), I guess I’ll continue it.
  23. Well, the sequel would definitely have to include Don, now that he’s been teed up. Here’s one idea: Don has a sister (older, younger, twin, whatever you prefer) who also sees—from her own window--Brad and Kim getting it on, and both she and Don have several more opportunities to do so. (There might be speculation that Brad and Kim are deliberately showing off for them.) Both siblings are initially repulsed but can’t stop watching the incestuous action. And, of course, both start getting in touch with their own forbidden desires as a result.
  24. You mean the Personal Rants & Journals forum does? Or if you mean the thread itself, is there some setting that I can change? No, it’s not meant to be a review reply thread. (I have those already.) It’s just for announcements and discussion about things other than reviews (eg, story ideas, stories in progress).
  25. I actually just sent the last chapter of Splinter out for beta. Should have it posted soon. Not sure why guests can’t post in my Transparency thread. I just posted a question about that for the mods.
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